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A comic strip. An evil to defeat. Two planets to save.

High school senior Matthew Peters thinks he’s just writing some online fiction about an alien superhero, Excelsior. But when a woman arrives at his school claiming to be from the distant planet he’s writing about, he must think again. What’s more, she says Excelsior’s lifeforce lives within him.

As an alien assassin tries to kill him, Matthew must decide what is more important: to save his own life or to retrieve an ancient artifact that could save two worlds. To stay the guy with growing online popularity, or lose himself to something he can’t understand. Whatever his choice, he must face an enemy more powerful than him in almost every way.

Hold on to your seat as you race through the first book in George Sirois’ series, The Excelsior Journey, a story that will leave you gasping for breath and wanting more.

Put down the pen.
Pick up the sword.
Unleash the hero within.


Grab your copy of Excelsior today.

327 pages, Kindle Edition

First published June 21, 2010

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Profile Image for Cari L. Pedstelak.
6 reviews15 followers
November 14, 2011
On the surface, it may seem that "Excelsior" by George H. Sirois is simply going to be a fun read--one of those great little sci-fi gems to be enjoyed as an escape or distraction from everyday real life. While it is definitely one of those great little gems, with the usual good versus evil to save the world themes, I must forewarn you--the undercurrents of the basic overlying theme of "Excelsior" take the reader far deeper than mere escapism. It is exciting, inspiring, intensely gripping, & even spiritual if one allows one's self to feel it in the soul rather than simply reading it. The world of "Excelsior" grabs you & just doesn't let go. I found myself glued to my Kindle, eagerly anticipating what might be just around the corner on that next page. The excitement & tension continue to ratchet up from beginning to end. To say this book had me breathless at times would be an understatement.

Through the journey of a young man about to graduate high school named Matthew, who's a bit of a loner but is also just hitting his stride in publishing his `Excelsior' comic book series online about the trials & tribulations of the beings on the planet Denab IV, the reader is shown that we all have amazing potential within ourselves. Whether we allow ourselves to fully unlock that inherent potential rather than fearing our own success & how it may change us is in our own hands. Sometimes, in life, we need to take a leap of faith in order to reach our full potential & accomplish all that we are capable of accomplishing.

Did I mention that this fabulous sci-fi novel also has a spiritual element to it? Yes, I did. However, I'm not the type of reader who likes having a book spoiled for them by a reviewer that goes into too much detail, but I will tell you this much--not only is Excelsior the name of a splendidly beautiful sword with a gemstone in the handle that contains the life force of a deity, Excelsior is also a person(s).

Another quality that makes "Excelsior" such an exceptional read is how Mr. Sirois manages to cleverly weave bits of laugh out loud humor into the seriously intense storyline--giving the reader a moment to breathe or possibly eat some leftover peet-za.

The characters are well-developed as is the plot. I can honestly say that I'd love to see this book transformed into a movie provided it's directed by the right person who is capable of doing "Exclesior" the justice it deserves. I can easily imagine the characters, the galaxies, & all the special effects coming to life before my eyes. It would be amazing.

The fact that the main character, Matthew, is named in honor of a courageous soul in Mr. Sirois' life makes "Excelsior" all the more exciting as well as poignant. I won't lie to you. When I read the story of Matthew's real life at the end of the book, there were tears sliding down my cheeks.
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Author 3 books30 followers
April 6, 2012
First off I have to tell you that I'm not much of a sci-fi fan. So when I began reading this book I thought to myself that I wouldn't be able to get into the story, thus not be able to give it a good rating...but I kept on reading...And I'm glad I did!

George Sirois did an excellent job creating a book that keeps you captivited and wanting more, even if you're not a sci-fi fan.

