A list of the disgusting, cringe worthy things that were in this book :
He went ass to vag (that's a no no)
I circled her dark star, the pleats contracting involuntarily.
I pressed my tongue into her tight brownie (I'm assuming it's pronounced brown-eye)
My tongue pressed up and inside her, tasting the interior of that savory rectum. (Say what ?)
My tongue slid up that rectum again, enjoying the dry mustiness. (What ?)
Fuck, she was fucking delicious, the chocolate so sweet. (He's talking about her asshole)
I finger fucked her ass with one hand, my other fist stuck in her pussy hole. (OUCH !)
The cunt smell overwhelming, surrounding us in a haze. (One word ... DOUCHE)
My rump stuck hard on his fuck rod.
Hot white coating my rectum, spraying deep into my G.I. tract. (Wow)
His shaft was completely wet with a mix of sperm and anal sweat. (WTF ?)
Hot juices filling my vag to the brim.
Hot white sprayed all over my interior canal.
My precious inner chamber. (Is it a canal or a chamber ?)
"I'm gonna fuck that ass until it gapes and semen leaks out." (DAMN !)
A brown pucker the pleats so tight, winked at me, with a pink pulsing slit. (Talented)
A bead of female juice gathered at her hole, coagulating until it dripped down her thigh. (Gag !)
Her dark star winked and flirted. (That's one amazing asshole !)
Musty and dry, I could smell it from where I stood, female perfume welling up from deep within. (Huh ?)
MUSTY - HAVING A STALE, MOLDY, OR DAMP SMELL. (For the love of God stop calling assholes musty !)
The vomit discussion was gross and unnecessary.