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War Cry MC #1
His Virgin Vessel
I TOOK THAT NAUGHTY VIRGIN AND F**KED MY BABY INTO HER.
The police chief took something that belongs to me.
So I’m going to take what’s most precious to him: his virgin daughter.
I’m gonna tease her. I’m gonna taste her.
And then I’m gonna f**k her until she’s heavy with my child.
I’m not a man you should cross.
Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth?
That’s amateur sh*t.
When someone wrongs me, I don’t just get even.
I burn everything they love to the ground.
The pig stole a document that he never should have touched.
So I do the only thing that’s fair:
Make his daughter my own.
It’s not enough just to steal her, or just to seduce her.
I have to break her completely.
With every word, every touch, every command,
I turn the innocent virgin into a c**k-hungry play toy.
She’s mine now, from top to bottom, inside and out.
And it won’t be long before she’s on all fours, begging me to put my baby inside of her.
HIS VIRGIN VESSEL is a full-length, standalone bad boy baby heist romance that features hot sex and some violence. This edition comes with two additional bonus novels, COMPLETELY FREE, as a thank you to my readers. Enjoy!
The police chief took something that belongs to me.
So I’m going to take what’s most precious to him: his virgin daughter.
I’m gonna tease her. I’m gonna taste her.
And then I’m gonna f**k her until she’s heavy with my child.
I’m not a man you should cross.
Eye for an eye, tooth for a tooth?
That’s amateur sh*t.
When someone wrongs me, I don’t just get even.
I burn everything they love to the ground.
The pig stole a document that he never should have touched.
So I do the only thing that’s fair:
Make his daughter my own.
It’s not enough just to steal her, or just to seduce her.
I have to break her completely.
With every word, every touch, every command,
I turn the innocent virgin into a c**k-hungry play toy.
She’s mine now, from top to bottom, inside and out.
And it won’t be long before she’s on all fours, begging me to put my baby inside of her.
HIS VIRGIN VESSEL is a full-length, standalone bad boy baby heist romance that features hot sex and some violence. This edition comes with two additional bonus novels, COMPLETELY FREE, as a thank you to my readers. Enjoy!
97 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 18, 2017
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September 4, 2019
Oh. My. God!! I don't even know where to start with this book. I knew what type of story I was signing up to read from the title alone, I mean come on, right?! But WOW.
First off, the writing itself wasn't bad. It was decent. So points for that. And for what I could tolerate reading (up until chapter 8 I think) I actually liked the hero Asa. Although his full name, Asa Covert, sounded ridiculous. But he was the best part of the book from what I *actually* manage to read.
I skimmed the rest of the book out of boredom and I will never, ever, evvvvveeerr understand how the author thought Asa and the "heroine" (a train wreck who wasn't even close to being worthy of the heroine label) Corinne were good together???
I have read many, many books and I swear I have never. NEVER read a main female character like Corinne. She was AWFUL. Her side of the story was sooooo cliché!! And on top of that this little hussy was twenty freaking three years old, which I call COMPLETE bullshit on. That chick acted like an over enthusiastic fifteen year old with a crush. Picture insta-obsessive puppy love, supposedly this "bad girl" who is flaky as hell and a huge disappointment to her dad but who is really the good girl her father always wanted but hides it deep deep down and plays it up real good for show just to piss him off. She "falls in love" by the second night after meeting Asa...she didn't mention being a virgin, naturally. Played up the slut card too apparently to hide this fact. Pretended to have more experience than she actually had but came across like a cheap porn star working for an audition. And when they had sex?! Oh geez it was SO BAD. She was soooooo enthusiastic. Like an hyper puppy wanting you to play with it. She was all "show me all the sex moves, Asa!!!" Like he was some kind of sex sensei and then was surprised when her orgasms felt different than the first ones....(face palm) and she carried on with the bright eyed wonder of a CHILD giving off narrative during the sex like "oh wow does it always feel different each time?!" (Asa says yes, continues ploughing away) "oh wow this is magical!! It really is different each time!!! Oh here it comes! It feels strange but like beautiful and different!!!!!!"
Or something absurdly stupid that was similar. I don't know how the author deemed it okay to write a female character that was suppose to be twenty-three years old as such an immature and naive idiot who read more like a preteen who just figured out boys and made eye contact with one across the hall and has already planned their wedding and named their kids.
