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First published September 16, 2017
- Chapter 1: If now is April and Natasha and Raymond got married last October, they should be married for 6 months, not a year. Unless, they got married last, last October which will make them married for 18 months.
- If the year was 1860, how can Seth be dead for 7 years when he died in 1854? It was written on the carved plate of his tomb. (See Chapter 1 of Soul of Sin)
- If the year was 1860 and Lilly was born in 1939, then she was 21. So when she was violated 7 years ago, she would be 14 that time. Does this mean that she had her coming out at the age of 14? Which is impossible because debutantes start their season from 16 to 18. 16 and 17 were even considered barely out of schoolrooms.
Either the author is really bad in basic Algebra or she needs to do her research more on the life of 1800s England.
Plus, what kind of a parents Seth and Natasha were? Letting their 14-year-old-should-still-be-in-the-schoolroom daughter attend an adult event---a ball! And unchaperoned. Even if Lilly was with a companion that night but found a way to sneak out, Seth and Natasha shouldn't let her be present at a function for the grown-ups in the first place!
I know this is mean to say, however, it was good riddance that Seth died and Natasha got miserable and lonely because of their neglection.
- Chapter 5: For someone who came from a scandalous great family, Lilly sure did let fear rule her. She should be bold because scandalous runs in her blood.
- Chapter 8: For a Great Family, all of them were imbeciles. They seemed like powerful but they couldn't protect Lilly? And need to hide her? Seriously? With their forces (one even belong to the royal family), they can do something about Blackawton. They were called the Great Family, right? Then I'm sure they have the connection to do it discreetly. Heck! They were able to do just that in the end. Why not do it from the start?
- Chapter 11: How did Wilson, the innkeeper, know that Thomsett was a major when Thomsett never went back to his hometown ever since he got his commission?
- Chapter 12: If Baron Dalehouse was Raymond's schoolmate, I presume that he was the same age as Raymond which was 35. With the probability of older or younger for a year or 2. Then how can the baron had a son who seemed to be in a marriageable age? Unless the baron got married so early.
- Chapter 12: Where Darren Dalehouse, Baron Dalehouse's son, visited the cottage and invited Lilly to their house party.
- Chapter 15: The third visit of Darren Dalehouse and attacked Lilly.