Yea…I’m done….
I tried to get past the fact that she drank a cup of coffee she didn’t see prepared, from someone she actively and explicitly did not trust, especially when that violates lesson 1 of women’s safety 101.
I tried to get past her continuously making stupid decisions that no logical person, and most definitely no super trained assassin, would make.
Examples: the coffee thing, letting her attack dog go to see a certain character, keeping a phone her enemy gave her that is probably being used to track her, taking the magic IDs and not asking how they came to be, still traveling with the guy she doesn’t trust and letting him help her when she’s vulnerable in multiple ways.
But my breaking point, that same character shows up with coffee again and she drinks it AGAIN! She doesn’t even think twice about it, doesn’t smell it, nothing. All while he tells her the very thing I mentioned above about the phone and gives her a new one.
I mean does she not have the ability to say the word no?
Does she not have the ability to make her own deductions, buy her own coffee and phone, or does it always need to come from a man?
How many times will she be saved by someone else when she’s supposed to be this badass?
Listen, I have no problems with the damsel in distress, or the out of touch and out of shape former super assassin protagonist being pulled back in the game they don’t know anymore. But that isn’t what this story was sold as, and when you write characters in this way, selling them as badass but giving us someone sloppy, they come off as incompetent and almost impossible to relate to.
So, good luck folks. I’m out!