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Noble Pleasures #1
A King Undone
"A brilliant romance set in a queer and quaint alternative Victorian era." —Fresh Fiction on A GENTLEMAN REVEALED A tale of forbidden love between a king and his male concubine. In a Victorian world where gentlemen openly court other noblemen, the threat of scandal still lurks behind every velvet drape. Years ago, King Arend Tollemach broke off a youthful engagement to a neighboring prince—his first love—and married a woman. All in service of the crown. Now, after his queen's untimely death, Arend undertakes a forbidden risk. He decides to claim a concubine, his first male lover, and bring him into his bed for one year. So, he turns to the one establishment renowned for the most sensual courtesans in the the mysterious, discreet Temple Sapphor. Arend's only stipulation? There must be no emotion involved in the transaction; he won't ever fall in love with another man, not after losing his prince years ago. Julian never imagined he'd spend ten years on his temple shelf, repeatedly passed over. But just when he fears never finding placement in a nobleman's bed--never falling in love--King Arend Tollemach walks into the temple. The monarch is a tempestuous, sensual man, and Julian instantly realizes he might fall in love. But can Julian help the gorgeous monarch risk his long-shuttered heart? Especially when a dangerous threat arises, forcing Arend to choose between his own happiness—and his throne—yet again. The first in New York Times' bestselling author Deidre Knight, writing as Cooper Davis's series, The Noble Pleasures. A King Undone is a gay, m/m historical romance, set in an alternative Victorian world, with a HEA for now. The novel is sensual, but not erotic, and highly romantic in the tradition of m/f historical authors like Lisa Kleypas, Kathleen Woodiwiss. The Noble Pleasures series is very much for fans of C.S. Pacat's CAPTIVE PRINCE trilogy. Noble Pleasures (Book 1): A King Undone Noble Pleasures (Book 2): A King Awakened Noble Pleasures (Book 3): A Gentleman Revealed Noble Pleasures (Book 4): A Nobleman Tempted
250 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 9, 2014
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Cooper Davis
12 books138 followersCooper Davis first discovered the allure of m/m storytelling when she, pulse aflutter, watched My Beautiful Laundrette with a college roommate. Later, her passion for stories about men falling in love and finding their HEA together was stoked by online slash fiction. After years as an avid fan of m/m and slash, Cooper finally decided to try her hand at penning her own stories about same-gender romance and love.
A voracious reader across all subgenres of m/m fiction, Cooper is particularly fond of courtships set against the backdrop of breathless scandal and intrigue found in period drawing rooms. She is thrilled that her first historically-themed m/m romance series debuts this December with A KING UNDONE (Samhain).
A voracious reader across all subgenres of m/m fiction, Cooper is particularly fond of courtships set against the backdrop of breathless scandal and intrigue found in period drawing rooms. She is thrilled that her first historically-themed m/m romance series debuts this December with A KING UNDONE (Samhain).
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January 15, 2015DNF at 11%. Could not get into this AT ALL. I struggled trying to read just this much. The language and writing style was not to my taste. I'll leave this with no rating.
October 21, 2020
4.5 Stars
Oddly enough the audiobook is free on audible 10/21 right now and John Hartley does an excellent job narrating! Take advantage!
Excellent historical romance.
A lot of heart
Found myself getting quite emotional over the MC's turmoil.
The concubine who is desperate to be loved, cherished and chosen.
The king who after a lifetime of sacrificing his happiness finally takes the steps towards love and hope despite his ever present duties to the throne.
Historical's aren't usually my cup of tea and it's a rare one that catches my attention so thoroughly.
Highly recommend.
HFN? Tentative... It appears to be just the beginning!
Oddly enough the audiobook is free on audible 10/21 right now and John Hartley does an excellent job narrating! Take advantage!
Excellent historical romance.
A lot of heart
Found myself getting quite emotional over the MC's turmoil.
The concubine who is desperate to be loved, cherished and chosen.
The king who after a lifetime of sacrificing his happiness finally takes the steps towards love and hope despite his ever present duties to the throne.
Historical's aren't usually my cup of tea and it's a rare one that catches my attention so thoroughly.
Highly recommend.
HFN? Tentative... It appears to be just the beginning!
December 17, 2014
So, there's holy-shit-hot, I-can't-take-it-but-please-don't-stop UST, and then there's this. A painful slog to an anticlimactic shag.
Unfortunately (or fortunately?), no desire to continue this series. No desire to continue this review either. (My meanest review to date, sorry! Honest review is honest.)
Unfortunately (or fortunately?), no desire to continue this series. No desire to continue this review either. (My meanest review to date, sorry! Honest review is honest.)
May 26, 2025
Gentle mutinies, these... until the year he reached the ripe age of eighteen and endeavoured the unthinkable. The risqué. Quite without his sire's approval, Prince Arend dared to follow his heart and betrothed himself to the prince of a neighbouring realm. For that's what young love always did: reached with both hands, audaciously grasping for honest happiness.
And what old royalty did was slap that hand away and into the grasp of a loveless, arranged marriage. To a female, of course - an unfortunate circumstance when one's natural inclinations tilted squarely toward males.
I absolutely loved this book. Much like Arend and Julian, A King Udone is utterly charming and quite beautiful, with much depth of character.
ETA 21/10/2020: I've reread this book so many times, I just reread it again this week. I love it unconditionally: The prose. Julian, he's wonderful and so clever with his words, and King Arend Tollemach, he has to fight himself and the council to be who he wants (needs) to be. I know this is the slowest of slow burns, but it makes me sad to see it sit at such a low rating average on Goodreads. Still, the book and I gel in the best possible ways.
Blog review-
And what old royalty did was slap that hand away and into the grasp of a loveless, arranged marriage. To a female, of course - an unfortunate circumstance when one's natural inclinations tilted squarely toward males.
I absolutely loved this book. Much like Arend and Julian, A King Udone is utterly charming and quite beautiful, with much depth of character.
ETA 21/10/2020: I've reread this book so many times, I just reread it again this week. I love it unconditionally: The prose. Julian, he's wonderful and so clever with his words, and King Arend Tollemach, he has to fight himself and the council to be who he wants (needs) to be. I know this is the slowest of slow burns, but it makes me sad to see it sit at such a low rating average on Goodreads. Still, the book and I gel in the best possible ways.
Blog review-
December 10, 2014
A King Undone, is a historical romance set in a world where it is perfectly acceptable for a man to marry another man...unless he is the king and expected to produce an heir.
For years, King Arend has sacrificed his happiness for his kingdom. Now, at age 41, Arend is ready to take on a concubine and visits the exclusive Temple Sapphor to make his selection. There, Arend immediately encounters Julian. Julian was stolen from his life and put up on a shelf at Temple for Sapphor for the last ten years, but for the next twelve months…he’s all Arend’s!
I loved so many things about this story!
Slow Burn: Going in, I expected it to have page after page of sex, sex, and more sex. But it didn’t! Yes, there was A LOT of talking and thinking about sex, but Arend wanted to court Julian and get to know him first. Plus, he was very afraid and nervous about taking that next step beyond kissing with another man. This is something Arend has desired for a very long time, and what if it isn’t perfect? What if he can’t be the man he desires to be? What does Arend want?
Characters: There were so many wonderful characters through out this book, not only the man characters, but the secondary ones as well. From Alistair, Arend’s “portly” spinster secretary who is like his brother, to Jim, Arend’s valet who seems to know everything. And even the crummy Mallon who I wanted to stab in the eye!
HFN: The closer and closer I was getting near the end, the more and more I started to freak out and worry that the story would feel unfinished. Arend and Julian’s contract was for Julian to remain with Arend for a year, and by the end it had only been a few days and I wanted to see the WHOLE year with them together. Then I found out that their story WILL continue in the next book of the series. Yay! I totally want to read more of Arend and Julian because they have awesome chemistry and have so much more to discover about each other.
