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The Tales of Ambia #2

A Royal Masquerade

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Burndee can barely tolerate the mischievous Prince Colin, but the two of them are invariably thrown together in a way that keeps them at one another’s throats.

While attending a noblewoman’s wedding, Burndee and Colin’s private feud comes to a climax when Burndee loses his temper and does the unthinkable. With Prince Colin unable to attend to his royal duties and Burndee bound by an inconvenient spell, can the two of them work together long enough to unsnarl the mysterious goings-on around them?

A madcap and magical novella of The Goose Girl from a unique perspective.

129 pages, Paperback

First published November 1, 2018

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Allison Tebo

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Allison Tebo is a Christian writer committed to creating magical stories full of larger-than-life characters, a dash of grit, and plenty of laughs. She is the author of Break the Beast, an epic fantasy retelling of Beowulf, and the Tales of Ambia, a series of romantic comedy retellings of popular fairy tales. Her flash fiction has been published in magazines such as SplicketySpark and Saddlebag Dispatches and her short stories have been featured in anthologies by Inklings Press, Rogue Blades Entertainment, Pole to Pole Publishing, Editing Mee, Dragon Soul Press, and Ye Olde Dragons Publishing.

Allison also writes under the pseudonym Al Thibeaux and co-runs the speculative fiction e-zine Worlds of Adventure.

Allison graduated with merit from London Art College after studying cartooning and children’s illustration and, when not creating new worlds with words or paint, she enjoys reading, baking, and making lists.

You can find out more about her work at https://allisonteboauthor.com/ or follow her on Instagram at https://www.instagram.com/allisonteboauthor/

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Author 6 books206 followers
February 7, 2023
Prince Colin has to attend a noblewoman’s wedding, but it’s clear that he’s bored and wants to spice things up a bit. He can’t seem to stop pranking Burndee, his grumpy fairy godfather who’d rather spend his days baking pastries than actually helping people. And Burndee’s had enough. He lashes out against Colin and does the unthinkable.

With the prince unable to attend to his royal duties and Burndee bound by an inconvenient spell, they need to start working together if they want to escape their current predicament in time for the wedding. But that’s easier said than done, as the prince and Burndee seem incapable of getting along with one another.


The book starts with a quick note from the author, about how she came about writing this story. And it’s a bit of a stroke of genius to put this in the front of the book. Because not only does it whet our appetite for the story to come, but this also sets the stage for the charming play we’re about to enjoy.


This is an interesting, occasionally funny and rather unusual fairy tale retelling. It actually reads more like a comedic play than a fairy tale. The story focuses mostly on prince Colin and Burndee going at each other’s throat, with some childishly funny consequences. But the real magic and the true heart of the story is actually all happening in the background. And when we get to the end, it all makes sense and it’s all wrapped up nicely.


Definitely a strong sequel. Though I have to admit, I did like the first book a little bit more.
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2,162 reviews5,118 followers
February 24, 2025
4 stars ✨ Clean Fiction - Fairytale Retelling


I’ve finally continued this series—it only took by 6/7 years and three tries of rereading the first book. It wasn’t for a lack of interest, I’ll tell you that! I have been excited to continue on with each read through it so it was great to finally read this book. Lots of crazy and hilarious antics throughout it. 😂 I think this book and the first one would be great in the style of the live action Disney Cinderella movie—oooh, or the Enchanted movie!!—personally.

There really wasn’t much romance (which I expected to a degree) as it’s more focused on the “(Mis)Adventures of Burndee and Colin”™️, but you can see how Ella has influenced Burndee in a lot of good ways and how he’s trying (key word: trying) to be better and not disappoint her. I say there’s some pretty good character development for Burndee, yet we still have a lot of his award winning, sassy personality that I highly enjoyed in the first book.

I have a new headcannon for this series: Prince Colin and Alvin from Alvin and the Chipmunks are the same character, particularly in this book. It fits, it really does.

A great story to read after A Reluctant Godfather and I’m looking forward to reading about Poppy again and then the seeing everyone again in the novella collection too! 💗

(Sidenote: I adored that this book started with “An Absolutely, Positively Vital Note from the Author”.)



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Magic content is basically the same concept as an old Disney movie in the sweet and innocent way; Burndee is a fairy godfather and does spells to help his charges, but also some of his spells go awry if he hasn’t practiced it or if he is startled or angry; *Spoilers* ; It’s noted that Burndee’s magic does answer and serve “a higher order than his own ability and willpower”; If he touches a human, Burndee gives a painful shock to that person because of his magic; Burndee panics that Ella might not need/want him anymore now that she’s magical too; Someone says that a day is cursed because of the bad things that have happened; Another country has “dumovai”, a pet-like creature which is the equivalent to fairy godfathers because they don’t have fairies (and they usually only use their magic for their master).


Fighting & Knocking someone out (up to a handful of sentences); Someone aims a knife to another in ill intent; Seeing fights, someone aim to hurt an animal, & geese attack a man (up to a few sentences).

Burndee is pretty sassy and sarcastic (though there’s less in this book compared to the first), and there's a bit of other name-calling (brat, idiot, donkey, nitwit, potato, and pumpkin); “what/why/where the blazes” is said among with other phrases like “shut up” and “stupid” are used; Sarcasm & Eye rolling; A woman talks about how servants should be never seen & a servant girl is mistreated/berated by others (including almost being slapped; all of this upsets Burndee after seeing Ella go through bullying as well); A woman also raps the dumovai (small magical animal) between the ears with her fan and Burndee is unable to contain himself.

