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The virtual world has always been a safe, comfortable place for tech consultant Marcus Holly. He favors working behind the scenes, joining the ranks of Noble House as the kinky club expands to offer a fully immersive VR experience. Then he meets the club’s resident Dom, Enver Furst, and all his carefully contained desires spin out of control.

Bondage-happy Enver relies too heavily on tactile stimulation to buy into Marcus’s VR playground. But when Marcus needs a skilled test subject to beta with, he only has eyes for Enver. The results are immediate and Enver’s never experienced anything this raw and powerful. He’s just unsure if it’s the tech he can’t resist—or the man.

Comfort zone deliciously shattered, Marcus’s sessions with Enver soon transcend even their wildest fantasies. But someone from Marcus’s past is watching, and his dangerous obsession will force Marcus and Enver to either fight for the reality they’ve created together…or see it shattered beyond recognition.

This book is approximately 85,000 words.

Carina Press acknowledges the editorial services of Mackenzie Walton.

335 pages, Kindle Edition

First published August 20, 2018

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Sara Brookes

36 books224 followers
A native Virginian, Sara sold her first published romance novel, FLASH OF DARK, an urban fantasy romance pitting vampires against the Fae, in 2009. Since that fateful day, she's published over 20 books in various sub-genres of romance, been generously honored with several awards, and saved the world from evil chocolate chip cookies.

Though she may insist otherwise, Sara loves the places her mind conjures and has always been fascinated by the strange, the unusual, the twisted and the lost (tortured heroes are her personal favorite). She is an action movie junkie, addicted to coffee and has been known to stay up until the wee hours of the morning playing RPG video games. Despite all this geekiness, she is a romantic at heart and is always a sucker for an excellent love story.

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Profile Image for BookAddict  ✒ La Crimson Femme.
6,948 reviews1,443 followers
May 10, 2021
This series gets sexier and sexier. In the Rough totally strokes my techie pleasure button with the virtual reality kink to the next level. Will this technology ever become reality? Who is to know? Techies need to take note of Ms. Brookes' ideas and capitalize on them!

I enjoyed this story because I really liked Marcus Holly. He is a guy who I can understand and I feel badly for, even when I think he acts illogically. He is a great guy who just wants to live his life peacefully. He also hopes to make some money so that he can have food and basic shelter. All of this hinges on his cutting edge VR technology. He wasn't expecting it to be picked up by a BDSM club, but he adjusts and creates some pretty awesome scenarios. What I liked about Ms. Brookes' writing style is how she incorporates enough technology to make it kind of believable. The technology is not quite there yet, but her descriptions of what needs to happen in order to create the VR rooms is accurate. The body scanning with diodes also helped make it realistic. Making that scene erotic with unintentional fondling just makes it hotter.

Speaking of hot, the erotic kinky scenes between Marcus and Enver is smoking. I generally skim through most sex scenes now. Ms. Brookes' erotic scenes are one of the few I will read slowly and savour. I can visualize the scene so well based on her vivid descriptions. I get aroused just as the characters are getting aroused. There is something so sensual with her erotic writings. It leaves me panting for more. The kinky parts to this story is more sensation based than S&M which works great for me.

The conflict in this story can be seen from a mile away and the plot twist is unsurprising. It is disappointing in this day and age people's sex life are still being judged. I am always confused as to why what someone does in their private life is anyone's business. Or why someone would feel the need to intrude and try to destroy someone's life based on their sexual leanings. Ms. Brookes accurately depicts what happens in real life for some gay men.

Overall, this erotic tale is sweet and sensual. The back and forth hesitation between Marcus and Enver can get a bit frustrating, but it makes it more realistic. Plus, both men do have their own baggage which lends credence to their tentative behavior. Enver's issue and why he has to be so controlled was a surprise. I had never thought of this issue in the way that Enver presented how it took over his life and interfered with his work. Addictions are difficult to stop and some which may not be taken seriously still have serious ramifications. Fortunately for Enver, Marcus can help out. This kinky erotica is recommended to m/m readers who enjoy sensual sadism with a techie flair.