Matthew Peters is your typical, nerdy and shy teenager who isn't interested in being part of the "popular" crowd. He's too busy with Excelsior, the comic book hero he created and maybe even aspires to be like.
Excelsior is a leader, he's tough, brave, loved by everyone in his home planet, Denab IV while Matthew is the total opposite.
Matthew creates a webpage where he features Excelsior and his many adventures and soon becomes a big hit! And that is when his life begins to change...
He discovers that this world he thought only existed in his mind really exists and the character he thought he created needs his help to defend his people against his enemy, Nocterar. I don't like to spoil a good read with too many details, but I will tell you that you will really enjoy reading this book even if Sci-Fi books are not your cup of tea. I know I did! ^-^

This book is not only filled with action and adventure, but it also has a great spiritual element to it. I really enjoyed reading the AFTERWORD: An Abriged Life at the end of the book. We learn that the author, George Sirois named the main character of the book after his cousin Matthew Peter Henkel who passed away eight years ago. Tears filled my eyes when I read about Matthew's real life struggles, how he overcame them and how he inspired George Sirois.
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Author 48 books122 followers
October 20, 2015
Thank you, George Sirois, for making me feel like a kid again.

With your book, Excelsior, I was thrown head-first into the life of Matthew Peters, a teenage boy that I was a LOT like way back when. He spends his days avoiding bullies and and immersed in comic books - not just reading them, but creating them online - and then, one day, a simple incident from years before turns his life completely upside down.

Several years earlier, Matthew had touched a magical alien sword during a museum field trip. Now, he realizes that he has become imbued with the strength and spirit of Excelsior himself, a powerful hero and savior of Denab IV. But then comes the bad news: his awakening powers come side-by-side with the awakening of Danaak, an alien minion who will destroy all in his path to heal himself, kill Excelsior and take the sword.

In a race against time, Matthew must join forces with some of the warriors of Denab IV to prepare himself for his upcoming battle with Danaak, and his master Nocterar. This battle will span light-years, and be epic and aweseome and GAAAAAAH all the way to the end.

I was not expecting to enjoy this book as much as I did. I'm so glad I read it. Galactic superheroes, cosmic villains, and epic quest of self-discovery - what's not to love for the teenage boy in all of us?

Thank you, George Sirois, for making me feel like a kid again.


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Author 19 books188 followers
August 14, 2017
Updated Review For Third Edition (Original Review From 2011 Below)

Why I Think Boys May Enjoy This

It is worth noting that this will not be the first time I review this book on my blog. I reviewed the first edition back in 2011 as part of a blog tour here: Blog Tour de Troops – Review of Excelsior. I spoke glowingly of it then and I still feel the same about this latest edition.

That being said, this newest version is definitely “new and improved”. The core feel and plot hasn’t changed at all, but Sirois added some nice depth to some of the history of the Denarian (good guy aliens) characters and some nice new wrinkles in the relationship between Matthew and his uncle Jason. What I surmised from reading this new version of the story is that the author’s storytelling ability has only gotten better, especially his ability to add character depth. This makes me even more excited for the upcoming sequel he has been teasing for a few years!

For those that didn’t click on the link above to my old review, let me refresh my thoughts on the story. As I have said before, it reminds me of two 90s favorites of mine: a movie called Cool World and a Sega Genesis game called Comix Zone. That isn’t to suggest that Excelsior is unoriginal at all, just that it reminded me of those pieces of pop culture. Any creator would love to find themselves in Matthew’s shoes, I think. Finding out that the world you “created” is actually real (like in Cool World) and that you now have to become the hero in your own story (like Comix Zone)? Isn’t that why we create in the first place, to escape?

All that said and done, the story feels even more polished this time and some of the depth added to the Denarian characters makes the story feel even less alien this time. Matthew’s transition into Excelsior himself feels fluid and realistic (in the context of the lore built into the story) and you can almost hear the dramatic music by Hans Zimmer building during that scene. All in all, this is an extremely fun story with adventure, deep relationships, and enough action to keep the pace up-tempo right up until the end.

Content/Appropriateness

It’s a sci fi adventure starring a teen. There’s really no content that is out of place to scare off potential readers. There are deaths, even on-screen deaths (as I call them), but nothing bloody or gory. Our big bad, Danaak of the Krunation Empire, uses what basically amounts to a disintegration ray as his primary weapon so most of his kills result in people burning to a pile of ash, cartoon-style.