Mentions of a kidnapping, being held hostage, bandits, & threats of killing others; Mentions of fights, fighting, & injuries; Mentions of a man eating mice (but it turns out not to be real mice like it was thought at first); A few mentions of bullies; A couple mentions of lies; A couple mentions of eavesdropping; A mention of a possible assassination attempt.


1 palm kiss,
1 kiss (no details),
Remembering & imagining kisses (no details).
A couple embraces (no details).

Mentions of flirting; A few mentions of kisses.
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Author 11 books179 followers
December 11, 2018
Greetings, lords, ladies, peasants, and assorted jesters!

*sweeping bow whilst scattering fairy dust*

(Okay, okay, none of you are ACTUALLY peasants.  That would be very rude of me.  Of course I'm not suggesting anything of the sort.  ;-) )

Here's my review of the latest installment in Allison Tebo's The Tales of Ambia series: A Royal Masquerade.

First off, I'll give you Alli's official synopsis, since she explains things far better than I could:

"Burndee can barely tolerate the mischievous Prince Colin, but the two of them are invariably thrown together in a way that keeps them at one another’s throats. While attending a noblewoman’s wedding, Burndee and Colin’s private feud comes to a climax when Burndee loses his temper and does the unthinkable. With Prince Colin unable to attend to his royal duties and Burndee bound by an inconvenient spell, can the two of them work together long enough to unsnarl the mysterious goings-on around them?

"A madcap and magical retelling of The Goose Girl from a unique perspective."

Burndee, you see, is a fairy godfather.  GodFATHER, mind you, not godmother.  (He'd be very insistent on that point.)  We first met Burndee in Book 1, The Reluctant Godfather--and let me tell you, that title says it all.  HE'S NOT VERY GOOD AT HIS JOB.

Poor fellow, he doesn't even like it.  Nobody asked him if he wanted to control the destinies of addlepated humans who can't even tie their own shoes without getting the laces crossed!

"Lord, what fools these mortals be," is Burndee's motto.  Given a choice, he'd spend his time and energy on a quieter, more refined pursuit.  Like baking.  (Which he excels at.  Seriously, the food described in these books is to die for.)

But crotchety Burndee is learning . . . and growing.  Ever so slowly, true, but growing!  The Reluctant Godfather finds him making common cause with one of his charges, a sweet servant girl named Ella.  Now, in A Royal Masquerade, he's forming an uneasy alliance with another godchild:  Colin, Crown Prince of Ambia.

The operative word here is 'uneasy.'  Colin, let it be known, is a high spirited and handsome and charismatic young man a complete imbecile; and the combination of him and Burndee together at a royal wedding is simply too great a temptation for Fate.  Tempers flare.  Spells go awry.  Grand sticky messes are created.  It's tremendous fun--for everyone except our dear protagonist.

Now, I know what you're thinking:

What does this have to do with "The Goose Girl"?

That's the genius of A Royal Masquerade:  it doesn't LOOK like a retelling of "The Goose Girl," until all is revealed in the final act, leaving the audience to let out a collective "OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" at Alli's cleverness.  It's beautifully plotted and beautifully disguised ('masquerade'--get it?)  I was most impressed.

And I really appreciated Alli's reasons for crafting the story in this way:  as she explained in her Author's Note, the original "Goose Girl" is much too dark for a G-rated universe like The Tales of Ambia.  I was very grateful that Ambia didn't take a sudden grim turn in this installment, because, after all, my baby sister reads these books and she's not up for a bloody, gruesome version!  But that's not AT ALL what we get here.  It is light-hearted and perfectly clean, and I'd have no scruples about handing it off to a sensitive child.  At the same time, though, the stakes are high and the drama is spicy all the way to the end.  Winning combination.  *thumbs-up*

I had so much fun with Burndee and Colin in this book.  I loved watching them bumble around the palace grounds, periodically blowing up at each other, while the whole time, A PRINCESS IN DISGUISE NEEDS THEIR HELP AND THEY DON'T NOTICE TILL IT'S ALMOST TOO LATE.

It's a frothy, giddy, merry-go-round of a story.  A very Wodehousian flavor, I thought . . . Burndee reminds me of a much grumpier, crankier Bertie Wooster, you know?  "Hapless fellow attempts to rescue even-more-hapless friend from unbelievably intricate scrape, in hopes that said friend will finally leave him in peace."

It's an unusual formula for a fairy tale retelling.  Unusual, and most refreshing.

Oh--and I ADORED the "princess" character in this one.  I can't say much more about her, because #spoilers, but she's a dear.  Definitely a fan.  <3

To conclude my review?

I loved it, and you will, too!
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150 reviews
March 30, 2020
Our favorite grouchy young fairy godfather, Burndee, and his mischievous ward, Prince Colin, are at it again in the much-anticipated sequel to The Reluctant Godfather, and their newest shenanigans are not to be missed. Burndee and Colin's hysterical and exciting antics and adventures had me laughing through each and every page of A Royal Masquerade--and the events were often crazy and surprising. This book is incredibly well-written, and every sentence pulses with crisp and energetic wordcraft, smoothly and artfully bringing the story, scenes, and characters to vivid life. It's a wonderful fairytale retelling that turns the original tale on its head in a new and different rendition of the classic story.

