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Orcgasm: The Barbarian's Captive
"Captivity never felt so good... "
Maya is in trouble. The Elven Captial has been sacked, and the Invaders from the North have proven all but impervious to the strength of Elven Magick.
Life, as a Barbarian Captive means one of two things -- consent, and become a plaything for the will of the Barbarian Prince, or refuse, and live out the rest of your days in asexual servitude. Yet, there are darker fates in wait, just beyond the southern horizon. When the Orc Hordes make their move, and Dragon Fire serves as a replacement for the Light of Dawn -- will Prince Sòl, and his forces call upon those very Captives whom, they have sought to enslave?
The Barbarian's Captive is a Standalone Sequel to Full-Bodied Orcgasm, the Steaming Hot, Fantasy Monster Erotica Novella.
Maya is in trouble. The Elven Captial has been sacked, and the Invaders from the North have proven all but impervious to the strength of Elven Magick.
Life, as a Barbarian Captive means one of two things -- consent, and become a plaything for the will of the Barbarian Prince, or refuse, and live out the rest of your days in asexual servitude. Yet, there are darker fates in wait, just beyond the southern horizon. When the Orc Hordes make their move, and Dragon Fire serves as a replacement for the Light of Dawn -- will Prince Sòl, and his forces call upon those very Captives whom, they have sought to enslave?
The Barbarian's Captive is a Standalone Sequel to Full-Bodied Orcgasm, the Steaming Hot, Fantasy Monster Erotica Novella.
This 22k Word Novella describes Captivity under the Norn Barbarian Clan, as well as the Betrayal of the Hard-Pole Clan from the Hordes in the Orc Invasion. Contains Orgiastic Sex, Magic, Violence, and a HFN Ending..
66 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 9, 2017
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July 15, 2017
Genre: Erotic Fantasy
Type: Book 2 from An Erotic Elven Fantasy Adventure Novella series
POV: First Person - Dual
Rating:
After surviving the Hard-Pole orc clan, Maya made the journey back home to the Elven Kingdom. But as she arrived at the capital it was all in ruin. Now a prisoner of the barbarians, she was taken to their land by Prince Sòl to serve a purpose. However, soon enough they learned they have a common enemy that needed to be eradicated and must work together for the greater purpose.
Maya was one badass princess in this one! I wasn't convinced with her badassery previously, but she proved her worth not just as a writhing female, but also a worthy warrior. And speaking of the writhing part, the sex scenes were dirty just the way it should be :p
I like the fact that there were a lot of action scenes in this one. The ones with magical elements were especially exciting. I like the fast pace story but I still had some problem keeping up with who and what. Also I wanted an answer to why a certain scene happened. The ending was intriguing and I wonder which direction the author would go.
Orcgasm: The Barbarian's Captive is a story of a group of people banding together to fight for survival. The series would appeal to readers looking for action packed erotic fantasy.
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Type: Book 2 from An Erotic Elven Fantasy Adventure Novella series
POV: First Person - Dual
Rating:
After surviving the Hard-Pole orc clan, Maya made the journey back home to the Elven Kingdom. But as she arrived at the capital it was all in ruin. Now a prisoner of the barbarians, she was taken to their land by Prince Sòl to serve a purpose. However, soon enough they learned they have a common enemy that needed to be eradicated and must work together for the greater purpose.
With a movement, he shoved my chest to the floor, squashing my breasts against the woolen bedding, while he began to drive his weight into me, filling me repeatedly with his cock.
Maya was one badass princess in this one! I wasn't convinced with her badassery previously, but she proved her worth not just as a writhing female, but also a worthy warrior. And speaking of the writhing part, the sex scenes were dirty just the way it should be :p
I began to seamlessly mix both magic and weaponry, turning into a singular expression of the blade’s desire. My voice joined in the chorus of the Barbarians as greater and greater foes fell beneath my defiance.
