Jacob Benton I know that it’s wrong. I can’t help myself. Hank is a kind and gentle soul. He fills my heart with joy. That man has a body that I will never forget. Hank has been gone for two years overseas serving his country with distinction. I’ve fallen for his older brother Kenneth. I wouldn’t give it up for the world. He makes me happy. The one thing missing is the one that got away. Hank is coming home. He has this hold over me. I can’t explain it. Just one look and I know that I will fall into his arms. I have to stop it from happening.
Hank Killian I left him thinking that I would forget about him. I felt that I was destined to live in my brother’s shadow. I had to do this for me and not for anybody else. Coming home isn’t easy. I’ve heard of how Kenneth and Jacob have gotten to know each other intimately. I want to be the bigger man. I want to give them my blessing and show that there are no hard feelings. It all changes when I see him. I want Jacob. I ache for him like I have with no other man. I always thought that what we had was unhealthy. I understand that he has moved on. I can’t let it go. I know that he has feelings for me. I can see it in his eyes. I only need to rekindle the flame to make it burn brightly. I can’t help the way that I feel. It’s a betrayal of my brother’s trust. That first kiss is going to be my downfall
EDITION Please note this story is an erotica adaptation of the original “Two Ways” by the same author.
AUTHOR’S This is a stand-alone story with an HEA, so no cliff-hangers! This story contains explicit love scenes and is intended for 18+ readers only.
The writing was so bad I could not go on reading the book. I had absolutely no idea what was going on, no idea who was talking to whom or what anybody's agenda was.
Got about 10-15 pages in... I Just can't do it.. My brain hurt trying to figure out who was talking/speaking to whom. I was Completely lost and Confused and was not impressed with the writing at all.. This storyline sounds ok in the BLurb but there just seems to be a lot missing and not explained in the actual book. I may or may not come back to this one and try again, well see... If I do I will definitely update the review.
1-1.5. I hate rating things low. Unfortunately, the cover was by far my favorite thing about this one. I mean, look at it. It's hotter than hell.
Not the typical proofing errors, more so words out of order, insufficient use of contractions, stilted. Things I could understand if this was a case of English not being the writer's first language. Jacob came off as a complete dickwad, Hank wasn't any better. Kenneth was the only person in the entire book that I liked at all.
I should note I only read the main story, which ended at 38%. Did not read either bonus story.