As I touched on already, few books have made me laugh harder, louder, and more often than Burndee's adventures, and their latest installment is by no means an exception. Each time I've read and re-read A Royal Masquerade, I've enjoyed every single moment of the hilarious dialogue and narration, events and situations, comedy and wit, mishaps and pranks. And each character is hilarious, quirky, and unique, like the cast of a wild and rollicking comedy, as they find themselves careening through humorous misadventures.

Something I may love even more than the humor is the immense heart that this book contains, just like every book in the series. Author Allison Tebo has such skill in writing fairytale retellings that are not only hilarious and unique but also deep, insightful, sweet, and even--at times--heart-wrenching. She has a knack for seeing and conveying the meaning, truth, and wisdom behind each fairytale, and I'm amazed each time I witness her vision for a new book. This one is no exception. The themes represented in this book are wonderful and profound, which takes great skill in such a lighthearted book.

But the best part of this book is, as usual, the characters. Burndee and Colin return to once again delight me and other readers with their friendship, bickering, banter, endearing personalities, and vivid character, separately and together. Burndee's narration is as awesome as ever, and his caustic, clever wit shines in both inner and outer dialogue. His character change is only beginning, even though he's come so far since the beginning of his first book. It's awesome to watch his new struggles and growth, since his character arc and character development are so fabulously executed each time--though it's agonizing at times as well as joyful. It's difficult to believably leave a character with room to grow after each sequel while still bringing them gradually to a better place, but Miss Tebo does so smoothly and skillfully.

And in addition to the beloved main duo, there's a fabulous supporting cast of vivid, sweet, and hilarious new characters, joined by my other favorite familiar and beloved characters, who return in the sequel alongside Burndee and Colin. Each character, relationship, and interaction is engaging.

I especially love the four central characters from the first book (including Colin and Burndee), and being with them again is like visiting old and dear friends. I also love watching the results of the happenings and relationships of the first book! I highly enjoy seeing what happens after these characters' happily ever after, especially because no story ends there even once the book ends. I only wish these things were shown on the page more often, instead of happening off-screen for most of the book--but even when they're shown off-screen, they're present, frequent, and vivid.

My favorite new aspect of this book is a sweet new character whom I love very much. I'll be cryptic to avoid major spoilers, but I can't review this wonderful book without mentioning her. This person is my favorite type of character in so many ways--especially because she is a young female character who is both gentle and strong. Her role and journey, both inner and outer, use elements that I've always loved in stories--yet she's unique and all her own. This character's story and plight pierce my heart and touch my emotions, and her determination, goodness, sweet heart, and so much more make me root for her and cheer her on through the hardship she experiences. When I was younger, I needed and craved more characters like her to identify with--and still do even now--and I'm so pleased to know that young girls like I once was will read A Royal Masquerade and be encouraged and inspired by this young woman. I would have loved this book and its newest main character as a preteen, and I loved and enjoyed them both just as much now that I'm few years older.

A Royal Masquerade is a hilarious and heartwarming adventure that will delight readers of all ages and genders, preteens and up--whether or not they typically enjoy fairytale retellings. With fabulous characters, themes, and writing, every word and moment shines. Humorous, touching, exciting, entertaining, sweet, and insightful, this new tale of Burndee and his companions will bring enjoyment and laughter to all its readers, as it did for me. I'm so excited to finally be able to share it with family, friends, and other fans now that it's published at last!

I received an advanced copy of this book from the author in exchange for my honest review. I was not obligated to provide a positive review, and all opinions are my own.
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634 reviews939 followers
April 10, 2018
*huge grins* That was fabulousness . . . I think TRG is still my fav tho. But really, the Burndee\Colin dialogue in this one is totally awesome. *falls into a fit of laughing again*
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135 reviews62 followers
November 4, 2018
This book is…
-A Goose Girl re-telling
-Saturated with humor
-A comic drama
-Full of mishaps

The Characters are:
-Diverse
-Hiding secrets
-A constant source of entertainment
-Often confused (mostly by Burndee)
-Larger than life
-Mistaken for another

Some of our heroes are:
Burndee. A reluctant Fairy Godfather. Avid Baker. Entertaining. Irritated by all humans besides his wife. Placed at a wedding. Quick tempered. Loveable in the strangest way. Quirky. Often treated overly politely because of his title.

Colin. Burndee’s unfortunate godson. Loves a good joke. Crown prince. Impulsive. Can match Burndee at a battle of words. Kind. Fun.

Horace Windslow. The groom to be. Great at fidgeting. Second Cousin to Colin. Lacking in personality. Described with some laugh-inducing metaphors.

Precautions:
Don’t read in public, for you’re sure to laugh out loud.
Some sword fighting and mild action, all clean and humorous.
You may not be able to stop reading.

To sum up:
-Read this book!
-You’ll love it as I did!
-And laugh as hard.

FTC disclosure: I received a complimentary ARC of this book from the author. All opinions expressed in this review are my own. Also many thanks to Stargazer for inspiring to write my book review in the way I did. ;)

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299 reviews2 followers
February 18, 2019
This book was a heartbreaking disappointment. I came here for more Cynthia, and she just barely showed up in time for the end of the book. I am in tears.

Of laughter.

Allison is indeed the queen of comedic writing, and though the smack of farce was rather strong (as she notes in the intro!) this book was perfection. In fifty years, when Alli is a renowned children's author, I will still be preordering each of her books, taking great joy in both the pastry I shall be devouring with it and the fact that I've been along on this fabulous ride from the beginning. Her writing gets better with every work.