World: I couldn’t quite get a grasp on the world, that’s why I’m giving this book 4.5 stars instead of 5. Of course it was some sort of alternate history, but there seemed to be some slight fantasy influences they never really amounted to anything. I’m hoping this aspect will be further explored and developed in the next book.
Reviewed for The Blogger Girls
For years, King Arend has sacrificed his happiness for his kingdom. Now, at age 41, Arend is ready to take on a concubine and visits the exclusive Temple Sapphor to make his selection. There, Arend immediately encounters Julian. Julian was stolen from his life and put up on a shelf at Temple for Sapphor for the last ten years, but for the next twelve months…he’s all Arend’s!
I loved so many things about this story!
Slow Burn: Going in, I expected it to have page after page of sex, sex, and more sex. But it didn’t! Yes, there was A LOT of talking and thinking about sex, but Arend wanted to court Julian and get to know him first. Plus, he was very afraid and nervous about taking that next step beyond kissing with another man. This is something Arend has desired for a very long time, and what if it isn’t perfect? What if he can’t be the man he desires to be? What does Arend want?
Arend’s eyes closed on a pained wince, and he grunted, “Take control of this.” Another grunt, a groan, a pleading whimper. “You command this, our moment. I am asking you, please, take charge of me and our intimacies. Take command of me.”
Characters: There were so many wonderful characters through out this book, not only the man characters, but the secondary ones as well. From Alistair, Arend’s “portly” spinster secretary who is like his brother, to Jim, Arend’s valet who seems to know everything. And even the crummy Mallon who I wanted to stab in the eye!
HFN: The closer and closer I was getting near the end, the more and more I started to freak out and worry that the story would feel unfinished. Arend and Julian’s contract was for Julian to remain with Arend for a year, and by the end it had only been a few days and I wanted to see the WHOLE year with them together. Then I found out that their story WILL continue in the next book of the series. Yay! I totally want to read more of Arend and Julian because they have awesome chemistry and have so much more to discover about each other.
World: I couldn’t quite get a grasp on the world, that’s why I’m giving this book 4.5 stars instead of 5. Of course it was some sort of alternate history, but there seemed to be some slight fantasy influences they never really amounted to anything. I’m hoping this aspect will be further explored and developed in the next book.
Reviewed for The Blogger Girls
January 22, 2015
I was really excited when I started this book. Our King, Arend, fell in love with a man at the age of 18. Deeply in love – but his father demanded he give up his love, and marry a woman to produce heirs. His father goes so far as to destroy the boy Arend loved and he dies an early death. Now many years later, Arend is 41 and has produced heirs and his wife is dead. Now it’s Arend’s turn to find satisfaction and happiness – and he wants it in the form of a concubine. Oh. A virgin King (in the sense he has never been with another man) and a concubine. I got excited. The beginning of the book is all about Arend and how he can’t wait to explore passion and sex with his concubine. He is so nervous and anxious about the entire thing. He goes to this secret temple full of gay men just waiting to be chosen by someone. Again – great excitement.
Arend finds the perfect man for him, named Julian. Exotic looking with cat-like eyes, tall and masculine but with a feminan voice. They have immediate lust for each other and tightening in their breaches. I love a tightened breach. Arend buys him and brings him back to his palace. Let the smexy times begin!!!
Except they don’t.
And don’t get me wrong. I don’t need 20 sex scenes to enjoy a book. But when a book is so focused on a king exploring his sexuality and having sex, and instead they dance around the subject for page after page, it feels like a let down. I liked both Arend and Julian. Julian was a slave of sorts at the temple for ten years. While treated well, for ten years he went on display but was never chosen by anyone. When Arend finally picks him, you can feel his elation and his anxiety for wanting to please Arend as much as he can. Julian has been trained in sex and sexual pleasure for ten years. I would have loved for this to have been put on display! But instead, Arend won’t let him. For page after page. I get that Arend is nervous and wants to take this slow. But at least take something.
I also had a problem with Arend not acting like a king. It’s more we are told he is a king, but we never really see that in action. I think it would have added a lot to the story if he acted in charge and in control.
I don’t know what else to say about this one. The book is basically just Arend and Julian talking about their situation, and what they want to do to each other and getting to know one another. They fall in love pretty fast, even though Julian is still scared Arend could send him away at anytime. There is a tiny bit of conflict introduced when the council is worried that Arend let his son marry another man, therefore not having an heir.
For such an erotic feeling book, it lacked in sexy and was disappointing.
Rating: C-
Arend finds the perfect man for him, named Julian. Exotic looking with cat-like eyes, tall and masculine but with a feminan voice. They have immediate lust for each other and tightening in their breaches. I love a tightened breach. Arend buys him and brings him back to his palace. Let the smexy times begin!!!
Except they don’t.
And don’t get me wrong. I don’t need 20 sex scenes to enjoy a book. But when a book is so focused on a king exploring his sexuality and having sex, and instead they dance around the subject for page after page, it feels like a let down. I liked both Arend and Julian. Julian was a slave of sorts at the temple for ten years. While treated well, for ten years he went on display but was never chosen by anyone. When Arend finally picks him, you can feel his elation and his anxiety for wanting to please Arend as much as he can. Julian has been trained in sex and sexual pleasure for ten years. I would have loved for this to have been put on display! But instead, Arend won’t let him. For page after page. I get that Arend is nervous and wants to take this slow. But at least take something.
I also had a problem with Arend not acting like a king. It’s more we are told he is a king, but we never really see that in action. I think it would have added a lot to the story if he acted in charge and in control.
I don’t know what else to say about this one. The book is basically just Arend and Julian talking about their situation, and what they want to do to each other and getting to know one another. They fall in love pretty fast, even though Julian is still scared Arend could send him away at anytime. There is a tiny bit of conflict introduced when the council is worried that Arend let his son marry another man, therefore not having an heir.
For such an erotic feeling book, it lacked in sexy and was disappointing.
Rating: C-
January 11, 2015
I loved the concept here. Virgin King and Concubine really whet my curiosity, unfortunately it didn’t work for me at all. While I enjoyed Julian’s character and his struggles I found I couldn’t connect to Arend’s which I found tremendously disappointing. He felt, in many ways, like a puppet king with the council always and endlessly pulling his strings, and that, coupled with some of his actions towards Julian made him come across more as petulant and arrogant.
While I love a slow burn romance, this didn’t read as one for me. The constant almost there teasing only added to my frustration with the characters and story, not my anticipation. While I initially found the fantasy setting intriguing it resulted in a style of writing that felt very awkward and stilted and I had a hard time finishing this one.
**Copy provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review**
While I love a slow burn romance, this didn’t read as one for me. The constant almost there teasing only added to my frustration with the characters and story, not my anticipation. While I initially found the fantasy setting intriguing it resulted in a style of writing that felt very awkward and stilted and I had a hard time finishing this one.
**Copy provided by the publisher in exchange for an honest review**
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September 1, 2014I loved Julian and King Arend's story. The sizzling sexual tension, the emotion between them. And the smexy times? Oh, so yummy. I also adored the world Cooper Davis created - it's an alternate historical world based on the Victorian era, but with kingdoms and where it's not illegal for men to marry other men. So men in gorgeous clothes, a delicious thread of lust and want riding heavy beneath proper manners, and an HEA that doesn't need to be hidden. *happy sigh* And in the interest of full disclosure, Cooper Davis is a dear friend and critique partner, and I beta-read this book. Still, I would have loved the book all the same. A powerful virgin king who falls in love with his gorgeous concubine? This one hit the nail on the head when it comes to book-love.
September 12, 2020
That was the purplest prose I've read in a very long time. But I really enjoyed it. The flowery descriptions should've been ridiculous but they worked. I'm not big into rent boys/concubine stories because I don't like transactional sex, but this was kind of making fun of itself and I liked that. It ended crazy abruptly. I knew this is part of a series, but still. Anyway, definitely invested now and eagerly awaiting the next one.