I like the fact that there were a lot of action scenes in this one. The ones with magical elements were especially exciting. I like the fast pace story but I still had some problem keeping up with who and what. Also I wanted an answer to why a certain scene happened. The ending was intriguing and I wonder which direction the author would go.
Orcgasm: The Barbarian's Captive is a story of a group of people banding together to fight for survival. The series would appeal to readers looking for action packed erotic fantasy.
Books in the series:
Voluntary review from a gifted copy
For more reviews/reveals/giveaways visit:
July 30, 2017
Rating: 2 1/2 stars overall
Maya is an Elven warrior princess who uses her skills with the blade --and sex --to survive treachery, war, and worse in a fantasy world of darkness and magic. There are a few elements of dark fantasy to be found here that make the world building (which could use a bit more fleshing out) interesting. Our Elven princess could also use more character development as well, along with the males who capture her fancy.
The most distracting thing about this short story is it needs a darned good editor. That is what took me so long to read it. I kept stopping to edit my way throughout and this takes away your focus. It was impossible to really care about the characters or to connect with Maya. I will say that the sex scenes are NOT gratuitous and serve a purpose in the storyline. Really.
What could have been a fun erotic adventure fantasy story soon became more or less a project. Nevermind this one ends with a cliffhanger. If you only knew how much I hate cliffhangers...but-
I could forgive that since it felt complete. Yes, despite all of my other challenges and complaints, the ending was wrapped up with more to add.
The bones of the book have a structure requiring more crafting and shaping. Just too much gristle and fat, overtaking the meat. I appreciate where the author is going with this one. There was no doubt that the author is having a splendid time writing this serial, and providing the audience with the means of enjoyment. With improvement, the pleasure of the reader will be influenced and increased, I have no doubt about that.
This book was given to me for an honest review.
Maya is an Elven warrior princess who uses her skills with the blade --and sex --to survive treachery, war, and worse in a fantasy world of darkness and magic. There are a few elements of dark fantasy to be found here that make the world building (which could use a bit more fleshing out) interesting. Our Elven princess could also use more character development as well, along with the males who capture her fancy.
The most distracting thing about this short story is it needs a darned good editor. That is what took me so long to read it. I kept stopping to edit my way throughout and this takes away your focus. It was impossible to really care about the characters or to connect with Maya. I will say that the sex scenes are NOT gratuitous and serve a purpose in the storyline. Really.
What could have been a fun erotic adventure fantasy story soon became more or less a project. Nevermind this one ends with a cliffhanger. If you only knew how much I hate cliffhangers...but-
I could forgive that since it felt complete. Yes, despite all of my other challenges and complaints, the ending was wrapped up with more to add.
The bones of the book have a structure requiring more crafting and shaping. Just too much gristle and fat, overtaking the meat. I appreciate where the author is going with this one. There was no doubt that the author is having a splendid time writing this serial, and providing the audience with the means of enjoyment. With improvement, the pleasure of the reader will be influenced and increased, I have no doubt about that.
This book was given to me for an honest review.
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July 11, 2017 4,25**** stars from me!
Another steamy adventure for Maya with enjoyable, hot scenes and interesting dialogues. It is a fast pace story and as I have said before is a paranormal story with many unique elements, full of magic, hot sex scenes and my favorite in this book Prince Sol.
If you love this kind of theme with these "ingredients" then look no further, it's summer so it's perfect but be aware it can wet many panties! Looking forward to reading the next story from the author!
Another steamy adventure for Maya with enjoyable, hot scenes and interesting dialogues. It is a fast pace story and as I have said before is a paranormal story with many unique elements, full of magic, hot sex scenes and my favorite in this book Prince Sol.
If you love this kind of theme with these "ingredients" then look no further, it's summer so it's perfect but be aware it can wet many panties! Looking forward to reading the next story from the author!
July 15, 2017
**I was gifted a copy of this book by the author**
It's not that I never read monster erotica, but it's not often and I usually don't do a review.
No half stars here on GR, but I would certainly think this is a 3.5 star book. The quality (level) of the writing is quite good and there is a very credible level of world-building for such a short book.
