Smitten by Colleen Coble, Kristen Billerbeck, Diann Hunt, and Denise Hunter
Review by Kara Grant
Christian Romance
“WELCOME TO SMITTEN, VERMONT. WITH THE HELP OF FOUR FRIENDS, IT’S ABOUT TO BECOME THE MOST ROMANTIC TOWN IN AMERICA.” (back cover)
What happens when a small town’s main employer closes down threatening to shut down all other jobs as well? What can one due to generate tourism in a town called Smitten? This is the dilemma we learn about from the very beginning of the book. The book then describes four best friends who put their whole hearts, finances, faith and creativity on the line to do what they can to help: Natalie, Julia, Shelby, and Reese. Since this was written by real life best friends Coble, Billerbeck, Hunt and Hunter, they each put together an individual section of the book detailing these characters and the obstacles they must overcome as they fall inlove while saving their home town.
~Natalie-Colleen Coble
Nat is an only child whose parents died when she was a kid. She runs the coffee store in town and is the one person who eats gluten-free health food. She is raising her niece, Mia, who she wants to adopt and she is the group leader of the four women as well as the organized one in the group. Always having a positive perspective on life and a winning attitude, Natalie is the first one to find out about the town’s unknown future and decides on a quick course of action: turn Smitten into a resort town focused on romance.
Natalie suspects that Carson is Mia’s father based on a lie by her sister and she must overcome her doubts as she falls for him. Will Carson be able to prove his innocence and win her over? Can Natalie get past her suspicions of Carson long enough to help him remodel his cabins? Through the entire book Natalie’s coffee shop become a common hang out location for the four friends to meet and discuss updates on their lives. The joke of Natalie is her inability to make an enjoyable gluten free cookie and she spends the whole book perfecting this feat.
This is the quote of Natalie’s story that amazed me (pg. 84), “She saw him swallow hard. His lips flattened. ‘After what you know of me, you’d actually believe that?’ He leaned forward and stared at her. ‘Even a kiss to me means I love you. I take that pretty seriously. I haven’t had sex with any woman, Natalie. God says it’s a sin, and I want to go to my marriage bed as pure as my wife. I feel stupid even admitting that to you. Guess I’ve been so careful for no reason, when the woman I love is so quick to think I have no morals.’
Did he just say he loved me? She opened her mouth, the closed it again, unsure how to respond.”
~Julia-Kristin Billerbeck
Julia is probably the one with the most doubts about creating a suitable spa business in small town Smitten. She left Smitten to pursue work as an aesthetician in a successful New York spa, but came home when her mom broke her ankle and she was needed to help around the house. Julia decides to meet with her former boss, Devlin, to discuss making a spa business in Smitten and ask for his finances to invest with. Devlin chooses Zak Grant’s out of business grill as the key location for a spa, but what are his conditions before Julia agrees? When Devlin decides not to help and Zak steps in with an offer for Julia, will she submit? The only problem is that Julia wants her independence, not a man, even if Zak is her brother’s best friend and fellow citizen in Smitten.
Despite Julia’s concern for saving Smitten and learning to trust her growing attraction to Zak, she is able to discover about herself the ability to see beauty in her town and its people. Just because you live in a small town doesn’t mean you can’t accomplish big dreams. Will she uncover what Devlin’s true intentions were in time? Will she recognize Zak’s true feelings in his protective nature?
Here’s a quote from Julia’s story (pg. 194), “No, not teasing. Julia, I have loved you for as long as I can remember. I found hundreds of excuses to tell myself it wasn’t true, because it wasn’t convenient. I tried the concept of honor. Sometimes I chose anger. I blamed you when you left for New York and decided that you were shallow, just like Amy. Once I even decided if you couldn’t bake a pie like your mother, you weren’t worthy of such devotion….But the more reasons I thought of, the more I realized I couldn’t picture anyone else by my side for the long haul, and it was either you or eternal bachelorhood.”
