I was really excited to dive into this book, as I had seen it compared to a Christian Alice in Wonderland, which I found intriguing. The book is recommended for ages 10 and up, but because of the light teen romance and demonic activity, I would have my sensitive daughter wait to read this, and focus on the children's book version first. It is mean to be a young adult fiction, which is why it does read younger in language and perspective.
I had a hard time getting into this book initially. It's categorized as young adult, and while Shale (the main character) starts off as a 14 year old, her character felt younger. Her dialogue and thinking made her seem closer to 12 than 14, which made parts of the story feel inauthentic. There is a budding romance, which might be why her character was made to be 14. In general, I found that the dialogue, especially in the beginning half of the book, was extremely distracting. Sometimes it felt forced, other times it didn't fit the characters or the time period, or (and I'm sorry to say this) felt like a lady trying to write from a 14 year old girl's perspective poorly. Some of the references to technology like Ipods felt a bit dated, but the book was published in 2013, so I can look past that.
Once I managed to get past the dialogue (or at last used to it), I did enjoy the story. The blend of fantasy elements, such as talking animals, time travel, and portals, mixed with historical, Biblical fiction was unique. I wasn't sure about the talking animals at first, but they end up becoming lovable and deeply integrated into the storyline.
What I think Lorilyn Roberts did exceptionally well was entwining the events of the New Testament during the ministry of Jesus, into Shale's story. Shale witnessing Jesus preach, heal, and cast out demons is what ultimately drives her redemption. The repeated message of Shale being "daughter of the King" is a great message for young girls, and the love of the Father was highlighted well in contrast to the challenging relationship Shale has with her father. The other aspect that was done well was how Shale is witness to very physical manifestations of spiritual battles over souls. It wasn't overly dark, but was enough to allow the reader to feel the urgency and importance of spiritual warfare.
I wasn't sure if I would read the rest of the series, but after thinking about the story for a few days, I do think I will continue out of curiosity. Enough was left open-ended to entice you to keep reading. I hope the quality of the dialogue improves throughout the series (realistic dialogue is important to me as a reader), but even if not, there is enough quality in the plot for me to keep enjoying the story.