I didn't realize that this was Book 2 in the Princess Maya series because the books weren't labeled as a series. As a librarian, I have created a series for them, so hopefully both parts will be read now. Anyway, I felt somewhat lost by not having read both parts.
This is billed as Monster Erotica, but it seemed more like a warriors, elves, orcs, dragons fantasy with some light bdsm and a couple of sex scenes. Not totally tame, but not close to the most erotic I have read. All in all this is a good, quick read and if the rest of Princess Maya's story is written, I will likely buy it.
It's not that I never read monster erotica, but it's not often and I usually don't do a review.
No half stars here on GR, but I would certainly think this is a 3.5 star book. The quality (level) of the writing is quite good and there is a very credible level of world-building for such a short book.
I didn't realize that this was Book 2 in the Princess Maya series because the books weren't labeled as a series. As a librarian, I have created a series for them, so hopefully both parts will be read now. Anyway, I felt somewhat lost by not having read both parts.
This is billed as Monster Erotica, but it seemed more like a warriors, elves, orcs, dragons fantasy with some light bdsm and a couple of sex scenes. Not totally tame, but not close to the most erotic I have read. All in all this is a good, quick read and if the rest of Princess Maya's story is written, I will likely buy it.
August 5, 2017
Maya was making her way home and as she got closer she felt something was wrong she began to see dead bodies but nothing else was moving anywhere she hurried her steps and the closer she got to the capital and then she began to see more bodies she was worried for her father but it seems that all the males were dead but she did find Lain who was not hurt but was having a vision but her eyes opened and she was frightened and she tried to get up but she only pulled Maya to the ground and a big warrior was all over her she was on her stomach and he was at her back trying to take her but when he was about to take her there on the ground he was told that he would be violating sacred rights and he stopped. The woman Freyja was in charge and she rendered Maya unconscious when she awakes she is on a ship with the many of the survivors they required certain things of the women but they could not have sex with them. By the time they arrived at the Orc Clan encampment it was cold and snow was on the ground and we are only wolf pelts. This is a book written for adults, many sexual situations. It is a very interesting story about Princess Maya's adventures. I was giving a free copy from the author as a gift. I am providing a review of this book without obligation.
July 18, 2017
Note the genre is EROTIC Romance. The first page sets that standard for all to see. If that is your genre, you are gonna really like this one. There is plenty of hot sweaty sex with hot Viking god like warriors. (take this as a warning or inticement)
This is the second book in the series. While the story can be read as a stand-alone and there is no strong cliff hanger, there are references to the first book so may or may not want to read it first. It doesn't hinder the enjoyment of this second book.
The princess has escaped one city of sex only to be captured by another for what she doesn't know. Sex? Breeding? Enslavement? When they arrive at their destination, she is in for a surprise, among other things.
The world created is one of magic and war and sex. It is a short read and will keep you going.
The author gifted me the book and I willingly reviewed it.
This is the second book in the series. While the story can be read as a stand-alone and there is no strong cliff hanger, there are references to the first book so may or may not want to read it first. It doesn't hinder the enjoyment of this second book.
The princess has escaped one city of sex only to be captured by another for what she doesn't know. Sex? Breeding? Enslavement? When they arrive at their destination, she is in for a surprise, among other things.
The world created is one of magic and war and sex. It is a short read and will keep you going.
The author gifted me the book and I willingly reviewed it.
July 14, 2017
Maya’s journey continues, when she reaches her homeland, everything has been destroyed and she is kidnapped, again. This time the Northern Barbarians take the captives by ship to their Prince Sol, enroute, Maya is introduced to a new form of torture that feeds her sexual spirit. As she is headed to be a breeder, the mysterious Forsaken One she freed appears. A new evil has to be faced and Maya’s erotic power is enhanced with both Sol and his brother. Will this be enough to beat this new evil? Another well written erotic paranormal story that provides a perfect balance to give depth to the myth while feeding intense sexual fantasies. I was gifted a copy of this book and this is my honest review.
