A man returns to a seaside town, intending to end his life, but an encounter on the beach with the ghostly figure of a girl leads him towards violence and some kind of redemption.
AUTHOR'S NOTE - This story was originally published in The Black Room Manuscripts Part 2 anthology way back last year, under the title 'The Father'.
A stellar, quick read from Rich Hawkins. Sometimes a particular story just seems suited for a writer's sensibilities and I think this is one. There is a lot of emotional context that is communicated in a short amount of text. And somehow, he manages to make this feel bleak and depressing while also uplifting and beautiful.
Hawkins has a knack for writing grim, bleak tales of supernatural horror and he has delivered again with this story. He captures the setting incredibly well, the descriptions of the town and it's inhabitants very well done. The descriptions of the weather really helped with setting the mood and atmosphere, too. His attention to detail makes for a visceral read and the characters are also well developed. There is just a hint of the protagonists back story, enough to create sympathy for the character. A very entertaining and well written story.
This story perfectly evokes a sense of melancholy, and the decaying seaside town in which it's set acts as an extended metaphor for the main character's state of mind. The descriptions are lush and poetic. Left me feeling haunted. I highly recommend this quick read.