If I had to just rate Jess and the writing style, it would have to be around 3,5 to 4 stars (3 for writing style, 4,5 for Jess).
But Alison was an judgemental pushy arsehole of epic proportions who made my blood boil the whole time. Here are few examples of her thoughts/speech:
1) To start with, his suit fit too well. A well-tailored suit suggested a vanity she found particularly distasteful in men.
- So men aren't allowed to want to look good and wear well-fitting suits if they have the money to buy them? Even though a good suit is way more comfortable than an ill-fitting one and they spend their whole day in the suit at work? Is there seriously toxic masculinity in a lesbian romance?
2)“Gay girls don’t like to play with bi girls. It’s a thing. Everyone knows that lesbians are the most biphobic people out there.”
-another classic that makes my blood boil. Thankfully Jess had a pretty good response to this, but Alison prides herself on being an academic, she really should know you can't make a definite conclusion from ONE data-point!!!
3)"Trust me, I don’t expect much from him. Maybe all that metal in his face is weighing him down. Probably has misspelled tattoos too."
- yes, because in order to have a piercing or a tattoo you have to apparently sacrifice some brain cells in exchange
4)“I have a reason! My reason is that she was just ridiculously rude to an older doctor. He was being a perfect Southern gentleman and she just went after him. And she did it right in front of a nurse.”
- the doctor in question just repeatedly called every young doctor incompetent and arrogant and was one step away from patting Jess on the head and calling her "girlie". In front of the nurse as well. Jess just told him she doesn't agree with his behaviour. Allison is a d*ck. Besides why does she think being a "Southerner" makes you automatically a gentleman? From what I've understood of the USA, it makes you more of a "deceptive insulting d*ck" than anything else and has no correlation to being nice whatsoever.
5)“What do you mean? You mean, like, you play video games?” Jess nodded and she continued, “Oh. That’s…surprising.”
“Why is that surprising?”
“I just thought you would be interested in things more…doctor-like.”
- the point of having hobbies is to have something fun that isn't work... Alison should learn about the concept
6)“Stop trying to hide behind your bullshit excuses!”
“HIPAA is not an excuse. It’s a law and, incidentally, it’s one I believe in. I have to protect the privacy of my patients.”
- yes, she was emotionally distraught, but she had to know about doctor-patient privilege
Other instances that were too long to quote here:
- her old condescending boss whom she doesn't even like doesn't believe the Henry VIII-MacLeod thing..... So Jess is definitely wrong, even though there are compelling arguments for this theory and last I checked, some historians also claimed that when ancient Egyptians buried two men in a traditionally "married" style, the Egyptians "probably made a mistake during burial rites".
Egyptians. Mistake. With a Burial.
And that didn't require medical knowledge, just acknowledgment of the existence of gays. So why would the word of one old white men who didn't actually conduct the research automatically disprove it and is taken as gospel?
- Her obsession with "proper southern behaviour" disturbs me. Is being a bitch while smiling really better than being just plain rude?
- her constant belittling of Jess.
- her tendency to control Beth and Stephen. I get she's worried, but ultimately it's none of her business how they live their life
- her huffines about getting the simplified versions of the medical articles. How does a historian expect to understand a scientific paper for the medical community without studying medicine? Google? That's how conspiracy theories about vaccines changing DNA start. People who don't understand a scientific topic google every single word and then draw incorrect and heavily simplified conclusions.
And yes, she herself acknowledged that some of those opinions may be not ok, but too little, too late, in my opinion. I already hated her at that point
So, in conclusion: Jess needs a better girlfriend, Alison needs some serious therapy and, thanks to her unbearable self-righteousness and prejudices, my rating of this book dropped down to 1,5-2 stars.