溺れる花火 2 [Oboreru Hanabi 2]

Oboreru Hanabi #2

by Ryo Minenami

大学生・泳太は、彼女・小秋から遠ざかり、その従姉妹・夏澄の肉体に溺れきっていた。しかし、夏澄の態度は徐々に冷たくなっていく。暴走する肉欲を抑えきれず、バイト先の同僚・菜々をその捌け口とする泳太。さらに泳太は、知り合ったばかりの大学生・佐保とも体を重ね…。花火のように鮮烈で儚いひと夏の恋と欲望、衝撃必至の完結巻！！

218 pages, Paperback

First published July 30, 2010

About the author

MINENAMI Ryou
Name (in native language): 峰浪りょう
Associated Name:
MINENAMI Ryo
Ryô Minenami

Reviews

[47Time · Rating 1 out of 5]

One thing that stands out in this story is just how easy it is to get into bed with these girls. Feels somewhat unrealistic that they would share the poor Eita. He barely has any experience, yet he gets all the poontang he asks for. What's next, a threesome? Fiction, huh? Also, that stamina of his. The guy is more active than that battery bunny. Ah, to be young again...

But seriously, the story is just too messed up. Nothing feels genuine. I just know some may complain about the graphic nature of the love scenes, too. There are better love stories out there. Ones that don't teach you that no matter what you do, love conquers all. This one is an insult to my intelligence.

Lovestruck Eita visits Kasumi's apartment. It's the perfect time for her to give him the cold shoulder. She only wants the bangin', not the lovin'. She does give him the first useful advice so far - maybe he would be better off breaking up with Koaki. Suddenly, his coworker Nana looks like a good option. She is into him too, so here come 4 days of sleeping in. As in banging like there's no tomorrow.

But wait, what about Koaki? She's in the hospital again. When Eita visits her, she guilt trips him into not breaking up with her. Pity relationships are the worst. Yeah, like she's really going to drop dead if he leaves her. Just like all the other girls in his life, Koaki just wants to fool around with his happy stick. What sort of man would he be if he refused? What he doesn't know is that Kasumi witnessed the whole act. She seems to regret giving up her boy toy.

After all this fooling around, karma must make an appearance. Nana's boyfriend doesn't take kindly to her screwing around. Eita learns that love hurts. But he has his friend Uota visit. And he brings Sao along who nurses his wounds. She is ALSO into him, but who isn't, amirite? Boy, this guy can just walk down the street and girls throw themselves at him, huh? Where do they keep these sex-starved women, anyway? Oh, in fiction. Bad fiction.

Eita learns slowly, but he does learn. He cuts contact with Nana, at least. One down, two to go. Who will he choose? Let's see which one is better in bed. Might as well not let all that fun go to waste, if the girls are so willing. The guy really is a mangy dog for taking advantage of every girl that crosses his path. Of course, he makes Sao into a woman, but a tugjob from Koaki is not bad either. He wouldn't mind keeping this arrangement going for the rest of his life, lying through his teeth.

More twists are added in for good measure. Nana forces Eita to admit to dating Koaki, so Nana asks Koaki to break up with him. No kick in the groin for the cheating bastard, cause she looooves him. Koaki knows about Eita and Kasumi, though. In fact, she planned the whole thing to control Eita. That almost makes sense. No, it really doesn't.

Let's get back to some fun time. Eita gets a bit rough with Koaki, but she doesn't complain. She has the whole last time with him planned out. She drugs him, then begins drowning him in the hopes of breaking his body so they will be side by side in the hospital forever. She should have used more sleeping pills because Eita snaps out of it and begins drowning Koaki. Then Kasumi springs out of nowhere to save Koaki. She tells Eita to hide before the police come. But since he is under the influence of the sleeping pills (which also cause memory loss? sure, why not?) she has him impregnate her. She has always wanted a baby.

In the end, the filthy human being that is Eita ends up having a family with delusional Sao. My God, what a crap ending. Drowning the no-good butt-wipe would have been better.