There are no language or sexual content concerns at all, so outside of the mild PG13 violence that wouldn’t be out of place in a Marvel Cinematic Universe film, it’s more than appropriate for all ages. I suggest 12+ for the book simply because Matthew is a little older and some of the relationship struggles he faces (death of his parents, his uncle’s struggles with alcoholism) are a little older concepts for relatability. As before, I give this book 5/5 and can’t wait for Ever Upward!
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5/5 Giant Cartoon Mallets from Toonopolis, The Blog's Books for Boys Review on 8/14/17: http://www.toonopolis.com/2017/08/14/...

-----------ORIGINAL REVIEW FROM 2011----------

When I first read the description for Excelsior, I though, "neat, it sounds like Cool World meets Comix Zone!" While reading this wonderful book, I realized I was both right and wrong at the same time. In both of those examples (a movie and and old Genesis video game), creators come face to face with their creations to realize that they are not just alive in their imaginations.

In Excelsior, Matthew Peters discovers that his made-up world and story is not really imaginary at all. Thrust into the continuing storyline of a plot he thought he was writing, Matthew has to find strength in himself that he never knew was there.

The reasons why Matthew has visions of Excelsior and Danab IV are not only explained, they are also an integral and very original part of the story. I was amazed at how well defined the story and world is. Reading the author's notes, I see that Sirois spent 15 years developing this story and his passion and understanding of the history is very clear.

Like so many works, I felt connections to lots of other stories, sci-fi and fantasy alike. With the recent reboot of Thundercats, I definitely felt elements that reminded me of the Thundercats storyline (which is awesomely awesome) such as the magic jewels and swordplay. Sirois has done a fantastic job of borrowing small elements of familiarity from comic books and cartoons and combining them into an amazingly original and fantastic story.

I highly recommend this for anyone who enjoys sci-fi, comics, fantasy, and action-adventure stories.

I would finally like to point out how much I loved the relationship between Matthew and his uncle Jason. They show a great example of how a tragedy can pull a broken family together and make both of the two of them better people in the end.

I look forward to more works by Sirois and the continuation of the Excelsior story.
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Author 18 books64 followers
July 30, 2015
3 stars = a solid "I liked it." I'll throw 4 stars at Amazon because I hate their social engineering scheme that calls 3 of 5 a "low" rating rather than neutral, but this isn't a 4-star book for me. It's solidly middle-of-the-pack.

Here's my snapshot: good, sturdy workmanlike prose, tidy plot firmly grounded in action and visuals, tropes as old as time and conflicts as emotionally satisfying as watching Bugs outwit Elmer. I knew where this was going from about page 5 onward, but it was still a great trip. The action is visual and visceral. The book is cheesy popcorn popcorn from start to finish. I ate it up and ripped open the bag to get every last little bit at the bottom.

Make sure you read the afterword. The essay has tremendous emotional depth, vivid writing, and struck beautiful chords in me the story itself never quite managed to reach. It's a heart-punch of a read all on its own.

This is a glorious B-movie of a book begging for screen adaptation. There are plot holes, and the prose leans towards clunky, the character development is shallow and tropes time-worn, but. BUT. All those issues disappear on screen when the pace is fast enough, and this book has pace to spare. Predictable, prosy, over-written stuff can be rollicking fun of done just right, and Excelsior is GOOD fun.

I did mention action, yeah? Excelsior packs plenty of punch, and that's like a cloak covering a multitude of minor ills. Its subject matter and style also make it accessible to a broad audience right down to YA. Anyone with a soft spot for the "coming-of-age, tapped for greatness out of obscurity" tales should snag this right away.

Excelsior does what it sets out to do, and does it well. If the blurb appeals, the story will suck you in and make you want more. I know I'll be checking out the author's other series and soon.

The End. Drop curtain.
Author 18 books127 followers
September 9, 2011
I knew I would love Excelsior for two reasons. The first is the title. The Latin phrase 'excelsior' simply means “even higher.” Onward and upward. If you happen to be a comic book nerd, you know that this is also Stan Lee’s infamous catchphrase: used at the end of every “Bullpen Bulletins,” Mavel column. =)

The second reason I knew I would enjoy this title is that it starts with, to my great delight, a quote from Optimus Prime which I’ll share now:

“…one day, an Autobot shall rise from our ranks, and use the power of the Matrix to light our darkest hour.”

Mmmm, that is classic nerd poetry.

Now for a very brief, Natasha-like synopsis.