December 12, 2014
Why you should read it: I'll admit to wanting to read this because I was intrigued by the courtesan left on the shelf for 10 years, just watching everyone find homes while he was passed over. I expected a light and enjoyable read and at first that's exactly what it was. Then the King met Julian, and the wit and sass that are exchanged back and forth had me warming to both characters instantly. As the story (and their relationship) progressed, I felt like I was in the middle of a historical simmering romance. Arend and Julian are courtly gentlemen, and as they clash … words … hah! I fell more and more into the story. And when it ended, I wanted them to get their HEA so bad. Hopefully, we'll get a sequel that will give readers exactly what we want! A King Undone is perfect if you're in the mood for aloof (or trying to be) kings, witty courtesans and kisses that will melt your e-reader.
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March 31, 2015
Buddy Review with PizzyGirl on PBA!
What follows are my letters I’ve penned to various characters from this story, with notes in between. I was inspired to take such action, due to a particular scene that was obviously pivotal, and I ran with it. PS: This is a decently long novel, so my and Katie’s reviews are also rather lengthy. ;)
Dear Alistair, or Finley as some lovingly call you.
You, sir, are the type of best friend, of chosen brother, that everyone deserves. That King Arend claims you, and plays the same role for you, is a beautiful, honest (sometimes brutally so, as it should be), and vital part of this story of yours, and everyone’s. Navigating these treacherous Lord’s Council waters would be nigh on impossible without you, without this team of you and the King. I, and Julian, am forever indebted in gratitude for your intelligence, humor and fortitude. Just, uh, lay off the spirits a bit, eh?
Alistair is an early and constant presence in this story, playing his part in keeping things off-kilter, thwarting most attempts in figuring out just what might happen at the next turn of the page. He and King Arend, a friendship from childhood that crossed over many a social boundary often impossible to traverse and find acceptance, share a number of heated and humorous conversation. The kind in which only longtime friends can engage without fear of longer lasting pain and not accomplishing whatever goal is placed in front of them. They are a team, even if sometimes they don’t realize that each truly taking the smartest path.
Not at all dear Mallon,
I struggled to understand your motivation, except for the excruciatingly obvious. It appears this is the only type for which you were useful. Why use such harsh words about King Arend behind his back, this man who has trusted and kept you in his employ, his confidence, for so many years? Why did you show nary a concern over possible punishment for such reprehensible treatment of these others whom the King holds dear? Your actions seemed a forced effort at creating conflict and misunderstanding (short lived, thankfully) twixt Arend and Julian. It was unnecessary, as they demonstrated talents of their own for both of these faults. No one needs a friend like you.
Both Arend and Julian are of a certain age that brings with it the strength to face things head on more often than not. Most of those conflicts and misunderstandings were handled quickly, despite the aforementioned Mallon’s lame attempts. There’s a lot to be said for a King in his 40s and a concubine in his 30s. They’ve learned a thing or two, or a hundred.
My dearest, dearest, dearest Julian,
Your heart and humor and emotional intelligence, your observance of body language, know practically no bounds. For as shuttered a life as you lived for that decade at Temple Sapphor before joining your even more darling King, your strength is hard won and beautifully wielded. I wanted to yell “You go, boy!” more than once during this tale, but you’re neither a boy nor someone who deserves anything less than everything the world has to offer… with your Arend. ;)
Julian is arguably the heart of this story. We get both his and Arend’s point of view in a roundabout way, but his is filled with that heart, and almost obsessive need to be honest with Arend about, well, everything. He’s often the one in control. That power does flip now and then, both he and Arend coming to this arrangement with knowledge aplenty in some areas but wholly lacking in others. It was fun to watch them try and work it all out.
Oh! Jim! What news have you? Do tell! I know, that you know, that I know, that you know all. And I don’t just mean headlines provided on parchment. Spill! Your humor filled expressions always make me smile.
Jim doesn’t have much page time but, when he’s on, he’s on. He, maybe more than anyone else, is a catalyst for what happens in the final quarter of this book. Love him. As someone also in King Arend’s employ for many a year, he provides an example of how to comport one’s self. Unlike the aforementioned fellow associate who shall remain nameless. **Looks up**
Samuel! Samuel, Samuel, Samuel, you devil with the bottomless depth of heart. Such an excellent cousin you make to your King Arend. Telling it like it is, sussing out the truth, and calling Arend on it with just the slightest of smirks or feigned look of innocence. Oh, how you get the King’s blood up! And, most of the time, it’s with great intention and result. Most of the time. ;)
I almost can’t believe I’m going to say this, given some of your questionable choices, but I wish you every happiness and the things that will help you feel fulfilled. Most of all, do right by your Lucille, she’s a keeper one thousand times over.
PS: Keep up the teasing of your dear cousin, it’s oh so entertaining! Such robust humor deserves to be rewarded handsomely. *whispers* Maybe in the next book, we’ll find out just how handsomely?
Honestly, this pretty much sums up Samuel’s role in this story. He’s an instigator, a loving one at that, and wishes the best for Arend, and Julian, and even Alistair, despite their sometimes (falsely) cantankerous interactions.
Arend, what say you?
What say I? All that needs to be said is that you fight like the right Dickens for what you want, for what you need, even if the determination doesn’t lead to action until this point in your life, the point in which Julian appears. You fight for what you deserve: to be with the one they love and enjoy the happiness that follows. And the strife. And the laughter. And the passion, frustration, and celebration. May you do all of these and more with your darling Julian for the rest of your days… if and once they start.
This is a love story and, yes, it took us writing all of this to tell you that LOL.
There were a few places where formatting errors occurred, as well as some sentences that were missing a word or had one too many, often when dealing with tenses.
The believability of Julian and Arend and their actions in certain situations might appear, well, unbelievable from 30,000 feet. However, I don’t read from 30,000 feet, I read with my kindle a few inches from my face and I can tell you that, given their life experiences leading up to their meeting and the decisions and choices that follow, they’re all rather understandable. The language is such fun to read, the characters are all rather well fleshed out, the story keeps a good pace and I would definitely read more by this new-to-me author. Most especially, book two in this series. I want to know what happens next!
Any imperfections in this story were outweighed by the potential.
What follows are my letters I’ve penned to various characters from this story, with notes in between. I was inspired to take such action, due to a particular scene that was obviously pivotal, and I ran with it. PS: This is a decently long novel, so my and Katie’s reviews are also rather lengthy. ;)
Dear Alistair, or Finley as some lovingly call you.
You, sir, are the type of best friend, of chosen brother, that everyone deserves. That King Arend claims you, and plays the same role for you, is a beautiful, honest (sometimes brutally so, as it should be), and vital part of this story of yours, and everyone’s. Navigating these treacherous Lord’s Council waters would be nigh on impossible without you, without this team of you and the King. I, and Julian, am forever indebted in gratitude for your intelligence, humor and fortitude. Just, uh, lay off the spirits a bit, eh?
Alistair is an early and constant presence in this story, playing his part in keeping things off-kilter, thwarting most attempts in figuring out just what might happen at the next turn of the page. He and King Arend, a friendship from childhood that crossed over many a social boundary often impossible to traverse and find acceptance, share a number of heated and humorous conversation. The kind in which only longtime friends can engage without fear of longer lasting pain and not accomplishing whatever goal is placed in front of them. They are a team, even if sometimes they don’t realize that each truly taking the smartest path.
Not at all dear Mallon,
I struggled to understand your motivation, except for the excruciatingly obvious. It appears this is the only type for which you were useful. Why use such harsh words about King Arend behind his back, this man who has trusted and kept you in his employ, his confidence, for so many years? Why did you show nary a concern over possible punishment for such reprehensible treatment of these others whom the King holds dear? Your actions seemed a forced effort at creating conflict and misunderstanding (short lived, thankfully) twixt Arend and Julian. It was unnecessary, as they demonstrated talents of their own for both of these faults. No one needs a friend like you.
Both Arend and Julian are of a certain age that brings with it the strength to face things head on more often than not. Most of those conflicts and misunderstandings were handled quickly, despite the aforementioned Mallon’s lame attempts. There’s a lot to be said for a King in his 40s and a concubine in his 30s. They’ve learned a thing or two, or a hundred.
