I share the opinion of many reviewers, that I would have enjoyed a whole book about Rafael and the Dominican baseball recruiting system, or a book about Maya and her personal growth. The two together started off well, but by the end I wanted to sink my teeth into one story or the other, and I cared much more about Rafael than Maya, so that's the story I'd like to read.
I chose this book off the shelf because I like when authors research and bring to life a small pocket of information that is new to me. The author succeeded in writing a well-researched book on the Dominican baseball story, and in bringing that to life.
His development of Maya is less appealing. Maya is an adolescent who is exploring her own beliefs and moral code. Her passion for the environment soon becomes active and vocal. She carefully forms her opinions and grows throughout the book in maturity about how to express them. That's the positive view.
However, her story is marred for me by a couple of small details.
Despite the fact that Maya and I share similar passions, I was put off by her self-righteous attitude and cliched speech about those passions. Even within the book, her family is annoyed by her constant thinking, so this is meant to be part of her character. But it grew wearisome for me, especially as I wanted to cheer for her as the heroine.
Parents should be aware that Maya begins a rich and meaningful internet pen-pal relationship with a stranger she meets on a blog. Early in their correspondence, the stranger encourages Maya to feel free to tell her everything, because she has time to listen. It sounds like a red flag, but fortunately for Maya, both characters are telling the truth about their identities. I'd certainly want to caution my own children that this is fiction.
A final detail I can't help but mention: As Maya dreams of her future, "she didn't want to hurt her mom's feelings.... But she wanted something more than a house and kids." Feminists in America have struggled for years, and continue to struggle, so that women can have the option to pursue any dream we choose. There is no place in contemporary children's literature for belittling the dream of raising a family, just as we would never belittle any other dream.
As for Rafael, his dream of baseball and his family's reaction to that dream are treated more evenly. His relationships with his parents deepen as they each consider their own childhood dreams and what became of them, and they watch Rafael pursue his.