*provided by Manic Readers
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2,938 reviews1 follower
August 16, 2018
Enver and Marcus
All the 5 stars !
This is a story with a lot going on. The way of writing was excellent. It had a great portion of suspense in it and done in a tremendous and original way. The D/s part was wonderful. The unconditional love was heartwarming. Both men beautifully flawed. For me a 5 star read!!

Enver is the Noble House resident Dom, a kinky club. When he meets Marcus who will create a virtual kinky world for the club his feelings are all over the floor. Marcus is impressed by Enver as Dom and person and will use him to experience the virtual world with him... this way he can keep him close.
They grow closer and closer. Both men have secrets... Enver reveals his and Marcus just can’t.
When the danger from Marcus his past is catching up... it was devastating and heartbreaking.

I loved both men, their personalities were strong and convincing. The dynamic between them was one of push and pull and that was great done. The angst real and palpable.
A strong written story I loved immensely!!

Kindly received an arc from the publisher
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7,046 reviews872 followers
August 20, 2018


3.5 stars

I’m finding that the books in this series have all been hitting me the same way: I love the unique twist to this kink club, I love the people involved, and I love the power exchanges. But something always falls a bit short to keep me from truly falling in love.

In the Rough brings kink to the cutting edge of technology. Marcus is a technical wizard, crafting a virtual reality world that immerses the user in a dimension of sound, touch, smell and feeling that successfully imitates real life. Put it to work in a kink club and the possibilities are endless. With the resident Dom, Enver, as his guinea pig, Marcus pulls him into an intriguing world of virtual sex, where the feelings are just as real and the emotions just as strong. But a person from Marcus’ history was out to destroy him, and keeping his present and his past from meeting was something Marcus intended to do at all costs.

I loved the relationship between these two men and the way two people, so clearly opposite from one another, fit together so perfectly. But what caused me angst was the idea that Marcus couldn’t share this burden with his new lover because he wanted to protect him. I find that infinitely frustrating. With the intimacy required in the type of BDSM relationship between these two men, I found it infuriating that the past was something neither of these men truly wanted to discuss.

In addition, I felt that the story went on for longer than it needed to in order to fully get across the tale. Up until about the 70% mark, I was enjoying most everything about this book. But it should have ended there. Instead, it went on after I felt it would have been a perfect place to wrap up, and rather than giving me more insight into this couple that I genuinely liked, it seemed to drag on for me, overstaying its welcome. I actually found it disappointing that it didn’t end when I feel it should have.

The Noble House Kink series is truly unique, combining technology with human emotions that would not ordinarily seem to go together. But it works and is a new take on an enjoyable theme. My idiosyncrasies when reading this story may not be everyone else’s, so I would still recommend taking a peek into this VR world.
Profile Image for Rachel Emily.
4,527 reviews390 followers
July 28, 2018
This book was a bit of a struggle to get through. I didn't know that it was the third book in a series (even though it stood on its own pretty well, there were just definitely couples I could tell had had their own story and were in the background through this one), and I never really connected with the characters.

I had requested this because I thought the premise of kink being in a VR setting was different. This book seemed to focus a LOT of the VR part of it, the technical things about it, and how it was being used. I wanted to know more about the characters, what had made Enver the way he was in regards to being a dom and ending things with his past sub, and what had happened to Marcus in his past. I wanted hot kink, some hurt/comfort maybe, some emotion between the two, but I just didn't feel like I got that, to be honest.

I don't know. I think this had a lot of elements that could have made it a 4 star read for me, but when I don't get that connection between the 2 MCs, well, that's a big part of my reading enjoyment.

I received a copy from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Profile Image for Heather 123.
957 reviews8 followers
July 6, 2018
I'm not one to usually go for M/M books however after having loved the second book in this series I had to grab this one and give it a chance. I'm glad I did! As usual with the Noble House, you have the IT/virtual world component in addition to the physical club throughout the book. This story brings together a programmer and a member of the club who doesn't believe virtual reality can take the place of being at the club.

