Poetry. In her highly anticipated debut collection, FORT NOT, Emily Skillings creates an "atmosphere for encounter," akin to searching for meaning through lip-reading. We soon realize that these poems are speaking to us in tones that appear elegantly improvisational. And while the poems may "shout from the periphery," it is not without reason, but because of their desire to direct the reader to a created space--a world that allows for "curved logic," "that dirty, off-gold color," "middle-class nausea," and "metallic power" to coexist. The mysteries here embrace a natural, physical music, pulling us into a moving current of painted images, poetic histories, and draped bodies evaporating to reveal others behind them, as quickly as they appear.
i have really loved the poetry i've read from emily skillings in online literary magazines....i'll be honest though i did not know what the hell was happening in this collection 83% of the time....and that's on me. too experimental, too abstracted, too elevated, and i am not yet ready to receive the messages she is transmitting to me here. will be back later for a reread, girl, sorry for the placeholder rating....
Garden of Slow Forms In the middle of your life it is a Sunday. Shocked blossoms rush, network, embed freely.
You decide to take your new throat for a walk And track a softening center ring of thought.
The daylight is scrolling itself to death. Everything presses into an atmospheric parfait.
Objects held by mounds of soil On-and-off themselves in neat rows.
The available openings open wider-open. Slits, in bunches, grow wild terminals.
A lake explodes in a nearby district. A heavy storied treeline stores a form.
Instrument of indecision, the Calabash harp, Combs into a cream-colored fog. (4)
The Banks Lately I’ve been thinking about how I might like to write a series of poems as single, unbroken lines that extend far beyond the borders of any screen or page, penetrating rightspace as far as they need to in order to magnetize and attract their particular streaming content and shape. I say “shape” knowing full well that lines would be line- looking, but imagining that they (through careful shifts of rhythm, word length, and elliptical constructive maneuvers) could somehow curve, pool, or orbit their way out of predetermined linearity, like a perpetually self-revising river bank or algal bloom forming via the scrolling and gathering straightway. In this way, an augmenting line becomes a walk along a landscape, stopping and starting, pulled towards a theory of unread sky—non-statements moving past the usual present and standardized textual demarcations into dunes of words & rafts of collective swerves, propelled determinedly eastward. I think the only possible way I could compose these poems, honoring my desire to lose visual track of their origins to the left/west, is by typing them into my internet browser bar, which might give me that necessary past-blindness—the line disappearing into a formal horizon as I move through the screen, making things happen, or allowing their happening, as it may. I also enjoy the potential conflict between what I foresee as the semi- naturalist (ecopoetical?) leanings of these line curves and their birth on the internet, pre-search. Archie Ammons did a similar thing with a typewriter and coils of thin receipt paper. How have I not said causeway yet? How do you get, draft drift from a theorized space to an arranged series of marks? Walk me from pink to sandpiper along an unavailable action. Grass escapes into itself. Pools just kind of happen. I might want to start the first poem with the word here and end the last poem with something a little more several. Something neither from nor towards. A body in a frame. Razor clams. Transferred moisture. Some swelling continent of bees. Far-off rocks rejecting light. Blue again. Something like that. (59*)
Poem with Orpheus Every word in this poem is a dead body. Each word dies as you read it and floats behind in a wooden canoe that covers itself with itself to make a coffin. A white, historical plane knits above the dead word to shroud and replace it. The poem before (this) point is streaming and invisible. The rivulets on which the coffin boats float move backward forever. That last word (word) and then (last) (that) (forever) (backward) (move)—you killed those words. You actually wrote this poem in its own blood. The poem was alive just a minute ago and then you arrived. You walked (here) sluggishly against the wind of the underworld to push against each heavy body. I’m trying to (protect) these (words) (from) you (with) ((special armor)). If you view this entire poem in a mirror you will see death at work as you see bees behind glass in a hive. That last line is from Cocteau’s Orphée, a film in which we come to know all poems are direct transmissions from the dead. When I transcribed it I reversed its screen death and then (((you))) came and looked at it, sending it back to this blank page, a banal trauma, a repeated rest on nothing. (73)
“And I say to this place, get used to me. I have nothing left that didn’t come from you.” (68)
Eerie and thoughtful, this collection both comforts and haunts. I feel like an intruder, walking through these poems, peeking in between the lines. Skillings is so bare in this work, at times intentionally and, at others, it seems she is provoking me to strip myself down too.
Perhaps it’s more apt to say I feel like the haunted and the ghost, reading this collection.
There’s something about the profound banality, the uplifting of the seemingly mundane to a harsh light that rings so unsettling here. It does feel like I’m tying into an alien broadcast—about my own life rather than just sone random stranger’s life.
I recommend this collection for readers who enjoy a unique, somewhat odd collection of poetry that touches upon and blends the divine and the profane in eeriest of ways~
Emily Skillings has all the technical ability of a good poet, but little of the heart and soul. With few exceptions the poems are mirthless, vapid and overburdened with too much angst. Perhaps I don't have enough patience for emotional dredging on this level, but poems ought to do more with language than this. The closest Skillings gets is with "Canary" a twist on Wallace Stevens's "Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird" that is clever and effective. To the extent that Skillings occasionally channels John Ashbery's style, the efforts are sophomoric at best. Lastly, the book goes over 100 pages, too long for most masters, let alone a debut.
I adored this and Skillings' writing is so strong. but the overall collection runs a little long and the guts of her writing is diluted slightly because of the volume. Gel, meanwhile, is a masterpiece and it was worth everything else just to read that.