Because I have no time for a review, I shall leave you with some quick points:

~ I had entirely forgotten that Colin was such an incorrigible mess? He showed some maturity in TRG but now I find Burndee's opinions of him highly relatable. As in, I love him a lot.

~ Our sweet gentlemen love their wives SO MUCH. Just. Adorableness.

~ Poppy is AMAZING: kind and emotional and honest and can still knock you out when called upon. Her action scenes were the best. You go, girl.

~ "Excuse me, I'm married."

~ Sassy skunk Colin is the best Colin. Fight me. (Oh wait, Cynthia's on the other side... forget about it.)

~ and SO MANY OTHER THINGS. Just read it, okay? The only good option.
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Author 28 books1,128 followers
December 10, 2020
I've accepted that I shall not review this until some day when I reread, so for now:

ARG IT WAS SO GOOD I LOVED IT SO MUCH IT WAS SO FUNNY AND I LOVED COLIN COLIN WAS THE BEST AND BURNDEE AND BURNDEE'S RELATIONSHIP WITH ELLA IS PRETTY MUCH #GOALS AND I REALLY DIDN'T SEE THE PLOT TWIST COMING (like probably 'cause I forgot the plot of the goose girl but whatever) AND LIKE WOW IT WAS SO GOOD POPPY IS SO SWEET AND CYNTHIA IS SUCH A ROCK AND I LOVE ALL THE DESCRIPTIONS!!! Miss Tebo made me laugh SO hard ... like this book is so perfect. xD AND THE WAY THEY CAUGHT THE BAD GUY WAS SOOO FUNNY LIKE GO ELLA AND CYNTHIA YOU TOO ARE AWESOME!

Also, am I the only one who thinks Horace eventually deserves a happily-ever-after? Can this happen some day, Alli!? Please?
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235 reviews43 followers
December 30, 2018
Oh my goodness, this book was hilarious!! I loved it!

I still can't decide whether I like The Reluctant Godfather better or not... I think it's a tie... they're both awesome!! :D

Burndee started to learn how to control his temper better in this book which is probably a good thing for him. ;) But the whole thing with Colin, I found very funny. :)

I'm super excited for Colin and Cynthia too... ;) :D

My younger sister recently read The Reluctant Godfather and has been waiting for a few days for me to finish A Royal Masquerade. Now that I have "finally" finished, she'll be very excited to get her hands on it. ;)

I would recommend for 11+

4 stars. :)
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499 reviews107 followers
November 15, 2018
(Originally posted on my book blog.)

This book was absolutely SO MUCH FUN! Anyone who knows my reading taste probably knows that I ADORE humorous books, that I’m far more likely to fall in love with a story if there’s a favorite character (or two), and that I love retellings and fairytales. Put all three of those into a novella-sized package, and you have A ROYAL MASQUERADE.

I loved this book! As a sequel to The Reluctant Godfather, it follows the continuing adventures of Fairy Godfather Burndee, which made me super excited because I love that young, grouchy, cake-baking fairy godfather! He’s the best, and so is funloving Prince Colin—one of his wards—who are thrown into each other’s company at a wedding where there are mysterious goings-on and magical mishaps which had me laughing.

One hilarious misfortune after another pile on top of Burndee and Prince Colin, with hilarious results! I love both of them, but put them together and wow, it’s just SO MUCH FUN, because Colin is such a prankster and Burndee is so grouchy, and they have to learn to work together in the best possible buddy-movie kind of way. IT’S MY FAVE. XD (And there’s a hilarious, awesome twist fairly early on that I don’t want to spoil but let’s just say Colin may not look like Colin for the whole story and it’s SO PERFECT. XDDD)

The plot is a lot of fun because the Goose Girl plot is going on kind of in the background and WE can see it but the main characters don’t catch on as quickly because they have their own problems. It was sooo funny. XD As a retelling, the Goose Girl part was solid, and I liked the twist of the traveling troupe of actors (gotta have some theatricality!) and the little Dumovai creature. :) I still enjoyed The Reluctant Godfather more, particularly since The Goose Girl isn’t my favorite fairytale, but at the same time, all the Burndee and Colin antics were perfect, so this one was still super enjoyable. :D

Also, the fact that Burndee is so absolutely introverted and grumpy, and yet has to deal with all the nobles and people involved, makes it extra funny. Throw in some falling in the fountain, some cake mishaps and a skunk (the SKUNK!!! XD), and a colorful troupe of characters, and you have a recipe for absolute fun! Burndee and Prince Colin are MY FAVORITE and any story involving them is automatically going to be a new favorite, I think. (I also loved the brief appearance of a couple other characters at the end from the first book.) And I need to eat one of Burndee’s cakes!

If you like humor and comedy-of-errors type stories, and a sort of buddy-story, with loads of laughs and a fairytale retelling into the bargain, you definitely need to check this one out. :D As a novella, it’s a quick read and you won’t be able to put it down, or stop giggling—I know I wasn’t!

An absolute delight! ^_^

I received a free e-ARC of this story from the author. I was not required to write a positive review; all opinions are my own.
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373 reviews87 followers
February 26, 2022
Delightful companion to the first book <3
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Author 2 books62 followers
March 16, 2019
This is officially my new favorite retelling of The Goose Girl fairytale. I didn't have a favorite before now because the few other Goose Girl retellings I've read before didn't do much for me. Even the original tale is low on my list of fairytales that I like because it's just so...simple I guess? Or maybe it's because the switching identifies thing has been done so many times that, for me at least, it can feel a little stale. A Royal Masquerade, however, gives the story of the Goose Girl fresh new life.

