interesting premise but such unprofessional presentation...
I found the story fascinating--even timely, given the current attempts by fascist MAGAt goons trying to force us all back to the "perfect" era of the '50s," when kids did what they were told, mums stayed home to slave for their families, and dads paid for a house, cars, regular vacations, healthcare, and often a mistress, etc. on a single income and a pretense of godly benevolence.
Alas, the book was so riddled with weird language and punctuation errors that it constantly detracted from the tale. I suspect speech wreck was responsible for many errors (homonyms aren't hard if someone is actually looking for them!), plus the obvious lack of an editor, let alone a proofreader. Punctuation was often wrong--or missing altogether.
Just a really sad presentation of a good idea, and the fact it ended with no real resolution or definite setup for an obvious sequel to answer remaining questions (like Helen as the obvious real villain here...) that we're only implied.