When I first started The Fall of Neskaya I found the beginning to be a slog. It was hard for me to fall in with Coryn. While reading, until we get to book four or so, I was calling for the vast majority of book one to be chopped off. While I still think it's still a big long winded, and sets up characters that had little payoff (Maybe we'll see them again in a later book?), I can appreciate it much more knowing and seeing what it set in motion. Maybe Deborah was trying to find her voice.
I found Taniquel to be a much more compelling and interesting protagonist. I'm still mad that she was deemed to have so little laran it wasn't worth training. To see her constantly ham-stringed by her culture and pushed aside by her uncle really endeared me to her.
Some quotes:
'Father says that if you treat a man as honorable, he is more likely to behave that way.'
'Murmurs rippled around the table at the sight of such riches, for copper was the most precious of all Darkover's rare metals.' I think this is super interesting. We know Darkover is metal poor but it's always novel when gold and silver aren't the most precious metal. I wonder what they use for currency in Darkover.
' "We marry where we must, not where we will," Beltran said. "Love between a man and his wife come later, or not, as the gods will it. Meanwhile, we each do what we can for family, for nothing is stronger than the ties of blood." '
' "Laran is carried through the body in special channels," Gareth explained. "But these channels also carry sexual energy. In some people, laran is awakened at adolescence, when such feelings begin to stir, so the channels are particularly vulnerable to overload. That's one of the causes of threshold sickness. With care and training, this need not be a continuing problem. You will learn to monitor yourself, to learn what is safe for you to do." '
'Coryn's two age-mates were Liane and a tall, dark-eyed boy names Aran MacAran.' Fuck no. Aran MacAran, that's terrible. Do you hate this kid? Also the fact that Aran got any kind of description instead of Liane made me think Coryn was gay.
' "Bredu." The word meant brother.... but also beloved.' So they're gay right?
'Beyond the fumbling experiments considered normal for all boys of a certain age, Coryn felt no particular attraction to other men. But neither did he feel any revulsion. Aran loved him according to his nature, loved him for who and what he was, and Aran was a good and decent man.' So only one of them is gay.... I hate it. Especially the part where he's a good and decent man, he wouldn't rape anyone. Also like they're okay with some fumbling when sandal-wearer is a slur use to call a man gay? What the fuck.
' "The reason, the only reason," he repeated the phrase for emphasis, "for a Tower to make such weapons is at the lawful order of the lord to whom is owes fealty. We do not make policy, nor do we decide the fate of kingdoms." '
'Aran's love for him ran just as strongly as it had before. In that moment of rapport, their friendship had changed. Aran had desired him and, knowing that Coryn could not return that desire, had withdrawn rather than risk their friendship.' No Deborah, leave these boys alone.
'Rarely had she seen a man of such surpassing beauty. Eyes as blue as chips of summer sky regarded her levelly, measuring her in a way that sent prickles up the back of her neck. Golden hair glittered as if the room had been specifically to enhance his brilliance. In her experience, such looks often betokened arrogance and self-centeredness. Although she saw no trace of either in the young man's bearing, she disliked him immediately.' Tell me someone is the bad guy without telling me he's the bad guy.
' "Was your first marriage such a burden? Are you a secret lover of women? If so, I will show you the pleasures to be found in the arms of a real man. Oh, yes, I look forward very much to showing you that." ' Vomit. Vomit. I already knew he was a villan, you didn't have to say that.
' "What, and begin the argument we had already been over a dozen times?" she flared. "I myself had answered them. What cause was there to make you resposible for my freely given oath?"
" I have wronged you, niece. I thought you spoke only form vengefulness, that with a lusty new husband, you would give up your wild schemes of reconquest and be content. It would have been foolhardy to risk a single Hastur soldier in such a personal cause. But now the stakes have shifted." '
' Rumail grabbed Ginevra and pulled her backward, not caring whether she fell. He took Darna's face in both his hands and lifted it to the light. Her face and hands were streaked with crimson, where mental energy had burned along the channels, searing the smaller nodes beneath the skin. He could only guess at the internal damage. But her eyes.... ' Crazy woman. That's what you get when you try, and fail, to make your own tower. Fucking crazy people.
' "Are we wise enough, then, to decide what quarrels we will join and which we will pass by?" Bernardo asked. "It is said that power clouds judgment. And with such power as we wield, can we be trusted to use it wisely? Or is it better to leave such decisions to those trained to it, just as we are trained to the use of your laran?" '
' Let each thing keep to it's natural place ' I really like these off the cuff spells.
' "Bonewater dust poisons the land itself, so that for generations afterward, no man may travel there in safety or eat anything which has grown or grazed on it. There may be more horrors in the year to come. We can only pray we never find out what they are." '
' The prohibitions against sexual relations, even jokes, still rang strong, a remembrance of the time when group marriages when any man of her father's age could have actually been her father. '
' Deftly, he began to reshape the psychic substance of the tower. Walls thickened and grew battlements, windows narrowed. A tracing of lace-ivy burgeoned into covering of sword-edged thorn vines. From a landmark of grace and beauty, Neskaya drew in on itself' now a fortress. ' Give me more of this.