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Peter Lucas #1
Casting A Shadow
A secret revealed on his father’s death bed leads young Peter Lucas to become the U.S. Army’s most lethal sniper in a story that twists and turns from the frozen battlefield in Korea to the sweltering jungles of Vietnam. Along the way Peter is transformed from a high school football star into a deadly shadow warrior. Losing his father throws his world upside down, but a request for information about his father’s past sets in motion a string of events that will forever change Peter’s life. A family history he had never known pushes Peter into the world of clandestine operations. His older brother Tony is entangled in the web as well, going MIA in Nam. With the help of CIA director Elmore Craft. Peter is trained and unleashed on an unsuspecting enemy, however at just 19 years old the job might be too daunting for him to handle.
515 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 30, 2017
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September 12, 2021
mixed bag
The author had a plot that held me. I was very disappointed in his unfamiliarity with the armed forces and the equipment, customs, and even ranks of the respective services. At one point he referred to an NCO in the Airborne as a Gunnery Sgt. That’s a Marine Corps rank. He mentioned a 50 caliber Browning automatic rifle, which is ludicrous - it’s a 30 cal. He had an Airborne Pvt saying “Sir, yes sir” to an NCO. That’s something only a Marine recruit says. There were many other embarrassing discrepancies.
The author had a plot that held me. I was very disappointed in his unfamiliarity with the armed forces and the equipment, customs, and even ranks of the respective services. At one point he referred to an NCO in the Airborne as a Gunnery Sgt. That’s a Marine Corps rank. He mentioned a 50 caliber Browning automatic rifle, which is ludicrous - it’s a 30 cal. He had an Airborne Pvt saying “Sir, yes sir” to an NCO. That’s something only a Marine recruit says. There were many other embarrassing discrepancies.
March 5, 2020
Ok story
Mr. Haury seems to have written this book with little or no technical knowledge in relation to his subject. For instance he makes a number of references to 20mm and 50mm machine guns . In addition he obviously made liberal use of Spell Check, often resulting in improper use of words such as your vs you're and repeatedly uses strait rather than straight. Very poorly edited.
Mr. Haury seems to have written this book with little or no technical knowledge in relation to his subject. For instance he makes a number of references to 20mm and 50mm machine guns . In addition he obviously made liberal use of Spell Check, often resulting in improper use of words such as your vs you're and repeatedly uses strait rather than straight. Very poorly edited.
December 16, 2021
It was a good story. Yes there were errors like referring to a corporal as sir, saluting in a combat zone and other mistakes. I will admit it took be aback when it first occurred in the book but what the hell, it is fiction and as such it was a good tale. Also is not that editors and reviewers are hired for? So I give the editors and reviewers 3 stars and Mr. Haury 5 stars for a tale that holds the readers interest. As for the expectations of the some of the critique's here in, remember that Saigon fell 46 plus years ago and except for a group of us old geezers 50MM vs 50Cal is meaningless to the majority of those under 55. In the world of USA 5.56 however, he did get 7.62 correct.
January 18, 2021
The basic story was good. However, the author should have done some basic research on military ranks, weapons and protocols. He had privates saluting corporals in a forward base in Vietnam where no one saluted for fear of sniper, 20 mm machine guns on Huey helps carrying troops and “50 mm machine guns” in the camp. They did not exist. Finally, a little research or just reading one nonfiction book written by some of the men in the LRRP’s would have gone a long way to helping the story believability.
June 4, 2022
Title should be “Fairytale of a Sniper”
The authors fiction is extreme. I’ve read a great number of books but this one isn’t meant for mature adults. The perfection of Pete’s actions and events is for 11-13,year old not adults. The talents skills the author affords Pete are those that Carlos Hathcock the true to life shadow sniper had. Even he wasn’t perfect read his bio in the book and enjoy life events of a true sniper. Whose real experiences over shadow the authors fiction. His life was for real and I’m sure the author attempted to copy them.
The authors fiction is extreme. I’ve read a great number of books but this one isn’t meant for mature adults. The perfection of Pete’s actions and events is for 11-13,year old not adults. The talents skills the author affords Pete are those that Carlos Hathcock the true to life shadow sniper had. Even he wasn’t perfect read his bio in the book and enjoy life events of a true sniper. Whose real experiences over shadow the authors fiction. His life was for real and I’m sure the author attempted to copy them.
May 14, 2020
Good read for a fiction novel
Apparently the Author meant know much about the military hierarchy. Too many mistakes in rank and military courtesy, e.g. No Corporal is called "Sir", and they sure aren't ever saluted. Plus going and coming from Vietnam, the Army used Oakland, Ca around San Francisco, not San Diego. Plus, we had no ranger unit with us. But, all told a good story.