~Shelby-Diann Hunt
Shelby is that character that’s easy to love and believes in a happy storybook ending. She has a cute small dog named Penelope that she dresses up whenever she goes out. Her story starts out with a fire in her home causing minor damage and changing her plans even in the midst of the town making changes. Shelby runs the etiquette classes called Social Graces for young ladies and is a loving mentor to each of her students. Nick is her friend, neighbor, and volunteer firefighter who helps Shelby run her classes in his home while hers is being repaired. Just as we learn who Nick is the plot changes; his ex wife dies in a yacht accident and he is left permanent custody of his estranged 12 year old daughter, Willow.
Shelby harbors a secret from her past that not even her best friends know about, one that could bring judgment and awkwardness to her path if it’s revealed. Will she learn to forgive her father? She is determined to bring Nick and Willow closer together without interfering, what will it take for Nick to trust her?
I have to say that this was my favorite of the four stories because it includes healing and a priceless father-daughter relationship that touched me deeply. Of all the stories in this romantic drama, this story was the most unpredictable for me. Here’s the quote I picked (pg. 257), “When he opened the door, she was sitting on her bed, eyes red and swollen, scarlet streaks on her face. He walked over and sat down beside her. Placing her hand between his own, he looked at her. ‘You want to talk about it?’ Big sloppy tears spilled over her lashes and down her cheeks. ‘I miss Mom.’ His heart hurt with her words. He wanted to make her all better. Make the bad stuff go away. But he couldn’t. ‘I know,’ he said quietly.
‘She never stayed home. I always missed her. But now…we’ll never really get to know each other.’
‘I’m sorry.’ He’d make it up to Willow. He didn’t know how, but he would.
‘Listen, I’m fairly new to this whole dad thing, but I want to do it right. It’s great to have you here with me. I want to be what you need, but I’ll make mistakes. That’s just how I am.’
Her smile in his direction melted his heart.
‘Just know that no matter what, I will always love you,’ he said. ‘Deal?’
‘Deal.’
He pulled her into a strong hug, and she hugged him back. Not just any hug, but a real dad-daughter kind of hug. The type of hug that said We’re family.
~Reese-Denise Hunter
Reese is the athletic and practical one of the friends. Her childhood friend, Griffen, helps her remodel the building she moves into to start an outfitter’s shop for the tourists. They play a one on one game of basketball and their feelings for each other change instantly. The only dilemma, who will be brave enough to speak their feelings first? This story was kind of annoying because if the two of them were really best friends, they would have gotten past the awkwardness that ensues and voiced their feelings long before the last page. However, adults do struggle communicating with one another when friendship turns into something more and this story illustrates that very well.
Reese gets all the support she needs from her three friends and she learns to trust God in the process with her vulnerabilities. Trusting God with your heart is a message that never gets old or worn down even if the character should already have this as common sense. This story was probably the most predictable of all of them, but it still held value and it was fun getting to know Reese.
Here’s a quote from her story (pg. 400), “She forced her eyes to his. ‘See, somewhere along the way, Griff, I—I fell in love with you. I’m sorry, I know this must be a big shock, and I didn’t even want to tell you because I was so afraid of losing you as a friend. But then you assumed I wanted Sawyer back, and I thought if we just spent time together, your feelings might change too, and then tonight, I thought seeing me this way might make you see me as not just your little buddy but as a woman…”
What I didn’t like about the story: the name town spinster is used more than once because all four of the main ladies are single.
Some of the romances are frustrating because the women are all attracted to the guy instantly, however, due to misunderstandings, miscommunication, or fears each woman has to overcome a trust issue of some sort before the story progresses smoothly. This cycle happens more than once and makes the story somewhat predictable.
This book did not flow smoothly for me as a reader. Even though it was well written and each author was able to explore these characters individually, it was not a page turner for me.
Overall, this book is adorable and filled with realistic characters that are easy to love despite their flaws. It was easy to keep up with each story and they are developed in order so nothing is confusing about the timeline. I recommend this book to anyone looking for clean romance, a cast of cute characters and some laugh out loud moments, a little girl who shows her faith in making wreaths for the whole town symbolizing God’s unending love, and four women who illustrate what friendship, loyalty and trusting God is really about. This book also includes a reading group guide, an interview with the four authors, recipes and the promise of a sequel in 2012.
I want to thank BookSneeze and Thomas Nelson for the copy they sent me for my review. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own.