Okay, first off slow down some. This book rushed the beginning way to fast, I mean come on whole meets, dates, falls in love, and gets preggers within the first 6% of a book. Alyssa is insecure like most women are these days and then you have Jaden who would normally be the over confident one is completely awkward himself. I should have looked more into this I didn’t realize it was that short of a story. Very bland in my taste.