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Chase & Daniels #1
Harkworth Hall
Caroline Daniels must marry, and marry well. But in her remote corner of England eligible suitors are few and far between, and none hold a candle to her closest friend, Diana Fitzroy.
When Sir Edward Masterson arrives, he seems the answer to Caroline’s financial worries, though she instinctively dislikes the reticent, older merchant. Soon Sir Edward has set his sights on acquiring both Caroline and the decaying Harkworth Hall.
Caroline’s future seems secure, save that Sir Edward’s enigmatic secretary hints at a dark secret, and Sir Edward shows an unusual interest in the nearby bay. To discover Sir Edward’s true purpose, Caroline will have to face the horror beneath Harkworth Hall—and the woman who will change her life.
When Sir Edward Masterson arrives, he seems the answer to Caroline’s financial worries, though she instinctively dislikes the reticent, older merchant. Soon Sir Edward has set his sights on acquiring both Caroline and the decaying Harkworth Hall.
Caroline’s future seems secure, save that Sir Edward’s enigmatic secretary hints at a dark secret, and Sir Edward shows an unusual interest in the nearby bay. To discover Sir Edward’s true purpose, Caroline will have to face the horror beneath Harkworth Hall—and the woman who will change her life.
165 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 1, 2017
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May 29, 2026A short Gothic novel in an isolated house with a plucky heroine, a sinister suitor, murder, occult shenanigans, a mysterious secretary who not just the reader but the heroine instantly clocks as a cross dressing woman, and a general sense of dread. I wouldn't say it had terribly 18th century vibes, more of a general olden days feel to it, but the sense of place and the mounting fear are fun. Will read the next.
November 8, 2017
This got better for me the further it went along. The story is a historical intrigue book with elements of paranormal, horror, and f/f romance delivered in a short novel form. It's also definitely the kickstart to a series. This first book does wrap itself up enough, though, so it's a set up to the next but not a cliffhanger.
Caroline Daniels is the only child to her beloved father and they live alone together in a remote countryside of England which happens to border the old seaside manor, Harkworth Hall. When a well-to-do potential suitor comes along showing an interest in both Harkworth Hall and Caroline, Caroline's hackles rise but for what she's not certain. She's given an ominous warning to stay away from this suitor by the suitor's own secretary, Mr. Chase, but will she heed?
I felt the story was a bit slow in the beginning but it picks up momentum that carries us until the end. In reality, I don't think the story was actually slow. Some set up is necessary and, in retrospect, the groundwork was laid well. But, all through the first half I was getting frustrated with Caroline herself.
"Harkworth Hall" takes place in the mid 1700s, which the author does a good job using language that makes the story feel historical by the way, so I should cut Caroline some slack but her character repeatedly chooses to not trust her instincts half the time and then she just seems foolish in other moments all the way up until about 2/3rd the way through the book.
I couldn't help harkening back to my college days of when I'd watch Xena with my very heterosexual roommate who'd scream and rant at the tv every time Gabrielle showed her face. And when Gabrielle was the reveal at the end of the Lao Ma episode I thought she was going to kick the set in: "You stupid, stupid character! You're just useless! Xena should run off with Ares already! Just die!"
All right, I wasn't quite to that point with Caroline but really, similar frustration. I'm not sure why Mr. Chase wasn't more exasperated. The author references Caroline's waffling in the end, though, and it's part of her character arc and, yes, also probably more true to life so I have forgiveness.
The last part of the book is an action adventure of sorts with some decent suspense. It also delivers some sweet warm fuzzy moments for the blooming romance and some excitement in realizing Caroline gets some of her dreams fulfilled. With how the story ends I'm definitely interested to continue the series.
I'd put this in the high 3 stars.
Caroline Daniels is the only child to her beloved father and they live alone together in a remote countryside of England which happens to border the old seaside manor, Harkworth Hall. When a well-to-do potential suitor comes along showing an interest in both Harkworth Hall and Caroline, Caroline's hackles rise but for what she's not certain. She's given an ominous warning to stay away from this suitor by the suitor's own secretary, Mr. Chase, but will she heed?
I felt the story was a bit slow in the beginning but it picks up momentum that carries us until the end. In reality, I don't think the story was actually slow. Some set up is necessary and, in retrospect, the groundwork was laid well. But, all through the first half I was getting frustrated with Caroline herself.
"Harkworth Hall" takes place in the mid 1700s, which the author does a good job using language that makes the story feel historical by the way, so I should cut Caroline some slack but her character repeatedly chooses to not trust her instincts half the time and then she just seems foolish in other moments all the way up until about 2/3rd the way through the book.
I couldn't help harkening back to my college days of when I'd watch Xena with my very heterosexual roommate who'd scream and rant at the tv every time Gabrielle showed her face. And when Gabrielle was the reveal at the end of the Lao Ma episode I thought she was going to kick the set in: "You stupid, stupid character! You're just useless! Xena should run off with Ares already! Just die!"
All right, I wasn't quite to that point with Caroline but really, similar frustration. I'm not sure why Mr. Chase wasn't more exasperated. The author references Caroline's waffling in the end, though, and it's part of her character arc and, yes, also probably more true to life so I have forgiveness.
The last part of the book is an action adventure of sorts with some decent suspense. It also delivers some sweet warm fuzzy moments for the blooming romance and some excitement in realizing Caroline gets some of her dreams fulfilled. With how the story ends I'm definitely interested to continue the series.
I'd put this in the high 3 stars.
November 19, 2020
A very intriguing first installment, and I thoroughly anticipate the next!
