I was in the mood for a space opera and I found this in my purchased books on my Kindle. It was a very interesting book - dystopian story set in space, with an Empire at war, and a gypsy element with a main character to can tell fortunes. Except for the Hunger Games-like competition piece, I liked it a lot.
Ember, the main character, is from Earth, now a reject planet in a future where space travel is possible. She's also a member of the last true Roma kumpania, though being half-gadjo she doesn't fit in there. She has a special ability to see the future and read people's memories from the past, and she uses this to support herself and her sick father. But then she gets sold to the Empire, whose only interest in her is weaponizing her power to fight for control of the galaxy.
So far, so good, but there are definite cliches. The writing is pretty okay, and there are enough unique elements or unique twists on old ideas that I'm not put off by the recycled material. It reads like YA, though Ember is almost 20.
Pretty early in the book Ember is taken from her little village on backwater Earth and sent to military academy to train as a soldier in the Emperor's war. With her ability, they intend to groom her as a special weapon. During training they find that - surprise! - she's even more powerful than they or she originally thought.
That was annoying for being so hackneyed, as was her unblinking acceptance of all this new technology. The beginning of the book strongly implied that Earth was a reject, backwoods planet that no one would willingly inhabit. The village she's from didn't seem to have simple amenities like electricity, and yet her she is on a space ship, with all kinds of new technology she's supposed to use and be subjected to in testing, and she doesn't bat an eyelash. I would expect a bit more of a reaction than that.
I'm also annoyed at the obvious romantic setup between her and Stefan. The obligatory roadblock is that she has this stupid idea she's going to marry a Roma man, even though a) she's an outcast in her kumpania because of her outsider dad, and b) she goes over the roster of eligible bachelor's early in the book and there are none. In spite of that, she stubbornly clings to this idea that she MUST marry a Roma. Aside from these glaring obstacles, the intent that she and Stefan are intended for each other by the author is so in your face painfully obvious that it's cringe-worthy. If it had been allowed to develop naturally I could have seen it, but as it is I'm just irritated.
The Pavlov conditioning with Commander Kane is totally unbelievable. The leverage of her family and village seems to weigh much heavier in Ember's mind than pain, and is therefore far more convincing. Plus, at just the right moment, she suddenly finds the strength to throw off the pain and push through Commander Kane's power and break free. Really? Seems like too little, too late, and much too convenient when she finally triumphed.
By the end, I was torn. I like the setting, the "flicker" ability, and the political struggle, especially since by the end of the book, it's not obvious which side is the good guys, if there are good guys in this conflict. I disliked how quickly Ember gave up her reservations about Stefan. Though her idea of marrying a Roma was stupid, we were pounded over the head that SHE WOULD DO IT. For her to suddenly drop it because she met a cute guy seemed quite ridiculous. The whole romance with Stefan went so fast it was almost nonexistent, and that bothered me, too. This is a short book, both in pages and internal chronology, and a lot of things felt rushed.
However, in spite of all these objections, I still enjoyed the story overall. It was a new take and fresh spin on old ideas, and kept my interest even apart from the many flaws. I will read the next book.