Enjoyed the insight into Nepali life to a certain extent, and some cultural references. Overall, the thoughts of the twelve year old boy are mixed with the emotions, context, and wisdom of an older man looking back that doesn't match the timbre of the story. The plot is good. Character development is okay. The ending was abrupt--I felt mad because it felt like the author cheated, giving the 12-year-old the thoughts of a 40-year-old, and then writing an ending like a 12-year-old. Sadly, it also made me want to laugh--because the ending read like a 12-year-old wrote it. Not great writing, but potential for possible future writings. I'm curious if English is the second language of the author--a few phrases and misspellings make that seem possible.