What an interesting premise and adventurous plot.
Such mystery and intrigue.
You have historic ladies who love ladies. One posing as a man. A curious sea creature. A clandestine group of men. Ladies being sacrificed to the ocean. Spies and secret plans.
Quite thrilling, what more could you want?
What an interesting premise and adventurous plot.
Such mystery and intrigue.
You have historic ladies who love ladies. One posing as a man. A curious sea creature. A clandestine group of men. Ladies being sacrificed to the ocean. Spies and secret plans.
Quite thrilling, what more could you want?
September 18, 2018
This was one of the better #SPFBO books I have in my batch this year and although this book is less fantastical than some of the others, there is a certain sense of wariness and dread that you get from reading it which added to the atmosphere.
This is the story of Caroline, a young lady who is just trying to keep her and her father afloat in their noble lifestyle with dwindling funds and hard times ahead. She is a dutiful daughter who cares a great deal for her father, and she only wants to help him, but secretly she wishes that help didn't have to come from a good marriage as she doesn't wish to be married at all.
The story is set in the countryside, where many old families have fallen on harsher times and the country of England is fighting to stay on top of their rivals the French. We soon meet a new young man who has come to the neighbourhood to try and broker a deal with the locals and invest in new trade. It seems that he is too good to be true, and Caroline is quickly suspicious when she is warned off of him, but she doesn't know quite how much trouble looms until a young girl goes missing and she has to hunt for her...
What I liked about this was the tone, it's dark and gloomy and bleak and I think you get a good sense of the drudgery of Caroline's life right from the start. I also think that there was a lot to like about Caroline because although up to this point she has obeyed all the rules and been there for her father she has a lot more to give and the events that play out means she has a chance to shine more. There is even a lesbian romance later in the book which was a wonderful and natural addition to the story.
Overall, I think this is one of those books where it starts off slow and builds the tension up to the end where the drama unfolds. I can certainly see this becoming a strong series, and my only real criticism is that it felt a little under-developed in places and some of the events were a little too convenient for my liking. 3.75*s from me, which is 7.5*s for #SPFBO purposes.
This is the story of Caroline, a young lady who is just trying to keep her and her father afloat in their noble lifestyle with dwindling funds and hard times ahead. She is a dutiful daughter who cares a great deal for her father, and she only wants to help him, but secretly she wishes that help didn't have to come from a good marriage as she doesn't wish to be married at all.
The story is set in the countryside, where many old families have fallen on harsher times and the country of England is fighting to stay on top of their rivals the French. We soon meet a new young man who has come to the neighbourhood to try and broker a deal with the locals and invest in new trade. It seems that he is too good to be true, and Caroline is quickly suspicious when she is warned off of him, but she doesn't know quite how much trouble looms until a young girl goes missing and she has to hunt for her...
What I liked about this was the tone, it's dark and gloomy and bleak and I think you get a good sense of the drudgery of Caroline's life right from the start. I also think that there was a lot to like about Caroline because although up to this point she has obeyed all the rules and been there for her father she has a lot more to give and the events that play out means she has a chance to shine more. There is even a lesbian romance later in the book which was a wonderful and natural addition to the story.
Overall, I think this is one of those books where it starts off slow and builds the tension up to the end where the drama unfolds. I can certainly see this becoming a strong series, and my only real criticism is that it felt a little under-developed in places and some of the events were a little too convenient for my liking. 3.75*s from me, which is 7.5*s for #SPFBO purposes.
May 23, 2022
4 stars
Good story, interesting concept and decent execution. Wouldn't hurt if it was a bit longer and more detailed.
But I really liked Jo's character and even Caroline wasn't bad, even though some of here decisions/opinions were ignorant at best.
Good story, interesting concept and decent execution. Wouldn't hurt if it was a bit longer and more detailed.
But I really liked Jo's character and even Caroline wasn't bad, even though some of here decisions/opinions were ignorant at best.
November 16, 2017
Caroline Daniels is a young woman who lives with her father somewhere remote on the English coast. The family is impoverished gentry – her father wants her to marry well so she can have a comfortable live. The likely candidate seems to be new arrival Sir Edward Masterson, a wealthy tradesman who wants to re-inhabit Harkworth Hall.
Everyone seems charmed by the suave older gentleman, but Caroline can’t shake the feeling of dark forboding that seems to cling to him. And then there is his strange secretary Mr. Chase - a woman disguising herself as a man - who keeps hinting that Caroline’s dark suspicions about Masterson are correct.
The book had a Gothic romance feel and L.S. Johnson’s unadorned writing style captures the period beautifully (for a shorter book the quick pace gives it plenty of content). There is tention, something sinister lurking underneath and the little eerie details really set the mood.
I like Caroline. She is no wilting flower but a young woman with grit and courage. She wants to live, be adventurous like the stories of the female pirates Anne Bonny and Mary Read she play-acted as a child with her best friend Diana Fitzroy. Her internal struggle with being a dutiful daughter and play by society’s rules (she loves her father – a likeable man - and wants to make him happy) was nicely portayed and believable.
I also like the relationship between Caroline and Mr. Chase. There was no insta-love here, in fact Caroline spends over half the book heavily mistrusting him (her). But the chemistry is there and I can't wait to see what develops in the next story.
f/f
Themes: shades of Hitchcock’s The Birds, something wicked this way comes, “Ask him about his wives” gave me the willies, release the Kraken!, those smugglers make filthy houseguests, listen to your gut Caroline!, ooooh lovely twist there towards the end, I love to read the next book and see their romance continue, I want more!
