Mixed Bag, Spastic, Split Personality Storyline
Authored by Mr. Steven L. Hawk, “Stranded Justice (The Justice Trilogy Series Book 2),” is a mixed bag, spastic in its split personality storyline. There’s an interesting and entertaining story contained within, but it is systematically sabotaged by the author’s apparent SJW agenda and silly writing choices. The story takes one step forward, and then two steps back.
“Eli Justice (MC),” a human, son of a military “genius,” leader of the multi-species “Shiale Alliance,” is somewhat of a military savant himself. Eli is a captain leading “Shiale Rangers,” assigned as security to protect a scientific/engineering team, who are tasked with surveying a habitable planet, that has shown preliminary results of an abundance of a rare ore, essential in all Shiale Alliance, as well as their foes’ technology. Upon arriving, enemies are discovered planet-side, the ship is shot from orbit, and guerrilla combat ensues.
The baseline of the story is pretty entertaining when the author stays with it. However, Mr. Hawks, decided to insert a heavy handed dose of SJW agenda politics throughout. It fully derails his story and is not subtle it its intent. The list of examples are lengthy, so this reviewer will list just a few. The combat armor worn by the Shiale Rangers is “PEACE armor,” (caps and acronym author’s choice) written throughout the book, in an glaringly overt, lame attempt at subliminal messaging. A passing female character is gratuitously described as lesbian, having little, if anything to do with the narrative. The labeling gives the sense of overt cynicism, an apparent attempt to commercialize inclusion. Humanity is divided into six (6) culture governing groups. Five (5) of the groupings being based on continents (sorry Australia, you didn’t make the author’s cut), while the sixth is strictly religious-based: Muslim. Then there are the just silly plot devices of the author. A lower level sentient race are the “Chi,” a six-legged chihuahua analog, of which the author celebrates his ownership of, in “About the Author.” War-faring, technologically advanced, spacefaring aliens only engage in land combat, because according to the author’s premise, they never considered arming vessels for combat in space.
Beneath all the nonsense the author has saddled his book with, there still exists somewhat of a quick, fun romp of a space saga. It’s not high brow, but can entertain at a basic level.
“Stranded Justice,” is conditionally recommended and was fully read via Kindle Unlimited.