2.5 stars
I feel conflicted about this book since I really like this author’s writing voice and style and how she writes sex scenes. All of which worked for this book. Where it faltered for me was in the relationship. Kyler (H) is a police officer who’s on desk duty following being shot and he’s under investigation because there’s corruption in the department. Mia (h) is an artist and working at a gallery. She’s also new to Baltimore but interested in the established BDSM club, Blasphemy, where Kyler is a Master (one of the founders). When they meet, Mia doesn’t know he’s a police officer and Kyler doesn’t know her father is the new police commissioner. Written in third person, dual POV. No ow drama, small amounts of om drama as h attempts to move on a couple times and H interrupts, neither are virgins (no scenes of either with OP, although h does consider a couple partners but only reaches the talking stage).
Kyler and Mia had excellent physical chemistry and their kinks fit perfectly together as D/s. Most of their time on page though involved scenes at the club or them in their regular lives but not much time with each other outside of the club. This led to me having a hard time believing in the romantic side of their relationship. Added to that was the fact that Kyler was against a relationship because of his job and pushed Mia away, then pushed her away again once they realized the connection of his job with her father.
I did like that while Mia was upset during the times he pushed her away, she also attempted to move on. I wanted less of the push/pull though. I also liked the scenes at the club, there was breath play, CNC, aftercare, and plenty of steaminess. But again, I wanted more of them building the emotionally intimate side of their relationship. There were mentions of them talking for an hour after a scene, but I didn’t feel as though they truly knew each other despite their connection. It made the expression of deeper feelings harder for me to believe.
A couple of other Masters are introduced and there are cameos of characters from another series. All of these side characters were interesting, always a good thing with a first in series and a crossover.
The ending is HFN and a bit abrupt. An epilogue could have added closure with a peek into their romance after coming back together from the final pushing away. Definitely more time of them together outside of the club or sex. I’ve read one of the later books and I think these two pop into that one so I expect they show up in other books. I know this was meant to be shorter and more of a taste of the author’s work, it sadly didn’t work for me, despite my appreciation for the writing.