I don’t know where to start. This book was poorly thought out with plot holes and problems that any editor should have caught or questioned. The military portrayals were inaccurate at best. Coincidences abounded. The BDSM was bizarre.
Aaron, a USAF pilot and John, a doctor meet as young men in their early 20's and have an interesting first meeting. They survive a tornado together and find that they have a pretty overwhelming attraction to each other.
The book is told in real time and flashback as John remembers their life together while waiting to find out if Aaron is going to survive a sniper attack that occured while they were having imaginative bdsm sex in the backyard.
On the surface the book sounds great but it falls apart fairly quickly.
First – the bdsm. In this book you get to your subspace basically by being hypnotized before you really ever start. As soon as Aaron is ordered around he basically goes into a trance. Considering he is so highly suggestionable and a USAF pilot this is interesting but unlikely. It’s a unique spin but was unbelievable. They get training from a master bdsm practitioner that includes getting Aaron a little tipsy with brandy to get him to relax and hypnotize into his subspace faster. That is just the surface stuff. Once Aaron is in subspace he literally doesn’t move. He seems to not feel anything he just lies there. It’s really strange.
The military aspect. Aaron starts off as a lieutenant and is promoted to Colonel in 9 years - this is unlikely. He is engaged to his female crew member, Rosalyn. She is a sergeant in the beginning of the book. He explains that they are on again off again, not because she is his subordinate, but because it “gets weird”. That would be a problem actually. The sergeant that he is engaged to turns into a captain and a USAF pilot as well in the end of the book. Not likely. Additionally, although engaged for all those years they are still working on the same team. Finally, Aaron is deployed to Afghanistan for 4 years straight.
Coincidences: After 4 years in Afghanistan Aaron returns to take a two week vacation with John. This is the first time either man has seen the other in all this time (they have been emailing and talking on the phone). While they are driving to their hotel so that Aaron can have his first gay experience (John was already gay when they met, Aaron is gay for John), John’s ex, Liam, calls Aaron on his cell phone to harass him about the day Aaron and John met 4 years earlier. Liam is not only able to get his cell phone number but he also calls on the same day the two hook back up 4 years later? Are you kidding? Finally, Aaron is brought to the same hospital that his attacker and his girlfriend have ties to.
Also, Liam and John apparently take the same track in their education to become doctors. Although they live in Florida they seem to move all over the state to the same area hospitals. Liam just happens to have worked and now lives near, 9 years later, the same hospital that they bring Aaron too.
Finally, the medical aspect. John is a doctor. When Aaron is shot his actions seem out of character and unrealistic. The lack of action while waiting for help after the sniper incident made little sense (not to mention who the sniper was and why he shot Aaron) and was a little confusing. Finally, the first time John and Aaron have sex (remember, after being apart for four years and multiple partners for both in the interim) they have sex without a condom.
Sadly, the actual story of how the men meet and the path their lives take could have been riveting. Most of the problems should have been detected, questioned and resolved well before publication to strengthen this book into a real well thought out and written novel.