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The errors from grammar , spelling , to the biggest of all CONTINUITY , often caused me to have to re-read a sentence to an entire paragraph. My question is do you not have spell check, grammar check, an EDITOR, or even a friend to help before you submit these for AMAZON. HONESTLY UNTIL YOU WROTE MADELEINE was a U.S. citizen , I thought the setting was outside of here. I did enjoy the story, but I hated the constant interruptions from the poor writing skills.
Spelling mistakes by the dozen..the story line doesn't flow its like this book has been translated into English by someone who wasn't very good at their job and knows nothing about baking either
Actually couldn't get past the first five chapters. There's more exposition than story. It also needs a better editor. There were enough words that were just plain wrong as to be distracting.
I wanted to like these books, but there are just too many errors. My brain catches errors, automatically, and I can manage a few here, and there, but these need good proofreader. Sorry.
This was a waste of time. Too many typos, not a good plot. Yeah we have a secret ingredient for our pastries, we don't want to share but we plan on having pastry shops from coast to coast! Don't waste your time with they one!