The couple: Landon and Lana
Romance trope: shifter
Length: 207 pages
Plot: Landon, the young alpha, was blinded in an attack on his pack and is left struggling. Lana escaped an abusive alpha and is taken to the blind alpha who relegates her to the kitchens as an omega. She knows he's her mate; she just has to prove it. But even once they admit who they are to each other, there are dangers coming for them and they will need to rely on each other and the members of their pack to keep everyone together and safe.
Commentary: So, standard Wattpad shifter story. Tropes/characteristics included:
*very young leads - in this one, the alpha became alpha when he was 16 (and it always surprises me in these stories because often the dad is alive and not that old and still strong enough to lead, but for no reason at all steps aside to let his teenage son with no experience lead the pack)
*sassy omega who is not like the other girls and will lead some sort of a revolution (soft insert on this one - she argued with Landon about omega rights and got some things changed around rather than leading an army as normally happens)
*Kidnapping by bad guy
*uneven plot (Wattpad story structure encourages short chapters but you have to keep your readers coming back fo the rest of the serial. Because of that, the plot reaches a climax too quickly and stays there - the action and angst and tension is always at an 11 because readers won't come back for "boring" exposition or "filler" chapters)
*flat characters
*grammatical/word choice issues
This story had a strange third-act escalation and a wishy-washy HEA. I think without those two things, I would have given it a 2.5 or maybe even a weak 3 stars. I think the best things about it are that even though the hero found a way around his blindness, it wasn't cured and the heroine didn't have magical powers from the moon goddess that would turn her into a mega-Luna (as is the case in many of these stories). There was moderation there.