Overall, 4 stars. There were a few really poor stories here, most of them placed right up front for some reason. Still, I trudged on, wanting to give each story a shot for its own merit. Doing so was a great pay off, for the last half of the book was especially good.
I wanted to give each story its own rating, since each from a different write. Besides, the only fair way to review an anthology is to review each individual story. So, here it goes.
Deadwater: A female protagonist uses her best skill (sex, of course) to manipulate men and find a killer. Not what I think of when I think horror story. 2 stars
Fodder’s Jig: I really wanted to see what was happening here, because there was something interesting happening with the dancing people along that shore; but I couldn’t see anything going on story-wise beside the overwhelming, in-your-face sex. Gave up when I encountered talk of “his sticky cock.” 1 star, because I just couldn’t finish it.
The Curios Allure of the Sea: Really cool tale. A woman gets a couple tattoos. Seagulls are after her. The tattoos burn. People look at her strangely. It’s a like a Lovecraftian story (with a talisman!) and written well. 5 stars.
The Tryal Attract: A good ghost story, with an artifact (an attract). 4 stars.
The Whalers Song: A crew of Whaler’s get shipwrecked. We watch through the eyes of our narrator as things get eerie and frightening. Also, cool talk of whales and whaling. (Also, this was the first story that took place on the water AND was a horror story.) 5 stars.
A Ship of the South Wind: Played like a weird western, where the white men hated mixed-blood “Injuns.” A ship in a desert that used to be sea. Kind of weird, which I like, but it lost me toward the end and I didn’t care about any of the characters. 3 stars.
What My Mother Left Me: Meh. I started it. Went two pages. Did not intrigue me. Did not care about the college girls biting each other’s ears, blowing into each other’s ears. I got the impression that they were coming to clean out a dead mom’s house, and apparently it was such a devasting situation like we needed to see flirting instead of mourning. I’m really over this teeny-bopper mindset that sex and flirtation and sexual tension is of the utmost importance and I need to see it in every story. 1 star.
Note to writers: There are more important things to show the reader than things related to sex. Go ahead, search for other feelings. They’re there. In fact, if you feel you need to show me sex, don’t. Write the story without it. It will be better. I promise. Do like Elmore Leonard: leave out the stuff people skip over.
Broken Record: I liked this story. It was an interesting take on an old writing prompt: what 10 things would you have on a desert island? Some of it was funny, some sad. But I’d call this fantasy more than horror, even though a monster does make an appearance. 4 stars.
Saudade: I’ve read a few things buy Steve Rasnic Tem and I’ve really like them all so far. This was an interesting that took a widower on a single’s cruise that turned into something like ghost story…kind of. That’s what great about Tem’s work: though it is certainly of the horror genre, it is otherwise tough to put in a box. 5 stars.
**Best story of the Anthology**
A Moment Before Breaking: A true horror story, and it took place in the sea, and it was about the sea. This story delivers on all the promises in the title of this book. There are monsters in the deep, an artifact, magic, a cult, a human sacrifice of an uncommon variety, and interesting characters. That’s a lot to jam into a short story, but A.C. Wise managed to do it, and with style. It was worth drudging through some of the earlier stuff to find this gem. It is incredibly well-written, perhaps the most skillfully-crafted story in this anthology. 5 stars +.
Sister, Dearest Sister, Let Me Show to You the Sea: This story does not take long to become creepy. It’s a revenge tale twice told, each sister wanting to punish the other. Throw in some ocean-related horror, a couple monster, and you’ve got a good story. 4 stars.
The Deep Sea Swell: A ghost story at sea. A lot happens in this story, too much to go into here; but it was a good read, with stories layered within a story. I always enjoy that. Well-written. 4 stars.
He Sings of Salt and Wormwood: This story led me astray, starting off with talk of diving and surfing. I wasn’t interested at first…then the worms showed up. Then there was talk of a 52 Hertz whale voice (that’s loud). Then weird carven statues started washing up on shore. Then I was hooked. This is among the best stories found in this collection. It renewed my fear of the deep. 5 stars.
Shit Happens: This manages to be face-paced, intriguing, disgusting, frightening, humorous, and mysteriously unsettling all at once. This is the style and craft many of us long for in our writing, but few manage to pull off. A great story; a quick read. 5 stars.
Haunt: Great story about a ship’s crew during the period of the Slave Trade. Slavery, and the atrocities related to, and derived from it, play a prominent role, especially in the mind of the character called Swift. The ghost ship that stalks the Minerva feels as real as the rest of the story. This tale is spooky on many levels and worth the read. 5 stars.