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250 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 23, 2018

Also, isn't that the exact description of President Alma Coin of District 13? 🤔
See, why did I need to know that random detail mid-paragraph? (Spoiler: I didn't.) Things like that just took me out of the story and were a bit confusing overall.
The good things? There were a few! The ending was actually kind of interesting, but only if there will be a sequel, otherwise it was rude. Li's relationship with her sister was pretty awesome. And the book was a quick read, so that's nice.
Ultimately, this just fell short of my expectations. The world-building was akin to what I'd expect from a short story in an anthology or something, and the lack of information and insight was confusing and unappealing. Li was an okay character, but her decisions didn't seem to correlate to her personality, so it was hard to make sense of why she was doing what she was doing. And I still don't understand why the hell these aliens had gills, tbh.
Bottom Line: Cool premise that could have gone a lot differently with a more sophisticated world-building and consistent character traits. And also less-insta love, because who likes that?
• The GENOCIDE and the human scientific experimentation that is just brought up like twice. This, paired with what seems to be the essentially authoritarian and repressive nature of the Abdoloreans' way of life, is deeply interesting and needed a lot more page space.
• The dynamic between Li and her sister was explored a little, but come on. Her sister, a perfectly legitimate Abdolorean, has had to live the life of a secretive outcast freak with Li because she's human. I want more about their bond, and their relationship with each other, and their relationship with their father.
• It seems like the Abdoloreans teach that humanity was essentially evil and unworthy of survival for living the way they did. I need to see more about how this topic is treated within Li's household, how she thinks about her heritage, and most of all: WHY? When they were going on a field trip about the ridiculous evil of how humanity lived by FARMING COWS and CULTIVATING THE LAND of all things, Li was like "well maybe they were just ignorant - they didn't know how to live in harmony with the planet like we do." I, for one, would like to know just how the Abdoloreans live in harmony with the planet, if cultivating the land and having livestock is a horrendous degradation. What do they do? We know they eat fruit, but what else? Do they not need protein? Does Li need to eat a special diet or take supplements? How can they just drop this wacky statement and not explain how the Abdoloreans are different?
• Li's physical training. The Abdoloreans, apparently, are super strong, super fast, breathe underwater, are super agile, and don't get hurt by hardly anything. Li's dad has been secretly training her since she was a kid so that she can fit in to this world. But... we don't... see that except for like 2 little flashback scenes. Li is competing in a MILITARY TRYOUT trying to place as NUMBER ONE and there isn't any clear inequality between her and anyone else. She seems to be on an equal plane, even though we only see her do a secret training session once in like... three weeks... and the only other references to training are from the long-ago past. Is intensive training in childhood just... enough... to give Li permanent muscles and fitness?
With the level of commitment to physical things that's shown in the book, it seems like Li should be at the bottom of the barrel of her classmates, but instead she excels constantly among people who should 1) just naturally be at a higher level than her and 2) also be ACTIVELY TRAINING for this MILITARY COMPETITION. It just seems very unrealistic that Li is doing what seems to be about the same/less than everyone else, and is always in first place. Honestly Li should be doing a secret routine every single night and morning.
• Li's father. This guy must be a truly radical revolutionary. In a place where even Ryn casually criticizing the idea of universal military conscription is considered mildly dangerous and unusual, this guy SAVED A HUMAN CHILD from state-mandated genocide and secretly raised her as his own. He must have deep, serious issues with his own government that go way, way beyond just this. This kind of treason isn't just a random, one-time thing, so why does he come up only like four times, and half of those are just telling Li off for some minor infraction of the house rules? Who is this guy? What is his job, and why does he just seem content to act mild-mannered and do it, after such rebellion? His relationship with Li must be unusual, given that he cared about her enough to save her from certain death and adopt her, and compromise his entire family's safety for her, and spend her entire childhood fitting her to survive. So why does he coME UP ONLY LIKE FOUR TIMES?
• Li's loneliness. She's grown up completely isolated except for her sister, practically, having to keep her distance from everyone else. This, by itself, would create a lonely psychology of living in Rapunzel's tower and looking out at everyone else, but also being the last of her species on the planet? Why do I come away feeling none of the loneliness/confusion/longing that Li must feel?
• The cute romance. Literally from page one, Li's eyes sparkle with infatuation as she sets eyes on the cute new boy. Just copy and paste that to fill the rest of the pages, and you have the general idea of what The Last Girl on Earth is like. The cute romance is quite frankly the entirety of the plot.
“I know I have no choice. I know this is my life. But this life is a lie.”



"You have to be just as strong and fast and smart as everyone else on this planet. You have to be more than human, Li. You have to be one of us."
For the first time, what I'm doing becomes fully clear to me. I'm joining the same military that eliminated my entire species, the military that bombed my home planet, the one that killed my family.