Be careful when making a cake! or maybe—-
Where in the World is MICAH????!
The author spent some time planning this story---sort of. I liked the mystery, the way Veronica’s life began to change when unexpected events took place, how she dealt with the blows.
The best part of the book for me was the adorable Bella, because of what she had to say and the way she interacted with her mommy. I loved the description of how she blew up her cheeks when angry, stuck out her lower lip and crossed her little arms. I loved the sloppy wet kisses she planted on her mother's cheek. I loved everything about this personable, creative three year old girl, even her tantums. I want one like her in my next life!
But the plot was over the top what with Veronica’s mother’s bizarre, violent story, her roommate, husband, and the children. The neighbor who wanted to be a friend seemed at first a silly caricature of an overbearing woman and although she became more human, still was not a very believable character. (To say nothing of how she could help Veronica day and night and still be able to take care of her own life.)
The many details of IVF were not very appetizing and seemed to go on throughout most of the book. A little of this kind of stuff can go a long way. It's a difficult subject to interject into a mystery story and I felt the reader did not need a course in what goes into this miserable, if sometimes magical procedure. I did not choose this book to read about sperm, eggs, blood, ad nauseum. I could pick up a medical book and read about the subject If I had the interest that the author expects the readers to have.
The side story of her ex-roommate, her friend and the boys, and another little girl appeared ridiculous to me, adding some unintended humor to all that was happening. And without giving any spoilers, --where there should have been grief, Veronica had only relief. It didn't seem to fit.
The story was overly wrought with Veronica’s racing memories of her horrible mother, mental problems both imagined and real, IVF treatment, and a too complicated ending. Yet it is easy to guess how everything will work out in the end. But there was some fun getting there, even though many of the complications began to get rather tedious.
I would advise the author to save some of her many ideas or ingredients, for her next books. When you mix a cake batter, you don't need to use every baking ingredient in the cabinet!
PS—Whatever did happen to Micah?