This was a total miss, just like Sean's story. I'm pretty disappointed in the complete lack of a story line or character development. The first thing that irked the crap out of me? NO. ONE. TALKED. The entire romance novel was pretty much Declan and Grace thinking things in their head but failing to actually... TALK TO EACH OTHER. How do you have plot advancement and a story when both the lead characters speak in one-word responses? And that's IF they even talk. The amount of "she turned on her heel and walked away," "he didn't respond" and "we stood there in silence" made this seem like this was a romance of two weird mute people. The characters don't even have a physical interaction until 40% through the novel and again, they barely had a conversation leading up to it. But by the half-way mark of the story, the characters are somehow deep in their feelings are for each other. HOW, SWAY?
Also, nothing happens until the last quarter of the book. Grace goes to the bar. Declan stares at her. Grace closes the bar. Declan cleans up and follows her home. Grace and Declan do the horizontal polka. Grace avoids Declan. Rinse. Repeat.
What kind of Irish Mob is this by the way? Ain't nobody 'mobbin' at all!! Declan is way too stoically sappy for me to believe that he's part of anybody's mob. And the rest of the brothers are too busy recreating the Brady bunch. Just call this "Irish American Dudes Chronicles" and leave the mob out of it.
Grace has obviously suffered some type of trauma and abuse but... there's no mention of it until the last quarter of the book. Same with Declan, he's harboring a secret that we don't figure out until towards the end. There was no character development at all. It was just a magical transition from not speaking to each other FOR FIVE YEARS to oh geez, let's be together forever. For $5 this was a waste of money and time and I'm disappointed since Patrick and Michael had really good stories.
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