4.3 stars
Everyone seems charmed by the suave older gentleman, but Caroline can’t shake the feeling of dark forboding that seems to cling to him. And then there is his strange secretary Mr. Chase - a woman disguising herself as a man - who keeps hinting that Caroline’s dark suspicions about Masterson are correct.
The book had a Gothic romance feel and L.S. Johnson’s unadorned writing style captures the period beautifully (for a shorter book the quick pace gives it plenty of content). There is tention, something sinister lurking underneath and the little eerie details really set the mood.
I like Caroline. She is no wilting flower but a young woman with grit and courage. She wants to live, be adventurous like the stories of the female pirates Anne Bonny and Mary Read she play-acted as a child with her best friend Diana Fitzroy. Her internal struggle with being a dutiful daughter and play by society’s rules (she loves her father – a likeable man - and wants to make him happy) was nicely portayed and believable.
I also like the relationship between Caroline and Mr. Chase. There was no insta-love here, in fact Caroline spends over half the book heavily mistrusting him (her). But the chemistry is there and I can't wait to see what develops in the next story.
f/f
Themes: shades of Hitchcock’s The Birds, something wicked this way comes, “Ask him about his wives” gave me the willies, release the Kraken!, those smugglers make filthy houseguests, listen to your gut Caroline!, ooooh lovely twist there towards the end, I love to read the next book and see their romance continue, I want more!
4.3 stars
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September 21, 2019UPDATE 9/21/19: This does have trans-unfriendly language in its cross-dressing narrative that I missed the first time I read it. Very sad, as this was previously a big rec from me.
Gothic horror + competent heroines falling for each other? If there was a button marked "pre-order the rest of this series no matter how many books there are" I would click it hard enough to break my mouse. The narrative voice is pitch-perfect for the genre, the menace is appropriately menacing (especially Caroline's nightmares of a dark power in the sea, maybe something that rhymes with welder rods?) and the HFN is perfect book one ending. I don't know what more to say except if any of this sounds even remotely intriguing, get it.
Gothic horror + competent heroines falling for each other? If there was a button marked "pre-order the rest of this series no matter how many books there are" I would click it hard enough to break my mouse. The narrative voice is pitch-perfect for the genre, the menace is appropriately menacing (especially Caroline's nightmares of a dark power in the sea, maybe something that rhymes with welder rods?) and the HFN is perfect book one ending. I don't know what more to say except if any of this sounds even remotely intriguing, get it.
April 9, 2019
[Very minor spoilers ahead, last chance to skip these notes]
I enjoyed Johnson's collection Vacui Magia, and grabbed this without reading the blurb too carefully. I'd never expected to be enthusiastic about a historical lesbian Gothic romance, even one with a definite feminist (ahem) thrust. This is quite different from my favorite stories in the collection. The narrative is delivered in clean and breezy prose, and packed with tongue-in-cheek humor. (Everything is telegraphed, so I'm not going to bother with spoiler warnings here on.) Empowerment of heroines with cross-dressing and (cough) pokers and guns! Adventures in dark, damp tunnels! And of course, Leviathan itself. As the female protagonists attempt to escape an explosion (cough) via one of said tunnels, one muses:
I'm not sure I need to spend time with the sequel, but this has been hugely entertaining.
I enjoyed Johnson's collection Vacui Magia, and grabbed this without reading the blurb too carefully. I'd never expected to be enthusiastic about a historical lesbian Gothic romance, even one with a definite feminist (ahem) thrust. This is quite different from my favorite stories in the collection. The narrative is delivered in clean and breezy prose, and packed with tongue-in-cheek humor. (Everything is telegraphed, so I'm not going to bother with spoiler warnings here on.) Empowerment of heroines with cross-dressing and (cough) pokers and guns! Adventures in dark, damp tunnels! And of course, Leviathan itself. As the female protagonists attempt to escape an explosion (cough) via one of said tunnels, one muses:
... it all provoked me, and I ran. I ran faster than I knew I could, my legs unencumbered by skirts and my fears overcoming all propriety.
I'm not sure I need to spend time with the sequel, but this has been hugely entertaining.
November 5, 2019
An unexpected delight!
'Hawkworth Hall' is a charming but suspenseful, deliciously old-fashioned Gothic romance novel from fantasy writer, L.S. Johnson. Set during the Georgian period in England's coastal north, the novel features a young heroine of good birth but depressed fortune drawn into a situation that may not only endanger her life but that of her country.
The Georgian setting is rather light on specifics and the language is fairly modern, but this has loads of Gothic atmosphere, some genuinely pulse-pounding moments of suspense, a truly heinous villain, monsters (of both the animal and human sort), and (be still my beating heart!) a girl in breeches; you really can't ask for more in a novel of this type.
Highly recommended for those looking for a slightly different take on the Gothic romance genre.
'Hawkworth Hall' is a charming but suspenseful, deliciously old-fashioned Gothic romance novel from fantasy writer, L.S. Johnson. Set during the Georgian period in England's coastal north, the novel features a young heroine of good birth but depressed fortune drawn into a situation that may not only endanger her life but that of her country.
The Georgian setting is rather light on specifics and the language is fairly modern, but this has loads of Gothic atmosphere, some genuinely pulse-pounding moments of suspense, a truly heinous villain, monsters (of both the animal and human sort), and (be still my beating heart!) a girl in breeches; you really can't ask for more in a novel of this type.
Highly recommended for those looking for a slightly different take on the Gothic romance genre.
