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Chronicles of Tournai #5
The Dragon's Devotion
Corentin is a scholar with a secret—his magical Talent allows him to turn into a dragon, and he isn’t alone in that ability. Long ago, dragons were hunted fiercely, until they went into hiding, becoming things of legend. Corentin has traveled the world with one aim—to protect his people and keep their secret safe. Drawn to the principality of Tournai by news of someone close to discovering that secret, he hopes to avert suspicion. His attraction to the too-serious Bastien isn’t convenient for his purpose, but it isn’t something he can ignore either.
Lord Bastien, Earl of Ardesia, inherited his title unexpectedly when his parents were killed in a sailing accident along with the parents of his cousin, Prince Philip. Since then, Bastien has devoted his life to the obligations of his family and estate—so much so, that it has caused tension between him and his siblings. His world is further shaken when he receives an anonymous letter informing him that the tragic boating accident may, in fact, have been murder. Bastien throws himself into investigating whether the allegations are true and finding out who killed his parents.
As Corentin and Bastien become closer, the mystery of Bastien’s parents’ death draws him further into danger. Corentin feels compelled to protect Bastien, but the threat is closer than they know. Now, Corentin must decide whether preserving his secret—and potentially his people’s safety—is more important than saving the man he loves.
While this book is the fifth in a series, it can be read as a standalone.
Lord Bastien, Earl of Ardesia, inherited his title unexpectedly when his parents were killed in a sailing accident along with the parents of his cousin, Prince Philip. Since then, Bastien has devoted his life to the obligations of his family and estate—so much so, that it has caused tension between him and his siblings. His world is further shaken when he receives an anonymous letter informing him that the tragic boating accident may, in fact, have been murder. Bastien throws himself into investigating whether the allegations are true and finding out who killed his parents.
As Corentin and Bastien become closer, the mystery of Bastien’s parents’ death draws him further into danger. Corentin feels compelled to protect Bastien, but the threat is closer than they know. Now, Corentin must decide whether preserving his secret—and potentially his people’s safety—is more important than saving the man he loves.
While this book is the fifth in a series, it can be read as a standalone.
362 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 4, 2017
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About the author
Antonia Aquilante
13 books87 followersAntonia Aquilante has been making up stories for as long as she can remember, and at the age of twelve, decided she would be a writer when she grew up. After many years and a few career detours, she has returned to that original plan. Her stories have changed over the years, but one thing has remained consistent - they all end in happily ever after.
She has a fondness for travel (and a long list of places she wants to visit and revisit), taking photos, family history, fabulous shoes, baking treats which she shares with friends and family, and of course reading. She usually has at least two books started at once and never goes anywhere without her Kindle. Though she is a convert to ebooks, she still loves paper books the best, and there are a couple thousand of them residing in her home with her.
Born and raised in New Jersey, she is living there again after years in Washington, DC, and North Carolina for school and work. She enjoys being back in the Garden State but admits to being tempted every so often to run away from home and live in Italy.
She is a member of the Romance Writers of America and the New Jersey Romance Writers.
She has a fondness for travel (and a long list of places she wants to visit and revisit), taking photos, family history, fabulous shoes, baking treats which she shares with friends and family, and of course reading. She usually has at least two books started at once and never goes anywhere without her Kindle. Though she is a convert to ebooks, she still loves paper books the best, and there are a couple thousand of them residing in her home with her.
Born and raised in New Jersey, she is living there again after years in Washington, DC, and North Carolina for school and work. She enjoys being back in the Garden State but admits to being tempted every so often to run away from home and live in Italy.
She is a member of the Romance Writers of America and the New Jersey Romance Writers.
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September 16, 2017
Do you remember when you were young...
and you'd get ready for bed and there you'd be curled up under the covers all snuggly warm with your favorite toy waiting for a bedtime story...maybe, it's a story about kings and queens, fairies, dwarves, elves, a circus filled with lions, tigers and elephants or maybe it's a story with mystical creatures unicorns, griffins, a phoenix...dragons?
Whatever, the story as children it was a special time...a time filled with the magic of going to a far away land...a different place and time, filled with magic and adventure shared with just one other person...that person reading the story to us...maybe, it was mom, or dad, a brother or sister or even a grandparent.
Whoever it was. It was in those moments that many of us first discovered the magic of books and the wondrous things they have to share with us...the people, places, adventure, mysteries and magic...all of it is magic. Magic that transports us to places and on adventures all without ever having to leave the safety of our cozy, comfortable beds. It's a magic that we get to keep with us our entire lives every time we open a book it's there waiting for us.
Ok...so now you're probably kind of wondering what this actually has to do with a specific book...one called 'The Dragon's Devotion'...well, you see this story took me back to my childhood to the magic of fairytales and happily ever after...there was a dragon and yes, we all know I'm a total pushover for dragons but this one...well, I have to say I think Corentin is going to be one of my favorite dragon's ever. He's large and majestic and his scales are such a deep purple that they're almost black, he has beautiful violet eyes. He's fierce and brave and at the heart of him is a man...a man who is intelligent, kind, loyal, handsome and knows how to love. Yeah...I sorta...kinda have a crush on Corentin.
But as wonderful as dragon's are they weren't the only thing in this story to hold my interest. There was also Bastian or more accurately there was the mystery that Bastian brought with him...you see for me Bastian was ok, I didn't dislike him. I just wasn't enamored of him. To be honest at times he annoyed me, but I also felt badly for him he lost his parents at an early age and being the oldest child of an Earl, he suddenly had a huge amount of responsibility thrust upon him. Not only was he suddenly the Earl but he has 3 younger siblings that he is also responsible for...two brothers and a sister and it's responsibility that he takes very seriously...read...micro-manage and too serious. But it's done out of a sense of love, responsibility and family obligation...so maybe his course of action wasn't always the best but his intentions were and that definitely counts for a lot.
And on a sidebar...can I just say that I was far more interested in Bastian's brothers, Griffen and Mathis...especially Griffen, I think there's definitely a story to be told about that young man and I for one would be so willing to read it...just sayin'.
Now about that mystery that Bastian brings...you see years earlier Bastian's parents and Prince Philip's parents were killed in an accident...or was it? This is the question that plagues Bastian when he receives a mysterious note telling him that what they had assumed was an accident wasn't. Leaving Bastian wondering 'what to do?' and 'who to trust?' *no spoiler here folks, it's in the blurb.*
'The Dragon's Devotion' was a wonderful blend of romance and mystery with a subtle touch of fairy tale for some added magic. The romance was a sweet slow burn...but there was definitely a romance, one involving sweet kisses in the rain, dinner's out with a side of attempted murder...opps, maybe not such a romantic thing...but did I mention...dragon to the rescue? See...what i did there, how romantic is that?
Now, just one more thing before I leave on another adventure. 'The Dragon's Devotion' is the fifth book in Antonia Aquilante's 'Chronicles of Tournai' series and as it says in the blurb this one can be read as a stand alone. I haven't read the first 4 books and while I very much enjoyed this one I have to admit I do wonder if I had read the previous books if this might not have turned out to be a 5 star read for me? I honestly can't say for sure, but what I can say is that at no point did I feel lost or confused about this story. I think readers who have read the previous books will probably enjoy it all the more for having the background of some of the secondary characters and while I loved that there were characters from the previous stories in this one, I truly didn't feel like I was missing anything that was relevant to this story so much as that I think when I have a chance I'd like to go back to Tournai and catch up on what I missed by not having read the first 4 books.
'The Dragon's Devotion' is a wonderful story reminiscent of childhood but wrapped in magic for adults.
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An ARC of 'The Dragon's Devotion' was graciously provided by IndiGo Marketing & Design in exchange for an honest review.
and you'd get ready for bed and there you'd be curled up under the covers all snuggly warm with your favorite toy waiting for a bedtime story...maybe, it's a story about kings and queens, fairies, dwarves, elves, a circus filled with lions, tigers and elephants or maybe it's a story with mystical creatures unicorns, griffins, a phoenix...dragons?