It helped that this story did more than just retell The Goose Girl. First and foremost it's a continuation of the Tales of Ambia series, more specifically, a continuation of Burndee's (the main character of The Reluctant Godfather) story. The author herself said it perfectly in the note at the beginning of the story: "I chose to flip the plot and the subplot, focusing on the subplot while the main plot is skirted around, barely glimpsed. I flirt with the main story line but we aren't in a long-term relationship."

This approach was definitely the best choice. It balanced the old and new in a way that made even the retelling part feel new, rather than stale. It let me see the characters I already knew and loved and enjoy their highjinks (Burndee and Colin are the best! <3) so I was then able to be excited when I started picking up hints at the Goose Girl retelling that was going on in the background. It was fun to see when and how the main characters would figure out what was going on, and how they'd solve the problem. I also enjoyed the personalities that the author gave the Goose Girl characters and how she made them and their story fit inside the world she's created.

I can't give details about the epilogue because MASSIVE SPOILERS, but WOW. What a way to hint that this was all just a small part of a bigger picture! To quote Syndrome from "The Incredibles", I'M STILL GEEKING OUT ABOUT IT! *flailing intensifies* I was already excited for any future books in this series, but that epilogue just added to it!

If you haven't read this book yet, you are missing out on something special. I heartily recommend it!
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Author 15 books513 followers
June 12, 2019
'Burndee turned towards the carriage and reached up to lift down one of his cake boxes and clutched it to himself, extracting comfort from his baked goods. Today would be bad enough, but the thought of all those humans crammed into one place tomorrow, surrounding him, was almost more than he could stand.'

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Wow this was a beautiful rollercoaster of a sitcom written so brilliantly it neither faltered nor rushed! I am a sucker for stories like this which are light-hearted, hilarious, well-written, clean, and 100% entertaining. And while I perhaps wanted a bit more violence in the fight scenes (yet I kept reminding myself this was not a completely realistic world, more like a Disney-fied fairytale . . . which is perfectly fine!!) because I like dark, gritty fantasy . . . I was not disappointed with this sequel in the slightest.

Also, Burndee never fails to entertain. He is beyond relatable, a wonderful character, and I will forever be in love. I also love how his salt has been lessened a bit since his marriage to Ella, WHICH IS FREAKING ADORABLE BTW, but he is still the same grumpy fairy godfather from The Reluctant Godfather.

[this is totally a Burndee mood okay]
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But what REALLY carried the backbone of the story was the bantering, comedic plot between the irrepressible Prince Colin and his reluctant bestie Burndee. These two are comedy gold and I love it. Their snappy, argumentative dialogue and constant mishaps really shone in this sitcom-style storyline and I kept snickering all the time. They're just . . . such a GOOD pairing of characters and the kind of buddy fighting/bromance interactions that I live for.

“You know, Burndee,” Colin remarked, “you and I . . . We make a dangerous pair, even when we’re not on the best of terms. I was just thinking, we’d make quite a team if we made it a habit to work together, wouldn’t we?”
“I believe we would,” said Burndee."


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I just . . . I LOVE THIS SERIES!! I need more of this world, more of these characters, and definitely always more of Burndee's salty, cake-loving sass. This author knows her writing strengths and plays to them with excellence and I LOVE IT. And the unique spins she gives on the fairytales is so, so, sooooo brilliant!!!
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Author 6 books1,518 followers
January 3, 2020
4.5 Stars! =D

This book is hilarious and fun! Burndee and Colin had me laughing. Especially because of a little problem Burndee was having. =D

This is a "Goose Girl" retelling. However, the "Goose Girl" parts were often happening from a far. This is both a genius and a little annoying. There were times I thought that the stuff happening between Burndee and Colin was getting a little unrealistic or something and there were times I really want the "Goose Girl" parts tied in a little more. That being said, I still really enjoyed all the problems these two favorite characters were having. It still had me laughing.

I really started to like Colin more in this novel. In the first book he seemed to be a... well, a jerk, a selfish one at that. And though Colin is still is certainly a jerk at times, he also caught my heart and cause me to enjoy him. Having Colin with Burndee is just priceless, especially because of what happens in the story.

Burndee is classic. I love how he is with his new marriage. I love his cooking. And I love his magical problems. Basically, I can't think of anything that I don't love about him.

Also, I really want Horace to have his own little fairytale. I mean, yes, this one was it, but I mean another one.

CAN SOMEONE PLEASE MAKE "DISNEY" FILMS OF THIS SERIES!?! PLEASE?!?!

Content in Book:

1. Magic.

2. Sword fighting.

What Book is This in The Series?

At first I thought it was a typo that this was the third book and not the second. But when I realized that it was indeed the third book, I started to panic, thinking I missed a book with my favorite characters. After doing some research, I found out that in book 2 is currently not published yet, so I guess they can be read out of order.

But Will I Continue???

YES!!! OF COURSE!!! I don't care which book comes out next, BUT I WANT IT!!!!

Who I Would Recommend This Book Too:

Those who have first read The Reluctant Godfather. Even though you might be able to read some of these books out of order, you should at least start with the book that started it all.

Those who like the "Goose Girl" retellings. Those who like deliciously good, hilariously, magically, told fairytales.
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299 reviews2 followers
April 28, 2020
Re-read 26-04-20

This one is a ROMP, folks, & I missed it. It's always lovely to have this series as a bit of fluffy comfort reading in less-than-fluffy times. All my other comfort reads are packed up (we're selling our house! in a pandemic! yay!) but fortunately I have the Tales of Ambia to re-read! Again!