My dearest, dearest, dearest Julian,
Your heart and humor and emotional intelligence, your observance of body language, know practically no bounds. For as shuttered a life as you lived for that decade at Temple Sapphor before joining your even more darling King, your strength is hard won and beautifully wielded. I wanted to yell “You go, boy!” more than once during this tale, but you’re neither a boy nor someone who deserves anything less than everything the world has to offer… with your Arend. ;)
Julian is arguably the heart of this story. We get both his and Arend’s point of view in a roundabout way, but his is filled with that heart, and almost obsessive need to be honest with Arend about, well, everything. He’s often the one in control. That power does flip now and then, both he and Arend coming to this arrangement with knowledge aplenty in some areas but wholly lacking in others. It was fun to watch them try and work it all out.
Oh! Jim! What news have you? Do tell! I know, that you know, that I know, that you know all. And I don’t just mean headlines provided on parchment. Spill! Your humor filled expressions always make me smile.
Jim doesn’t have much page time but, when he’s on, he’s on. He, maybe more than anyone else, is a catalyst for what happens in the final quarter of this book. Love him. As someone also in King Arend’s employ for many a year, he provides an example of how to comport one’s self. Unlike the aforementioned fellow associate who shall remain nameless. **Looks up**
Samuel! Samuel, Samuel, Samuel, you devil with the bottomless depth of heart. Such an excellent cousin you make to your King Arend. Telling it like it is, sussing out the truth, and calling Arend on it with just the slightest of smirks or feigned look of innocence. Oh, how you get the King’s blood up! And, most of the time, it’s with great intention and result. Most of the time. ;)
I almost can’t believe I’m going to say this, given some of your questionable choices, but I wish you every happiness and the things that will help you feel fulfilled. Most of all, do right by your Lucille, she’s a keeper one thousand times over.
PS: Keep up the teasing of your dear cousin, it’s oh so entertaining! Such robust humor deserves to be rewarded handsomely. *whispers* Maybe in the next book, we’ll find out just how handsomely?
Honestly, this pretty much sums up Samuel’s role in this story. He’s an instigator, a loving one at that, and wishes the best for Arend, and Julian, and even Alistair, despite their sometimes (falsely) cantankerous interactions.
Arend, what say you?
What say I? All that needs to be said is that you fight like the right Dickens for what you want, for what you need, even if the determination doesn’t lead to action until this point in your life, the point in which Julian appears. You fight for what you deserve: to be with the one they love and enjoy the happiness that follows. And the strife. And the laughter. And the passion, frustration, and celebration. May you do all of these and more with your darling Julian for the rest of your days… if and once they start.
This is a love story and, yes, it took us writing all of this to tell you that LOL.
There were a few places where formatting errors occurred, as well as some sentences that were missing a word or had one too many, often when dealing with tenses.
The believability of Julian and Arend and their actions in certain situations might appear, well, unbelievable from 30,000 feet. However, I don’t read from 30,000 feet, I read with my kindle a few inches from my face and I can tell you that, given their life experiences leading up to their meeting and the decisions and choices that follow, they’re all rather understandable. The language is such fun to read, the characters are all rather well fleshed out, the story keeps a good pace and I would definitely read more by this new-to-me author. Most especially, book two in this series. I want to know what happens next!
Any imperfections in this story were outweighed by the potential.
July 11, 2018
I listened to the Audible of A King Undone.
Hmm, what can I say about this one but booo I was disappointed in this installment, which is a shame as I was completely enthralled with the book A Gentleman Revealed, which has overlapping characters.
A King Undone just ended up feeling a like a whole lot of nothing. It is nearly 10 hours of build up and little bang. Now, don't get me wrong, I love a slow burn but wow this was sloooooow.
And the narrator - oh gees. He told the story well, however the accent for Julian - well, Pepe LePew comes to mind when it comes to it!
I am invested in Arend and Julian's story, so I will be diving right in to The King Awakened - I just hope that all the waiting waiting waiting with them is done
Hmm, what can I say about this one but booo I was disappointed in this installment, which is a shame as I was completely enthralled with the book A Gentleman Revealed, which has overlapping characters.
A King Undone just ended up feeling a like a whole lot of nothing. It is nearly 10 hours of build up and little bang. Now, don't get me wrong, I love a slow burn but wow this was sloooooow.
And the narrator - oh gees. He told the story well, however the accent for Julian - well, Pepe LePew comes to mind when it comes to it!
I am invested in Arend and Julian's story, so I will be diving right in to The King Awakened - I just hope that all the waiting waiting waiting with them is done
December 20, 2014
3.5 stars.
King Arend is a lonely man. When he was younger, he had been forced by his father to break off his engagement to Prince Darian and then forced to marry a woman in order to sire offspring to continue the royal line. Ten years after the dead of his wife, Arend goes to the sensual temple to purchase a concubine for the period of one year. There, he meets Julian and immediately bonds with him.
Things change once he is back at the palace with Julian. The need for the continuation of the Tollemach line is still great, and the resulting political pressure is on both Arend and his son. Forces conspire to keep Arend from realizing his dream of being with the lovely Julian, all which complicate his emotional reaction to the man.
I enjoyed Julian. He was strong and insightful, and most determined to see through his contract with King Arend. There is a mystery behind Julian's background that is just alluded to, and I'm assuming that we will see more in the next book of the series.
I do have to say that I got somewhat lost in the nuances of the times. The various social and political norms played havoc on Arend's reactions throughout the story, making his moods jump around a little too much for me. I think this is why I had a harder time connecting with Arend.
But that won't keep me from wanting to read the next book in the series if, for nothing else, to learn what had happened to Julian ten years ago.
King Arend is a lonely man. When he was younger, he had been forced by his father to break off his engagement to Prince Darian and then forced to marry a woman in order to sire offspring to continue the royal line. Ten years after the dead of his wife, Arend goes to the sensual temple to purchase a concubine for the period of one year. There, he meets Julian and immediately bonds with him.
Things change once he is back at the palace with Julian. The need for the continuation of the Tollemach line is still great, and the resulting political pressure is on both Arend and his son. Forces conspire to keep Arend from realizing his dream of being with the lovely Julian, all which complicate his emotional reaction to the man.
I enjoyed Julian. He was strong and insightful, and most determined to see through his contract with King Arend. There is a mystery behind Julian's background that is just alluded to, and I'm assuming that we will see more in the next book of the series.
I do have to say that I got somewhat lost in the nuances of the times. The various social and political norms played havoc on Arend's reactions throughout the story, making his moods jump around a little too much for me. I think this is why I had a harder time connecting with Arend.
But that won't keep me from wanting to read the next book in the series if, for nothing else, to learn what had happened to Julian ten years ago.
December 13, 2014
Voici une des romances historiques les plus fascinantes que j'ai pu lire jusqu'à maintenant que ce soit en MM ou en romance plus "traditionnelle", ce n'est pas tant l'histoire en elle-même quoique ce contexte alternatif soit une très originale idée. Non, cela tient surtout à la relation entre King et Julian, cette courtoisie omniprésente entre eux, ces phrases si raffinées qui cachent si bien des sentiments profonds, cette élégance dans la manière dont ils se parlent malgré leur situation sociale aux antipodes.
C'est une relation amoureuse très complexe, une séduction à l'image de cette époque la régence, froide et compassée en surface, et dissimulant des désirs sombres et torrides. Même si certains passages m'ont semblé un peu trop longs, j'ai adoré l'écriture et la richesse des descriptions, la sensualité qui se dégage derrière cette politesse quand ces deux hommes se séduisent d'abord par la parole puis par leur corps. C'est vraiment une romance qui sort de l'ordinaire.
C'est une relation amoureuse très complexe, une séduction à l'image de cette époque la régence, froide et compassée en surface, et dissimulant des désirs sombres et torrides. Même si certains passages m'ont semblé un peu trop longs, j'ai adoré l'écriture et la richesse des descriptions, la sensualité qui se dégage derrière cette politesse quand ces deux hommes se séduisent d'abord par la parole puis par leur corps. C'est vraiment une romance qui sort de l'ordinaire.