Excelsior tells the story of Matthew Peters, an instantly likeable high school kid that reminds me of so many boys I knew in high school. You know, the ones that never got laid. Peters is easily relatable to the reader, and likable.

Our protagonist spends most of his time drawing…and, to my delight, working on his comic book. His most impressive achievement to date is his website, chronicling a cast of characters that inhabit the distant planet of Denab IV.

The story grips you, and then… Peters goes from fan boy with a dream, to warrior. Oh, did I mention he has to save a planet now?

This story grips you from the beginning and does not let go. I was blown away with the author’s ability to build worlds, and quite frankly, this is science fiction at its best.

I am excited that Sirois has agreed to do a giveaway on this blog, because this is a must read for all fans of comic book based fiction.

Five stars… only because there isn’t a site in existence that allows you to rate higher.

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Author 17 books67 followers
December 26, 2013
This was a really fun read -- I love "discovering" a new superhero!

I had the pleasure of meeting George Sirois at a book signing held at All on the Same Page bookstore and was immediately intrigued by his book. AND he drew me a sketch of Excelsior while we talked--how cool is that?!

Anyway, I bought EXCELSIOR thinking it might be a little old for my 14-year-old grandson, but it's a story that works on many levels. I think it's suitable for avid younger readers as well as adults--the violence is comic-book style and the romance level is appropriate for young teens & up.

From a writer's perspective, I loved that the superhero "character" turned out to be real -- I can't tell you how often my characters seem just that real to me. And the name, Leap of Faith, was another funny coincidence--a journalism professor used to call me Leap of Faith Teresa because I took an optimistic slant on things I wrote. It all just made the experience more fun for me.

I'll look forward to George's next books!
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Author 67 books402 followers
October 19, 2010
Written as a tribute to George’s deceased cousin, Excelsior follows the transformation of the teenage loner and comic book author Matthew Peters, as he becomes the savior of an alien planet, Denab IV where the reptilian Krunations have imprisoned most of the human-like Danarians.

The beginning of Excelsior details the life of Matthew before he meets the Denarians, and after his transformation to the savior Excelsior, the action increases. While the book kept me engrossed throughout, wanting to find out what happened next, I would have liked more suspense. Any book that manages to stir my emotions though is enjoyable for me.

Whether in New York City, or on the planet Denab IV, George is able to take the reader there seamlessly. If you would like to know more about where Denab IV is, read this blog post.

Also, check out 25 Random Facts About Excelsior.

Excelsior is ideal for anyone who enjoys science fiction, especially boys who can relate to Matthew’s life.
Profile Image for Ann Charles.
Author 65 books1,273 followers
January 27, 2011
I had a blast reading George Sirois’ book, Excelsior! I loved the way he transitioned between worlds, he built more and more tension and excitement as the story progressed, and he kept me hooked with every scene and chapter all of the way to the end. Excelsior was refreshingly original and fun, adventurous, a definite must-read. I have my fingers crossed (and my toes) that there is a sequel coming, because I really want to jump back into George's head and experience more adventures. If you like adventure, science fiction, and world building, you'll love this book. --Ann C.
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Author 13 books45 followers
August 27, 2019
Excelsior reminds me of Ender’s Game meets Green Lantern. It’s meta, fast-paced, and highly enjoyable. While reading, I could tell it was special. It has heart - something I’m always hunting for in my next read.
Ever upward!
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Author 38 books646 followers
March 6, 2011
I started off reading this not really knowing what to expect. I had read a snippet off smashwords and actually one a copy through the last Tour de Force's big giveaway. I thought what the heck I'll give it a go, I am not normally a Sci Fi type gal but I got to know the author a bit and figured it would be worth my time. And if not, hey it was a free book. Well let me tell you I was pleasantly surprised. To be honest in my head it was sort of a mash up of Lord of the Rings and Star Trek. Not really being like one or the other, but a mesh of parts of both in it's story and ideas. Matthew a high school senior has created a comic world and has been writing and illustrating it since he was young. He publishes it on his own website and works tirelessly to get the story and the pictures just right. Just like what he sees in his head. As he is becoming more popular through his comic he is confronted at school by a beautiful older woman and is told all he has written and all he has drawn is real and he is needed to become the next Excelsior and help Denab IV survive. This was a fast paced book, a good read and a good story. There were a few times I felt it was rushed, or could have used a bit more back ground but all in all I would say it's definitely worth giving a whirl if you are a fan of Sci Fi type books. George's writing brings everything to life in your mind's eye and keeps you glued to the page to see what he creates next.

