The Arrow Journey is the story of a boy sent back through time and into the middle of the Neolithic period, about 4000 BCE.
[Characters]
The characters were pretty in depth and defined, though I felt like Taal Fal's mother was a little excluded from the plot. Both protagonists and antagonists were well described and given depth.
[Story]
The story had a young adult narrative lacking the more serious tones of an adult book, but the story did feature young adults.
I really liked the back and forth telling of the same scenes from the perspective of the modern boy and the prehistoric girl. This made for an interesting and possibly unique perspective into an otherwise very different time period than today.
The depiction of the Neolithic period was reasonably good. The way the author brings the reader into the reasons behind why people did various things in prehistory really helped.
[Writing]
The writing style was a little less detailed than like, but still fun. It was easy to follow and had plenty of action. The battle scene was a little complex, but it fit the story well. I found no typos or grammar issues.
[Pros]
Taal Fal, a young prehistoric woman, was quite charming. She had a certain warrior/leader-like quality which I enjoy in female protagonists. Having a female protagonist who operates independently is always a win!
Great job and imagining the cultures! I like originality with prehistoric fiction.
[Cons]
I wish the feelings and emotions had been explored a little deeper, especially with Taal Fal.
There were a few potential historical issues, such as the use of apple cider (apples were probably still not in that region at that time), though the story doesn't quite pin down the location of the story. Additionally, the scene with the boy obtaining clothing would be quite hampered by the results of what occurs to a body after death, though I digress.