October 26, 2017
Received to review via Netgalley; publication date 1st August 2017
I picked up Harkworth Hall thanks to Bob @ Beauty in Ruins’ review; it sounded like a fun piece of Gothic romance with horror along the lines of William Hope Hodgson, rather than, say, Stephen King. All in all, pretty much up my alley — and even better, it features a relationship between two women (about which I’d better not say too much; Bob’s review already has a minor spoiler). I loved the women of the story: yes, they’re of their time, but they’re not completely circumscribed by the most strait-laced options available to women — Caroline has an independent streak, for one.
As for the horror aspect, it doesn’t go into that too much. It’s more of a sense of unease, of something uncanny, rather than all-out gore and cheap thrills (though there is a scene or two in which the threat is realised!).
I have just one quibble. At one point, two women are talking about being sensible, in the sense of being responsible and not rushing into danger, etc. Then one comments that they lack “sensibility”. Nooooo, that’s not what that word means! “Sensibility” is about appreciating and responding to emotion, not “being sensible” in our modern sense. Austen’s Sense and Sensibility is contrasting the two in its title, not pairing two like words.
That said, I’m looking forward to reading more of Caroline’s adventures, for sure.
I picked up Harkworth Hall thanks to Bob @ Beauty in Ruins’ review; it sounded like a fun piece of Gothic romance with horror along the lines of William Hope Hodgson, rather than, say, Stephen King. All in all, pretty much up my alley — and even better, it features a relationship between two women (about which I’d better not say too much; Bob’s review already has a minor spoiler). I loved the women of the story: yes, they’re of their time, but they’re not completely circumscribed by the most strait-laced options available to women — Caroline has an independent streak, for one.
As for the horror aspect, it doesn’t go into that too much. It’s more of a sense of unease, of something uncanny, rather than all-out gore and cheap thrills (though there is a scene or two in which the threat is realised!).
I have just one quibble. At one point, two women are talking about being sensible, in the sense of being responsible and not rushing into danger, etc. Then one comments that they lack “sensibility”. Nooooo, that’s not what that word means! “Sensibility” is about appreciating and responding to emotion, not “being sensible” in our modern sense. Austen’s Sense and Sensibility is contrasting the two in its title, not pairing two like words.
That said, I’m looking forward to reading more of Caroline’s adventures, for sure.
August 11, 2022
3 stars. Interesting plot and I was definitely into it. However, I didn’t really like the writing style and the main character Caroline was annoying. She was super judgmental and made some really stupid decisions. Jo, on the other I thought was fascinating and I liked her a lot. The ending definitely made me want to continue on with this series eventually.
September 5, 2017
Harkworth Hall is a late Georgian historical adventure novel that has hints of goth, romance, and thrill embedded into it. The story focuses on the lead heroine, Caroline whom is very smart, adventurous, and is likeable. Her situation in life is The author and underrated.com kindly requested this review, and it is very easy to see how lost and stuck she feels having to marry. There is, however, a twist to this tale and that is what makes the novel very interesting. The secretary knows of a secret that changes everything for Caroline.
Although the story is short, it was well put together and was filled with an immense amount of content. It was very surprising to feel as gratified as I was, once I had finished reading this book. The literature style of writing is in a classic format adding to the texture of the theme, and it is action packed with romance and hidden twists, making it an ideal choice for a fast-enjoyable read.
There is a sequel to this book which made the ending more intriguing. It definitely provides something to look forward to and promises great potential for something as good as this one. What the work could improve on was its character development. Having said this, it did not take away much from the book since it was a short story.
I recommend this book to historical fantasy readers.
Although the story is short, it was well put together and was filled with an immense amount of content. It was very surprising to feel as gratified as I was, once I had finished reading this book. The literature style of writing is in a classic format adding to the texture of the theme, and it is action packed with romance and hidden twists, making it an ideal choice for a fast-enjoyable read.
There is a sequel to this book which made the ending more intriguing. It definitely provides something to look forward to and promises great potential for something as good as this one. What the work could improve on was its character development. Having said this, it did not take away much from the book since it was a short story.
I recommend this book to historical fantasy readers.
August 13, 2022
Rep: lesbian mc & li
CWs: gore, attempted assault
CWs: gore, attempted assault
September 1, 2024
This was a really enjoyable read. If you are into sapphics, sea monsters and a bit of action heroinism, this might be for you.
July 23, 2017
1752, England, The North.
And with this minor introduction we are transported to a time when King George the Second was on the throne and the latest on the fashion scene for women were dresses as wide as a doorway and the men of prominence sported those funky white wigs. The book starts off with a minor mystery as to why the birds have all flown away from the coastal area where the heroine lives and gradually winds itself into a fantasy world of smugglers, damsels in distress and a leviathan requiring a specific blood sacrifice. All very odd.
Thankfully it’s only a short book of 164 pages, and the groundwork is clearly laid out for more novels to come, possibly making it a series. But in the end it’s a mess of ideas and genres that doesn’t really make the mark. It starts off as one type of book but then misleads the reader into a weird storyline that it doesn’t sell at all well. The characters are not well crafted, the prose is clunky and in general it’s just a jumble.
Without a doubt, I am not the target audience for this piece of work.
And with this minor introduction we are transported to a time when King George the Second was on the throne and the latest on the fashion scene for women were dresses as wide as a doorway and the men of prominence sported those funky white wigs. The book starts off with a minor mystery as to why the birds have all flown away from the coastal area where the heroine lives and gradually winds itself into a fantasy world of smugglers, damsels in distress and a leviathan requiring a specific blood sacrifice. All very odd.