Cynthia is my favorite, as always.

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102 reviews30 followers
February 14, 2021
As I closed out the final page of A Royal Masquerade, I tried to process into words how this book made me feel.

I was transported back to my childhood- summer days, blanket sprawled out, book in hand, completely lost in another world.

I haven’t felt that way, even with some of my most recent absolute loves, since my younger years. The writing left me unencumbered. I was swept up to an entirely different world with the most lovable, deeply developed characters and immersed in imagery that was a feast for the senses. And the comedy interwoven throughout was the icing on the cake!
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Author 13 books96 followers
October 28, 2018
~ I received a free advanced review copy of this book, therefore all of the following opinions are my own ~

Having read and loved The Reluctant Godfather earlier this year, I was only too willing to dive back into the world of Ambia and navigate another fairytale retelling alongside my favorite lovable grump: Burndee. And A Royal Masquerade delivered! The Reluctant Godfather was witty, hilarious, and meaningful for all its light-heartedness, and so is A Royal Masquerade.

Let’s talk about the characters, shall we? I think the strength (or weakness) of characters can really be a deciding factor in whether or not a book is “good” or not, and Tebo’s characters have never been lacking. Burndee is still his adorable (if grumpy) self, Prince Colin is the cheerful prankster, and a whole new cast of characters became equally vivid and memorable through the course of the book. Poppy is a soft-hearted and sweet Ella type, Penelope was pretty much the embodiment of the cranky Princess in the Princess and the Pea, and an entire traveling troupe of actors spiced things up with their rainbow of personalities.

As far as plot goes, A Royal Masquerade is not as plot-centered as most books, but there was a thread of magic-gone-wrong through the whole thing that tied it all together. There were plenty of comical incidents that had me laughing out loud, and I especially appreciated seeing outwardly-crusty Burndee’s inward terror that Ella—or anyone, really—would find out what has gone on that day. It certainly wasn’t “neat.”

A Royal Masquerade is squeaky clean in the content department, so really the only reason I didn’t give it five stars was because, when all is said and done, I do think I liked The Reluctant Godfather just a wee bit better. But don’t let that deter you! I am eagerly awaiting future installments in the series, and can’t wait to see more from Tebo!
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Author 67 books233 followers
November 16, 2018
FTC DISCLOSURE: I received a free ecopy of this book. A positive review was not required. These are my honest thoughts and opinions.

A Royal Masquerade is like a giant cake—sweet, beautiful, and full of delicious surprises!

The writing style and setting were delightfully vivid and entertaining. Just like watching a play or being right there with the character! I could just imagine the garden and palace settings, as well as smell the baked goods. The writing style and setting snagged me in and I loved it to bits.

The characters of A Royal Masquerade were my favorite part. Ms. Tebo has a true gift for being friends with characters who are spirited, funny, and life-like! All too often, fiction nowadays belittles princesses and weakens male characters. ARM was like a glass of fresh lemonade because it had characters who didn’t fall flat or cliche. Ever.

As usual, my favorite was Burndee (maybe because I relate so much to his grumpiness), and Colin was as fantastic as ever. Ella and Cynthia are two lasses that every little girl needs to read about! And MECK. Ha, yes, I skipped the rest of the memorable cast because this furry dude needs billions of hugs. I could almost feel his soft fur and ears!

As for the rest of the cast and plot line, I was amazed. Things were so well woven and hinted, it truly was a joy ride. I was surprised sometimes at the plot’s brilliance. Even though this book was not ‘plot-driven’ because the author wished to show that people are silly and not every book needs to be serious, it was still a focused story! It had character development (EEP!) while also making me laugh.

Overall, I loved this book. A strong 5/5 stars. I look forward to reading it aloud to my young nieces!
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2,016 reviews267 followers
November 22, 2018
I can just copy my review of The Reluctant Godfather: a funny re-telling of "The Goose Girl". Short - one afternoon, evening is enough. Surprising - I prefer this version from original! And I simply adore Burndee. In "A Royal Masquerade" I fell in love also with Colin.

I would have gladly read more of the dynamics between Burndee and Colin. They were such good friends (although I am not sure they knew that). But on the other hand, the length (rather short) of the story was perfect, there was no place for boredom, there was an action that kept my whole attention. Reading it, I saw the scenes in my imagination like I was watching the movie (or a theatrical performance).

I call it a professionally written story with thoughtfulness.

I have found here more witty dialogues and the scenes were more captivating than in "The Reluctant Godfather", but in "A Royal Masquerade" there was not so strong, clear and wise message like in "The Reluctant Godfather".

Two considerations you should think of before reading it:

--> it isn't a love story (like "The Reluctant Godfather") - but it didn't matter, I had a great time
--> you will appreciate it more if you read "The Reluctant Godfather" first.

And, I really like Allison Tebo's wit. I can't wait to read her another retelling.
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511 reviews45 followers
March 12, 2019
Allison Tebo has done it again! Her newest installment in the Tales of Ambia series is just as delightfully charming as The Reluctant Godfather (though I think I prefer TRG, personally). I'm actually not familiar with the plot of the original Goose Girl story but it didn't cut down on my enjoyment of A Royal Masquerade. (Though I'll be sure to reread the book after acquainting myself with the original fairytale.)