I honestly think I enjoyed the book more because I could easily picture the characters, now this may be because George himself had put out a challenge to "cast" the characters. Who would you have play such and such in the movie. I could actually see the story play out in my mind as a movie and that is one of the things that really pulls me to a story. Can I envision it and Excelsior did not let me down.
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Author 2 books67 followers
January 22, 2012
Excelsior tells the story of Matthew Peters, a somewhat lonely teen drudging through high school. He lives in a world he created from vivid dreams about Excelsior and the epic adventures that befall him. At least, he thought he created it. When one of his comic characters shows up, live and in person, Matthew soon realizes that his dreams were really memories – and Excelsior is a real person from Denab IV!

I was immediately drawn into this story from the first line and it kept me hooked until the very end! With action and more action in this story, it’s sure to keep you on the edge of your seat, just like it did me. I read it in one shot, fearing that if I put it down, I would miss a vital piece of information! The world of Denab IV that we visit in this story is truly magical. George put exquisite amount of work and detail into describing the new world and the culture of the Denarians and Krunations. I was sucked into the world and instantly felt a connection to the Denarians and their fight for survival.

I was most drawn to Matthew of course, because I could completely relate with him. Becoming lost in a story and almost obsessed with characters the way Matthew does with this comic, reminds me so much of myself in High School it’s not even funny! There is one moment where Matthew has his nose a few inches from the page he’s working on, not paying attention in class and I instantly remembered practically the same moment as it happened to me!

All parts of this book pulled me in and I became totally immersed into Matthew’s adventure! This is one of the best books I’ve read in many years and I highly recommend it to anyone – not just sci-fi lovers like myself. I think anyone will fall in love with this book because of it’s simple yet complex twists that just suck you right in!
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Author 20 books36 followers
January 31, 2013
The book for review is “Excelsior” by George Sirois.

The genre is Young Adult / Science-Fiction and the age group is MG-High School.

Fantasy is really not my cup of tea when it comes to reading. This is mostly due to the new cultures, languages and species that can get confusing if not done right. However this is not the case here. The amazing way Mr. Sirois has created a new world and interweaves it with Earth not only got me interested by the first few pages it did not get me lost in translation. Trust me folks this is a huge kudo to the author. It was well laid out and it flowed as sweet as honey. He got me and got me good with this book that was hard to put down.

Matt is the main character, a young man in high school on Earth who in his spare time writes about an unknown world. He can’t help it as the thoughts and visions fill his mind constantly. Matthew never once anticipated that what he is putting down is a world that does exist but in the galaxy far away.

It only gets more complicated when the characters in his stories appear in form before him. They are here to seek his help to save their world for hidden inside Matthew is a long dead hero waiting to come out..

The plot was amazing as the character development just enhanced this book, I am ready for the next book in this series.
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493 reviews
July 11, 2016
The storyline is a great idea. A boy spends much of his time drawing a Sci-Fi comic book. Who didn't have a couple of those kids in their class? The difference is it turns out he touched an ancient sword that was harboring the life essence of a god. In doing so he absorbs the god's memories of past lives and gradually more and more of the god come out.
My only problem with the book is that I would like it to be more fleshed out. I didn't feel I knew some of the characters well enough to feel anything when they got killed off. It would also be improved with a little humor to break it up a little and make the boy/god more interesting.
It's a good 1st book. I got my copy free during the blog tour de troups an independent author group put on and I will watch for more books by this author.
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Author 5 books40 followers
April 7, 2014
I love books that start in the real world and then go into the fantasy world--and Excelsior delivers on this promise. I also love that Matthew is an everyday hero who turns into the best hero ever! :) I did feel a little sorry for him that the comics he created were actually memories---but you'll have to read the book to figure out how. I also like that the author did not steer away from modern technology in a fantasy book. Since he sets it in the real world in the beginning and teens are into technology, it was a must he include it and he did not disappoint. (Plus of course, new gadgets were created!) FINALLY, I liked that the adult in Matthew's life also had to get involved and didn't just disappear. I think there really are some teenagers who don't mind an adult or two around every once in a while. . .I'm excited that the author is planning a series. GO MATTHEW/EXCELSIOR!
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4 reviews3 followers
May 19, 2011
I tell you, if I'd gone to school with the main character, Matthew, I probably would have disliked him intensely. Most of us dreamed about doing awesome things, but this kid actually got to do them! Not fair! He's already a talented artist by the time the story opens, creating and drawing a webcomic about an epic struggle taking place on a faraway planet, but when he actually gets to be the hero who saves that planet ... I'm jealous.