February 21, 2021
I'd initially thought the premise intriguing, but it quickly became clear that this was going to be dull and repetitious.
In 2021, I refuse to waste time on books that don't catch my attention immediately.
In 2021, I refuse to waste time on books that don't catch my attention immediately.
April 3, 2017
For fans of The Captive Prince trilogy!! Arend and Jules are so sweet and sexy together. Love them both. Davis does an excellent job of ramping up the tension as well as the political intrigue. Very much looking forward to book two!
April 27, 2016
What an odd book. I don't think I could have read it, due to the elaborate purple prose, but the narrator of the audio version is very talented and kept me interested. It was a fun listen, but I can't say it's a good book.
There are at least two m/m couples in this story as well as another single gay man, so I was expecting until the very end that this would be another series in which each book focused on a different pairing. Instead, this book is very much part one of a story. There are a million plot points introduced, and I don't think any of them were resolved. I was shocked that this book ended when it did.
I didn't really like the way the book dealt with gender, regarding Julian. According to Arend, Julian has a "contradictory" gender presentation: he's tall, strong, and muscular, and he has a soft and gentle voice. Arend finds him attractive for this reason, but he tells Julian to tone down the "feminine" voice because he doesn't want people to know that Julian is his concubine. Arend's disgusted by his own desires so he takes it out on Julian, who already has a good bit of insecurity over his voice. Arend does tell Julian (eventually) that he likes his voice, which was probably meant to resolve this plot point. But I wanted Arend to decide that Julian's voice was objectively acceptable, that there was no reason a muscular man couldn't have a gentle voice. I feel like I want these two to change their world, in this way and others, but I don't actually expect that to happen.
I will probably return for book 2, because listening to this book wasn't an unpleasant experience and I really do want to know what happens next. A few things I did like: in general it's always nice to read book with older MCs (Arend is 41 and Julian is 30). I also appreciated that this book had an actual bisexual character (the cousin), and he and his wife were very appealing - she was the only on-page female character, though. There's also a bear (Finley), another rarity in m/m novels; I would probably read a book that focused on him.
There are at least two m/m couples in this story as well as another single gay man, so I was expecting until the very end that this would be another series in which each book focused on a different pairing. Instead, this book is very much part one of a story. There are a million plot points introduced, and I don't think any of them were resolved. I was shocked that this book ended when it did.
I didn't really like the way the book dealt with gender, regarding Julian. According to Arend, Julian has a "contradictory" gender presentation: he's tall, strong, and muscular, and he has a soft and gentle voice. Arend finds him attractive for this reason, but he tells Julian to tone down the "feminine" voice because he doesn't want people to know that Julian is his concubine. Arend's disgusted by his own desires so he takes it out on Julian, who already has a good bit of insecurity over his voice. Arend does tell Julian (eventually) that he likes his voice, which was probably meant to resolve this plot point. But I wanted Arend to decide that Julian's voice was objectively acceptable, that there was no reason a muscular man couldn't have a gentle voice. I feel like I want these two to change their world, in this way and others, but I don't actually expect that to happen.
I will probably return for book 2, because listening to this book wasn't an unpleasant experience and I really do want to know what happens next. A few things I did like: in general it's always nice to read book with older MCs (Arend is 41 and Julian is 30). I also appreciated that this book had an actual bisexual character (the cousin), and he and his wife were very appealing - she was the only on-page female character, though. There's also a bear (Finley), another rarity in m/m novels; I would probably read a book that focused on him.
December 9, 2014
3.5 stars. This book is one long seduction, set in an alternative historical setting. From the very first time Arend meets Julian, right up to the last page, it’s all about their romance and the pull of the attraction between them. It’s also the first part in a series and feels like only half the story, which made me feel a little let down by the soft ending.
It’s a sweet enough romance between the Arend and Julian, full of push and pull, vulnerabilities and insecurities. Neither of them is entirely free of conflicting emotions as they grow steadily closer. Life would of course be so much easier if Arend wasn’t king – and his son and heir hadn’t just married a husband of his own.
Now that right there was where all my problems with this book arose. The whole political and potential scandal plot just didn't work for me. Why would a society so openly accepting of gay marriage baulk at the king taking a male consort, especially when his heir just married a man? And why would his heir be allowed to, when the succession was in doubt? Is Arend the only one expected to do his duty? And if Arend had cared so much about his son, then he should have married much earlier and produced another heir, rather than doing nothing until it was all too late and painful.
However, to be honest, this story isn’t really about the politics – which is probably for the best. In truth it’s about Arend and his clumsy attempts to hold onto his heart. Without the potential scandal and trouble brewing in the background, the book would have been an awful lot shorter as fewer things stood in the way between Julian finally getting his king where he wants him.
As a romance it’s a sweet and sensual dance towards intimacy and genuine affection between two stubborn men. The ending is very much unfinished, and the politics certainly have a bigger role to play in the follow up. It’s a good romance. If you can put aside the political issues, then there’s plenty to like and thoroughly enjoy here.
(I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.)
It’s a sweet enough romance between the Arend and Julian, full of push and pull, vulnerabilities and insecurities. Neither of them is entirely free of conflicting emotions as they grow steadily closer. Life would of course be so much easier if Arend wasn’t king – and his son and heir hadn’t just married a husband of his own.
Now that right there was where all my problems with this book arose. The whole political and potential scandal plot just didn't work for me. Why would a society so openly accepting of gay marriage baulk at the king taking a male consort, especially when his heir just married a man? And why would his heir be allowed to, when the succession was in doubt? Is Arend the only one expected to do his duty? And if Arend had cared so much about his son, then he should have married much earlier and produced another heir, rather than doing nothing until it was all too late and painful.
However, to be honest, this story isn’t really about the politics – which is probably for the best. In truth it’s about Arend and his clumsy attempts to hold onto his heart. Without the potential scandal and trouble brewing in the background, the book would have been an awful lot shorter as fewer things stood in the way between Julian finally getting his king where he wants him.
As a romance it’s a sweet and sensual dance towards intimacy and genuine affection between two stubborn men. The ending is very much unfinished, and the politics certainly have a bigger role to play in the follow up. It’s a good romance. If you can put aside the political issues, then there’s plenty to like and thoroughly enjoy here.
(I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.)
May 6, 2016
I got it even though it had bad reviews, and then I was kicking myself and forced myself to finish it.
The book ends so suddenly, the ending is so rushed and by the time the two MCs engage in sex ... it's like I don't even give a crap.
The UST is like okay at first but then it just goes on and on and on and on...and it's just frustrating. And seriously with every moment Julian gets his hopes up they are shattered. He gets them up again. They are shattered again. Then the King, like, OMG... he's just kicking himself and hating himself and then he's w/ Jules and everything is okay again, and then he's hating himself again and then oh, there's a promise of sex, oh things are okay again. It's like legit on repeat...
Lucy and Sam were a breath of fresh air and good characters, and the way Finley just totally falls for Jules too for no rhyme or reason and then they're BFFs is just ridiculous beyond all reason.
the only thing I was interested in was Mallen (sp?) the servant who hates Jules but then thinks of Jules as good but then hates himself in the end... that was a story line I would have been more interested in.
blah...what the hell was this book?
The book ends so suddenly, the ending is so rushed and by the time the two MCs engage in sex ... it's like I don't even give a crap.
The UST is like okay at first but then it just goes on and on and on and on...and it's just frustrating. And seriously with every moment Julian gets his hopes up they are shattered. He gets them up again. They are shattered again. Then the King, like, OMG... he's just kicking himself and hating himself and then he's w/ Jules and everything is okay again, and then he's hating himself again and then oh, there's a promise of sex, oh things are okay again. It's like legit on repeat...
Lucy and Sam were a breath of fresh air and good characters, and the way Finley just totally falls for Jules too for no rhyme or reason and then they're BFFs is just ridiculous beyond all reason.
the only thing I was interested in was Mallen (sp?) the servant who hates Jules but then thinks of Jules as good but then hates himself in the end... that was a story line I would have been more interested in.
blah...what the hell was this book?
