Life is short in the old village where Muira, a young girl blossoming into womanhood, has spent all her days, but her life is about to begin when she begins her new position as servant to Castle Campbell. The old laird and the old castle are cold compared to her home with her mother and brother, but the innocent girl will learn the pleasures of womanhood when she stumbles on a dark secret. The secret consumes her and leaves her breathless for more of what she knows is sinful, but nobody told her sin would feel so good.
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I was trying to enjoy this story, but it seems to have left out too many details. There was a mystery of the Laird's son, but few details. This story had too many details of what was in each room, but too few of the characters lives, loves, and feelings. The end leaves me very unsatisfied, as the story continues in another volume. Cliffhanger or sneaky way to sell a series. Too many grammatical errors and misspelled words.
Started like a possible good book.... BUT I didn't like how the first meeting took place and she jumps into bed with him and I detest that it was not a full book. I go out of my not to download cliffhangers and if it is o e without it being clearly stated I am disappointed and avoid that author in the future.
The story started out fairly well, then it became disjointed and abruptly ended with sex and a bite. It did not intrigued me into reading any more of the books in the series.
3 Chapter "book"? What a joke. I would have never bought it of I had known. I guess we need word count these days like we are back in school to meet basic standards.
I've read a few of this author's stories. They always ranged between good and not so good. I saw this pop up as free on Amazon and I had to grab it. Why not? Look at that cover! Plus who doesn't love a smexy Scottish werewolf ;)?
It started off okay with Muira who is a lovable gal who can't wait to start her new career at the castle as a cook servant. An opportunity that is rare. Things happen and she comes across a secret and a love and a dangerous world.
Things happened quickly...maybe a little too quickly. I was confused because one moment she is serving bread and the next she is in bed with the hottie. Wha? Where? When? *blinks* Okay. AND THEN IT ENDED. Bigger huh? Sighs okay.
The ending wasn't bad for a cliff hanger. Honestly...it was one of those cliff hangers you can pretty much be okay with. You know they live HEA and etc.
So yes, a big meh for me. I wanted more of a story and building of characters. I get it is a short story, but sometimes a short story can be too short. That cover though is awesome. I'll give it 2 stars.
Liked the way this novel is headed... Some dark mysterious man lives up in the north tower all on his own hidden away from the rest of the world. Who is he? or more important what is he? Shame this short novel leaves you on a cliff hanger, i would rather read the whole novel instead of a part of it, which is totally not worth reading unless your like me and often find you have an hour or so to read during the day. Liked the characters as well as the plot so far?! But i do feel that they fell into bed rather to quickly...would rather have that build up and a little romance first.
Mac Flynn has done it again with the Highland Moon series. The first of the series takes place in Scotland during the time of clan clashes and fights with England. It appears at first glance that all of the series of books by this author center around The same family, Campbell. I may be wrong, but I will continue to read first of series books by this author just to quench my own curiosity about the author.
I agree, this was a novella series, which I regret reading because having read this part for free, I now have to purchase the rest...anyways, I digress... Everything was rushed. At least the important elements. But descriptions of places, things, etc had more thought placed on them then the actual characters.
This story seemed written by a high school project/final.
As an episodic serial, it stinks. Too much time is devoted to characters who don’t feature again in this story. Additionally, there is no build up in romantic tension. Muira jumps straight into bed with the Laird’s son, almost before she learns who he is. The premise os ok but it would be much better published as a full book. I definitely won’t be paying $25 to read the rest of the story.
This was a good story with a lot of mystery to it. I look forward to reading more of the story and find out what is going on in the castle. There's many pieces of the puzzle missing.
Not the best, but definitely not the worst I've read.
I did like this book because the intense storyline, however there were a couple grammatical errors. I did quite enjoy the twist in the plot at the end, if you need to fill some time in your day, read this story.
Lots of potential but then the story that was just building suddenly cut off with a rather confusing sexual interlude and some underdeveloped feelings and narratives.