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The Rise Of The Fallen Empire: The Mystery Begins
When a group of curious Archaeological students receive a text specified with co-ordinates, they immediately begin their own quest by following the trail, ultimately leading them into a trap; they stumble upon, what they think, is an age old buried scripture, but it doesn't stop there.
Now they must dig deep to unravel the mystery, which would shake the entire Archaeological community of Baltimore.
Their every single move are being watched. A mystery that's worth killing.
Some things are always meant to be buried in the past.
Now they must dig deep to unravel the mystery, which would shake the entire Archaeological community of Baltimore.
Their every single move are being watched. A mystery that's worth killing.
Some things are always meant to be buried in the past.
39 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 20, 2017
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November 8, 2017
I will keep it simple and short. It's a short story and a quick read. What caught my attention and made me download this book was the book cover and the book title. I anticipated it to be some sort of mystery around the Egyptian history but to my disappointment, it was not. the story plot was very bad and the narration was not well thought of.
September 15, 2017
Ok, This book is really short, like really really short.
I was hoping there would be something more to it, something more adventurous or mystery other than the conclusion of-course.
All in all, its a good book, the narrative is simple, the story is quite straight, zero diversion.
Whoa, too much tech in archaeology, I thought archaeology is more of a touch and feel stuff, as shown in Indiana Jones(definitely not true archaeology).
I liked it, it was easy to grasp and quite fun to read. Would definitely wait for the sequel.
Please make the sequel a bit larger with some more adventure and mysterious plot.
You won't regret reading it. Grab a copy and start reading.
I was hoping there would be something more to it, something more adventurous or mystery other than the conclusion of-course.
All in all, its a good book, the narrative is simple, the story is quite straight, zero diversion.
Whoa, too much tech in archaeology, I thought archaeology is more of a touch and feel stuff, as shown in Indiana Jones(definitely not true archaeology).
I liked it, it was easy to grasp and quite fun to read. Would definitely wait for the sequel.
Please make the sequel a bit larger with some more adventure and mysterious plot.
You won't regret reading it. Grab a copy and start reading.
January 31, 2018
Really good base for a story.
This is a writer, who took the time to write a story. The story was rushed and did not have the detail it could have had. I feel as though the author rushed through, in order to get his story out, but I think this is a first draft. If the story writer was to revisit the story and spend time developing the characters, add more depth to the story, and proofread, this story could really evolve into a great novel. I enjoyed the basis.
This is a writer, who took the time to write a story. The story was rushed and did not have the detail it could have had. I feel as though the author rushed through, in order to get his story out, but I think this is a first draft. If the story writer was to revisit the story and spend time developing the characters, add more depth to the story, and proofread, this story could really evolve into a great novel. I enjoyed the basis.
February 18, 2018
A shy start.
Never wanna say something bad to a writer since i'm in the same business, however this short story felt like a small piece, few chapters, taken out of the whole book.
Which leaves to say that beginning this story the way it was done is very awkward. The whole plot isn't strong enough and doesn't reflect reality, something to be careful with when writing a story. Let's just say that it could be the start of something, one day, promising.
Never wanna say something bad to a writer since i'm in the same business, however this short story felt like a small piece, few chapters, taken out of the whole book.
Which leaves to say that beginning this story the way it was done is very awkward. The whole plot isn't strong enough and doesn't reflect reality, something to be careful with when writing a story. Let's just say that it could be the start of something, one day, promising.
November 8, 2020
Really need to do your research especially if you are using a character that was former military. Marines go through 13 weeks of Basic training not 8. Just one of the many flaws in this short story. And extremely bad grammar throughout. The idea of this story is,a good one just needs a few more draftswith edits and a some more length to it.
April 2, 2019
Rose
This story was quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. But some of the sentence were not quite right, which did nothing to take away from the story. I look forward to reading more from this author.
This story was quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. But some of the sentence were not quite right, which did nothing to take away from the story. I look forward to reading more from this author.
May 19, 2018
Good short story
Builds up suspense that reveals at the end. Good for a fast read. Didn't understand the emphasis to sound modern or italicized words.
Builds up suspense that reveals at the end. Good for a fast read. Didn't understand the emphasis to sound modern or italicized words.
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