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January 6, 2015The use of verbose language to invoke a period feel is not sitting well with me. No patience at the moment. And so far (20%) it’s been about the two men talking to or thinking about each other (or the idea of each other). I prefer books that aren’t strictly romances but have other plot points beyond the relationship. I’ll give this another try when book 2 is out, but this may be better suited for true romance lovers.
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June 10, 2015No rating because I didn't have the patience to get past chapter three. Great cover. Book wasn't for me.
August 1, 2020
Dnf 40%. This was a bust for me. I was expecting sex and political scandal as a King takes a male concubine and lust turns to love. Instead what I got was 2 guys doing a lot of awkward flirting and misunderstanding each other every 10 minutes. I most definitely didn't expect the king who wanted a no strings physical relationship to treat his purchased whore to shampooing as they chat about his childhood. And no sex. I'm not saying a book needs to have sex to be good, but this just felt like false advertisement. The sweetness of their flirting reached like nauseating levels. I can't take it anymore! I'm out!
December 20, 2014
A King Undone, Cooper Davis
Genre: GBLT.
Review from jeannie zelos book reviews
Well – in my usual haste to get reading I missed the all important “book one” and was expecting a complete story. By three quarters through though it was clear the problems were still mounting up, and there'd be no resolution in this book and that's when I went back and checked to see of there was more to come...doh – I’ve done this enough times that I should have learned...still.
Its a book that leaves me with mixed feelings. I found much to enjoy, the gentle unfolding of feelings, some witty banter at times, and a few great characters but...a lot of the dialogue felt stilted and awkward to me. Then again its a kind of historical novel, though in a different reality to ours, and it feel the same to me as when I read books set in 15-16th century UK and for that the dialogue works. They do go in for long speech type conversations too, which doesn't really work that well for me, I felt at times “come on, stop waffling and get to the point!”. However Arend and Julian I loved as people and felt for them, I enjoyed too the tight-ar sed secretary Alistair, and of course the kings cousin Sam and his wife. Some terrific characters and sharp funny lines, albeit interspersed with lengthy and protracted conversations. Sometimes the gems almost got missed as I was skimming yet another long winded speech.....
Arend was in love with another prince as a teen, but forced to end his engagement to marry and get an heir. Now the witch of a wife who made his life hell is dead, his beloved son has married a prince from another region and Arend wants to take a concubine. He chooses Jules from a temple who train men for that purpose, and embarks on a year long contract detailing No Emotions, nothing of that sort to be expected. He wants to guard his heart after the heartbreak of Darien, his beloved from his youth. Darien died not long after and it feels like Arend is still grieving, he’s had and got some good friends, but keeps his heart close and doesn’t want to subject himself to anything that may touch it. Yeah – that always works....Jules is a lovely man, betrayed by his brother and sold to the temple his background is unknown, but its clear he’s not some farm worker or casual labourer, but from a very different upbringing. He’s not telling though – its one part of himself he can control. I really liked both of these characters and wanted things to work out.
To begin with there’s a real push/pull and much to learn about each other, and its clear Arend is struggling to stay unemotional, and Jules is one that gives his heart without being able to stop himself. His presence with the King though isn’t welcomed by everyone, there’s trouble from one of the staff which make his start there problematic, and then Arend’s secretary comes with unpleasant news from the Lords and his Council. They’ve set an ultimatum. They were already unhappy at the Prince marrying a man and are demanding Arend remarry – to a woman of course, and provide another heir. There’s his cousin Sam who is in line of succession and who’s married to a lovely lady but so far they’ve not had children though its only been three years. Sam has a great wit and made me laugh.
What troubled me about this book and stopped a higher rating: the long winded dialogue which became speeches at times. The way that homosexuality was open with places such as the Temple providing training grounds, and yet the insistence of a royal heir and the lengths the Council were provided to take to ensure the correct bloodlines – barbaric to be honest and the two things combined didn’t go well together for me. Still, political extremes and control does make for good reading, and provided an excellent bit of potential heartbreak. Its a typical example now I think of it of how sexual behaviours have been viewed through history – there’s always the “do what you want but keep it undercover “ element...In this case though homosexuality is not only everyday, but men ( and presumably ladies too) are allowed same sex marriage. Should the King be exempt from the freedoms allowed his subjects? I’d just have thought there’s be some kind of provision or that Arend would have expected the views of his Council. It seemed at odds with the general freedoms everyone has. I really wanted Arend to sya “up yours” to his council and throw in some new law to protect himself and Jules but...anyway there’s ore to come and a long way to go before they’re home and safe together.
I think for me this would have been a great read as a tightened up one off novel, but doesn’t have enough to carry it into a series/trio of books. Its got so much good going for it, a great storyline and lots of heartbreak possibilities – and I do love that! sadly though its all lost to me in a sea of long speeches and explanations and I just got switched off at times. As ever though this is just my opinion and others will love the gentle way the story unfolds. Its a good read just for me not a great one.
Stars: Three and a half, its got lots I could enjoy, lots of potential but just too slow for a higher rating from me. I don’t think I’ll continue with the next books...but who knows.
I LOVE the cover!
ARC supplied via author
August 18, 2015
4.5 stars. We get both King Arend and concubine Julian’s POVs. Arend is a good king, though he’s been forced to follow his father’s orders and marry a woman to sire heirs. With his wife dead and his son of age, he’s finally free to act out some of his own desires and follow his own dreams. With Julian, Arend comes off as shy and vulnerable, exposed as inexperienced, and that gave an interesting character dynamic between the two men, as the man with all the power has the least experience. Still, Arend is not as strong as he could be as a man or as a king, letting almost everyone walk all over him and make decisions for him. With a father figure, that’s understandable; the rest, less so. Nonetheless, his progress was interesting to watch.
Julian’s a concubine, taught in the ways of sex and sensuality, but he’s never been chosen by any nobleman. He’s getting older, and knows he doesn’t have much time to find someone to be with. Despite his status as basically a sex slave, he’s a romantic, dreaming of a forever kind of love. When Arend chooses him, Julian is a bit more giddy than I expected from a sex slave. Sitll, he’s smart and sweet and cute as a button. What’s not to love? His eagerness is endearing, like a puppy jumping up and down when noticed and pampered. In fact, of the two men, he’s the stronger one, more inclined to fight for what he wants, which is Arend. While at first I wanted to know more about Arend, later I preferred to learn about Julian.
The banter between the two men attracted me to the story right off the bat. It’s witty, charming, smart, and simply fun to read. I was engaged and immersed into the fantasy world mostly through dialogue, which seems appropriate for the time frame, well written, and clever. I liked it the best, I think. Well, after the sensuality. However… much of the dialogue shows the two men speaking about their situations in life, but these are left hanging in the air at the end, as this is the first in a series.
The world around them is left a bit hazy but hinted at being harsh and brutal, with a couple of fantasy elements, again only hinted at. Yet there are intriguing aspects too, as men are allowed to marry men. Well, not royalty who are expected to breed children. Apparently this is the first story in a trilogy, so I imagine any remaining questions I had or you might have will be answered in the future. Be warned: This ends in a cliffhanger. Well, perhaps it’s better to say that a lot is left unclear and unresolved, the political situation especially. Enter at your own peril.
There was a problem, though. Since the set-up is a virgin king with an experienced concubine, I expected to be taught along the way. Yet Arend jumps right off the deep end, going for blowjobs and anal sex without much preamble, teaching, or patience. The insta-love kind of threw me considering the length of the book. I knew the connection would be passionate, but first times should include patience and be done slow. The practical lessons weren’t really there, so that sort of drew me out of the story, as it felt more like two experienced lovers coming together rather than a teacher with his virginal pupil. Sure, Arend has to psych himself up for the intimate scenes, but he still goes straight for the gold, so to speak.