The plot was interesting, but I wasn't as into it as I was the last book in this series. I struggled feeling the connection between Enver and Marcus. The physical connection was definitely there (and it was HOT) but I struggled feeling the emotional connection between the two. I needed more between them beyond just the physical side of their relationship.

Marcus' story was different, but the end was predictable.

I'm looking forward to Oz' story as it was only touched upon in this book.
Profile Image for Kristie.
1,170 reviews76 followers
December 21, 2018
This was okay... different. A BDSM club that has moved forward, and more agressively, decided to get into VR. While Marcus works on his pride and joy of a program, he enlists Enver to assist. Both of them together were kind of sweet, of a little awkward at first. There was a lot of back and forth over not wanting to get involved on both sides, but mostly Enver. In the end, of course they get together and they're perfect for each other.

It was a nice and different story because of the technology that is very present in the scenes that Marcus and Enver have together. That alone is what kept me coming back to read more. And I liked it for the most part. I got over the over protective Alpha Male Rawr stuff, and really appreciated the softer side of Enver, the sweetness of Marcus.

ARC provided via NetGalley in exchange for my honest review.
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4,065 reviews80 followers
July 13, 2018
This is a new to author. I did enjoy the story though I wished there would have been more BDSM going on. I also did not realize that this was a series but I don’t think it took away from the story. Plus now I have to go back and read the previous books. So this is the story of Marcus who was horrifically scarred, though I would have liked to hear more about the scars and Envar worshiping him and making him know that he loves every single part of him. Davis got exactly what was coming to him. These two made a strong couple and they really healed each other. I just loved them!

ARC provided by NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
35 reviews1 follower
August 29, 2018
Thank you to #NetGalley for the review copy of In the rough. All opinions are my own..

In the rough is a thrilling adventure that will have you turning each page wanting more. The start was slow but picked up real quick and got hot and heavy fast. The story follows Marcus, a techie that has designed a device offering a virtual experience unlike any other. The device simulates real world scenarios that imitate all the senses. Marcus is also has past that he is running from that has left scars and made relationships difficult to have. Enver, a Dom at Noble House is asked to help Marcus with recreating experiences their members enjoy and hope to experience. Whilst working together they learn a lot about themselves but also find that their pasts aren't that dissimilar.
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5,405 reviews42 followers
April 19, 2019
Ok. I like the idea of Noble House, but have enjoyed each story less and less. The whole VR plot line just didn’t ring as plausible for me. The guess I’m too much of a tech nerd.

Bought from kobo.
Profile Image for Heather.
697 reviews
July 17, 2018
I want to start by saying Sara Brookes is a new to me author. I enjoyed the book and would be interested in reading more by her, HOWEVER, this book was just so so. It did not really hook me and I really did not feel like there was a connection between the characters. Don't get me wrong, physically there was chemistry and it was HOT, when Marcus could get his mind out of the programming and into where he was. I do know IT people who are like that, so it was realistic. I just felt like it took away from the story. Points of view kept changing and there were parts that changed in the same paragraph. This book is part of a series, did not know that. It did not take away from the book and I did not feel like I was missing anything due to not reading the other books.
There were parts of the book that kept me interested and on the edge of my seat. The suspense portion was very well written. The relationship and interactions between the characters were left lacking. I will go back and read the others in the series, just because I am curious and also I want to see what happens next.

I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book.
Profile Image for Tina.
2,700 reviews15 followers
October 25, 2018
In the Rough by Sarah Brookes is the third book in the Noble House Kink series. I really loved this book. I love geeky characters that are a little awkward and Marcus is certainly that. He has a very sweet nature that makes you want him to have a shot with the guy of his dreams.
Enver needs Marcus. He needs the freshness that Marcus can bring to his life he also needs the challenge. Someone to take him out of his own head and allow him to focus on them. I loved that.
As a BDSM story as a whole, this is a fresh take on it. I loved that. This is truly something I have not seen before and that made me want to read more. This is not hardcore BDSM more like soft or light. I like my stories on the more romantic side and this one is that. I have not read any of the previous books in this series. I was not lost in this book. I found myself really drawn to the style of writing in this book, and the well-developed characters. I really highly recommend this one. It is a book that you can read on its own and understand just fine, but if you are me this book makes you want to go back read what I missed, and I cannot wait for more!