Asa, as I said was the highlight. He at least seemed levelheaded and had potential. Never learned his age though signs pointed to mid-thirties at least. He soooo should have not kept calling her "little girl" so much because GROSS, in addition to the "hot young body" remarks. Super sleazy. But Corinne essentially was a little girl (which makes the whole sex/pregnant thing 83619x worse) she earned it cause she was a whiny brat.
I did enjoy Asa putting Corinne in her place so often. Literally the best parts, IMO.
Also, when Corinne found out she was knocked up cracked me up. I genuinely felt bad for the doctor having to deliver the news. It is literally the dumbest thing I have ever read, so let me leave you with the hilarity...
First off, the writing itself wasn't bad. It was decent. So points for that. And for what I could tolerate reading (up until chapter 8 I think) I actually liked the hero Asa. Although his full name, Asa Covert, sounded ridiculous. But he was the best part of the book from what I *actually* manage to read.
I skimmed the rest of the book out of boredom and I will never, ever, evvvvveeerr understand how the author thought Asa and the "heroine" (a train wreck who wasn't even close to being worthy of the heroine label) Corinne were good together???
I have read many, many books and I swear I have never. NEVER read a main female character like Corinne. She was AWFUL. Her side of the story was sooooo cliché!! And on top of that this little hussy was twenty freaking three years old, which I call COMPLETE bullshit on. That chick acted like an over enthusiastic fifteen year old with a crush. Picture insta-obsessive puppy love, supposedly this "bad girl" who is flaky as hell and a huge disappointment to her dad but who is really the good girl her father always wanted but hides it deep deep down and plays it up real good for show just to piss him off. She "falls in love" by the second night after meeting Asa...she didn't mention being a virgin, naturally. Played up the slut card too apparently to hide this fact. Pretended to have more experience than she actually had but came across like a cheap porn star working for an audition. And when they had sex?! Oh geez it was SO BAD. She was soooooo enthusiastic. Like an hyper puppy wanting you to play with it. She was all "show me all the sex moves, Asa!!!" Like he was some kind of sex sensei and then was surprised when her orgasms felt different than the first ones....(face palm) and she carried on with the bright eyed wonder of a CHILD giving off narrative during the sex like "oh wow does it always feel different each time?!" (Asa says yes, continues ploughing away) "oh wow this is magical!! It really is different each time!!! Oh here it comes! It feels strange but like beautiful and different!!!!!!"
Or something absurdly stupid that was similar. I don't know how the author deemed it okay to write a female character that was suppose to be twenty-three years old as such an immature and naive idiot who read more like a preteen who just figured out boys and made eye contact with one across the hall and has already planned their wedding and named their kids.
Asa, as I said was the highlight. He at least seemed levelheaded and had potential. Never learned his age though signs pointed to mid-thirties at least. He soooo should have not kept calling her "little girl" so much because GROSS, in addition to the "hot young body" remarks. Super sleazy. But Corinne essentially was a little girl (which makes the whole sex/pregnant thing 83619x worse) she earned it cause she was a whiny brat.
I did enjoy Asa putting Corinne in her place so often. Literally the best parts, IMO.
Also, when Corinne found out she was knocked up cracked me up. I genuinely felt bad for the doctor having to deliver the news. It is literally the dumbest thing I have ever read, so let me leave you with the hilarity...
August 6, 2017
Um. Where does one start? I should have known by the title, it wasn't going to be a great read. Unfortunately, not did I only try to read it, it was worse than I thought. First, the book description isn't correct. Yes, bad boy sleeps with the Sheriff's daughter, but that's about it. The title also mentions the book is an MC book. Nope. Not only was there was very little mention of it, but the author keeps calling it a motorcycle "gang". The C in MC stands for CLUB. Don't even get me started on the corny lines (the title should give the reader a heads up on this issue).
As with another reviewer, I made it about 1/3 thru the book, then just skimmed the rest. Wasn't worth my time (which I wasted too much on as it was). While there were typos/editing issues, that was the least of the issues with this book. Oh, this story ends at 31%.
As with another reviewer, I made it about 1/3 thru the book, then just skimmed the rest. Wasn't worth my time (which I wasted too much on as it was). While there were typos/editing issues, that was the least of the issues with this book. Oh, this story ends at 31%.