Thankfully it’s only a short book of 164 pages, and the groundwork is clearly laid out for more novels to come, possibly making it a series. But in the end it’s a mess of ideas and genres that doesn’t really make the mark. It starts off as one type of book but then misleads the reader into a weird storyline that it doesn’t sell at all well. The characters are not well crafted, the prose is clunky and in general it’s just a jumble.
Without a doubt, I am not the target audience for this piece of work.
March 19, 2021
Harkworth Hall made me remember reading the Dark Shadows novelizations when I was a kid. The author describes her novel as Jane Austen meets Lovecraft, which is perfect. This time, innocent Caroline Daniels is drawn into a plot to harness monsters to protect England.
The book is slow to start, which I found frustrating. While I enjoyed Persuasion, I don't consider myself a fan of regency romances. However, in the vernacular of the time, I persevered and was rewarded. The books gets better, more fascinating, and faster in pace the farther in it goes. No one is what they seem, for better and worse. The ending was not only completely unpredictable, it was entirely satisfying.
Harkworth Hall is the first of four Chase & Daniels books. If anything deserves to be made into a TV series, this does.
The book is slow to start, which I found frustrating. While I enjoyed Persuasion, I don't consider myself a fan of regency romances. However, in the vernacular of the time, I persevered and was rewarded. The books gets better, more fascinating, and faster in pace the farther in it goes. No one is what they seem, for better and worse. The ending was not only completely unpredictable, it was entirely satisfying.
Harkworth Hall is the first of four Chase & Daniels books. If anything deserves to be made into a TV series, this does.
September 17, 2017
What a delightfully creepy book! I was a little nonplussed about the voice at the beginning, kind of a “oh not another one of these” moments, but the plot unfolded nicely and I got sucked right into it to the point where I didn’t even notice the voice. In fact the voice ended up adding to everything that was going on so it all worked out in the end.
Caroline is a character that’s been shoved into a particular role that she doesn’t really want to be in but society tells her it’s a must so she does it despite her heart screaming otherwise. But soon circumstances change and even though Caroline is desperate for a change, what society wants is so ingrained in her that it’s hard for her to do what’s right by her and by her family. It creates excellent tension among her, Mr Chase and Edward Masterson.
On top of that there’s this sinister, underlying scheme going on and you’re not sure whether there’s a supernatural element to it or if the men involved are just all sorts of shady and Johnson does an excellent job of toeing that line without dragging out the story in any unnecessary way.
And it’s a shorter story, my digital copy coming in as just over 100 pages. Johnson doesn’t waste words and she doesn’t waste time getting to the point but she doesn’t sacrifice setting or character development to get there. Another excellent balance.
I really hope there’s more to this story, at least one more book, because after what happens at the end it can’t just end there!
4.5
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Caroline is a character that’s been shoved into a particular role that she doesn’t really want to be in but society tells her it’s a must so she does it despite her heart screaming otherwise. But soon circumstances change and even though Caroline is desperate for a change, what society wants is so ingrained in her that it’s hard for her to do what’s right by her and by her family. It creates excellent tension among her, Mr Chase and Edward Masterson.
On top of that there’s this sinister, underlying scheme going on and you’re not sure whether there’s a supernatural element to it or if the men involved are just all sorts of shady and Johnson does an excellent job of toeing that line without dragging out the story in any unnecessary way.
And it’s a shorter story, my digital copy coming in as just over 100 pages. Johnson doesn’t waste words and she doesn’t waste time getting to the point but she doesn’t sacrifice setting or character development to get there. Another excellent balance.
I really hope there’s more to this story, at least one more book, because after what happens at the end it can’t just end there!
4.5
I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.
June 10, 2018
The heroine is one of my favorite types -- the plucky daughter of a family in "reduced circumstances" who must work to keep up appearances and whose only hope of restoring the family fortune is marrying well. And then he turns out to be a rake! Except in this case, he's much, much worse than that Caroline isn't a traditional woman of her time. She'd rather play pirate than princess, and she keeps her stays looser than her best friend thinks is fashionable. But she's not unrealistically anachronistic -- she still wouldn't be seen without her stays, and at first she's horribly offended by a woman who dares to dress as a man.
This is a quick read, zipping from one big scene to the next without quite as much time as I would have liked getting into the deeper development of the characters and the evil plot afoot. Nothing specific was missing, though, and a book that leaves me wanting more is better than its opposite! It kept me turning pages and reading "just one more chapter" long after I should have gone to sleep.
Both of the female leads are brave and determined, and yet believable in this historic setting. I fell in love with them and can't wait to see what they do in the next book!
This is a quick read, zipping from one big scene to the next without quite as much time as I would have liked getting into the deeper development of the characters and the evil plot afoot. Nothing specific was missing, though, and a book that leaves me wanting more is better than its opposite! It kept me turning pages and reading "just one more chapter" long after I should have gone to sleep.
Both of the female leads are brave and determined, and yet believable in this historic setting. I fell in love with them and can't wait to see what they do in the next book!
June 12, 2021
Couldn’t put it down
I was pleasantly surprised with this book. It was fast paced and a very quick read. I would have liked for it to have gone into a little more detail, but it also wasn’t lacking in the detail either. The way the author writes is very smooth and easy to read.
This book did keep me guessing and trying to figure out how it was all going to play out in the end. I loved “mister” Chase and Miss Daniels characters, and am looking forward to reading the next book
I was pleasantly surprised with this book. It was fast paced and a very quick read. I would have liked for it to have gone into a little more detail, but it also wasn’t lacking in the detail either. The way the author writes is very smooth and easy to read.