July 25, 2017
I voluntarily reviewed an Advance Reader Copy of this book.
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Another amazing book that was gifted by the author and I loved it!
This story has a little bit more fighting in it (which I enjoyed) to accompany the incredible sex scenes.
Maya is back home but things have gone wrong and she gets dragged into another battle. Her captors are vicious but she always seems to find a way to enjoy her captivity.
Now her new and old lover will be the key to defeating their enemies.
The only question is if she will be strong enough to handle the power.
A fast read filled with crazy sex scenes and bloody battlefields.
Enjoy!
https://thesecretworldofbooklovers.bl...
Another amazing book that was gifted by the author and I loved it!
This story has a little bit more fighting in it (which I enjoyed) to accompany the incredible sex scenes.
Maya is back home but things have gone wrong and she gets dragged into another battle. Her captors are vicious but she always seems to find a way to enjoy her captivity.
Now her new and old lover will be the key to defeating their enemies.
The only question is if she will be strong enough to handle the power.
A fast read filled with crazy sex scenes and bloody battlefields.
Enjoy!
July 12, 2017
Outstanding
Okay, so give me an Erotic Woman Warrior who actually saves the day and I'm in love. The storyline is great and very well written. I truly enjoyed the sexual situations that Maya seemed to get herself involved in with the two leaders. Way to go girl. Sure hope we get to read more about the other two female characters. Definitely recommend for anyone who loves strong women warriors and lots of erotic sex.
Okay, so give me an Erotic Woman Warrior who actually saves the day and I'm in love. The storyline is great and very well written. I truly enjoyed the sexual situations that Maya seemed to get herself involved in with the two leaders. Way to go girl. Sure hope we get to read more about the other two female characters. Definitely recommend for anyone who loves strong women warriors and lots of erotic sex.
July 13, 2017
This being the second in a series may have been why I felt lost and not involved with the characters since I have not read the first. Maya the central characters is a princess and has magical ability that seems to be changing and is key to salvation. World is full of battles and warriors that are primitive in nature. Thank you to the author who provided this with no requirements for a review. I voluntarily read and my comments here are my honest opinion.
August 3, 2017
Great story
It's the start of a good story but leaves lots of questions.. there should be more before this story, as there are lots references to things that have happened in the past but no storyline to let you know exactly what it was it leaves you with a lot of questions, like this is a 2nd book or the 2nd half of a story.. it is a great story but could be a lot better and longer..
It's the start of a good story but leaves lots of questions.. there should be more before this story, as there are lots references to things that have happened in the past but no storyline to let you know exactly what it was it leaves you with a lot of questions, like this is a 2nd book or the 2nd half of a story.. it is a great story but could be a lot better and longer..
July 10, 2017
Enjoyable
I received this as a gift and was pleasantly surprised. It had a fun storyline and I quite liked the characters. Even though I primarily read fantasy and paranormal novels I try to avoid anything less then 200 pages, however, I enjoyed this novella. I would recommend it.
I received this as a gift and was pleasantly surprised. It had a fun storyline and I quite liked the characters. Even though I primarily read fantasy and paranormal novels I try to avoid anything less then 200 pages, however, I enjoyed this novella. I would recommend it.
August 21, 2017
It was great to see what happened to Maya on her adventures after she returned from the Orc's camp. While I didn't enjoy the story line of this book quite as much as the first it still comes with several well written erotic scenes. It also becomes a much greater adventure ending with Maya fighting against a dragon! I can't wait to see what happens to Maya next.
September 7, 2017
Quite an adventure!
Syn Root really knows how to tell a story! Our heroine is still fueling her magic on love and lust. This book definitely goes more in the direction of action adventure the further in you go. It really is a riveting tale that I can't wait to read more of.
Syn Root really knows how to tell a story! Our heroine is still fueling her magic on love and lust. This book definitely goes more in the direction of action adventure the further in you go. It really is a riveting tale that I can't wait to read more of.
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