I found this to be a decent 1980's style "Ghost Hunting' horror story which had a great storyline and contained lots of good detail, ideas and creativity. To spice the story up further, in order to back up the excellent narrative, perhaps more gruesomeness, gore and sickeningly, shocking, horrific outrages could have been inflicted upon the main characters in order to make it more of an enjoyable and satisfying read. Unfortunately, as the tale progressed, I felt that it became obvious that this episode was just the opening part of a longer story (Book 1 in a Trilogy) and I was actually left with too many outstanding questions unanswered, plus experiencing a slight feeling of disappointment that life in the old and ruinous Asylum did not quite live up to my initial hopes and expectations.
A smooth, natural and extremely enjoyable writing style from a very talented writer in this genre...just more blood curdling action and gross, heart stopping moments next time, please. As a horror fan, this is undoubtedly a basic requirement and part of our lifeblood when venturing into these dark and disturbing worlds of unmitigated fun. As for the story, well, that is most definitely to be continued another time...Rating: 3.3 stars.