I was going back and forth between a 3 and a 4 for this book. I'm feeling like it was a solid 3.75, so we'll just round it up to 4. Unfortunately the way a book ends is what usually determines how I feel about it, regardless of everything else that may have contributed to my overall feelings about the book. AND a lot of what I didn't like might be things that a person reading fiction typically won't have an issue with, so take my review with a grain of salt.
HERE COME THE SPOILERS!
So Brandon did it. Him being guilty crossed my mind, but I wasn't suspecting him the whole time I read. I was suspicious of him for two reasons; first was when he told the police he blacked out after finding Cassandra's body, and the second reason was just because we were getting so far into the book with literally no solid suspects other than Brandon and the cop Jabar. So the ending wasn't as shocking for me as I would have liked for it to have been. The book was really focused on Brandon being a fucking hoe who was into rough sex. I try not to say how an author should have told their story, but it would have been good for the author to put a real red herring in there. Ruby and the insurance policy wasn't convincing. It was too obvious, but in the way you brush off, not in the way that has you thinking. Like no clues were laid out for the reader to wonder if a certain person other than Brandon was the one who killed Cassandra. Now the other thing that kind of had me thinking Brandon did it was how as the book progressed, you could see that this nigga was a dickhead. Little by little I was like ok...is he the protagonist? Because I don't like him. He is a fuck boy.
I also didn't like the implication that Brandon was killing people because he was mentally ill. Not because I'm a social justice warrior or nothing. I can tolerate the most offensive of shit for entertainment purposes most of the time. But it was just inaccurate. If he was on medication, what was it for? Why wouldn't there have been indications of his mental illness prior to him revealing it at the end when telling Jabar everything he did? He was a bad guy, maybe he had a personality disorder, but I wasn't liking the fact that he had to take drugs to black out after Cassandra's murder so the police would find him, but he hid those pills in Ruby's house, so he wasn't taking them when he killed everybody else, but can't remember where he put the bodies. I don't know if what I'm trying to explain is coming across, but the mental illness is a cop out. Instead of just making it where he's a manipulative evil man, the mental illness is thrown in and it doesn't line up. Again, I know most people can suspend disbelief to the point where something like that wouldn't be bothersome, but I'm one of those people who are really interested in mental health and psychology. It just seemed like a some stereotypes about mentally ill people were thrown on to justify his actions. Again, not offended, it just wasn't believable to me.
Honestly, the story kept my attention. I will probably read more by this author.