there is one thing the author screwed up. Pike "borrows" money, 200+ bucks, from his father's desk. Paper money is not in circulation very long, they get old, torn, worn out, etc. But the thing is, how can he take his father's money, go years back in time, and use it for food and motel rooms without getting arrested. Someone WOULD notice the dates and even that that the bills from post-2000 did not look the same. Other than that, good job and we'll worth reading.