Also, the one year contract between Arend and Julian is designed to be sex only, no emotions. Yet Arend breaks the rules immediately, publicly courting a man who is already his, taking him to parties and dinners, and so forth. It seemed like the contract was a mere formality, easily broken. Again, took me out of the story a bit. I thought the two men, one a virgin who has lost a love and the other passed off too many times, would be hesitant in baring their hearts. But both jumped right in.
Overall, a good book.
Julian’s a concubine, taught in the ways of sex and sensuality, but he’s never been chosen by any nobleman. He’s getting older, and knows he doesn’t have much time to find someone to be with. Despite his status as basically a sex slave, he’s a romantic, dreaming of a forever kind of love. When Arend chooses him, Julian is a bit more giddy than I expected from a sex slave. Sitll, he’s smart and sweet and cute as a button. What’s not to love? His eagerness is endearing, like a puppy jumping up and down when noticed and pampered. In fact, of the two men, he’s the stronger one, more inclined to fight for what he wants, which is Arend. While at first I wanted to know more about Arend, later I preferred to learn about Julian.
The banter between the two men attracted me to the story right off the bat. It’s witty, charming, smart, and simply fun to read. I was engaged and immersed into the fantasy world mostly through dialogue, which seems appropriate for the time frame, well written, and clever. I liked it the best, I think. Well, after the sensuality. However… much of the dialogue shows the two men speaking about their situations in life, but these are left hanging in the air at the end, as this is the first in a series.
The world around them is left a bit hazy but hinted at being harsh and brutal, with a couple of fantasy elements, again only hinted at. Yet there are intriguing aspects too, as men are allowed to marry men. Well, not royalty who are expected to breed children. Apparently this is the first story in a trilogy, so I imagine any remaining questions I had or you might have will be answered in the future. Be warned: This ends in a cliffhanger. Well, perhaps it’s better to say that a lot is left unclear and unresolved, the political situation especially. Enter at your own peril.
There was a problem, though. Since the set-up is a virgin king with an experienced concubine, I expected to be taught along the way. Yet Arend jumps right off the deep end, going for blowjobs and anal sex without much preamble, teaching, or patience. The insta-love kind of threw me considering the length of the book. I knew the connection would be passionate, but first times should include patience and be done slow. The practical lessons weren’t really there, so that sort of drew me out of the story, as it felt more like two experienced lovers coming together rather than a teacher with his virginal pupil. Sure, Arend has to psych himself up for the intimate scenes, but he still goes straight for the gold, so to speak.
Also, the one year contract between Arend and Julian is designed to be sex only, no emotions. Yet Arend breaks the rules immediately, publicly courting a man who is already his, taking him to parties and dinners, and so forth. It seemed like the contract was a mere formality, easily broken. Again, took me out of the story a bit. I thought the two men, one a virgin who has lost a love and the other passed off too many times, would be hesitant in baring their hearts. But both jumped right in.
Overall, a good book.
January 14, 2015
I love this stunning book cover!
A King Undone is an M/M Historical Romance of political intrigue, polite mannerism, conflicting interest, and getting what one deserve. King Arend is now free to explore and act on his desire for a male lover.
“I love Prince Darien, father. I have made a commitment to him and I mean to honor it.”
His father met Arend’s fire with a reproving glance. “Yes, well, thank God there was no elopement, so your so-called commitment wasn’t legally binding.”
“It was binding upon our hearts. And upon my good character.”
In a world where society allows marriages between two males, it’s obvious from the quote above this is not the proper decorum for the prince of the realm. As it is in real life, maintaining the bloodline through procreation is absolute in the universe of kings and queens. King Arends does his duty. He forgoes the commitment he made to Prince Darien to enter a loveless marriage for the act of procreation and serving the realm. A son is born. The King does the one thing he could never receive from his father. He granted his son the approval to marry the man he loves.
This story is a source of delight and frustration. Many times in M/M Romance stories, the men meet then immediately jump in bed with each other. This is not the case with Arend and Julian despite Julian’s determined effort. There is lust most certainly. There are overwhelming emotions and attraction. There is a lot of talking, cajoling, and flirtation. Julian, the concubine, is ready to take on all things Arend but the king’s insecurity prevents togetherness, and the staff interferes as their way of expressing disapproval of the man sharing the King’s quarters.
The frustration comes when Arend denies his feelings and needs for Julian. And we can see how he feels about the concubine through his actions and simple denials and the one excuse that Julian is a business transaction. This goes on through the book until Julian gains tiny victories. Both men do a lot of talking and thinking about sex until the attraction has them resort to seduction and whispering demands.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed A King Undone once I settle down to absorb the language style and the manner of comportment in this historical romance. There is humor. Every time Arend pushes those spectacles over the bridge of his nose, or look over the rim of those spectacles, I want to snort with laughter.
And yes, I have to ask - do you think Finley has more than a passing interest in the King.
Highly recommended to readers of M/M Historical Romance. Just a note the story ends in HFN.
The author provided a copy of this book in exchange for an honest and objective book review.
This review originally posted at TWLIB Reviews
A King Undone is an M/M Historical Romance of political intrigue, polite mannerism, conflicting interest, and getting what one deserve. King Arend is now free to explore and act on his desire for a male lover.
“I love Prince Darien, father. I have made a commitment to him and I mean to honor it.”
His father met Arend’s fire with a reproving glance. “Yes, well, thank God there was no elopement, so your so-called commitment wasn’t legally binding.”
“It was binding upon our hearts. And upon my good character.”
In a world where society allows marriages between two males, it’s obvious from the quote above this is not the proper decorum for the prince of the realm. As it is in real life, maintaining the bloodline through procreation is absolute in the universe of kings and queens. King Arends does his duty. He forgoes the commitment he made to Prince Darien to enter a loveless marriage for the act of procreation and serving the realm. A son is born. The King does the one thing he could never receive from his father. He granted his son the approval to marry the man he loves.
This story is a source of delight and frustration. Many times in M/M Romance stories, the men meet then immediately jump in bed with each other. This is not the case with Arend and Julian despite Julian’s determined effort. There is lust most certainly. There are overwhelming emotions and attraction. There is a lot of talking, cajoling, and flirtation. Julian, the concubine, is ready to take on all things Arend but the king’s insecurity prevents togetherness, and the staff interferes as their way of expressing disapproval of the man sharing the King’s quarters.
The frustration comes when Arend denies his feelings and needs for Julian. And we can see how he feels about the concubine through his actions and simple denials and the one excuse that Julian is a business transaction. This goes on through the book until Julian gains tiny victories. Both men do a lot of talking and thinking about sex until the attraction has them resort to seduction and whispering demands.
Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed A King Undone once I settle down to absorb the language style and the manner of comportment in this historical romance. There is humor. Every time Arend pushes those spectacles over the bridge of his nose, or look over the rim of those spectacles, I want to snort with laughter.
And yes, I have to ask - do you think Finley has more than a passing interest in the King.
Highly recommended to readers of M/M Historical Romance. Just a note the story ends in HFN.
The author provided a copy of this book in exchange for an honest and objective book review.
This review originally posted at TWLIB Reviews
February 14, 2015
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3.5 stars
King Arend Tollemach is finally going to do something for himself. After being forced out of a loving betrothal by his father, marrying a woman he didn’t love, then raising his son, the king is going to get himself a concubine. A sexy male concubine. The big problem is King Arend doesn’t know what to do with a sexy male concubine and he’s astoundingly nervous. Arend gets Julian at Temple Sapphor. Julian has spent much longer there than usual. He’s happy to finally be chosen. Julian was sold to the temple by his brother under dubious circumstances. Both men have histories of being hurt by family and having spent a significant part of their life alone. Julian wants to get going with the relationship. He’s got a task and he’s going to enjoy it. And he’s going to fall for Arend pretty hard in the process.
Unfortunately, the rest of the government is not so happy about Arend’s actions. From lowly footmen to powerful Dukes, people are trying to keep Arend and Julian apart. There is a very strong likelihood the government will be able to force Arend into another marriage in an effort to secure more heirs for the throne. Both men are faced with their worst fears.