Whatever, the story as children it was a special time...a time filled with the magic of going to a far away land...a different place and time, filled with magic and adventure shared with just one other person...that person reading the story to us...maybe, it was mom, or dad, a brother or sister or even a grandparent.
Whoever it was. It was in those moments that many of us first discovered the magic of books and the wondrous things they have to share with us...the people, places, adventure, mysteries and magic...all of it is magic. Magic that transports us to places and on adventures all without ever having to leave the safety of our cozy, comfortable beds. It's a magic that we get to keep with us our entire lives every time we open a book it's there waiting for us.
Ok...so now you're probably kind of wondering what this actually has to do with a specific book...one called 'The Dragon's Devotion'...well, you see this story took me back to my childhood to the magic of fairytales and happily ever after...there was a dragon and yes, we all know I'm a total pushover for dragons but this one...well, I have to say I think Corentin is going to be one of my favorite dragon's ever. He's large and majestic and his scales are such a deep purple that they're almost black, he has beautiful violet eyes. He's fierce and brave and at the heart of him is a man...a man who is intelligent, kind, loyal, handsome and knows how to love. Yeah...I sorta...kinda have a crush on Corentin.
But as wonderful as dragon's are they weren't the only thing in this story to hold my interest. There was also Bastian or more accurately there was the mystery that Bastian brought with him...you see for me Bastian was ok, I didn't dislike him. I just wasn't enamored of him. To be honest at times he annoyed me, but I also felt badly for him he lost his parents at an early age and being the oldest child of an Earl, he suddenly had a huge amount of responsibility thrust upon him. Not only was he suddenly the Earl but he has 3 younger siblings that he is also responsible for...two brothers and a sister and it's responsibility that he takes very seriously...read...micro-manage and too serious. But it's done out of a sense of love, responsibility and family obligation...so maybe his course of action wasn't always the best but his intentions were and that definitely counts for a lot.
And on a sidebar...can I just say that I was far more interested in Bastian's brothers, Griffen and Mathis...especially Griffen, I think there's definitely a story to be told about that young man and I for one would be so willing to read it...just sayin'.
Now about that mystery that Bastian brings...you see years earlier Bastian's parents and Prince Philip's parents were killed in an accident...or was it? This is the question that plagues Bastian when he receives a mysterious note telling him that what they had assumed was an accident wasn't. Leaving Bastian wondering 'what to do?' and 'who to trust?' *no spoiler here folks, it's in the blurb.*
'The Dragon's Devotion' was a wonderful blend of romance and mystery with a subtle touch of fairy tale for some added magic. The romance was a sweet slow burn...but there was definitely a romance, one involving sweet kisses in the rain, dinner's out with a side of attempted murder...opps, maybe not such a romantic thing...but did I mention...dragon to the rescue? See...what i did there, how romantic is that?
Now, just one more thing before I leave on another adventure. 'The Dragon's Devotion' is the fifth book in Antonia Aquilante's 'Chronicles of Tournai' series and as it says in the blurb this one can be read as a stand alone. I haven't read the first 4 books and while I very much enjoyed this one I have to admit I do wonder if I had read the previous books if this might not have turned out to be a 5 star read for me? I honestly can't say for sure, but what I can say is that at no point did I feel lost or confused about this story. I think readers who have read the previous books will probably enjoy it all the more for having the background of some of the secondary characters and while I loved that there were characters from the previous stories in this one, I truly didn't feel like I was missing anything that was relevant to this story so much as that I think when I have a chance I'd like to go back to Tournai and catch up on what I missed by not having read the first 4 books.
'The Dragon's Devotion' is a wonderful story reminiscent of childhood but wrapped in magic for adults.
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An ARC of 'The Dragon's Devotion' was graciously provided by IndiGo Marketing & Design in exchange for an honest review.
September 6, 2017
This is the fourth book in the series I've read (I missed book #4) and I enjoy my time with this gentle, low steam, old-school romance series. It's fantasy, an alt-historical world, with not much action - it's more character driven. There's generally a mystery of some sort in each book as well, and some of the MCs have a magical Talent, the title gives you this particular one.
The books in this series can be a bit overly long in description of places or events but it's part of this author's world building for Tournai. I know this going in now, as it seems to be the norm for the series, and I've dived on in four times because I enjoy the kind world these characters exist in. The Dragon's Devotion is a standalone, you could start here and nothing would be an issue, but there are characters who travel across from each book.
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The books in this series can be a bit overly long in description of places or events but it's part of this author's world building for Tournai. I know this going in now, as it seems to be the norm for the series, and I've dived on in four times because I enjoy the kind world these characters exist in. The Dragon's Devotion is a standalone, you could start here and nothing would be an issue, but there are characters who travel across from each book.
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April 16, 2019
The Dragon's Devotion (ARC) was graciously provided to me by IndiGo Marketing & Design for an honest review.
"To Follow One's Heart.."
Stunning and majestic beauty, heart-warming love, and bone-deep devotion that supercedes everything else, are just some of the reasons why I am still glowing after having just read a new book. I absolutely loved, The Dragon's Devotion, by Antonia Aquilante. Throughout its reading, I felt a multitude of emotions. I felt sadness, pride, giddiness, happiness, shock, horror, shock again, disbelief, relief..and..love.. And I can't wait to read it again.
The Dragon's Devotion, is a story about dedicating one's life, with its strong beliefs and morals, as a guiding light, in order to live up to the honor and memory of loved ones, while simultaneously learning how to listen to one's own beating and growing heart.
Wow. What-a-story..*phew* I believe I can also predict, that, as this is the first book I've read by this author, the other books of this series, Chronicles of Tournai, will be just as..good. Good? Yeah, and, that's probably an understatement. Probably of the year. But, this is one of those stories that has me needing to go back and read the series from the very beginning. While it's not a requirement prior to reading this particular book, it's heavily recommended by this reader.
This story is about a young man, an Earl, Lord Bastien, and the extent at which he goes about taking care of his Family, his Land, and, his Businesses. As this deeply concealed kind-hearted, family-oriented man, *sigh*.. comes into all of this abruptly as a result of an absolute tragedy, he later discovers that there is possibly more to this tragedy than what was once originally perceived. Because of this, Lord Bastien, while having what it seemed to be the world on his shoulders, tries to do what was best for not only his family, but, for also other members of the royal family who were also affected by this heart-breaking tragedy. But, as he is only human, he found he couldn't do everything, so, he sought additional help and guidance.
One of the things that I loved about this story was the successful integration, of what had originally seemed like tons of secondary characters, when in reality, was a respectable amount of additional characters, who actually made steady cameos from prior books, who also played a large part in this story as well. And, it worked. I loved them. All of my emotions were just as prevalent for the secondary characters as they were for the main ones. It is this inclusion that has me needing to read the series from the very beginning. While slightly confusing at first with the initial re-introduction of all of them, and then some, it all wound up smoothing out as the story had progressed.
As Bastien sought out the help and guidance from the secondary characters, and as he tried to continue on through life, he meets someone who will turn out to be more than the strong, powerful, helpful, and loving presence he had originally predicted. Who is this person? It's...Master Corentin..*sigh*....
This story contained almost like a dual-plot that was smooth and equally gripping. I found myself interchanging between bewilderment, and, also puddled-goo throughout the story. I couldn't believe the direction, and, yet...my heart also broke on many occasions as well, so much so that I found it difficult to read due to the seemingly ever-present waterfall of emotions. But...BUT...when THAT MOMENT, actually when THOSE MOMENTS because there were many, had occurred..I was done. Those are the reasons why I gravitate toward stories which contain dragons. I loooooove these moments.
And yet..WOAH... The mystery, the suspense, the constant, thought-provoking "Who did it?" kind of thoughts, were what made up the absolutely nail-biting moments that had me constantly on the edge of my seat. Eating? Bathroom breaks?*pfft* Forget about 'em. They were close to non-existent. While the writing was a bit lengthy, with a slower pace, at times, it was the detailed and beautiful writing, that contributed to me not being able to stop reading. And..I didn't want to either.
