Perhaps I’m just salty. The fact of the matter is that I just stopped caring. I didn’t care about any of the characters anymore. Dialogue was dumbed down, and lots of telling (not showing) took over. The author became a sort of broken record.
Amazing imagination, I can say, but the execution was poor. The first two books were thrilling, good fantasies. Solid characterization, structure well thought out. Now this and the third book… felt so messy. I kind of saw it coming, but I was hoping for better.
Strong beautiful start with a messy finale.
major spoilers ahead!! proceedth with caution
All the characters I actually cared about either got dumbed down to a basic NPC or died. In a nutshell, the main characters Chloe and Dion were in this excruciating-to-read romantic plot-line, and that was not fun to read. At first: cute, love it. At the second half: holy moly.
Also the POV of Kyphos or whatever his name is? Dude, who the heck is that? Like—genuine question, okay not really, but you get it. In short, I didn’t care about that dude. His POV would come up, and I would be goin’ crickets. I know that sounds mean, but I did not. Like if I met this character in real life, I would run away. Not like an “I’m scared boohoo,” but like a “I don’t wanna talk to him.”
I’m sure the author was like, “who can replace Palemon when I kill him? oH thiS rAndOm dUde!”
end of spoilers!! unproceedth with caution
I need to take a break from these long winding fantasies in general. There are some people who really love these kinds of books, and I’m starting to feel a bit bad for trashing this book…
Maybe I actually don’t like this kind of stuff. No clue. Perhaps I just no longer have the time or energy to fully appreciate the scale at which fantasy writers go to anymore. I dunno. I’m trying, though.