This book did keep me guessing and trying to figure out how it was all going to play out in the end. I loved “mister” Chase and Miss Daniels characters, and am looking forward to reading the next book
September 22, 2017
First off I'd like to say that I absolutely love the cover. It's beautiful and instantly gives the feel of a classic Gothic novel in the vein of Wuthering Heights. Fortunately the characters in Harkworth Hall are far more likable than the denizens of Wuthering Heights.
It's a short book and highly enjoyable. The pace moves quickly and doesn't get bogged down with unnecessary details. Harkworth Hall, while lending some atmosphere, doesn't really pop up much until the end. Although I will say it does seem to loom over the book in a good way.
The characters in Harkworth Hall are the real star of the book. Caroline is very likable and her variations of thoughts are very believable. And, if I'm being totally honest, I was prepared to not like her. It seems like so many modern books writing in earlier time periods go out of their way to shove down our throats how Unique! and Different! the main heroine is. Harkworth Hall seemed to be starting out that way but I quickly loved Caroline. She is probably a bit more modern than she should be but her internal war with her differences and what's proper for the times were interesting and very realistic. I also loved the fact that she loved her father and worried about him. You don't see that much. Particularly in historical fiction. Most fathers are the domineering "You will marry!" kind. So it was nice to see a good relationship between Caroline and her father. The other characters were just as equally fleshed out.
I even loved the love story that developed between Caroline and Mr. Chase. For me that's saying something because I tend to generally roll my eyes. But it was sweet and cute and not of the insta-love variety. In fact, Caroline spends much of the book not trusting Mr. Chase.
Another thing that I appreciate as a reader is that, although Harkworth Hall seems to be the start of a series, the story was wrapped up with just enough loose ends to keep you interested to find out more. That's how a series book should end, with the main story wound up satisfactorily but with just enough to make you want to read more.
Also, the book was entertaining enough that it made me overlook the few historical inaccuracies. The largest being Caroline being in the room when her mother was giving birth. That is why I tend to sty away from historical fiction because inaccuracies really bug me. However, Harkworth Hall is a horror novel at it's core so the very few inaccuracies there were (the author apparently did their research and did it well) didn't bother me as much.
All in all it's a quick, enjoyable read and I'm very interested to find out what will become of Caroline, her father and Mr. Chase in the next book.
Received by www.scifiandscary.com from the author for an honest review
It's a short book and highly enjoyable. The pace moves quickly and doesn't get bogged down with unnecessary details. Harkworth Hall, while lending some atmosphere, doesn't really pop up much until the end. Although I will say it does seem to loom over the book in a good way.
The characters in Harkworth Hall are the real star of the book. Caroline is very likable and her variations of thoughts are very believable. And, if I'm being totally honest, I was prepared to not like her. It seems like so many modern books writing in earlier time periods go out of their way to shove down our throats how Unique! and Different! the main heroine is. Harkworth Hall seemed to be starting out that way but I quickly loved Caroline. She is probably a bit more modern than she should be but her internal war with her differences and what's proper for the times were interesting and very realistic. I also loved the fact that she loved her father and worried about him. You don't see that much. Particularly in historical fiction. Most fathers are the domineering "You will marry!" kind. So it was nice to see a good relationship between Caroline and her father. The other characters were just as equally fleshed out.
I even loved the love story that developed between Caroline and Mr. Chase. For me that's saying something because I tend to generally roll my eyes. But it was sweet and cute and not of the insta-love variety. In fact, Caroline spends much of the book not trusting Mr. Chase.
Another thing that I appreciate as a reader is that, although Harkworth Hall seems to be the start of a series, the story was wrapped up with just enough loose ends to keep you interested to find out more. That's how a series book should end, with the main story wound up satisfactorily but with just enough to make you want to read more.
Also, the book was entertaining enough that it made me overlook the few historical inaccuracies. The largest being Caroline being in the room when her mother was giving birth. That is why I tend to sty away from historical fiction because inaccuracies really bug me. However, Harkworth Hall is a horror novel at it's core so the very few inaccuracies there were (the author apparently did their research and did it well) didn't bother me as much.
All in all it's a quick, enjoyable read and I'm very interested to find out what will become of Caroline, her father and Mr. Chase in the next book.
Received by www.scifiandscary.com from the author for an honest review
August 27, 2017
Right away, the writing is engaging and crisp, and it doesn’t waste it’s time on long description. The book is short, but the story flow so well that you can easily read this book in one or two days and you don’t feel like you are missing anything – like a Neil Gaiman short story, everything that should be there is there. The plot is fairly straightforward, in a narrative sense. It starts slowly, then the mysteries pile up, the character decides to investigate, action happens, there’s a hint of a resolution – oh no, more things go wrong! – and then there’re an actual resolution and the sequel hook. This is by no means a bad thing. In these days when every media seems to want to bury me under flashbacks and « mindtwists » and plot holes, this classic manner of storytelling is like a breath of fresh air. It also gives us the time to unravel what’s going on at the same time as the main character, and establish it’s universe in a slow but reliable manner.
The main character, Caroline, is great in that while she knows how to shoot and ride, she doesn’t suffer from « not like the other girls » syndrome. She doesn’t spit on « girly » things, but rather follows and believes in the social conventions of the time, and is shocked but intrigued when she meets another character who does not follow those established conventions. Caroline is also a main character that is easy to like. She’s stubborn to a fault and too curious for her own good, but she is also courageous, dedicated to her family and unafraid to work hard when the occasion calls for it.