Five Shooting Stars
Profile Image for Cee Brown.
1,310 reviews38 followers
August 20, 2018
•´¸.•*´¨¸.•*¨)Virtual Love
ღ✿•*¨I came for the virtual world and stuck around for the story that came out of it. I cannot say I am a fan of the BDSM world, I enjoy the D/s aspect of it at times in my reads, but this one left me wanting just a little bit more. Maybe it was the world already set up and nope, uh-no, I do not run toward MF, MFM, MMF books, but I got the jist of things and was glad to know I could somehow have this be a stand-alone book. I just felt I was missing a chunk of time.

But Marcus and Enver mad up for a lot with their dysfunctional relationship. I won't lie, I got the mystery and all, but I would have liked a bit of backstory earlier for both men in order to form better opinions. Their scenes together, both in and out of the virtual world were hot and just proved despite all the drama, the chemistry was real.

I will keep my eyes open should more MM books become available in this universe.

I voluntarily and honestly reviewed this book without bias or persuasion from the publisher through Netgalley.
Profile Image for Sawyer  ❤.
225 reviews31 followers
June 28, 2018
3.5 / 5 rounded up.

This is a hard review to write. So I'm just going to type it out and we'll see where things go.
Obviously, I loved the cover. Topless guys are my kryptonite and man those well defined muscles *fans*. The only thing missing is a cowboy hat.

I read this book because I enjoy VR video games occasionally. I also enjoyed that Pokemon game a few years ago where you could take pictures of the weird animals. Sadly, I haven't had the opportunity to explore the world of virtual reality porn, I've heard good things though. So I grabbed this book because, well, I was curious.

One part of me wants to give the author all the stars for writing a story that's so different from anything else I've read. The book showcases the romance of a computer programmer who developed a very neat immersive virtual reality program which is being used to satisfy members of a virtual BDSM sex club.

Having spent three years in a long distance relationship, I can see a lot of uses for this technology.

BUT, the book was so focused on the technology that the relationship building was pushed to the side. As someone who isn't super computer savvy the technology stuff went right over my head. Although fascinating it felt repetitive and tedious to read. Many important relationship components, that I felt should have been long bond-enhancing discussions, were brushed over quickly and never mentioned again.

I also appreciated the way this book dealt with some aspects of sex addiction recovery which is something I find fascinating. But again, it was mentioned in passing a couple times and swept under the rug.

The characters were well developed; they had their own issues and challenges and histories. While that's a goodthing, I didn't feel connected to either of them.

Let me try to explain. There is a good bit of tension, action, and angst in the book. Something bad happened to Marcus. Usually, in situations where my book-boyfriends get hurt, I'll react in much the same way as I would if my real life boyfriend was hurt. Here, I reacted the same way as if I say it on the news - I frowned, thought it was horrible, turned the page and moved on.

I don't have a good reason for this disconnect, just that perhaps the technology overshadowed the characters.
This is a tough rating to give, it felt like more of a sci-fi/ fantasy erotica than contemporary, especially considering many of the steamy scenes happen in a virtual world.

The steamy scenes were hot. But in the middle, Marcus would think of coding and things to change with his program. I've heard about men thinking of the queen or doing math problems in their head to last longer, but I don't think that's what Marcus was doing.

Anyway, I'm going to give this book 3.5 / 5. It was good, it just wasn't good for me.

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Profile Image for Jacque.
1,000 reviews22 followers
June 26, 2018
In the Rough has hit me in so many spots I honestly don’t know where to begin. Characters, scenarios and possibilities, ACK! I loved it all. You have outdone yourself this time Ms. Brookes.

Enver and Marcus. Oh my gosh how can you NOT love Marcus. His shattered history, and just trying to survive immediately had me wanting to hug him. Enver, now that is a curious addiction problem for him to have, especially as a member of Noble House. I love how they come together to heal one another. The beginning of their working relationship had me at moments laughing like a naughty school girl. But, as things developed further, the heat and emotion are what eventually had me sighing and panting.

