This book was a massive let-down for me. It felt much more like a recap of the previous books in the series and history of the town it was set in, and perhaps a set-up for the next book in the series, than a story of the couple it was purported to tell. Sure, those things were recounted through Felicity and Gabe, but the couple was definitely not the focus of the novel.
The River House is book eight of Carla Neggers’ Swift River Valley series, a fact I was not aware of before I started reading. I think I may have appreciated the story more had I read the previous novels, but since this story rehashed so much of the dynamics of the other couples and families, I’m not sure it was necessary. The River House is written in third-person limited perspective and alternatively followed Felicity and Gabe’s thoughts.
Generally, I would start the body of my review with what I loved about a story, but after reading this entire book, I can’t find anything I loved. And let me tell you, I HATE that. To not find any redeeming qualities about a book I spent my time reading. I felt like I was waiting the entire time for something to happen and nothing substantial ever did. Even the climax – or at least I think it was meant to be the climax – was lackluster. I didn’t feel the couple’s chemistry, nor did I understand why they were so reticent to explore their supposed connection for the entirety of the book. I am unsure as to why the author felt all the details about the other couples, the inter-family dynamics, the town history, and a million other throw away pieces of information were relevant to telling the story of Gabe and Felicity. There was a ton of build-up behind the intended antagonist, but the potential was completely unrealized. Honestly, this is one book I wish I would have DNF’d, to save myself and the author the heartbreak.
Beyond all of that, the writing style was bizarre and stilted. Granted, I did read an early copy, which was clearly lacking in formatting, but the transitions were strange. For a good portion of the first half of the book the narration would switch characters at chapter breaks, then suddenly the switches were happening throughout each chapter with no warning, so I’d have to go back and get my bearings as to whose thoughts I was experiencing. The timeline was also somewhat amorphous, particularly in the beginning. Just when I was sure, I had a handle on what day it was there would be mention of an event we had a concrete timeframe of and it would be completely different than what I was thinking. It was very hard to follow.
This is the first and will be the last, book I’ve read by Carla Neggers. I didn’t care for her writing style, and the book left me completely unsatisfied in relation to the characters and story arc.