The mystery is interesting, and did not play out exactly how I thought it would, which is good. This is not flat-out horror, more like a supernatural thriller, but there is definitely suspence that culminates in a good old’ monster reveal, just how I like them.
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The main character, Caroline, is great in that while she knows how to shoot and ride, she doesn’t suffer from « not like the other girls » syndrome. She doesn’t spit on « girly » things, but rather follows and believes in the social conventions of the time, and is shocked but intrigued when she meets another character who does not follow those established conventions. Caroline is also a main character that is easy to like. She’s stubborn to a fault and too curious for her own good, but she is also courageous, dedicated to her family and unafraid to work hard when the occasion calls for it.
The mystery is interesting, and did not play out exactly how I thought it would, which is good. This is not flat-out horror, more like a supernatural thriller, but there is definitely suspence that culminates in a good old’ monster reveal, just how I like them.
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September 3, 2022
Harkworth Hall is one of the most interesting stories I have read in quite a while. It's a deceptive piece of literature that seems to be one thing, but which has a whole other story lurking beneath the surface. L.S. Johnson simultaneously captures the feel of old-school Gothic romance and Victorian horror beautifully, but imbues it all with some contemporary sort of sexual confidence.
Rather than being your typical gothic protagonist, Caroline is a strong, confident woman, not afraid to play a role outside her father's approval. Mr. Masterson is an interesting twist on the gothic antagonist, a seemingly suave and sophisticated gentleman with ulterior motives, but it is Mr. Chase who brings the whole story together. Minor spoiler here, but he is actually a heroine in disguise, a woman who kindles an inappropriate spark within Caroline while working to expose her employer.
On top of the Gothic romance and Victorian horror, there is also a paranormal thriller that, perhaps, fits a bit awkwardly within the final pages, but makes for an enjoyable whole. Harkworth Hall wasn't at all what I was expecting, and it's all the better for the surprise.
Originally reviewed at Beauty in Ruins
Rather than being your typical gothic protagonist, Caroline is a strong, confident woman, not afraid to play a role outside her father's approval. Mr. Masterson is an interesting twist on the gothic antagonist, a seemingly suave and sophisticated gentleman with ulterior motives, but it is Mr. Chase who brings the whole story together. Minor spoiler here, but he is actually a heroine in disguise, a woman who kindles an inappropriate spark within Caroline while working to expose her employer.
On top of the Gothic romance and Victorian horror, there is also a paranormal thriller that, perhaps, fits a bit awkwardly within the final pages, but makes for an enjoyable whole. Harkworth Hall wasn't at all what I was expecting, and it's all the better for the surprise.
Originally reviewed at Beauty in Ruins
Disclaimer: I received a complimentary ARC of this title from the author in exchange for review consideration. This does not in any way affect the honesty or sincerity of my review.
April 6, 2019
*I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review*
Set in nineteenth century England, only child Caroline Daniels is under pressure to marry to secure her future. When the wealthy Sir Edward Masterson appears to take an interest in her, Caroline is torn between accepting the match or following her instincts that Sir Edward is not all that he seems. Opting to do the later and together with Sir Edward’s secretary Mr Chase, who has a secret of his own, Caroline begins to uncover why Sir Edward has arrived in her remote corner of England and just what his obsession is with the derelict Harkworth Hall.
Harkworth Hall is a very atmospheric, gothic tale. Caroline is a likeable and unconventional heroine who defies the stereo-types of her time. Uncovering the secrets of Harkworth Hall fuel her secret desire for adventure and a life that in her time would normally be out of reach for her. I enjoyed Caroline’s blossoming romance with Chase amongst the mystery and look forward to seeing their unconventional relationship for the times progress further.
The author brought together a wonderful combination of historical and mythological fiction together with a female-female romance to form an intriguing and thrilling tale and I cannot wait to read more of Caroline and Chase’s adventures in the future.
Set in nineteenth century England, only child Caroline Daniels is under pressure to marry to secure her future. When the wealthy Sir Edward Masterson appears to take an interest in her, Caroline is torn between accepting the match or following her instincts that Sir Edward is not all that he seems. Opting to do the later and together with Sir Edward’s secretary Mr Chase, who has a secret of his own, Caroline begins to uncover why Sir Edward has arrived in her remote corner of England and just what his obsession is with the derelict Harkworth Hall.
Harkworth Hall is a very atmospheric, gothic tale. Caroline is a likeable and unconventional heroine who defies the stereo-types of her time. Uncovering the secrets of Harkworth Hall fuel her secret desire for adventure and a life that in her time would normally be out of reach for her. I enjoyed Caroline’s blossoming romance with Chase amongst the mystery and look forward to seeing their unconventional relationship for the times progress further.
The author brought together a wonderful combination of historical and mythological fiction together with a female-female romance to form an intriguing and thrilling tale and I cannot wait to read more of Caroline and Chase’s adventures in the future.
December 20, 2017
It’s hard to craft such a full story in so few pages. One with such awesome character development and plot twists. I positively loved this from start to finish.
Caroline Daniels, a young woman whose ambitions defy the stereotypes of her era, gets sucked into a bizarre mystery that has just the right amount of supernatural.
The storytelling and writing style felt well-adapted to mimic a journal or something written in 1752 England. Very well researched, I felt. The world was just as alive as the narrative.