April 23, 2022
DNF'd at 17%
0.5 - 💫
The first installment in a trilogy of Adult Motorcycle Club Romances. It features the "bad boy x innocent girl" and "surprise pregnancy" tropes.
I found our main characters insufferable and the blurb was very misleading.
"I know he loves me," I said, awkwardly. "But he loves me so much that he wants what's best for me all the time. And to him, 'best' means what he wants, what he thinks will make me safe and give me a good solid career. It's love that feels like a constant pressure pushing down on me."
His Virgin Vessel follows reckless Corinne, who is forced to move back into her childhood home after a bad breakup. The problem is that she and her father, who happens to be the town sheriff, don't get along at all. Wanting to spread her wings and break free from her father's expectations of her, she decides to take a ride on the wild side with the motorcycle club leader at the steer.
"You're like nothing I ever look for in a woman, and everything I wanted and never knew."
First off, the story follows a motorcycle club. That was never explicitly stated (the only mention of it in the blurb was the acronym "MC" which I didn't know meant motorcycle club) so going into it I thought it was a mafia romance. This is the first MC novel I've read and I have now discovered that I don't particularly care for it. I don't even have an actual reason, it just doesn't interest me the way a mafia romance would. Then there are our characters. I found each and every one of them insufferable. Our main character, Corinne, is so immature that I actually got upset. Examples of this include, but are not limited to, getting kicked out of 8 apartments (she's 22 for reference) and complaining about her father fortifying their house and therefore not trusting her enough to not go against his wishes, while she was sneaking out. She also falls in love with a man she had a 10-minute conversation with and slept with once. And those were just the things I could remember! Then our love interest (whose name I have already forgotten) was bland as a piece of unbuttered toast. I just couldn't. There also wasn't enough of a plot to keep my attention.
The thing I did like was the creativity with the smut. Corinne was a virgin and her love interest showed her a couple of different ways to pleasure herself so there's that.
"A man can waste his life leafing through a list of regrets."
Overall, if you like motorcycle club stories or just want some smut without care for characters or plot, I'd say you can give this a try but it definitely wasn't for me.
* It should be noted that my version of this book included 3 of Nicole Fox's novels but this review is only about the first book, His Virgin Vessel since I did not end up bothering with the other two.
0.5 - 💫
The first installment in a trilogy of Adult Motorcycle Club Romances. It features the "bad boy x innocent girl" and "surprise pregnancy" tropes.
I found our main characters insufferable and the blurb was very misleading.
"I know he loves me," I said, awkwardly. "But he loves me so much that he wants what's best for me all the time. And to him, 'best' means what he wants, what he thinks will make me safe and give me a good solid career. It's love that feels like a constant pressure pushing down on me."
His Virgin Vessel follows reckless Corinne, who is forced to move back into her childhood home after a bad breakup. The problem is that she and her father, who happens to be the town sheriff, don't get along at all. Wanting to spread her wings and break free from her father's expectations of her, she decides to take a ride on the wild side with the motorcycle club leader at the steer.
"You're like nothing I ever look for in a woman, and everything I wanted and never knew."
First off, the story follows a motorcycle club. That was never explicitly stated (the only mention of it in the blurb was the acronym "MC" which I didn't know meant motorcycle club) so going into it I thought it was a mafia romance. This is the first MC novel I've read and I have now discovered that I don't particularly care for it. I don't even have an actual reason, it just doesn't interest me the way a mafia romance would. Then there are our characters. I found each and every one of them insufferable. Our main character, Corinne, is so immature that I actually got upset. Examples of this include, but are not limited to, getting kicked out of 8 apartments (she's 22 for reference) and complaining about her father fortifying their house and therefore not trusting her enough to not go against his wishes, while she was sneaking out. She also falls in love with a man she had a 10-minute conversation with and slept with once. And those were just the things I could remember! Then our love interest (whose name I have already forgotten) was bland as a piece of unbuttered toast. I just couldn't. There also wasn't enough of a plot to keep my attention.
The thing I did like was the creativity with the smut. Corinne was a virgin and her love interest showed her a couple of different ways to pleasure herself so there's that.
"A man can waste his life leafing through a list of regrets."
Overall, if you like motorcycle club stories or just want some smut without care for characters or plot, I'd say you can give this a try but it definitely wasn't for me.