Even though, this seems to be my one of my longer reviews because of all the wonderful things I have to say about, The Dragon's Devotion, there were some things that..made me wish for more.. Aside from the extensive and detailed writing, while beautiful, I needed to see more of the emotional aspect from more of the characters. For what they went through, as a whole, I would think they'd be bawling buckets, and, embracing family members, or something.. Not that I wish sadness on anyone. But, I just thought there needed to be more.. Even though there wasn't a whole lot of character background and development, to an extent, and there was a part of the plot which seemed to be left open, as a whole, the story was still congruent and still really worked.
Soo...yes. I absolutely loved, The Dragon's Devotion. With its heart-breaking and devotionally heart-warming kind of love, where the characters choose love and sacrifice and protection as their guiding force. I look forward to the next time I'll be able to read a book where the beautiful and incredibly realistic words will enable me to feel like I'm soaring in the sky right along with a majestic, and, gorgeous..dragon...:)
*star rating: 4.5 stars*
August 18, 2017
I picked this book based solely on the fact that I read one of the previous books in series. While I wasn't thrilled with that oneThe Sorcerer's Guardian , it was interesting enough for me to read this one.
I haven't read the blurb before diving right in (I got the book practically immediately after asking)
so I was surprised to find out that Corentin, one of main characters was a dragon. He is hiding his nature while travelling and now he is visiting kingdom of Tournai, where he presents himself as a scholar. Unfortunately his reticence draws suspicions of kingdom's mage, Savarin. I couldn't help but like Corentin right away: he'd risked discovery by using his magic to help find kidnapped child. Now he has to defend his secrets and his people.
Bastien is born in Tournai. He is noble and head of his family. He prefers quiet life on his estate to life at royal court. His tranquil life is shattered when he receives anonymous letter claiming that his parents death wasn't an accident. He is upset and resolves to find out the truth. That's why he travels to capital where we met other members of his family and heroes from previous books in series. In fact, Bastien and Corentin met on the feast for wedding of Ethan and Tristan.
Fun fact: Bastien's brother Mathis apparently took a small book to the wedding so he would have what to read while driving in the carriage. (I can sympathize since I drag my ereader everywhere)
This is slow-paced, low-heat story but I adored detailed descriptions and savored every page.
Corentin and Bastien are drawn to each other despite the fact that both have other obligations. The POV switches between Corentin and Bastien but the story progresses smoothly. It's charming and indulgent read. Corentin is courting Bastien. He wants to spend more time with him and is trying to draw him out. He even has help from Bastien's family.
It was so sweet when he invited Bastien to lunch just because. The sex scenes were handled very circumspectly.
The plot picks up at the same time they face hurdles in their relationship. Neither of them is telling the whole truth to the other and it holds them back. It was lovely watching them come together.
The plot is frankly somewhat thin, but the story around it more than makes up for it. This is a perfect book to snuggle with on a cold, rainy day.
I received copy of this book in exchange for review.
I haven't read the blurb before diving right in (I got the book practically immediately after asking)
so I was surprised to find out that Corentin, one of main characters was a dragon. He is hiding his nature while travelling and now he is visiting kingdom of Tournai, where he presents himself as a scholar. Unfortunately his reticence draws suspicions of kingdom's mage, Savarin. I couldn't help but like Corentin right away: he'd risked discovery by using his magic to help find kidnapped child. Now he has to defend his secrets and his people.
Bastien is born in Tournai. He is noble and head of his family. He prefers quiet life on his estate to life at royal court. His tranquil life is shattered when he receives anonymous letter claiming that his parents death wasn't an accident. He is upset and resolves to find out the truth. That's why he travels to capital where we met other members of his family and heroes from previous books in series. In fact, Bastien and Corentin met on the feast for wedding of Ethan and Tristan.
Fun fact: Bastien's brother Mathis apparently took a small book to the wedding so he would have what to read while driving in the carriage. (I can sympathize since I drag my ereader everywhere)
This is slow-paced, low-heat story but I adored detailed descriptions and savored every page.
Corentin and Bastien are drawn to each other despite the fact that both have other obligations. The POV switches between Corentin and Bastien but the story progresses smoothly. It's charming and indulgent read. Corentin is courting Bastien. He wants to spend more time with him and is trying to draw him out. He even has help from Bastien's family.
It was so sweet when he invited Bastien to lunch just because. The sex scenes were handled very circumspectly.
The plot picks up at the same time they face hurdles in their relationship. Neither of them is telling the whole truth to the other and it holds them back. It was lovely watching them come together.
The plot is frankly somewhat thin, but the story around it more than makes up for it. This is a perfect book to snuggle with on a cold, rainy day.
I received copy of this book in exchange for review.
August 25, 2017
Review to follow at Scattered Thoughts and Rogue Words.
ARC provided by NineStar Press in exchange for an honest review.
ARC provided by NineStar Press in exchange for an honest review.
May 8, 2024
I keep enjoying this series more and more! In this book, Lord Bastien, cousin to Prince Philip, came to his dukedom early in life, when his parents and Philip's parents, were killed in a freak, accidental storm at sea. Now, an anonymous note indicates that their deaths may have been murder. Bastien, shaken to the core, begins his own informal investigation, but soon turns it over to the Prince and his more experienced investigators.
While attending a palace wedding, Bastien spots another guest, Master Corentin, a visiting scholar at the university. The two men are instantly drawn to each other and, despite Bastien's firm reserve and his duty to his family, he considers an affair. Nothing can come of the relationship for both men, as Bastien must eventually marry a woman and Corentin must return to his home. Corentin has his own major secret as a dragon shifter with knowledge of a remote community of shifters.
Can these two men overcome secrets and separate pathways to forge a relationship? This book has intrigue, mystery, action, a close-knit community of friends and family, passion, and a beautiful love. Somehow, I skipped Bk 4 in the series, so I'm looking forward to reading it next and then the entire series.
While attending a palace wedding, Bastien spots another guest, Master Corentin, a visiting scholar at the university. The two men are instantly drawn to each other and, despite Bastien's firm reserve and his duty to his family, he considers an affair. Nothing can come of the relationship for both men, as Bastien must eventually marry a woman and Corentin must return to his home. Corentin has his own major secret as a dragon shifter with knowledge of a remote community of shifters.
Can these two men overcome secrets and separate pathways to forge a relationship? This book has intrigue, mystery, action, a close-knit community of friends and family, passion, and a beautiful love. Somehow, I skipped Bk 4 in the series, so I'm looking forward to reading it next and then the entire series.
September 3, 2018
Book – The Dragon's Devotion (Chronicles of Tournai #5)
Author – Antonia Aquilante
Star rating - ★★★☆☆
No. of Pages – 362
Cover – Pretty
POV – 3rd person, dual character
Would I read it again – Maybe
Genre – LGBT, Paranormal, Shifter, Dragon
** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Okay, I had a lot of notes for this, as I was reading, and I've tried to condense them and eliminate the petty/stupid/irrelevant stuff, so that this review isn't 6 pages long. Please bear with me, as I try to put all my feelings into understandable terms.
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SERIES
First off, I have to admit that I'm disappointed. I've loved the Tournai series ever since I first read the first book. Sadly, this one didn't stack up to the rest of the series, for me. In fact, in some ways, it almost felt like someone else wrote it or that the author wasn't quite as invested in this book or story as they were the others. I could be totally wrong, but that's how it felt as I was reading it.
Although it states in the 'warning' that the book can be read as a standalone, I disagree. This series has a running plot throughout, flowing from one book to another, and containing intricacies of relationship, events and mentioning both too frequently for any book in the series (other than the first) being understandable as a standalone.