Now, what would a book be without a little drama? Okay, maybe a big drama. In the case of Marcus, wow. Now that was scary. What he’s running from, how he tries to hide without endangering others. Oh my! Enver has issues of his own. Blink-blink…a surprising one, in fact. How is that even possible for a Dom? See this is what I love about Ms. Brookes. She can give us flawed people in difficult situations and make it all feel real.

And speaking of real, VR rooms at Noble House. Holy crow! That is insane what she has dreamed up. My little techie heart was all a pitter patter in excitement. Does this technology exist, I have no clue but the detail that goes into describing everything feels like it and if it isn’t, hello techies out there. You might want to make a note of it and start figuring out how to put it all together.

I just can’t help myself when Ms. Brookes takes some of my favorite parts of the stories I enjoy the most and mashed them all together in one book. Possible technology, exceptional characters, realistic drama, some humor, and panty wetting heat. Let’s also not forget getting to reconnect with some of the previous characters. I tried to pace it out but instead, I devoured In the Rough in one day. I’m sure you will too.

I received this book from The JeepDiva with the express purpose of an honest review. The opinions, contents, and rating of this review are solely mine
Stars – 4.5
Profile Image for Krista.
1,076 reviews87 followers
July 19, 2018
3.5 stars

I can't quite put my finger on the reasons why In the Rough wasn't everything I wanted it to be, and that's frustrating. It just seems like there's some elements just out of my grasp that would've made this a 5-star read, but they were missing.

I liked Marcus and Enver well enough, but I had a hard time connecting to them individually and as a couple. I don't think we got enough of Enver's backstory to flesh him out entirely. He seems like a character with lots of layers, and it feels like we only got the top layer in this book. And while we definitely got more of Marcus' past in this book, it's his present that I still find confusing. I don't entirely understand his business, and I also don't find it entirely believable. It all felt very "Matrix-y" and fantastical. I was also slightly confused by both Marcus' and later Enver's relationship with Zoie. I honestly feel like the story would've been better without her.

I loved the danger element - that bit of fear and excitement is always a pleasure in books, especially when that danger serves as a backdrop to a budding romance. I also really loved reading about Enver when he was in his element at the club. Those were probably my favorite parts of the book - I could've used more of them.

This was my first Sara Brookes book, and after this one, I'm definitely curious about the other books she's written. She's definitely a good writer, and while I may have had issues with the character development, I feel like she's got something special with this series.
Profile Image for Eva Millien.
3,115 reviews43 followers
April 7, 2019
Marcus Holly is most comfortable working behind the scenes as the kinky club expands to offer a fully immersive VR experience but all of his carefully contained desires start spinning out of control when meets the club Dom, Enver Furst. Enver relies too heavily on tactile stimulation to buy into Marcus VR playground, but when becomes Marcus skilled text subject the results are immediate, addictive and he’s never experienced anything so raw and powerful.

Readers can’t help but become caught up in the emotional turmoil and intense volcanic heat of this gripping romance as comfort zones are deliciously shattered and a dangerous obsession will force Enver and Marcus to fight for the reality they’ve created together. Despite the magnetic attraction, sizzling chemistry and scorching passion that heats up the pages, the romance between Enver and Macus is a slow, sensuous burns as Enver and Marcus discover the intense pleasure in and out the virtual playground and reader can’t resist the pull of these strong, captivating characters as the relationship is threatened by the emotional mayhem created by this growing attraction.

The story is steady paced and full of intense heat and thrilling suspense along with a dangerous stalker that is determined to end Marcus’s happiness…forever. Surprising twists, friendships and great technical aspects including some really hot virtual reality kink further enhance this emotionally gripping and intriguingly spicy romance that readers can’t help but be captivated by.
Profile Image for R.
2,142 reviews
July 19, 2018

Marcus is a scarred, wounded, scared man. Hiding from his past, hoping it doesn't catch up to him. Hiding in his VR universe. Setting up a program for an online BDSM club brings him into contact with Enver.

