Our first group Buddy Read, thanks Izzie, Izzah and Gloria! (reverse ABC order)
The hero’s main goal was to seduce and ruin the heroine, in revenge for his cousins untimely death (that he foolishly blamed the heroine for). He kept saying he wanted to ruin her, ok…. I had assumed he meant ‘to ruin her reputation in society’. Which is what the term ‘to be ruined’ typically meant in that society and era. That didn’t make any sense at all though, as he was under the wrong impression for the first 50% that she’d been sleeping around with her little guy groupies, The Pack. He was acting as if it was common knowledge that she was London’s most popular trollop. If she was really sleeping around as he suspected, wouldn’t she already be ruined in society?? Yet she was a popular debutante that was invited to all of the balls, etc. Obviously she was not sleeping around, or the ton would have given her the cut direct and stopped inviting her to functions. That should have been his first clue. If only the hero got his facts straight from the beginning, this would have been a novella. Someone needed to explain to him why it’s important not to ASSUME anything. (it makes an ASS out of U and ME). Eventually I started to think, maybe he meant to ruin her mentally, not socially. Destroy her spirit and break her heart.
This trope, the hero seeking revenge against the heroine but accidentally falls in love along the way, is one I’ve read hundreds of times in HR and I was excited to see this authors take on it. I see this might be the authors debut book, and I will give props for some cute moments here and there, but there were too many elements that took me out of the story and prevented me from becoming engaged in the story.
The hero - starts the story off after having just finished a 4-yr sexcapade around Europe and the Caribbean. How he is not hooked up to a round-the-clock penicillin drip, I don’t know. Anyway, I normally love a jealous/possessive type hero that accidentally falls in love, but this guy wasn’t it. The only good thing about him was his cover shot on the book cover. Otherwise, he just acted like a brainless bulldozer. Wait, doesn’t syphyllis cause brain damage?
The heroine- is a 19-yr old debutante, the most sought after at every ball, father is always out of town so the heroine galavants unchaperoned to all functions, no one is watching out for her best interests at the functions except for The Pack. A group of guys that follow her around like a gaggle of groupies backstage at a Poison concert. It was ridiculous, not cute. The heroine’s servants acted as her family, not employees. Anyway, normally I love a naive/ innocent type heroine but she was cartoonish with her The Pack following, her Monthly Dinners for The Pack, etc. There was nothing about her that endeared me to her.
The book, on my iPad, was 419 pages long, which made me 😧 on page one. The 3rd act break-up happens just before the 50% mark…. A good edit and skimming off of about 100 pages would definitely help this story.
Ultimately, I liked the idea of the storyline, but I didn’t enjoy the alternate universe setting (way too modern happenings for 1839). I’m not a stickler for historical accuracy, but these glitches were too jarring to be able to mentally follow along with the story. I’ll still check out the other two books in the series, in hopes that the authors writing smoothes out with time.