This book mentioned Ardunn spies, the protection barriers and their effect on Elodie, Griffin's ambassadorial scandal, Griffin's past fling with Tristan, and so many more. Elodie's fatigue is passed off as a mysterious illness, because Bastien doesn't know of her Talent, which leaves the illness question left unexplained for anyone new to the series. No one new to the series would understand Griffin's anger at Bastien, their strained relationship, nor why he cried at Tristan and Etan's wedding. All these important connections are missed, when read as a standalone.
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WRITING
Sadly, the blurb gives far too much away and leaves little to be explored or surprised by, as the story begins. There's nothing left to draw you in or make you sit on the edge of your seat, because it's all listed in the blurb, and then immediately detailed in the first two chapters, ruining the shock factor.
In fact, by the very early point of 10%, every big revelation from the blurb had happened – we knew Corentin was a dragon, that Savarin had found out, we saw Bastien planning for, then attending, Etan and Tristan's wedding. It literally ended with “their eyes met across a crowded room” insta-attraction. We know about 'the letter' and the claim that Bastien and Philip's parents were assassinated. All the huge plot points of the story. All detailed in the blurb. All revealed within the first two chapters.
I found the timeline to be immediately disorientating, as the events that took place within chapters 1 and 2 all took place outside the usual timeline. Every book in this series had followed on immediately from the other, with the exception of a Prologue reminding of previous events (such as Etan discovering Tristan was to marry).
This book spends 6% of the story exploring events that took place halfway through book 4. Taking us back in time a handful of weeks and then, in the space of a new paragraph shift, moving forward just as many weeks to the present day, once the events had been explained. There was no real definition of this timeline shift for series readers, who knew that Savarin had this visit to Corentin's office halfway through book 4 but claimed it was frustrating because Corentin wouldn't speak to him. There was no mention, back then, of anything interesting or anything of importance happening.
It rubbed me up the wrong way, because I feel tricked into believing that nothing important happened, only to now discover that it did and we weren't told. Considering Savarin's obsession with magic and Talents, I can't for a minute believe that he wouldn't at least think back on this all-important conversation once during the second half of book 4, after the conversation apparently took place, off page. It didn't ring true to the character that I've spent three books learning about.
I also had a growing sense, the more I read, that the writing style had changed. As well as there being more editing issues than I've ever noticed before, there was also more watching, thinking, and ruminating, than ever before, in the POV scenes. There was more telling than showing, and a lack of dialogue that hampered the characterisation. We saw so little of their actual personalities – because they changed completely, when alone together – that it provided two polarised views of their characters, that had me feeling confused and wondering which side of these guys was the real side.
Things that were really important to the plot and characters – like Corentin revealing his dragon nature to Philip, Vrai's venture as a cat, etc – were all glossed over and ignored, never put on-page, while things like Bastien arguing with Griffin were not only on page for quite a while, but repeated needlessly. We saw a whole lot of irrelevant things, like Bastien mooning over Corentin, or vice versa, Philip and Amory talking about their 'obvious' connection. Those pages could have been put to better use, showing us things that were far more interesting.
I also found it a surprise that the sex scenes were glossed over so much in this book. In the rest of the series, even if they aren't all shown, at least the first or most important sex scene is explored for a page or two, in a bit of detail (or a lot, depending on the book) but this one literally spared less than half a page on each scene, skimming over the details and barely mentioning them at all. It felt strange because it was so unusual for the series.
There were more repetitions throughout. Things like Corentin repeatedly thinking about how he couldn't tell anyone about his dragon nature. He repeated himself about the snow fall at home compared to Tournai at least three times. The whole idea of putting duty before love was also a heavily imposed theme, here, as it had been in previous books. Which, in itself, was annoying. Considering Philip and Cathal had both been through it, I'd have expected Bastien to realise the futility of using it as an excuse.
The little nuances were missing. Things like Amory calling Philip 'Pip' had occurred at least 3-4 times in every previous book, but never happened here once. Not even when they had 3 or 4 scenes alone together, where the situation would usually have Amory using it to comfort or in worry. The absence here felt unnatural and strange. As was the absence of Julien and Bria, who appeared briefly at 54%, for two seconds, despite having 3 or 4 scenes where both would have been expected to appear, and would have in previous books.
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CHARACTERS
Despite missing a lot of fundamental pieces, the book went on to introduce new characters who had no impact on the story. They weren't needed, didn't do anything of importance, and had no bearing on the plot, but are clearly set to be main characters in future books. Faelen and his twin brother Alexander were brought into the story, and Marcus finally had some on-page scenes. But, all throughout, there was a hint of “these are future couples”, remarking upon Maxen's friendship with Faelen (which, according to the author's blog, will be the relationship of the next book) as well as hints that Marcus and Alexander, Vrai and Griffin, will all have books of their own, in the future.
I'm skeptical about the pairing of Maxen and Faelen, because we know nothing about them. Maxen had a minor part in book 3, but hasn't appeared on page any time since then, and Faelen's only on-page presence in this book was to keep up a comedy duo slot with his twin brother. I find it curious that Griffin has been, once again, pushed aside for a newer character. I also have to question why Maxen is now set for a gay relationship when there has never been a mention of Maxen being interested in men before now. There was a perfect opportunity in book 3, when he spoke with Tristan about his feelings for Etan, but the only mention of Maxen's own inclinations revolved around women.
50% of the book was spent on Bastien and Corentin infrequently flirting, Bastien saying 'no' quite clearly with his words but not his body language, and Corentin pushing for something that Bastien didn't seem to want. It got old really quickly. In fact, I could sum up most of their interactions with this one quote: “Bastien drew in a sharp breath, his eyes widening briefly before he pulled himself back under control.” It basically describes every interaction Bastien has with Corentin in the book. It really prevented me from feeling any kind of chemistry, because it felt so unnatural to the characters and the situations.
Bastien had a complete personality switch from a prim and proper Earl to a kind of simpering, girly character that didn't feel natural. He switched so quickly from pushing Corentin away to basking in every look that it felt forced. The insta-love was strong, here, for sure. As was the repetition, especially for Bastien, who was constantly tingling, shivering, fluttering, and his stomaching 'swooping' or 'curling' up on the inside at any slight contact from Corentin. It all got a little flowery, whenever they were together, and not at all like his character.
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PLOT
Sadly, I can't say much about the plotting. For far too long, not much happened.
For a book called “Dragon's Devotion” the dragon was almost like a secondary character, and the entire aspect of dragon Talent was an afterthought. The first transformation came at 38%, the second at 70% and then the final change at the end of the book. Corentin used his fire Talent maybe twice and kept up an internal monologue about how he couldn't ever let anyone find out. Then, off page, told everyone because it meant he could save Bastien. For a book supposedly about a dragon, it wasn't about a dragon.
We didn't even get a big scene or some confusion, some worry that Bastien had been lied to, that he'd begun an 'affair' with someone who had continually lied to him. He just accepted it without question, being far more excited than he was curious or cautious. Someone was trying to kill him and had killed his parents, but he didn't even stop to wonder if he was being used or if Corentin might be the threat they were searching for. I found it all a little hard to swallow. This made not seeing Philip's reaction – which should have included this suspicion, some anger, and some political caution, at least – all the more jarring. This was a vital part of the plot – Philip's trust, Corentin's fears being faced head-on and having him do what he swore he'd never do, as well as Savarin's part in it all – that was never shown and left not only unanswered questions, but frustration and confusion.
The rest of the book was about the assassination of Philip and Bastien's parents, which makes no sense to me. At all. Because, they were killed “several years ago”, so that someone could influence Bastien/Philip in royal/political/financial ways. Yet, despite killing their parents and trying to weasel into the running of their estates, no other attempt was ever made. I mean...why? What prevented them from trying again? What stopped them from trying a different route? Why did they just give up and do nothing until some mystery guy who was supposed to be dead decided – for no logical reason – to leave his hiding place and send a note to Bastien?
No explanation is ever given for the timing or reasoning and that bothers me. It felt like this part of the plot was used to introduce the danger and action that we've come to expect from the series (book 1 – assassination plot; book 2 – kidnapping/spies; book 3 – kidnapping; book 4 – attack by bandits) without actually being thought through to the end. Similar to the dragon aspect, it felt like a secondary thought, someone used to provide impetus and a reason for Corentin to expose his dragon nature, but that wasn't fully explored.
