Say what you will about these books, but the cliffhanger endings are what saves them. Somehow I have got to know how this Hannah-Mike-Norman-Ross love "square" ends!!
I read most of this all in one morning, and... as usual ...there were things that bugged me. Right out of the gate (p. 3), Michelle says, "They were sitting right on top of my warmest winter scarf." Who says things like that? What is she, twelve?? Some of the language in these books seems stinted and mechanical -- like no one talks like that.
On p. 7 Hannah and Michelle seem confused on how many "ends" comprise a danish. Two. They can both have an "end piece" of the danish. Thank goodness Lisa was there to settle things for them!
At the top of p. 19 Michelle seems to not know when her mother's (and Doc's) wedding anniversary is. How do you not know when your parent's anniversary is??
On p. 34 Hannah and Michelle are leaving a restaurant. Michelle says that she's going up to the register to get coffee for the road. FOUR PARAGRAPHS LATER Michelle says that she's going to make coffee when they arrive at the condo. How much coffee do these two need???
On p. 64 Mike is at the Cookie Jar, and Hannah has a couple of thoughts that almost seem rude about him. She offers him cookies, asking him how many he wants. True to form, Mike says something along the lines of he would eat the whole pan. "I'll give you eight for now," Hannah says, "just ask if you want more." EIGHT COOKIES? Does a typical man usually eat more than eight cookies in one sitting? Does Mike not have diabetes by now, feasting as he so often does on Hannah's cooking??
Ross has left his car keys (that's a whole other conversation I could have) and in the course of events Hannah decides to buy a car for her sister, Michelle. Hannah is thinking about her bank balance, and the line goes "She might need some or all of that money" if the car she was going to buy cost more than she originally thought. All of that money? If she spent it all on Michelle's car, what would she have to live on??
There is what I think is a ridiculous scene concerning Swenson family matriarch Delores on pages 222-223. If I had a mother like Delores, I would want to shoot myself. She can be so rude and obnoxious and thoughtless.
Tracey, Hannah's niece, makes a few appearances in this installment. Tracey is a precocious child, and she can pronounce the word "consolation," but she can't pronounce "protrusions"??
Apparently when Andrea, Hannah's other sister, was in high school, she (obviously underage) went to a bar. Telling Mike about it when they were all adults, she made up a "ridiculous" excuse. Who cares what she did as a teenager? Who cares that she basically broke a law when she was younger? Haven't we all done that? Mike couldn't do anything about it at that point. Why lie??
More questions... Why did Ross give up his car and assets? How does he have so much money? What does he DO???!!!
Actually, I enjoyed all the food and going-out-to-eat scenes in this book. There are several interesting recipes in Raspberry Danish, including omelet squares, pizza dip, and Piccadilly cheese muffins. Maybe I'll actually make these...
You'll be able to find me reading the next darn book in this next darn series, because, for some reason, I can't put these down. Bright covers, recipes and food that appeal to any good foodie's heart, and cliffhangers for endings. Quick reads, they're fun, they're fluffy, and maybe one day Hannah will finally end up with the guy who I have in mind for her. #TeamNorman