Marcus Nannini has a wonderful knowledge of WWII history. It is obvious that he is familiar with the times and cultures in which his story is set. He provides wonderful detail and historic information which informs and interests the reader. I have no doubt Nannini has done extensive research and is well informed as to this particular bit of US and Japanese history.
The style in which the story is written is less appealing. The feel is more of a first-time fiction writer in need of a good editor. The story bumps along, not making a lot of sense with no explanation provided. Early in the story, the discovery of a long-dead body provides an enticing opening. Surprisingly, both the police officers initially summoned and the Navy forensics team who take over the excavation and investigation completely fail to notice that something has been removed from the grave. With no explanation and no indication of any sort how such a discovery of a corpse from decades before could be of any kind of security issue, one of the lead characters begins declaring everything “top secret” and “your eyes only”. It made no sense. This is not to say the telling is not accurate, simply that it did not provide enough support to make it understandable. As a truth based historical fiction, the lack of this type of detail distracts from the story.
The writing style for me was difficult to ignore. The blatant lack of explanation of motivation for actions taken by characters was distracting and confusing. While the historic knowledge was evident it was not enough of a compelling addition to make the story enjoyable.