Add on to that that it too 62% of the story before anything actually happened. Until this point, it had all been flirting, Loriet and Marcus investigating in the background with the occasional report to Philip, and Bastien struggling over his feelings for Corentin. At 62% the story actually picked up pace and there was a hint of danger, excitement, and action. But it all fizzled away quickly into nothing much happening, yet again. And, to be honest, if I wasn't trying so hard to give this book a good chance of improving and catching my attention because I love the series so much, I would have stopped reading before the halfway mark and missed it. It just took far too long to get to the point.
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OVERALL
To be perfectly honest, this book wasn't what I'd hoped for. That's partly my fault. I had expectations for the book that just weren't met and that's my fault for expecting them and not just letting the book tell the story. Some of the reasons are stupid and totally about my brain being ridiculous. Some of the reasons are logical, due to expectations the previous books in the series had dished out and then failed to deliver on.
I miss the old covers. This one is pretty and would normally be great, but it just doesn't match the awesomeness of the rest of the series and, to be quite honest, if I'd loved this story, my OCD would have had me crying just attempting to put the paperback next to the other Tournai books on my bookshelf. However, I'm sorry to say that won't be happening. I just didn't love this one enough to justify buying it in paperback.
I didn't want a book for Bastien. I'm sorry, but I just found him boring, in the very little we'd seen of him in the series so far. I was rooting for Griffin and seriously disappointed when (in the first 10%) he felt far too much like a rehash of Tristan's tragic unrequired love character from book 1. He improved after that, becoming stronger, but he still felt like an entirely different person than he'd been in the previous books. Griffin became serious, contemplative, secretive and a little more mature, but a whole lot less fun loving and happy. Like other characters in this book, familiar faces became somewhat unrecognisable.
I was seriously skeptical of the pairing, especially since they hadn't been prepared for their own novel in the way the rest of the books in the series had, e.g. Etan getting a big part in books 1 and 2 before getting his own story in book 3; Savarin and Loriet being on-page frequently within books 1-3 before getting book 4 for their love affair. Bastien had barely had two conversations the entire series, and Corentin briefly appeared as a friend of Etan's and had one intriguing moment when he used his Talent to help find Bria, but the only other time he seemed at all interesting was when he dodged Savarin in book 4. Other than that, we know next to nothing about these two, and that made me nervous. Why should I care about them finding love, if I wasn't even interested in them?
I'd hoped for a huge Dragon Revelation throughout the novel. I wanted there to be this big secret – that we, the readers, knew Corentin was a dragon, but no one else in the story did until the big reveal – that was constantly coming between the couple, and was a massive part of the plot. That didn't happen. It was more about the 'accident' that killed Bastien and Philip's parents than anything to do with Corentin's dragon heritage and that is a huge blow.
I totally accept that I expected too much of this book, but I expected it because of the previous books. Because I've never opened a Tournai book and not felt that distinctive Tournai magic from almost page one. Until now.
The book was long. I mean, 300+ pages is normally considered a decent or long length for a book, in my opinion, but this one felt long. It felt like it too forever to read. Probably because I didn't really enjoy it, though parts of it were good and better than other parts. I just, for the first time in this series, found myself not particularly excited about reading it. I didn't itch to get to the next chapter or loathe to put it down to eat or do something else.
Too little happened for far too long. There was no curiosity, no intrigue, no real dilemmas to worry over or anything happening that made me stop and thinking about it when I wasn't reading, or that pushed me to keep reading. I could have, though it's hard to say, easily DNF'd this book at three or four points before the halfway mark. I'm glad I read it, as it answered one or two questions I had, but it won't be on my re-read list and it won't be joining the others in the series on my bookcase.
As a standalone – if you choose to follow the author's advice that it could be read as such – it makes no sense. There are too many instances, events and references to previous events for it to make sense to anyone who hadn't read the entire series in order. I came straight into reading it, after reading books 1-4 and even I had to stop and go back to check things.
As a series novel – it doesn't fit in. It doesn't have that same feeling of Tournai magic, it doesn't flow in the same way, and it doesn't drag me in. Small, but important, nuances were missing, that completely changed characters into people I didn't recognise or feel were being authentic to who they had been for all four books until this point.
Either way, I put most of my disappointment down to every important aspect of the plot being given away in the blurb and leaving me nothing to look forward to. The romance was okay. The action, when it happened, was good. The idea for the plot – the assassination – was fine and could have been great, with a bit more focus on it and a more well rounded explanation of motivations. But, overall, I feel like it was a whole lot of small plots that didn't merge together well. The characters didn't hold my attention and I constantly felt like there was an indefinable something missing.
Sadly, the weakest of the series, in my opinion. And, though I'm disappointed to say it, I'm not sure I'll be reading the next book, either. This may be the end of my journey through Tournai.
Author – Antonia Aquilante
Star rating - ★★★☆☆
No. of Pages – 362
Cover – Pretty
POV – 3rd person, dual character
Would I read it again – Maybe
Genre – LGBT, Paranormal, Shifter, Dragon
** I WAS GIVEN THIS BOOK FOR MY READING PLEASURE **
Okay, I had a lot of notes for this, as I was reading, and I've tried to condense them and eliminate the petty/stupid/irrelevant stuff, so that this review isn't 6 pages long. Please bear with me, as I try to put all my feelings into understandable terms.
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SERIES
First off, I have to admit that I'm disappointed. I've loved the Tournai series ever since I first read the first book. Sadly, this one didn't stack up to the rest of the series, for me. In fact, in some ways, it almost felt like someone else wrote it or that the author wasn't quite as invested in this book or story as they were the others. I could be totally wrong, but that's how it felt as I was reading it.
Although it states in the 'warning' that the book can be read as a standalone, I disagree. This series has a running plot throughout, flowing from one book to another, and containing intricacies of relationship, events and mentioning both too frequently for any book in the series (other than the first) being understandable as a standalone.
This book mentioned Ardunn spies, the protection barriers and their effect on Elodie, Griffin's ambassadorial scandal, Griffin's past fling with Tristan, and so many more. Elodie's fatigue is passed off as a mysterious illness, because Bastien doesn't know of her Talent, which leaves the illness question left unexplained for anyone new to the series. No one new to the series would understand Griffin's anger at Bastien, their strained relationship, nor why he cried at Tristan and Etan's wedding. All these important connections are missed, when read as a standalone.
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WRITING
Sadly, the blurb gives far too much away and leaves little to be explored or surprised by, as the story begins. There's nothing left to draw you in or make you sit on the edge of your seat, because it's all listed in the blurb, and then immediately detailed in the first two chapters, ruining the shock factor.
In fact, by the very early point of 10%, every big revelation from the blurb had happened – we knew Corentin was a dragon, that Savarin had found out, we saw Bastien planning for, then attending, Etan and Tristan's wedding. It literally ended with “their eyes met across a crowded room” insta-attraction. We know about 'the letter' and the claim that Bastien and Philip's parents were assassinated. All the huge plot points of the story. All detailed in the blurb. All revealed within the first two chapters.
I found the timeline to be immediately disorientating, as the events that took place within chapters 1 and 2 all took place outside the usual timeline. Every book in this series had followed on immediately from the other, with the exception of a Prologue reminding of previous events (such as Etan discovering Tristan was to marry).
This book spends 6% of the story exploring events that took place halfway through book 4. Taking us back in time a handful of weeks and then, in the space of a new paragraph shift, moving forward just as many weeks to the present day, once the events had been explained. There was no real definition of this timeline shift for series readers, who knew that Savarin had this visit to Corentin's office halfway through book 4 but claimed it was frustrating because Corentin wouldn't speak to him. There was no mention, back then, of anything interesting or anything of importance happening.