* It should be noted that my version of this book included 3 of Nicole Fox's novels but this review is only about the first book, His Virgin Vessel since I did not end up bothering with the other two.
July 19, 2017
Headline: I have voluntarily read and reviewed and ARC version of His Virgin Vessel by Nicole Fox.
*silent squealing and carefully happy dancing since the hubby is asleep beside me.
It is now 3:50 AM and I should be up for work at 5:00. And even through the ongoing war against yawning and sleep, I could not stop reading about Asa and Corinne. It was absolutely wonderful. I loved everything about this book. The characters, the story, the twists and for sure, the ending were spectacular! I cannot wait to read what Nicole comes out with next. Happy Reading!
*silent squealing and carefully happy dancing since the hubby is asleep beside me.
It is now 3:50 AM and I should be up for work at 5:00. And even through the ongoing war against yawning and sleep, I could not stop reading about Asa and Corinne. It was absolutely wonderful. I loved everything about this book. The characters, the story, the twists and for sure, the ending were spectacular! I cannot wait to read what Nicole comes out with next. Happy Reading!
July 25, 2017
Nicole Fox's books keep getting better and better each time. Corinne rebeles against her father the Sheriff and while her sister is perfect Corinne is always pushing the envelop.She meets Asa while he's committing a felony and they fall hard for each other. This is a really great story which I voluntarily reviewed an arc.
September 10, 2017
Where Was the Darkness?
I felt like the blurb presented a different story than delivered, but it still managed to be a fast-paced, engaging love story. It was deeper, too. A lot of steamy scenes, but nothing exceptional or memorable there. These were characters you could care about, and root for.
There were a lot of extras, and this review only applies to the title story.
I felt like the blurb presented a different story than delivered, but it still managed to be a fast-paced, engaging love story. It was deeper, too. A lot of steamy scenes, but nothing exceptional or memorable there. These were characters you could care about, and root for.
There were a lot of extras, and this review only applies to the title story.
August 8, 2017
Nicole has written another amazing book. The storyline and chemistry between Asa and Corrine is so SEXY. Corrine is a virgin bad girl and Asa is the President of a Motorcycle Club. Corrine's father is the sheriff and has been after Asa and his club for a long time. You will have to read the book to see what happens next. It is well worth your time to read this book. There is sex, suspense and unexpected changes.
I received this book as an ARC copy for a voluntarily honest review.
I received this book as an ARC copy for a voluntarily honest review.
June 20, 2018
Good girl.. bad boy
Well she went looking for a bad boy and found him quite by accident. He's President of the War Cry MC...she's the daughter of the Sheriff. She knows what she wants, he's not sure. Was good reading but kind of left you with a cliffhanger.
Well she went looking for a bad boy and found him quite by accident. He's President of the War Cry MC...she's the daughter of the Sheriff. She knows what she wants, he's not sure. Was good reading but kind of left you with a cliffhanger.
July 23, 2017
Sweet and I just enjoyed the ride this book took me on
July 28, 2017
I wasn't a fan of the turn this story took.But it was still entertaining and I enjoyed it
3/5 stars
3/5 stars
May 24, 2018
Amazing
This book is amazing and breathtaking, very erotic I highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys a great read. I love reading books like this.
This book is amazing and breathtaking, very erotic I highly recommend it to anyone who enjoys a great read. I love reading books like this.
June 13, 2018
Bad Girl Not!
I am new to this author, so I wasn’t sure what to expect. The characters and storyline have great potential, but it all seemed to forced and rushed for me.
I am new to this author, so I wasn’t sure what to expect. The characters and storyline have great potential, but it all seemed to forced and rushed for me.
November 3, 2018
Not bad. I really did like it. I'm on a baby kick right now.
January 17, 2019
Great
This were far too short. But love the story and so love the characters. I think that girl need a man in her life the worse way.
This were far too short. But love the story and so love the characters. I think that girl need a man in her life the worse way.
November 19, 2019
Good
The title is misleading but the story is good. What’s better than a bad boy biker and a wannabe bad girl?
The title is misleading but the story is good. What’s better than a bad boy biker and a wannabe bad girl?
June 13, 2024
What the fuck did i read? LOL. The spice was good but the plot was bad didn’t make sense and the description is VERY misleading lol
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October 16, 2017Did not enjoy it at all thus no rating given for the book.
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