[received a complementary copy from the author through VRO]
I was just really confused the whole time I read this book. There wasn't really a logical follow-through on the world building; like the limits or uses for magic. And also the world building was incredibly dense and far too intricate. I just had so many questions. "Death is a natural part of the cycle" but also god forbid anyone interact with the Death elemental, who was named Blaid but also his name was typed out as Blade at points so??? And there were a handful of inconsistencies in story lines: Brindor (sp)'s wife gave birth twice in the span of like two weeks or something? They sent a dragon back to warn the main army that the vampyres were more powerful than the first wave, but when we see the fight from Jaik's POV, he never shows up? It's never mentioned again? Or how at the end of the book our MC calls Blaid's eyes "blue" despite having realized they were violet the last time she saw him?
Also the occasional capitalization really threw me off. Why do they caps Week, Month (Quarter, Moon)? Why is there one (1) Princess, but no princes, king, or queen?
Also i LOVE that this fictional world puts a premium on virgin women 🥰 yes very cool author, let's pretend a woman who has had two children is still a virgin and also her magical society with "Servers" instead of servants has to remain pure 🥰 cool class analysis by saying that the Servers actually love being servants and it's totally a sought after job 👏
The whole earth aspect was completely unnecessary and added nothing to the story. Except it being INCREDIBLY GROSS that a middle age man was lusting after our MC, who visually looks to be the same age as his youngest child (who is a teenager). The author had a hard time keeping one POV within paragraphs. And the author voice was just... Not doing it for me. I'm not usually one to point to generic writing "rules", but this book could have used more "show, don't tell".
The random sex scene in the last 5% of the book felt so out of place.
Our MC was also awful. "I have to fight on the front lines even if it ruins the strategy, and also even though i technically would have been even more on the front lines if I did my job the way the commanders said to. Also I get weak and faint if someone dies near me, teehee, I'm going to be very helpful by doing this"
I'm going to highlight how gross it is for a middle aged man to be lusting after a teenager:
"It made her look strong and in control and incredibly sexy, but he knew she felt vulnerable and scared. It enhanced his feelings to such a degree, he could almost not contain them."
Please die in a hole.