Burndee remains, as ever, a unique protagonist. If I was the sort to call people my spirit animal, Burndee would definitely fit the bill. Our cranky, crabby, sarcastic temperaments are practically twins. Loved Colin and some of the new characters as well (the 'neat' ones, not the villainous ones).

Overall, I would heartily recommend this book to people who love fairytale retellings - and a good, lighthearted read.

I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest review.
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Author 2 books186 followers
June 19, 2023
I needed something with heartwarming characters, hilarious banter, and the right amount of whimsy. And Allison delivered it beautifully!

Dear Burndee. I seriously love him (*coughs* and relate all too well). He and Colin form an ever dynamic duo, and oh the problems they cause! Yes, Colin is annoying at times but so hilarious too! (I will also NEVER look at skunks the same way again, haha. 😂)

Perfectly charming!
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74 reviews89 followers
August 17, 2020
A Royal Masquerade is a sequel to the The Reluctant Godfather (one of my FAVORITE stories ever), continuing the madcap adventures of Burndee, the reluctant godfather himself. And this story is just as delightful as its predecessor. Seriously, I don’t even know which one I like better. I think I love them equally!

Should you read The Reluctant Godfather first? I mean, yes, that’s how it’s intended. BUT this one actually stands on its own pretty well. You wouldn’t be too lost if you jumped straight into it. It’s very much its own separate adventure. (But I don’t know why you wouldn’t want to read the first book. IT’S SO GOOD.)

ANYWHO. On to the good stuff!

THE PLOT

As a fairy, Burndee is given two wards—Prince Colin and Ella. The first book mostly focuses on his relationship with Ella. But THIS TIME we get to see him and Colin trying to work together and ohohohohooo. These boys. XD It is one disaster after the other…to put it lightly.

It should be simple: Attend a stiff wedding, provide delicious food, try not to frown and make snarky comments the whole way through, and leave as soon as possible. That’s Burndee’s plan. But when Prince Colin’s teeny tiny little prank blows up, it’s an endless fiasco of one disaster after the next. And all the while, there’s something strange going on right under the boys’ noses, and it may just be up to them to save this wedding…if they don’t accidentally totally destroy it themselves first.

The whole book is basically just hilarious mishap after mishap. But I loved how everything threaded together to tell a bigger story than what it seems at the surface. The overall plot was genius, and I laughed SO. MUCH.

Since this is just a novella, I don’t want to say too much about the actual events. But…but just take my word for it. It was great. All of it. I grin just thinking about it!

THE CHARACTERS

Oh gracious alive, THESE CHARACTERS. How I have missed the young grumpy fairy godfather himself.

Burndee is still the snarky grouch we all know and love, but what I really loved about this one is how we got to see how he has grown. The care the author is putting into his growth is beautiful. Because it’s not just this instant transformation. He’s still very much Burndee, and he still has a lot to work through, but you can see the seeds of growth blooming in him in this story. He’s maturing and learning and TRYING to not be quite as much of a reluctant godfather as he was before. Buuut 87% of the things that come out of his mouth are still snark, and would we really want it any other way?

And then Colin! It was treat getting to know the prince more in this one. He was a riot in the first book but we didn’t see a terribly lot of him. This time he’s front and center and… *falls into a fit of giggles* WELL.

Colin is such a rascal. Charming, charismatic, always down for a good time, and utterly lively, Colin is the beginning of the huge domino of disasters that take place over this little story. A harmless prank goes wrong, but that doesn’t stop him from making the most of things and…continuing to do more pranks. XD THE BOY. He causes so much trouble, and I loved every second of it.

And the BEST was Burndee and Colin together. THE BANTER. THE BANTER, GUYS. Grouchy Burndee can just barely tolerate high-spirited Colin, and so you can only imagine the complete chaos that ensues as pranks and magic blow up (sometimes quite literally) at this wedding.

The other characters were treasures too. I adored our newest addition, Poppy, and her quiet spirit but strength to do what’s needed. And there were so many other side characters that were just popping with personality.

This author knows how to make the most lovable, ridiculous, purely charming and hilarious characters. They each had such clashing personalities that made for a hysterically madcap cast.

The shenanigans these people got themselves into. *shakes head chuckling* I CAN’T, GUYS. It was the best!

OTHER THINGS TO LOVE

There was literally nothing I didn’t love about this ridiculous story.

This author excels at providing a rip-roaring good time of a story, and this one is just dripping with humor. My cheeks were practically hurting by the end from grinning and laughing. Like, seriously, a couple of times I had to set the book down to compose myself because I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD. The mishaps Burndee got himself into… Oh boy. It was SOMETHING.

And can we just talk about the author’s writing style? Oh, if I had just a smidgen of her wit. Because GUYS. THE WIT. The story is told from Burndee’s point-of-view, and I live for his complete uppity disdain of people and the world. The way he perceives and explains things has me giggling every. single. sentence. Every moment of his book is just one hilariously quotable line after the next. I am so in love with Allison’s ingenious, witty writing voice. It is worth the read for her descriptions alone. But, of course, it’s worth the read for everything else as well.

The really clever thing about the story is how it is a retelling of The Goose Girl, but it’s not obvious at first. I love how all the Goose Girl elements are going on in the background, but Burndee is so occupied trying to deal with his own problems, he doesn’t even notice. It was such a fun and brilliant way to retell a fairy tale!

