Terrible, terrible, terrible!
I just don't understand all the rave reviews - on picking up this book I was under the impression it would make for a good fantasy read but I couldn't make myself get halfway through.
So, you get a universe where witchery consumes the souls of female witches, while males can apparently become "Magisters", and thus use magic unlimitedly without making themselves die. At the same time, the prince Andovan is riddled by a terrible disease, and in the wake of some more events, starts a journey to find out who is making him sick. So, what was so bad about this?
First of all, the characters and their names. My God, what kind of third grade author names characters "Andovan" or "Colivar"? This was just a first hint of how un-inspired the whole book is. Very bad naming, and even worse, character development (at least up to 45% of the book, as my e-reader pointed, moment I gave up on it). Now, the characters. Andovan is by far the most stereotypical character: he is obviously better in many ways than his princely brothers, kind-hearted, honourable, brave and of course, incredibly determined. Ethanus, typical mentor character, with nothing special. Danton, typical short-sighted king, temperamental and oblivious to the bad fermenting next to him. The rest: very predictable. The only like-able character is Kamala, but even she has bouts of incredible stupidity that make one wonder how on Earth she became a Magister.
Secondly, plot development - no actual subtlety on C.S. Friedman's part. She is very clumsy in introducing new characters and new plot subparts, it's as if they're shouted in CAPS LOCK in readers' faces. You don't actually get to figure anything out on your own, but you don't really need to, since there really isn't much this book brings to the scene.
Thirdly, it just seems like a bad mix of previous fantasies, with very little consistency altogether. Just like a re-hash of previous stuff: you get some sorcerers, some fancy (and ridiculous) names, some BAD, EVIL souleaters, some stereotypical good guys, and voila, fantasy book churned out. There was no complexity to the magic system, it's as if the author selected the easy way out. What exactly and how exactly did Kamala learn all that she did? OH well, we don't actually find out. One moment, she is a teenage whore and the next, she can suddenly transform into a bird.
Lastly, and most disturbing, is the writing style. Maybe it's just not my thing, but I find the author's affected way of writing disturbing. Particularly when writing about Andovan or Kamala, every 5 lines she feels the need to emphasize how great they are in a way or another. While her style is not entirely unpleasant in itself, this becomes a real hindrance. Combined with the predictability of the plot it just made it a chore to get through this.
All in all, a big disappointment.