Jacob Benton I know that it’s wrong. I can’t help myself. Hank is a kind and gentle soul. He fills my heart with joy. That man has a body that I will never forget. Hank has been gone for two years overseas serving his country with distinction. I’ve fallen for his older brother Kenneth. I wouldn’t give it up for the world. He makes me happy. The one thing missing is the one that got away. Hank is coming home. He has this hold over me. I can’t explain it. Just one look and I know that I will fall into his arms. I have to stop it from happening.
Hank Killian I left him thinking that I would forget about him. I felt that I was destined to live in my brother’s shadow. I had to do this for me and not for anybody else. Coming home isn’t easy. I’ve heard of how Kenneth and Jacob have gotten to know each other intimately. I want to be the bigger man. I want to give them my blessing and show that there are no hard feelings. It all changes when I see him. I want Jacob. I ache for him like I have with no other man. I always thought that what we had was unhealthy. I understand that he has moved on. I can’t let it go. I know that he has feelings for me. I can see it in his eyes. I only need to rekindle the flame to make it burn brightly. I can’t help the way that I feel. It’s a betrayal of my brother’s trust. That first kiss is going to be my downfall
AUTHOR’S This is a stand-alone story with an HEA, so no cliff-hangers! This story contains explicit love scenes and is intended for 18+ readers only.
The writing was so bad I could not go on reading the book. I had absolutely no idea what was going on, no idea who was talking to whom or what anybody's agenda was.
Got about 10-15 pages in... I Just can't do it.. My brain hurt trying to figure out who was talking/speaking to whom. I was Completely lost and Confused and was not impressed with the writing at all.. This storyline sounds ok in the BLurb but there just seems to be a lot missing and not explained in the actual book. I may or may not come back to this one and try again, well see... If I do I will definitely update the review.
1-1.5. I hate rating things low. Unfortunately, the cover was by far my favorite thing about this one. I mean, look at it. It's hotter than hell.
Not the typical proofing errors, more so words out of order, insufficient use of contractions, stilted. Things I could understand if this was a case of English not being the writer's first language. Jacob came off as a complete dickwad, Hank wasn't any better. Kenneth was the only person in the entire book that I liked at all.
I should note I only read the main story, which ended at 38%. Did not read either bonus story.