Also that part near the end with Cynthia and Ella? Yeah, that was one of the scenes where I had to stop reading to compose myself because I was grinning and giggling so hard. GOLD. PURE GOLD.

Every inch of this story was gold. And though it’s super short (about 120 pages, I believe) and usually I’m not wild about short tales, this one didn’t need to be long. It’s one of the few novellas I’ve read that I can say was just right. It is a perfect small package of wit and charm and hilarious shenanigans, and I adored every absurd second of it.

THINGS I DIDN’T LIKE

Um. What did I just say? IT’S PERFECT. I honest to goodness cannot think of a thing I wasn’t wild about.

Why did I even put this category here? THIS BOOK IS EVERYTHING. <3

CONTENT CAUTIONS

The lovely thing about these stories is, though the characters are in their mid-twenties, they're also catered for a younger crowd. These are the types of tales that the whole family can enjoy. (Seriously, if I had really young siblings you’d better believe I’d be reading these out loud to them. But, alas, my siblings and I are all adults.)

They are squeaky clean and perfect for young and old alike. I mean, there is a bit of magic since it is about a fairy godfather, but it’s all very fairy tale magic. And this one actually said that the fairies’ magic comes from a Higher Authority, and kind of hinted that this is something Burndee is going to have to work through in later books.

So it’s all very light and God-honoring without being preachy whatsoever. It’s just a fun story, with nothing dark and heavy weighing it down, but so very clever and witty so it doesn’t feel “kiddie” for the older crowd. It’s such a great balance!

CONCLUSION

I guess all that’s really left to say is: READ THESE BOOKS.

Both The Reluctant Godfather and this one went straight to my favorites shelf, and not just any ol’ book gets placed there. But these are, honest to goodness, some of my most favorite reads on this earth. Plus they’re super fast reads, for when you want something quick and lighthearted.

From a delightful cast, to endlessly amusing banter, to a falling domino show of hilarious mishaps and shenanigans, to an ingeniously witty narrative, to a clever take on a fairy tale, this book is guaranteed to put a smile on your face and keep it there long after you’ve finished.

Review originally posted on my blog: https://christinesmithauthor.com/2020/08/book-review-a-royal-masquerade-by-allison-tebo/
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Author 11 books127 followers
December 19, 2018
Well that was fun! I think I actually liked it even better than the Reluctant Godfather. The style and feel were... delightful! I laughed a lot, and enjoyed this book very much. My only complaint was I'd hoped for at least a little more of Ella, but Burndee and Colin were a ton of fun. I knew nothing about the Goose Girl fairytale before reading this, so I can't speak for that, but I enjoyed all the new characters! Food fights. Ventriloquists. Meck. Irritable brothers in law. Disasters left and right. (told you: fun!)

Content:
Sexual content: None
Language: None
Violence: A few battles, but no gore or blood
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164 reviews31 followers
May 30, 2022
It was a bit wordy at places and I feel like more editing could’ve increased the tension in the story, but this book was still hilarious. There wasn’t much romance besides the ones that were established in the first book, but it was still cute. I’ll be rereading this sometime soon. I could put it down the first time I was reading and I can’t imagine being able to during the rereads.
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Author 5 books43 followers
December 26, 2022
I loved everything about this!

I’d heard of the Goose Girl but haven’t actually read it. I was glad for the Authors Note that mentioned how this story related but also how it differed. I liked her analogy—“setting the stage”.

The lessons Burnbee learned here and how it did effect how the wedding unfolded was so well written! I loved the insights into some things he’s working through. His concern for the person he is especially regarding his relationship and love for Ella is my favorite!

I think the only thing that did kind strike me as odd was the conclusion/solution perhaps though a relief for a couple characters but I would’ve appreciated it being a bit clearer and polished. I definitely wanted to do a standing ovation at the ending though!

This held plenty of laugh out loud action mixed with some important points and righting wrongs!
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2,854 reviews1,436 followers
January 2, 2019
What an absolute hoot this is! What important role will a certain skunk play in a royal wedding? How will Burndee deal with what happens when his temper goes awry on a most important day?

I laughed myself silly over this humorous retelling story and my biggest question is how Alli manages to come up with this stuff...it was just so funny and so unexpected! I think I like it even a bit better than “The Reluctant Godfather” and I really can’t wait for the next book in the series. This one’s beautifully written and so brilliantly put together. If you like humor, retellings, or anything remotely like those, be sure to grab a copy of this one to read!
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1,200 reviews
March 28, 2019
So, I needed something light and cute and I knew this would fit the bill. Allison Tebo has an amazing writing style, it is able to portray images very well and keep a fast pace. I admire the way the characters were built, and the follow through with the character development.
That being said, this book had a bit too much of a frantic pace for me. The whole book takes place in one day, and there is never a place to catch your breath. I don't like that frantic feeling.
So this was a good book. Maybe 3 1/2 stars. I think a lot of people would really enjoy this series.
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274 reviews
February 28, 2025
3.5🌟
I definitely enjoyed the first book in this series more but this book was still a good read. The first book was a Cinderella retelling and it flew by. This book did feel a little slow at the beginning and I wasn’t super attached to the story. However, I did really like reading about Burndee and Colin again and I thought the plot twist in the story was clever, even if I did guess it. I think I would have definitely given this book a higher rating if Ella had been in it more. I really missed her character and I think if she was in the book more, this one would have been at least a four star. Overall, a good read. I definitely recommend this series for people who love fairytale retellings. This story made me love the fairytale of Cinderella more. For ages 12/13 and up.
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