This is a fun YA read that I rather enjoyed. Now, I'll be honest and say that I'm not a fan of passive voice in writing, and George already knows how I feel about his use of it, so I won't belabor the point. That said, I do recommend the story to you all.
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515 reviews
June 13, 2011
I received a copy of this book from a blog tour over the memorial day weekend. I don't normally read Scifi fantasy books but I found myself enjoying this book with each turn of the page (or click of button since I read it on my kindle). The intertwining of story lines was brilliant and the characters were well developed. I found myself rooting for the Danarians and sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see if Matt would bring about Excelsior. I highly recommend this book to anyone. It is a great story that will hold the interest of any reader. If you like a great story then this is a book that won't disappoint.
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Author 52 books152 followers
January 20, 2014
Excelsior is a book to appeal to all those kids who daydreamed in class, who created stories, used their imagination, and thought big thoughts.

Matthew Peters is the star of the story, a senior high student whose online comic book has garnered a following. Little does he know, the hero of his stories is real, as are the beings and settings that populate the world he thought he created in his head.

With action and adventure, this book is sure to appeal to teen fans of comics, superheroes, and adventure.

It's a story with a lot of heart.
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Author 11 books7 followers
January 27, 2011
Okay, I am an odd girl and love SciFi! My father got me hooked on it when I was little with Star Trek and I mean the Captain Kirk kind! From there I have watched and read a plethora of SciFi things! With that in mind I found this book entertaining and I really loved the fast pace of it. I was sad that it ended. Cause it had me wanting more! Good job and I can't wait to read more of your books. -_^
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Author 88 books298 followers
February 21, 2014
I shared this wonderful book with my son Joey. From page one we were both mesmerized. Joey particularly enjoyed one of the villains Danak. He felt particularly real to him and wanted to know more about his background.
We both look forward to a sequel. Joey felt that there were many loose ends that needed to be explained in a future book.
A fun read middle grades and up.
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Author 66 books3,241 followers
April 25, 2016
This was COOL. I loved the duo POV, and how the Author merged both of these - seemingly opposite characters - into one story. It was an original and skillful way to portray this comic fantasy.
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69 reviews
April 17, 2019
Wish we could do 1/2 stars, I’d give this one 3 1/2. Fun story, very much wish fulfillment type fantasy. Nerdy, bullied teenage web comic creator finds his stories are more real than he believed and of course he becomes the hero. Could be super derivative and lame, but to me it had an underlying innocent sweetness that disarmed me enough to overlook some of the cheesier aspects. Overall I liked it and would be open to seeking out the rest of the series at some point.
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Author 5 books73 followers
April 18, 2011
Excelsior – Review by Martha A. Cheves, Author of Stir, Laugh, Repeat

‘Semminex wondered how many tazer shots Radifen had taken today, since the older Denarian was definitely developing a tolerance to them. He lost count of how many times Radifin stood against the guards, shouting his blistering sermons that reverberated through the walls of the prison, catching the attention of the men and women around them.

Even though Semminex couldn’t see them, he could hear the cacophony of the prisoners banging metal and flesh against the cell doors, as Radifen’s voice penetrated through the walls of the prison. Radifen would declare that the days of the Krunations’ perversion of their planet were coming to an end. The Krunations’ emperor, Nocterar, would fall to their protector Excelsior, who would return to his people and destroy this monstrosity of a castle that these prisoners were forced to create.