Part owner of the club, hiding secrets of his own. Enver is extremely attracted to Marcus. Fighting the feelings because he no longer allows himself to experience the emotions sex would bring him.

Marcus come to an agreement to set up a VR program involving BDSM for Noble House. Not realizing that the two worlds he lives in are going to crash together in a spectacular way.

Both men fight their demons, but usually the demons win. The demon Marcus tries to to forget comes back into his life with vengeance on his mind. Endangering them both.

I admit I was lost with the VR stuff. I liked the characters, as well as the secondary ones. The BDSM seemed realistic. Nice book, I haven't read the others in the series, don't feel like I needed to for this one.

Received an arc of this book for review from Netgalley.
Profile Image for Gail.
426 reviews
August 25, 2018
I found this book disjointed with many unnecessary “side trips” into characters either superfluous or, perhaps, intro characters for another book. I stuck with it until one MC got kidnapped and the other’s supposed “friends” let him go rushing off to rescue with absolutely no support whatsoever - REALLY.!? As they say, “with friends like that....”. You get shot apparently. Anyway, there’s a lot of reasonably well descripted sex if that’s your draw. Outside of that, eh.
579 reviews3 followers
May 21, 2018
In the Rough was a great M/M story and the first book I’ve read by Sara Brookes. I love that it had a little bit of bondage and I loved the geeky/technical side of Marcus and wowza what they did in the virtual world!!! Mix in a little drama with Marcus’s past and some great friends and you’ve got a great story! I would recommend this book.
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846 reviews77 followers
July 16, 2018
This was my first read from Sara Brookes and it was hot, sexy and kinky too. I warmed to the characters and the story held my interest from beginning to end. I'm looking forward to reading more from Sara in the future.

*ARC kindly given by NetGallery in exchange for an honest review, thank you so much*
700 reviews1 follower
August 1, 2018
This is the first book that I have read by this author. In The Rough is a M/M story. Enver and Marcus were good characters and I liked both of them. They had great chemistry. Throw in some virtual reality and bdsm and you have one hot read. I would definitely recommend this book.
5,704 reviews40 followers
August 23, 2018
this was unique...interesting.. funny and kept me on my toes.. i enjoyed it a lot and i love when i find a book that isn't as "normal" as others.. this one had kinks and fun things going on. i loved it
Profile Image for Tracie R.
2,143 reviews
June 4, 2018
In the Rough was a good M/M romance, it is hot, sexy with some kink thrown in. I liked the characters and enjoyed the dynamic storyline. I look forward to reading more by this author
Profile Image for Dannielle.
429 reviews24 followers
August 12, 2018
I was happy to finally get to Enver's story. He's pretty much a closed book when you see him in the previous stories, so I was eager to finally learn more about him.

Marcus had such a dark past. I wasn't surprised that he struggled with having a life and any happiness. But he was perfect for Enver, and seeing them together was magic. I don't know much about rope bondage, but it was definitely hot!
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626 reviews4 followers
July 5, 2018
This was my first book by Sara Brookes and it was not a bad story at all. From time to time I love reading a M/M romance. The chemistry between Marcus and Enver was palpable, even though they spent too much time in the VR world. There was some suspence injected in there ( no spoilers). The pace was good. The writing was good. If you are a fan of bondage with sizzling sex scenes then this book is for you. I can't wait to read more offering from Sara Brookes.
Thanks to the publisher via Netgalley for this ARC in return for an honest review.
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903 reviews11 followers
September 5, 2018
Can I just say I totally want to try out the virtual reality system in this book... I mean wow!

Now that I got that out of my system, In the rough was a really good read. The relationship between Enver and Marcus is a little non-traditional with a side of kink that makes it fun. I really enjoyed Enver's protective side and take charge personality when it surfaced, it was pretty HOT!!
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691 reviews18 followers
September 6, 2018
Beautiful geek-er-y within this M/M BDSM tale. Brookes has made a niche within the M/M community that I didn't realize was missing. Well plotted with minor descriptive changes, this novel brings readers into the story.

*Received Advanced copy from NetGalley in exchange for honest review.
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