It rubbed me up the wrong way, because I feel tricked into believing that nothing important happened, only to now discover that it did and we weren't told. Considering Savarin's obsession with magic and Talents, I can't for a minute believe that he wouldn't at least think back on this all-important conversation once during the second half of book 4, after the conversation apparently took place, off page. It didn't ring true to the character that I've spent three books learning about.
I also had a growing sense, the more I read, that the writing style had changed. As well as there being more editing issues than I've ever noticed before, there was also more watching, thinking, and ruminating, than ever before, in the POV scenes. There was more telling than showing, and a lack of dialogue that hampered the characterisation. We saw so little of their actual personalities – because they changed completely, when alone together – that it provided two polarised views of their characters, that had me feeling confused and wondering which side of these guys was the real side.
Things that were really important to the plot and characters – like Corentin revealing his dragon nature to Philip, Vrai's venture as a cat, etc – were all glossed over and ignored, never put on-page, while things like Bastien arguing with Griffin were not only on page for quite a while, but repeated needlessly. We saw a whole lot of irrelevant things, like Bastien mooning over Corentin, or vice versa, Philip and Amory talking about their 'obvious' connection. Those pages could have been put to better use, showing us things that were far more interesting.
I also found it a surprise that the sex scenes were glossed over so much in this book. In the rest of the series, even if they aren't all shown, at least the first or most important sex scene is explored for a page or two, in a bit of detail (or a lot, depending on the book) but this one literally spared less than half a page on each scene, skimming over the details and barely mentioning them at all. It felt strange because it was so unusual for the series.
There were more repetitions throughout. Things like Corentin repeatedly thinking about how he couldn't tell anyone about his dragon nature. He repeated himself about the snow fall at home compared to Tournai at least three times. The whole idea of putting duty before love was also a heavily imposed theme, here, as it had been in previous books. Which, in itself, was annoying. Considering Philip and Cathal had both been through it, I'd have expected Bastien to realise the futility of using it as an excuse.
The little nuances were missing. Things like Amory calling Philip 'Pip' had occurred at least 3-4 times in every previous book, but never happened here once. Not even when they had 3 or 4 scenes alone together, where the situation would usually have Amory using it to comfort or in worry. The absence here felt unnatural and strange. As was the absence of Julien and Bria, who appeared briefly at 54%, for two seconds, despite having 3 or 4 scenes where both would have been expected to appear, and would have in previous books.
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CHARACTERS
Despite missing a lot of fundamental pieces, the book went on to introduce new characters who had no impact on the story. They weren't needed, didn't do anything of importance, and had no bearing on the plot, but are clearly set to be main characters in future books. Faelen and his twin brother Alexander were brought into the story, and Marcus finally had some on-page scenes. But, all throughout, there was a hint of “these are future couples”, remarking upon Maxen's friendship with Faelen (which, according to the author's blog, will be the relationship of the next book) as well as hints that Marcus and Alexander, Vrai and Griffin, will all have books of their own, in the future.
I'm skeptical about the pairing of Maxen and Faelen, because we know nothing about them. Maxen had a minor part in book 3, but hasn't appeared on page any time since then, and Faelen's only on-page presence in this book was to keep up a comedy duo slot with his twin brother. I find it curious that Griffin has been, once again, pushed aside for a newer character. I also have to question why Maxen is now set for a gay relationship when there has never been a mention of Maxen being interested in men before now. There was a perfect opportunity in book 3, when he spoke with Tristan about his feelings for Etan, but the only mention of Maxen's own inclinations revolved around women.
50% of the book was spent on Bastien and Corentin infrequently flirting, Bastien saying 'no' quite clearly with his words but not his body language, and Corentin pushing for something that Bastien didn't seem to want. It got old really quickly. In fact, I could sum up most of their interactions with this one quote: “Bastien drew in a sharp breath, his eyes widening briefly before he pulled himself back under control.” It basically describes every interaction Bastien has with Corentin in the book. It really prevented me from feeling any kind of chemistry, because it felt so unnatural to the characters and the situations.
Bastien had a complete personality switch from a prim and proper Earl to a kind of simpering, girly character that didn't feel natural. He switched so quickly from pushing Corentin away to basking in every look that it felt forced. The insta-love was strong, here, for sure. As was the repetition, especially for Bastien, who was constantly tingling, shivering, fluttering, and his stomaching 'swooping' or 'curling' up on the inside at any slight contact from Corentin. It all got a little flowery, whenever they were together, and not at all like his character.
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PLOT
Sadly, I can't say much about the plotting. For far too long, not much happened.
For a book called “Dragon's Devotion” the dragon was almost like a secondary character, and the entire aspect of dragon Talent was an afterthought. The first transformation came at 38%, the second at 70% and then the final change at the end of the book. Corentin used his fire Talent maybe twice and kept up an internal monologue about how he couldn't ever let anyone find out. Then, off page, told everyone because it meant he could save Bastien. For a book supposedly about a dragon, it wasn't about a dragon.
We didn't even get a big scene or some confusion, some worry that Bastien had been lied to, that he'd begun an 'affair' with someone who had continually lied to him. He just accepted it without question, being far more excited than he was curious or cautious. Someone was trying to kill him and had killed his parents, but he didn't even stop to wonder if he was being used or if Corentin might be the threat they were searching for. I found it all a little hard to swallow. This made not seeing Philip's reaction – which should have included this suspicion, some anger, and some political caution, at least – all the more jarring. This was a vital part of the plot – Philip's trust, Corentin's fears being faced head-on and having him do what he swore he'd never do, as well as Savarin's part in it all – that was never shown and left not only unanswered questions, but frustration and confusion.
The rest of the book was about the assassination of Philip and Bastien's parents, which makes no sense to me. At all. Because, they were killed “several years ago”, so that someone could influence Bastien/Philip in royal/political/financial ways. Yet, despite killing their parents and trying to weasel into the running of their estates, no other attempt was ever made. I mean...why? What prevented them from trying again? What stopped them from trying a different route? Why did they just give up and do nothing until some mystery guy who was supposed to be dead decided – for no logical reason – to leave his hiding place and send a note to Bastien?
No explanation is ever given for the timing or reasoning and that bothers me. It felt like this part of the plot was used to introduce the danger and action that we've come to expect from the series (book 1 – assassination plot; book 2 – kidnapping/spies; book 3 – kidnapping; book 4 – attack by bandits) without actually being thought through to the end. Similar to the dragon aspect, it felt like a secondary thought, someone used to provide impetus and a reason for Corentin to expose his dragon nature, but that wasn't fully explored.
Add on to that that it too 62% of the story before anything actually happened. Until this point, it had all been flirting, Loriet and Marcus investigating in the background with the occasional report to Philip, and Bastien struggling over his feelings for Corentin. At 62% the story actually picked up pace and there was a hint of danger, excitement, and action. But it all fizzled away quickly into nothing much happening, yet again. And, to be honest, if I wasn't trying so hard to give this book a good chance of improving and catching my attention because I love the series so much, I would have stopped reading before the halfway mark and missed it. It just took far too long to get to the point.
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OVERALL
To be perfectly honest, this book wasn't what I'd hoped for. That's partly my fault. I had expectations for the book that just weren't met and that's my fault for expecting them and not just letting the book tell the story. Some of the reasons are stupid and totally about my brain being ridiculous. Some of the reasons are logical, due to expectations the previous books in the series had dished out and then failed to deliver on.
I miss the old covers. This one is pretty and would normally be great, but it just doesn't match the awesomeness of the rest of the series and, to be quite honest, if I'd loved this story, my OCD would have had me crying just attempting to put the paperback next to the other Tournai books on my bookshelf. However, I'm sorry to say that won't be happening. I just didn't love this one enough to justify buying it in paperback.
I didn't want a book for Bastien. I'm sorry, but I just found him boring, in the very little we'd seen of him in the series so far. I was rooting for Griffin and seriously disappointed when (in the first 10%) he felt far too much like a rehash of Tristan's tragic unrequired love character from book 1. He improved after that, becoming stronger, but he still felt like an entirely different person than he'd been in the previous books. Griffin became serious, contemplative, secretive and a little more mature, but a whole lot less fun loving and happy. Like other characters in this book, familiar faces became somewhat unrecognisable.