The guard noticed that Radifen was quieter than usual, so he was only given a mild tazing before the door was opened and he was shoved back inside. The Denarian prisoner limply fell inside the cell. Before the cell door shut, the guard looked over his shoulder and saw where he had to go next. Grannik’s cell. The guard drew a deep breath, slid his key back into the lock, then turned around and looked to his left and his right to see if another guard was nearby. Nobody was there. As the guard looked down to activate his communicator on his wrist, Radifen slid under the cell door as it was closing and slipped out of sight.’


Matthew Peters is a high school student who has an uncanny knack for writing and drawing his own web comic, which he publishes on his own internet site. His popular series “Excelsior” is now starting to gain a broader audience. His characters from another world far, far away must be perfectly written and illustrated, and his list of followers is quickly growing.

Matthew started having dreams and visions of his Excelsior characters and stories after visiting the Metropolitan Museum of Art when he was a small child. On display there was a sword that had been discovered during an excavation in Greenland. He had slipped past the guards and actually touched the sword before being caught. Little did Matthew know but his touching the sword would change his life forever.

Not far from where the sword was discovered, another discovery was made. A body was found that was believed to be thousands of years old. What baffled the archeology team the most was the lack of decay showing on the body. And when Dr. Katherine Sierra was able to view this “ice” man, she knew who he was and where he came from. And when she spotted the glowing gem held in one of his hands, she knew she was running out of time before mass destruction would take place. It was up to her to find the one person who would save not only Earth but also the planet of Denab IV. And that person could be none other than Matthew Peters.

Excelsior took me through a few “fiery” loops. This book is filled with adventure, action and addiction. I couldn’t wait to turn the page to see how the characters would not only live through but also flourish into the next event.

2010
Smashwords: www.smashwords.com/books/view/17269
Amazon: http://www.amazon.com/Excelsior-ebook...
ISBN# 978-0741460882


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153 reviews5 followers
April 18, 2018
This was a fun and exciting book about a high school kid whose online comic starts becoming true. I thought the characters were engaging and fun, and that the plot was exciting and campy-in-a-good-way. I enjoy comic books, and the plot and action reminded me of a good comic book. I was disappointed when I found out that there isn't a sequel - I would have enjoyed reading another Excelsior book. I'll be checking out George Sirois' other books to see if anything looks interesting.
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Author 8 books49 followers
June 30, 2015
Matthew Peters Henkel, was the real life cousin of the author, and a touching tribute to his life follows the story in this book. Read that for sure.

George Sirois' Excelsior is a book I enjoyed a lot and it kind of fell between 4 and 5 stars for me, simply because I wasn't quite sure where to place it. If it was an adult sci-fi book, then if was too simple and the situations and characters needed more development to compete with other books I would call 5 star reads. However, with a high school student as a hero, and the direct route from introduction to main problem to climax to end of the book, I felt like maybe it was meant as a middle grade and high school read, and in that case it was delightfully right. So five stars from me.

Matt Peters is an orphan, living in his uncle's home and spending much of his time and energy drawing a sci-fi, super-hero web comic. He has a few times when he appears to be a real loser, but that comic pulls him through and defines his self worth. His relationships are shallow, except with his uncle and later on, that will prove to be a blessing. When he learns that his great imaginary world is real, and that he has been channelling the memories of a creator/God in drawing the actual history of another world, things get fun. I really got into reading the rest of the book, although it did leave me wanting more details. I think when I was teaching middle school, my students would have enjoyed this story as a read aloud, or to read on their own.

Excelsior himself feels familiar to anyone who knows the comic book hero. He could hang out with Wolverine for a short time, or Spider-Man, or follow Captain America around. But he would be too innocent to be best buddies with Tony Stark.
17 reviews1 follower
August 18, 2016
Being a fan of comic books my entire life, (and yes, that includes the present), I always love to look into anything that has to do with superheroes. When I heard about this novel, I decided I had to give it a read. The catch is always that, being a writer of superhero fiction myself, I do tend to be a bit overly critical of any superhero fiction I come across. I opened the cover to Excelsior, and enjoyed every bit of it, from start to finish.

