The premise of this book held a lot of promise for me but was executed so poorly.
The writing was clunky, lacked subtlety in its foreshadowing and the dialogue could be cheesy at times whilst shallow and vapid during others.
Some plot points didn’t even make sense, for example, Emme is describing photographs taken between 1850 and 1950 and describing the women in the pictures...including their hair colour.
Yeah....I think photographs from those time periods maaaay have been black and white and whilst you might be able to tell if someone had dark or light hair, you certainly would not know that someone had red hair or dark blonde like she describes. She also goes on to describe the colour of the jewellery the women are wearing.
*sighs*
And then we got this line:
“Of course they weren’t going to let it be, were they?
No, because that was girls for you. Girls were catty and lived for gossip; trust me I am one”
(And this is the exact quote taken word-for-word from the book...I wish I was joking or paraphrasing)
.....And this one:
“I’m not your average girl”. Yep, that little treasure of a line.
It was at this point that my feminist self wanted to lob this book out the nearest window, all the while cursing every author who ever used the phrase “I’m not your average girl” and then punching a wall.
There was also a pathetic attempt at deflecting any curiosity or questions the reader might have about how “the librarians” originally figured out how to start going back in time which I shall now paraphrase:
“Oh, you want to know how we were able to invent time travel? Well, it was something very sciency, very complicated, quite boring to be honest, you wouldn’t want to know”
It was at this point that I gave this book a very big “fuck you” and punched the wall again.
The characters were one dimensional, underdeveloped and I didn’t care about a single damn one of them.
Emme turned into a giggling mess as soon as she met Jack and immediately had thoughts of undressing him.
I felt like I need to chuck a bucket of cold water over a fictional character.
Like I said, this premise held promise for me and is probably the only reason I didn’t DNF this book at the half way mark (as well as it being mercifully short). But overall it was just vastly underwhelming, not the best written story and filled to the brim with tropes that I cannot stand.
I always feel mean writing reviews like these as I can appreciate how hard it is to write a book, since I’m attempting to write one myself. And I know what a labour of love each book is for the author but there were just so many mistakes, typos, underdeveloped plot lines and characters and overused tropes and phrases and I couldn’t overlook any of these when I’d spent money on this book.