Apparently the Author meant know much about the military hierarchy. Too many mistakes in rank and military courtesy, e.g. No Corporal is called "Sir", and they sure aren't ever saluted. Plus going and coming from Vietnam, the Army used Oakland, Ca around San Francisco, not San Diego. Plus, we had no ranger unit with us. But, all told a good story.
December 31, 2021
Good book.
The book is very good when the plot is centered on the jungle scenes. However, the author needs to do more research on the differences between the differences between the armed forces and their ranking structure. Enlisted people don't salute or call higher ranking enlisted "Sir" or "Ma'am." A Gunnery Sergeant is a Marine Corps enlisted rank and not an Army rank.
Other than that, this is a good read and hard to put down.
The book is very good when the plot is centered on the jungle scenes. However, the author needs to do more research on the differences between the differences between the armed forces and their ranking structure. Enlisted people don't salute or call higher ranking enlisted "Sir" or "Ma'am." A Gunnery Sergeant is a Marine Corps enlisted rank and not an Army rank.
Other than that, this is a good read and hard to put down.
March 23, 2021
Not good
This was not an enjoyable book at all, not up to the standard of the first book in any way or form. In the first place the jealousy of the 2 girlfriends was a real turn-off, and that continued right throughout the story. Then they got dragged into the missions untrained which is doubtful for 1970"s anywhere. And for me the story was about Pete Lucas, not all the side shows that turned up.
This was not an enjoyable book at all, not up to the standard of the first book in any way or form. In the first place the jealousy of the 2 girlfriends was a real turn-off, and that continued right throughout the story. Then they got dragged into the missions untrained which is doubtful for 1970"s anywhere. And for me the story was about Pete Lucas, not all the side shows that turned up.
November 20, 2021
Amazing story
I truly enjoyed this book. It held my attention all the way through. I was a young married woman during that time period and we knew very little about the war in Vietnam. A well written, well considered book. I did not look down on the ones who were involved there. Many thanks to the author.
I truly enjoyed this book. It held my attention all the way through. I was a young married woman during that time period and we knew very little about the war in Vietnam. A well written, well considered book. I did not look down on the ones who were involved there. Many thanks to the author.
December 24, 2021
Good Action
Mr.Hairy has written a very entering novel that will have you laughing and tearing up through out. The style is easy to follow and become a part of. Obviously his military knowledge is not up to speed but the story is enough fun and enjoyment to overlook the mistakes. I look forward to he next book.
Mr.Hairy has written a very entering novel that will have you laughing and tearing up through out. The style is easy to follow and become a part of. Obviously his military knowledge is not up to speed but the story is enough fun and enjoyment to overlook the mistakes. I look forward to he next book.
January 23, 2022
Amazing
Wow!! I was totally engrossed in this one. I loved all the people and what was happening in their lives. Coming from the Vietnam generation, listening to brothers and listening to friends that toured there..I would have to say Mr. Haury nailed the description of the jungle, people and lifestyle of soldiers spot on. Would highly recommend this book.
Wow!! I was totally engrossed in this one. I loved all the people and what was happening in their lives. Coming from the Vietnam generation, listening to brothers and listening to friends that toured there..I would have to say Mr. Haury nailed the description of the jungle, people and lifestyle of soldiers spot on. Would highly recommend this book.
June 3, 2022
fascinating
A compelling, well- written believable story of bravery that puts the lie to the faux fear of “toxic masculinity” as a harmful influence. Give us men like these heroes and we can overcome the dreadful modern attempt to feminize men. ( this comment written by a Navy spec ops vet.)
A compelling, well- written believable story of bravery that puts the lie to the faux fear of “toxic masculinity” as a harmful influence. Give us men like these heroes and we can overcome the dreadful modern attempt to feminize men. ( this comment written by a Navy spec ops vet.)
December 26, 2022
Interesting Tale.
This was a good story, I wish the author would have taken his time to do the most basic home work or at least have a military consultant. He has a private call if a Corporal “Sir” and refers to Tony Lucas, an Army Sniper as a Gunnery Sargent. I think he got his Army and Marine ranks mixed up. Nonetheless, it was a good story.
This was a good story, I wish the author would have taken his time to do the most basic home work or at least have a military consultant. He has a private call if a Corporal “Sir” and refers to Tony Lucas, an Army Sniper as a Gunnery Sargent. I think he got his Army and Marine ranks mixed up. Nonetheless, it was a good story.
February 1, 2023
Really Enjoyable. Having read all of the David Healey “Sniper” series books was looking for something well researched (read believable) yet a plot that moved along. Author Haury did a great job and the only problem was I read it in one day, which leaves me only four more books in his “Shadow” series. These two Authors need to write faster!!!!!
October 4, 2017
Lot's of Action and a Liitle Love
This was one of the best fiction books read in a long time. While it got a little lengthy the novel kept my interest throughout. My only question is where and when is the sequel.