I especially loved the fact that it is not a traditional superhero story. It blends in science fiction and even a bit of theological (though indirectly) with the main theme of superhero story, and amps it up with a few different plot-lines all intersected. I will say no more about the actual text of the book, as I do not want to reveal anything that would ruin even the slightest part of the story, but I was very happy to read this book.

I found it to be gripping, with just the right amount of cliffhangers in place where they were needed, and beautiful word choice and description throughout. All around, it is a great read for teenagers and adults both. A must-read for anyone who likes science fiction, superheroes, suspense, or any combination therein!
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230 reviews9 followers
December 22, 2017
Who wouldn't want to be the chosen incarnation of a planetary hero? Certainly the hero of the tale is sufficiently mature to reflect on the changes this would bring to himself and those around him. This is a fun read that is well-structured and and delivered with good characterisation and world-building. The story is cohesive and offers good action sequences. Not all survive, but then with a battle that spans planets you wouldn't expect them to. There is a clear distinction between good and bad and so the story lacks the level of complexity that would have been provided if there was uncertainty and betrayal. Similarly there are no extensive periods of tension. That said, the story is sufficiently complex with a diversity of characters and plot that it is successful without such techniques. There were no noticeable logical inconsistencies and the writing style is readily approachable.

The story has a resolution that is sufficiently rounded that the author could stop there. Nevertheless there are a number of loose ends which clearly indicate that there may be a sequel. This would be welcomed as the author spins a good yarn that is likely to be popular not only with a younger age group but also with adults.
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699 reviews91 followers
October 21, 2015
What an adventure!!! Now, I'm not one to read comics or go fan girling on the latest super hero but there was something about this book that drew me in right away and didn't let go until I was finished.

Matthew is your average high school nerd. He spends all of his free time (and much of his class time) creating an online comic and the world that surrounds his characters. He never would have imagined just how close to reality his mind had gone.

When a woman shows up at his school claiming to be one of these characters that he thought he'd created he is dumbstruck. But when she tells him of his great destiny, it kind of feels right. Matthew is the one who is supposed to save the world - both his worlds - but not alone.

The very first chapter of this book was action packed and it immediately got my imagination going. I could see everything so perfectly in my mind. It's a completely new take on comics and super heroes and is just such an incredible story. The writing is quick and exciting. The characters are likeable. Matthew's development was really well done. I just can't say enough good things about it. I'm looking forward to the next one.
55 reviews2 followers
July 26, 2018
I'm tired of wimpy, reluctant, undeserving heroes

In this unashamedly typical teen fantasy, even the main character sees the problem. He receives everything a wimpy, socially awkward, underachiever could wish for, without earning it. His fantasy life becomes real, and of course he's the hero. He goes from undersized weakling to Superman on steroids, in one day, without effort. He becomes a champion swordsman in less than a day. The beautiful girl, who never noticed him before, now wants to date him. Of course he's an orphan. Of course he's smart. You would expect these character elements. Unfortunately, he's not a worthy recipient of his unearned attributes. We arent shown a single positive attribute of his character. He ignores everyone, leaves his friend to be beaten by the bullies, and doesn't apply himself to anything but writing his comic book. And, when faced with the truth, he hides in his closet. At least, the main character seems somewhat aware of his undeserving status. The other characters tell him that he must actually be special, or he wouldn't have been chosen. Ugh. I only finished 70% of the book before losing interest.
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125 reviews13 followers
December 27, 2015
Excelsior was an awesome read! It was so imaginative and creative, and George just did an amazing job at it. The book was well written, and every aspect of this book was enjoyable. There was just an amazing plot, and I absolutely loved how George was able to put together those two worlds in the way that he did.

Excelsior is a wonderful science fiction book, mixed with fantasy. The main character, Matthew, is a geeky kid who likes to write stories (hmm... sounds familiar). But it turns out that the story he's been writing isn't fiction, it's real.

I liked meeting all of the different characters in the story, and seeing how they intertwined with each other. Matthew was pretty darn cool, and I also loved "Katherine". She was entertaining, and it was interesting to see how the men on earth reacted to her.

Excelsior is a good book to show that you aren't just who you are on the outside. That you can be strong when you need to. I really enjoyed this very creative take on worlds other than earth. I am definitely giving this book 5 out of 5 stars.
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