I was seriously skeptical of the pairing, especially since they hadn't been prepared for their own novel in the way the rest of the books in the series had, e.g. Etan getting a big part in books 1 and 2 before getting his own story in book 3; Savarin and Loriet being on-page frequently within books 1-3 before getting book 4 for their love affair. Bastien had barely had two conversations the entire series, and Corentin briefly appeared as a friend of Etan's and had one intriguing moment when he used his Talent to help find Bria, but the only other time he seemed at all interesting was when he dodged Savarin in book 4. Other than that, we know next to nothing about these two, and that made me nervous. Why should I care about them finding love, if I wasn't even interested in them?
I'd hoped for a huge Dragon Revelation throughout the novel. I wanted there to be this big secret – that we, the readers, knew Corentin was a dragon, but no one else in the story did until the big reveal – that was constantly coming between the couple, and was a massive part of the plot. That didn't happen. It was more about the 'accident' that killed Bastien and Philip's parents than anything to do with Corentin's dragon heritage and that is a huge blow.
I totally accept that I expected too much of this book, but I expected it because of the previous books. Because I've never opened a Tournai book and not felt that distinctive Tournai magic from almost page one. Until now.
The book was long. I mean, 300+ pages is normally considered a decent or long length for a book, in my opinion, but this one felt long. It felt like it too forever to read. Probably because I didn't really enjoy it, though parts of it were good and better than other parts. I just, for the first time in this series, found myself not particularly excited about reading it. I didn't itch to get to the next chapter or loathe to put it down to eat or do something else.
Too little happened for far too long. There was no curiosity, no intrigue, no real dilemmas to worry over or anything happening that made me stop and thinking about it when I wasn't reading, or that pushed me to keep reading. I could have, though it's hard to say, easily DNF'd this book at three or four points before the halfway mark. I'm glad I read it, as it answered one or two questions I had, but it won't be on my re-read list and it won't be joining the others in the series on my bookcase.
As a standalone – if you choose to follow the author's advice that it could be read as such – it makes no sense. There are too many instances, events and references to previous events for it to make sense to anyone who hadn't read the entire series in order. I came straight into reading it, after reading books 1-4 and even I had to stop and go back to check things.
As a series novel – it doesn't fit in. It doesn't have that same feeling of Tournai magic, it doesn't flow in the same way, and it doesn't drag me in. Small, but important, nuances were missing, that completely changed characters into people I didn't recognise or feel were being authentic to who they had been for all four books until this point.
Either way, I put most of my disappointment down to every important aspect of the plot being given away in the blurb and leaving me nothing to look forward to. The romance was okay. The action, when it happened, was good. The idea for the plot – the assassination – was fine and could have been great, with a bit more focus on it and a more well rounded explanation of motivations. But, overall, I feel like it was a whole lot of small plots that didn't merge together well. The characters didn't hold my attention and I constantly felt like there was an indefinable something missing.
Sadly, the weakest of the series, in my opinion. And, though I'm disappointed to say it, I'm not sure I'll be reading the next book, either. This may be the end of my journey through Tournai.
April 13, 2020
I was worried going into this because I'm not a huge fan of fantasy. I don't tend to enjoy the world building, and often find the time it takes for the story to start tedious. I found a little of that true here, more in just the sheer number of characters than the world building, but again that's me, not the story. And, had i read the first books in the series i would have known a number of the characters already
I loved Bastien and Corentin together. I loved Corentin's dragon, and that he could speak in that form. I liked that this didn't stray into fated mates, but that their connection was their own. I loved how much they reveled in kissing just for kissing itself. It was sweet and gently sexy. I enjoyed the secondary characters a lot as well, it made me want to read their stories as well. The mystery was good, slightly obvious, but interesting.
A good book, that even I, as someone who avoids fantasy, quite enjoyed.
I loved Bastien and Corentin together. I loved Corentin's dragon, and that he could speak in that form. I liked that this didn't stray into fated mates, but that their connection was their own. I loved how much they reveled in kissing just for kissing itself. It was sweet and gently sexy. I enjoyed the secondary characters a lot as well, it made me want to read their stories as well. The mystery was good, slightly obvious, but interesting.
A good book, that even I, as someone who avoids fantasy, quite enjoyed.
September 22, 2017
I can't remember if the rest of the series was as much of a slow burn as this one. It seemed like the attraction was instant, but the development of the relationship physically was really slow. I liked the story how it was. The characters were great, the story too, my only issue is, well I guess the story in relation to the title. I read the blurb. Fine. What gets me though is that I almost expected the story to focus on Corentin and his secret as a dragon, his people and Bastien a lot more than it did. I was hoping that his secret got out in a much bigger way that drew the attention of Corentin's king and he had to be the mediator while balancing his romance with Bastien. It didn't. That's ok the story was still pretty good.
October 20, 2017
A beautifully written fantasy romance.
This is a fifth book in a series, but it could be read as a standalone. I had no trouble understanding the workings of this world, and we do get to meet a lot of secondary characters that feature in previous books.
The story itself is very slow-paced, almost leisurely, but it flows nicely, and doesn't lag. The romance is very sweet and beautiful, and the characters are well-rounded and fleshed out. I would have liked for the action to be a little more prominent, but that is mostly a personal preference of mine.
I enjoyed it very much, and definitely will be checking out the rest of the series.
This is a fifth book in a series, but it could be read as a standalone. I had no trouble understanding the workings of this world, and we do get to meet a lot of secondary characters that feature in previous books.
The story itself is very slow-paced, almost leisurely, but it flows nicely, and doesn't lag. The romance is very sweet and beautiful, and the characters are well-rounded and fleshed out. I would have liked for the action to be a little more prominent, but that is mostly a personal preference of mine.
I enjoyed it very much, and definitely will be checking out the rest of the series.
October 4, 2018
Antonia draws you back into Tournai and you will definitely want to go. Even if you haven't read all the books in this series, you can still pick up the story. Each love story she tells is as compelling as the last--and this time, dragons!!
November 15, 2017
Okay, I've read five. Now, where's some more? Love this series! Great writing, characters and stories.
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November 14, 2018 5 Hearts
I’m a fan of this series and this world that Antonia Aquilante builds in a fantastical country named Tournai. From the first book to this one, I have been introduced to a magical world where people have talents such as magic or the ability to turn into an animal. So far we have only seen large cats and, of course, I adored being a witness to all of it. We’ve met Corentin from Etan and Tristan’s book and know a bit about him but we don’t know everything. When Master Savarin decides to question Master Corentin about his talents and what the marks on his back mean, we learn that this dark man with the violet eyes is a dragon.
I absolutely love dragons and Corentin did not disappoint but I am getting ahead of myself here.
Corentin as a respected faculty member of the university and colleague of Etan’s is invited to Etan and Tristan’s wedding. There he sees a young man who has captured his attention and one he decides he must meet. This man, Bastien is there with his three younger siblings and is the cousin of Prince Philip and Etan (Etan was Prince Philip’s cousin on his father’s side, while Bastien was Philip’s cousin on his mother’s.) We get bits of Bastien before the wedding, learning how his parents died in the same sailing accident as Philip’s parents and how he was thrust into the parenting role of his younger siblings. It’s not a position that Bastien despises it’s just one that doesn’t allow the young man to have a life outside of his family. That will all change when the violet eyes across the room lock with his and a conversational walk leads to a kiss that will have Bastien and Corentin soon seeking the other out whenever they can.
What this series gives in each book is a delicious slow burn romance and once again, we get is delivered delectably here with Bastien and Corentin. I adored how Corentin saw Bastien and was determined for him to know how desired he was and how the masses saw him. Bastien is humble, he has done what he needed to do to take care of his siblings, but it’s about time for Bastien to get someone who will show their devotion, loyalty and love to him and only him. I guess it’s a good things dragons like to hoard beautiful things, isn’t it?