This was one of the best fiction books read in a long time. While it got a little lengthy the novel kept my interest throughout. My only question is where and when is the sequel.
January 26, 2020
An "anywhere" family
Welll written is an understatement; hard to stop thinking about it when not lost in its pages! Gave four-star rating rather than five solely because it ended so suddenly. Dan't wait to read the next one!
Welll written is an understatement; hard to stop thinking about it when not lost in its pages! Gave four-star rating rather than five solely because it ended so suddenly. Dan't wait to read the next one!
April 1, 2020
Compelling and a great story
I could hardly put it down.There were afew mistakes that i noticed but only because i know people in the field.well written enough that i bought the second book.
I could hardly put it down.There were afew mistakes that i noticed but only because i know people in the field.well written enough that i bought the second book.
May 21, 2020
I'm just sorry that I can only give 5 stars
I really enjoyed reading this book. I enjoyed meeting these people and watching how things developed. Thank you for writing it for me, I appreciate it very much!
I really enjoyed reading this book. I enjoyed meeting these people and watching how things developed. Thank you for writing it for me, I appreciate it very much!
July 30, 2020
Okay
Several things I was confused on. A4 fighter? A=attack aircraft, ie A6, A7, A10. Not sure the Air Force ever used the A4. 50 mm and 20mm at the fire base? Huge rounds. Hilo? Maybe Helo was meant? Okay story, but needs some work.
Several things I was confused on. A4 fighter? A=attack aircraft, ie A6, A7, A10. Not sure the Air Force ever used the A4. 50 mm and 20mm at the fire base? Huge rounds. Hilo? Maybe Helo was meant? Okay story, but needs some work.
October 20, 2020
A very interesting book
Not alot of extraneous minutia. A few misspellings and grammatical errors, but I didn't read for that minor problem; and,sometimes I believe it's the publisher and not the author. I look forward to the next book,( read both in reverse order).
Not alot of extraneous minutia. A few misspellings and grammatical errors, but I didn't read for that minor problem; and,sometimes I believe it's the publisher and not the author. I look forward to the next book,( read both in reverse order).
March 13, 2021
A simple waste of time
A poorly written piece laced with every cliche imaginable, fraught with grammatical and technical errors. A military novel written by someone with no apparent knowledge of military protocol. Not recommend to anyone with an appreciation of good writing.
A poorly written piece laced with every cliche imaginable, fraught with grammatical and technical errors. A military novel written by someone with no apparent knowledge of military protocol. Not recommend to anyone with an appreciation of good writing.
December 15, 2021
Jungle Reverence
I really enjoyed the refreshing narrative & deep love of the Vietnamese jungle. This story is simple & beautiful in it’s telling. It kept me totally engaged & enthralled. What a find.
I really enjoyed the refreshing narrative & deep love of the Vietnamese jungle. This story is simple & beautiful in it’s telling. It kept me totally engaged & enthralled. What a find.
October 22, 2017
Entertaining, would make a pretty intense movie.
Not edited well, too many typos that distract from the story but otherwise an action -filled book that will satisfy readers.
Not edited well, too many typos that distract from the story but otherwise an action -filled book that will satisfy readers.
May 23, 2020
Meaningful!
I am a vet of that Era. I have read a lot of info on thtradge War. I lost a
I am a vet of that Era. I have read a lot of info on thtradge War. I lost a
June 16, 2020
WOW!
Sounds very real to life. Would not be surprised if there were several of these missions during that war. Praise God I got out before it got going.
Sounds very real to life. Would not be surprised if there were several of these missions during that war. Praise God I got out before it got going.
April 23, 2021
Poorly researched
This guy knows very little about thru.S. Army. Corporals AR not wai
Knows nothing about Army
Don't salute enlisted men
This guy knows very little about thru.S. Army. Corporals AR not wai
Knows nothing about Army
Don't salute enlisted men
May 7, 2021
War under deep cover
Good read with excellent character development and structure. Story plausible and somewhat realistic. A page turner in many respects. Lends itself to a sequel.
Good read with excellent character development and structure. Story plausible and somewhat realistic. A page turner in many respects. Lends itself to a sequel.
August 3, 2022
Good
Very good and better written and 4th bought out. Recommend and only wished it would have a second book. Th
Very good and better written and 4th bought out. Recommend and only wished it would have a second book. Th
November 21, 2022
Very good story. Didn't really want to pit the book down
. there wasn't any part O didn't like Wish for more like it. I would recommend the book to everyone.
. there wasn't any part O didn't like Wish for more like it. I would recommend the book to everyone.
March 12, 2023
Wow what a story
A tear jerker, the whole story is just wonderfully written. Great tale of war and love. Enjoyed every page.
Rock on!
A tear jerker, the whole story is just wonderfully written. Great tale of war and love. Enjoyed every page.
Rock on!
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