I absolutely adored the characters and their relationships. I was especially fond of the love story managed through all the life-threatening detective work. It felt paced right, the characters had chemistry—anyone who reads my reviews knows that I critique the romantic subplot harshly. This one gets the highest praised for how well-executed it was.
Best news of my life: there’s going to be a follow-up. I. Can’t. Wait.
Caroline Daniels, a young woman whose ambitions defy the stereotypes of her era, gets sucked into a bizarre mystery that has just the right amount of supernatural.
The storytelling and writing style felt well-adapted to mimic a journal or something written in 1752 England. Very well researched, I felt. The world was just as alive as the narrative.
I absolutely adored the characters and their relationships. I was especially fond of the love story managed through all the life-threatening detective work. It felt paced right, the characters had chemistry—anyone who reads my reviews knows that I critique the romantic subplot harshly. This one gets the highest praised for how well-executed it was.
Best news of my life: there’s going to be a follow-up. I. Can’t. Wait.
September 29, 2017
Harkworth Hall, set in England of 1752, is a young adult mystery novel that follows Caroline Daniels, the daughter of a long-standing widow. While her father expects her to marry, as is expected of all fine ladies, Caroline’s brash attitude and boyish curiosity lead her down a different path.
This was a book I just could not put down. The writer had me hooked from start to finish, with quirky characters I came to love. My favourites were Caroline and the mysterious Mr Chase. While I adored Caroline’s refusal to obey society’s protocols for women and her level of determination and bravery, Mr Chase took this concept to a whole new level. They had a natural chemistry with Miss Daniel’s and appeared devoted to her from their first meeting. As a dark plot develops and blood is spilled, Mr Chase stops at nothing to warn Caroline of the dangers that lurk around Harkworth Hall.
The novel was written beautifully. It possessed an effortless grace when it came to the flow of the words, with non-stop action that keeps the blood pumping. The words themselves sing, the word choice perfect for evoking emotion within each and every scene.
I would recommend this book to both mystery and young adult book lovers. It was a true gem to read and I am thankful that the book was brought to my attention.
Easily rated 5 stars.
July 3, 2017
Caroline is a young woman from the impoverished landed gentry. Her father meets and gets friendly with an older wealthy gentleman. He invites him home so that he can meet Caroline. This is the beginning of this book. The story is told from Carolines viewpoint, and that makes it a bit hard to get a good insight into the other characters at first. But we get to know the other characters more as the story progresses. The writing style reminds me strongly of the older gothic books. Like the books by Victoria Holt. I liked the story and Carolines character is likable.
I received an ARC of this book by the publisher through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
I received an ARC of this book by the publisher through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review.
August 19, 2018
A very entertaining read!
I went into the book craving some gothic f/f content, and I was not dissappointed on that end. Though I will admit that the story never played out quite as I imagined it, and I appreciate the twists and turns packed into such a short book.
The characters weren't as profoundly developed as what I'm used to, but I can forgive that given the pagecount. Even though the romance happened a bit quickly, I was already so fond of the protagonist and so intrigued by her love interest that I could also forgive that. All in all, I could've done with more development, but I enjoyed this first installment and am definitely looking forward to the sequel.
I went into the book craving some gothic f/f content, and I was not dissappointed on that end. Though I will admit that the story never played out quite as I imagined it, and I appreciate the twists and turns packed into such a short book.
The characters weren't as profoundly developed as what I'm used to, but I can forgive that given the pagecount. Even though the romance happened a bit quickly, I was already so fond of the protagonist and so intrigued by her love interest that I could also forgive that. All in all, I could've done with more development, but I enjoyed this first installment and am definitely looking forward to the sequel.
December 8, 2025
This was SO good!!
I loved Caroline and Jo and their slowly building trust and romantic connection. I adored how protective Jo was of Caroline and how Caroline was willing to risk everything for Jo.
I was immediately pulled into Caroline’s story from the first page and the writing kept me absorbed throughout, it was such a treat to read a page-turner with such a compelling lesbian romance at its center. I’ll be starting the next book in the series and starting as soon as I finish posting this review.
Highly recommend, one of my favorites!!
I loved Caroline and Jo and their slowly building trust and romantic connection. I adored how protective Jo was of Caroline and how Caroline was willing to risk everything for Jo.
I was immediately pulled into Caroline’s story from the first page and the writing kept me absorbed throughout, it was such a treat to read a page-turner with such a compelling lesbian romance at its center. I’ll be starting the next book in the series and starting as soon as I finish posting this review.
Highly recommend, one of my favorites!!
July 23, 2017
This is a shorter novel with a little bit of romance and mystery. Things aren’t necessarily as they appear and there were some twists that I didn’t expect. I thought the writing was solid in reflecting the time period and in general, the storyline was very interesting. Some of the characters seemed a little two-dimensional and could have used a little more detail but other than that, I thought it was a good read.
I voluntarily reviewed an ARC copy of this book.
I voluntarily reviewed an ARC copy of this book.
September 12, 2017
Well done.
This is not the best book I have ever read but I did really enjoy it. Well written, well edited. Characters were likable and had good chemistry. My one complaint is simply that I wish it had been longer and the main characters had more time together. However this was a set up book. More on the way and I can't wait to read it. The author did a fine job with background and setting. Really enjoyable and definitely recommended.
This is not the best book I have ever read but I did really enjoy it. Well written, well edited. Characters were likable and had good chemistry. My one complaint is simply that I wish it had been longer and the main characters had more time together. However this was a set up book. More on the way and I can't wait to read it. The author did a fine job with background and setting. Really enjoyable and definitely recommended.
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