Now there is more than the romance to this story. We have the folklore of what happened to the dragons and how badly Corentin wants to keep his talent a secret. We know that they royalty of Tournai can turn into large cats so it’s something they understand about secrecy. But there is also a mystery and it’s presented via Bastien when he shows Philip an anonymous note saying their parents deaths weren’t an accident…they were murdered. Thus begins the hunt for the truth of what happened to both sets of parents and the danger it brings to those involved. I will say the danger led to some pretty damn swoon worthy, risk everything for love moments that wrapped around my hopeless romantic heart like the warmest hug.
I absolutely adore when Bastien gets to see Corentin as a dragon. With every book when a talent is revealed with shifting, it’s stunning and to see how Bastien reacted to Corentin changing was lovely. He was so caught up in all of it, the dragon’s smile the beauty of the scales that there was no hesitation to accept that the ginormous dragon in front of him was also the man he was coming to love.
As always the author blends every element of this story beautifully as she weaves us into the depths of the growing romance between Bastien and Corentin. The story flows off the page in with a lyrical symmetry that the reader just needs to breathe it all in and enjoy watching it happen. That is what I do with this series, I let the words transport me to a fantasy realm where all of this exists, where men turn into dragons and fly through the sky. Where courted earls get to do what their heart tells them and not martyr themselves to the obligation of family when the family wants only to see him happy. And where a man who can turn into a dragon, finds safety in sharing his secret with a lover, a friend and those within a trusted circle of extended family.
Yup. I loved this one but it’s no surprise.
I’m a fan of this series and this world that Antonia Aquilante builds in a fantastical country named Tournai. From the first book to this one, I have been introduced to a magical world where people have talents such as magic or the ability to turn into an animal. So far we have only seen large cats and, of course, I adored being a witness to all of it. We’ve met Corentin from Etan and Tristan’s book and know a bit about him but we don’t know everything. When Master Savarin decides to question Master Corentin about his talents and what the marks on his back mean, we learn that this dark man with the violet eyes is a dragon.
“Once upon a time, dragons were plentiful in the world.”
I absolutely love dragons and Corentin did not disappoint but I am getting ahead of myself here.
Corentin as a respected faculty member of the university and colleague of Etan’s is invited to Etan and Tristan’s wedding. There he sees a young man who has captured his attention and one he decides he must meet. This man, Bastien is there with his three younger siblings and is the cousin of Prince Philip and Etan (Etan was Prince Philip’s cousin on his father’s side, while Bastien was Philip’s cousin on his mother’s.) We get bits of Bastien before the wedding, learning how his parents died in the same sailing accident as Philip’s parents and how he was thrust into the parenting role of his younger siblings. It’s not a position that Bastien despises it’s just one that doesn’t allow the young man to have a life outside of his family. That will all change when the violet eyes across the room lock with his and a conversational walk leads to a kiss that will have Bastien and Corentin soon seeking the other out whenever they can.
He’d done his best to drive Bastien insane with wanting, to drive the sadness from his eyes, and ended up utterly undone himself.
What this series gives in each book is a delicious slow burn romance and once again, we get is delivered delectably here with Bastien and Corentin. I adored how Corentin saw Bastien and was determined for him to know how desired he was and how the masses saw him. Bastien is humble, he has done what he needed to do to take care of his siblings, but it’s about time for Bastien to get someone who will show their devotion, loyalty and love to him and only him. I guess it’s a good things dragons like to hoard beautiful things, isn’t it?
Now there is more than the romance to this story. We have the folklore of what happened to the dragons and how badly Corentin wants to keep his talent a secret. We know that they royalty of Tournai can turn into large cats so it’s something they understand about secrecy. But there is also a mystery and it’s presented via Bastien when he shows Philip an anonymous note saying their parents deaths weren’t an accident…they were murdered. Thus begins the hunt for the truth of what happened to both sets of parents and the danger it brings to those involved. I will say the danger led to some pretty damn swoon worthy, risk everything for love moments that wrapped around my hopeless romantic heart like the warmest hug.
“There’s more to my Talent than that.”
“Just tell me.”
“I’m not sure how.” Corentin took a breath. “What do you know of dragons?”
I absolutely adore when Bastien gets to see Corentin as a dragon. With every book when a talent is revealed with shifting, it’s stunning and to see how Bastien reacted to Corentin changing was lovely. He was so caught up in all of it, the dragon’s smile the beauty of the scales that there was no hesitation to accept that the ginormous dragon in front of him was also the man he was coming to love.
As always the author blends every element of this story beautifully as she weaves us into the depths of the growing romance between Bastien and Corentin. The story flows off the page in with a lyrical symmetry that the reader just needs to breathe it all in and enjoy watching it happen. That is what I do with this series, I let the words transport me to a fantasy realm where all of this exists, where men turn into dragons and fly through the sky. Where courted earls get to do what their heart tells them and not martyr themselves to the obligation of family when the family wants only to see him happy. And where a man who can turn into a dragon, finds safety in sharing his secret with a lover, a friend and those within a trusted circle of extended family.
Yup. I loved this one but it’s no surprise.
December 18, 2017
This is the continuation of a lovely series. The love is these books is the sweet heartwarming kind that makes you say aww. Usually historical settings are somewhat darker and have a more oppressive atmosphere but this series is the exception. I’d love to live in Tournai with its magic and friendly inhabitants. This series is definitely a great comfort read and this book is par for the course.
Bastien is an earl and he is drowning under the weight of his duties and obligations. Corentin also has obligations, he can’t reveal the secrets of his kingdom and his Talent to outsiders and he travels the world to prevent those secrets from leaking. When they meet the attraction is instant and palpable and from their they begin an affair. Unfortunately, not all is well in Tournai and they have to deal with a threat on Bastien’s life as well as their separate obligations forcing them apart.
The HEA is sweet and once again, empowering for the entire cast of characters. This book set up even more potential sequels and I’ll definitely read anything else in this series because all the books are such great cuddle up and read books. They aren’t high heat but that makes sense given the overall tone of the series. This one stands out in the series though, because how can you pass up a beautiful purple dragon? My only disappointment is that, as great as the cover was, I liked the covers that depicted the characters better.
Bastien is an earl and he is drowning under the weight of his duties and obligations. Corentin also has obligations, he can’t reveal the secrets of his kingdom and his Talent to outsiders and he travels the world to prevent those secrets from leaking. When they meet the attraction is instant and palpable and from their they begin an affair. Unfortunately, not all is well in Tournai and they have to deal with a threat on Bastien’s life as well as their separate obligations forcing them apart.
The HEA is sweet and once again, empowering for the entire cast of characters. This book set up even more potential sequels and I’ll definitely read anything else in this series because all the books are such great cuddle up and read books. They aren’t high heat but that makes sense given the overall tone of the series. This one stands out in the series though, because how can you pass up a beautiful purple dragon? My only disappointment is that, as great as the cover was, I liked the covers that depicted the characters better.
September 26, 2017
Murder investigation with magic added
An Earl and a ruling Prince find parents were murdered and investigation begins. Earls romance with Dragon shifter complicates things. Well written and proofread. But if you like intelligent fantasy with low body count and gay romance. HEA
An Earl and a ruling Prince find parents were murdered and investigation begins. Earls romance with Dragon shifter complicates things. Well written and proofread. But if you like intelligent fantasy with low body count and gay romance. HEA
November 5, 2023
It is a very enjoyable series.
I criticized a few things in reviews of the first 3 books. The author seems to have found the balance between romance and storyline by book four.
Now I'm just sitting back and enjoying the ride for the rest of the series.
I criticized a few things in reviews of the first 3 books. The author seems to have found the balance between romance and storyline by book four.
Now I'm just sitting back and enjoying the ride for the rest of the series.
September 10, 2017
Another fantastic novel in the Tournai series! This may be my favorite yet!
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