This was a character driven plot, of sorts. Unfortunately, the characters stated their motivations and fears pretty baldly. I didn’t feel there was a lot of room for exposition after one sentence effectively explained everything. That isn’t to say I didn’t appreciate the book. I found the world building interesting. It was an alternate universe historical setting where men were allowed to be gay and openly court other men. Of course succession is the big problem for the characters. In theory succession would be a problem for anyone from any family with something to inherit, be it land, title, or business. I felt this was a flaw in the world building that wasn’t well explained or hasn’t been as of yet.
Arend and Julian were interesting characters. I felt a lot of the interpersonal drama between these two guys became repetitive. Arend was quick to retreat and offend Julian when he became scared. Julian was quick to anger and offense when Arend retreated. It happened several times. Whereas I do find that totally plausible it’s not something I relish. I do find Julian and Arend likable enough despite the fact I also feel they become annoying on occasion. I also really enjoy the secondary characters in the story. I would like to know more about the secondary characters.
I wasn’t hugely impressed yet I’m interested enough I’d like to read the second book in the series. I’m certainly curious about the direction the series is going.
3.5 stars
King Arend Tollemach is finally going to do something for himself. After being forced out of a loving betrothal by his father, marrying a woman he didn’t love, then raising his son, the king is going to get himself a concubine. A sexy male concubine. The big problem is King Arend doesn’t know what to do with a sexy male concubine and he’s astoundingly nervous. Arend gets Julian at Temple Sapphor. Julian has spent much longer there than usual. He’s happy to finally be chosen. Julian was sold to the temple by his brother under dubious circumstances. Both men have histories of being hurt by family and having spent a significant part of their life alone. Julian wants to get going with the relationship. He’s got a task and he’s going to enjoy it. And he’s going to fall for Arend pretty hard in the process.
Unfortunately, the rest of the government is not so happy about Arend’s actions. From lowly footmen to powerful Dukes, people are trying to keep Arend and Julian apart. There is a very strong likelihood the government will be able to force Arend into another marriage in an effort to secure more heirs for the throne. Both men are faced with their worst fears.
This was a character driven plot, of sorts. Unfortunately, the characters stated their motivations and fears pretty baldly. I didn’t feel there was a lot of room for exposition after one sentence effectively explained everything. That isn’t to say I didn’t appreciate the book. I found the world building interesting. It was an alternate universe historical setting where men were allowed to be gay and openly court other men. Of course succession is the big problem for the characters. In theory succession would be a problem for anyone from any family with something to inherit, be it land, title, or business. I felt this was a flaw in the world building that wasn’t well explained or hasn’t been as of yet.
Arend and Julian were interesting characters. I felt a lot of the interpersonal drama between these two guys became repetitive. Arend was quick to retreat and offend Julian when he became scared. Julian was quick to anger and offense when Arend retreated. It happened several times. Whereas I do find that totally plausible it’s not something I relish. I do find Julian and Arend likable enough despite the fact I also feel they become annoying on occasion. I also really enjoy the secondary characters in the story. I would like to know more about the secondary characters.
I wasn’t hugely impressed yet I’m interested enough I’d like to read the second book in the series. I’m certainly curious about the direction the series is going.
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December 24, 2014A Joyfully Jay review.
4 stars
So I was drawn to this story right away when I saw the plot. The idea of a shy, inexperienced king hiring a sensual concubine to teach him the ways of hot loving? Yes, please. And I think for the most part Davis does a really good job delivering on this premise. One thing that works particularly well is that we are in Arend’s POV for much of the time, especially early on when he is making the decision to enter into the contract with Julian. Typically in relationships with this kind of power dynamic, we get the POV of the person who is being brought in to serve the more powerful player. But in this case, being in Arend’s POV really lets us feel his anxiety about the new arrangement, his excitement at the prospect of finally being with a man, and his pain at losing his first love. It allows us to really see him vulnerable and I could sympathize with him as a man who has sacrificed all his desires for duty and now is finally taking steps to live life on his own terms.
We also get Julian’s POV in this story and he is another lonely man. Julian was born into a well of family in a nearby country, but when they fell on hard times, his brother sold him to the Temple as a concubine. For the past ten years, Julian has been waiting for a placement, but kept getting passed over. So while he knows that he shouldn’t expect anything long term, Julian still dreams of a real relationship with Arend, one that could perhaps become permanent. Things are definitely idealized somewhat here in terms of Julian being just ecstatic about being a concubine. I mean, he was sold to the Temple against his will and now has been hired as a sex servant (though he isn’t the one who actually gets paid). Right from the start, before he even gets to know Arend, he is just thrilled about it all. I mean, I get he was tired of being passed over, but we definitely are getting a somewhat sunny version of a man who is basically forced into selling his body.
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4 stars
So I was drawn to this story right away when I saw the plot. The idea of a shy, inexperienced king hiring a sensual concubine to teach him the ways of hot loving? Yes, please. And I think for the most part Davis does a really good job delivering on this premise. One thing that works particularly well is that we are in Arend’s POV for much of the time, especially early on when he is making the decision to enter into the contract with Julian. Typically in relationships with this kind of power dynamic, we get the POV of the person who is being brought in to serve the more powerful player. But in this case, being in Arend’s POV really lets us feel his anxiety about the new arrangement, his excitement at the prospect of finally being with a man, and his pain at losing his first love. It allows us to really see him vulnerable and I could sympathize with him as a man who has sacrificed all his desires for duty and now is finally taking steps to live life on his own terms.
We also get Julian’s POV in this story and he is another lonely man. Julian was born into a well of family in a nearby country, but when they fell on hard times, his brother sold him to the Temple as a concubine. For the past ten years, Julian has been waiting for a placement, but kept getting passed over. So while he knows that he shouldn’t expect anything long term, Julian still dreams of a real relationship with Arend, one that could perhaps become permanent. Things are definitely idealized somewhat here in terms of Julian being just ecstatic about being a concubine. I mean, he was sold to the Temple against his will and now has been hired as a sex servant (though he isn’t the one who actually gets paid). Right from the start, before he even gets to know Arend, he is just thrilled about it all. I mean, I get he was tired of being passed over, but we definitely are getting a somewhat sunny version of a man who is basically forced into selling his body.
Read Jay’s review in its entirety here.
December 11, 2014
I wanted so badly to give this book five stars, and for the story itself I would because I loved all of the characters and I didn't want to smack anyone. But for the editing I had to bring it down to a four because there are some places where the editing interrupts the story and everything is mashed together and it makes it really hard to read.
But characters. Let's talk. I loved King Arend and I really felt for his situation. It sucked having his first love taken from him, being forced to marry, and then have his only child threatened when he allowed him happiness.
Jules. I adore him. My heart broke for him and his desperate need to be loved and wanted. And while there were times I thought it was going to get super angsty, he turned it around and used logic to come back full force. I LOVED THAT. The angst was just enough and then Jules got REAL.
Fin. Loved him. What a tough cookie to crack.
Mallon. Alternately pity and hate him. Interesting to see what he does next.
Sam and Lucy. ADORE THEM. I wish I had gotten to see more of them!
Obviously this is the first in a series. I had though initially that the first book would be about Arend and Jules, and the second would focus on Fin or Mallon, but that doesn't seem to be the case as there are far too many conflicts left open. I'm disappointed we didn't meet the princes in this book, though I hope they show up in the next one. And I do hope Fin and Mallon get their stories at some point.
Overall a good book. I really enjoyed it and couldn't put it down. I will definitely read the next in the series.
But characters. Let's talk. I loved King Arend and I really felt for his situation. It sucked having his first love taken from him, being forced to marry, and then have his only child threatened when he allowed him happiness.
Jules. I adore him. My heart broke for him and his desperate need to be loved and wanted. And while there were times I thought it was going to get super angsty, he turned it around and used logic to come back full force. I LOVED THAT. The angst was just enough and then Jules got REAL.
Fin. Loved him. What a tough cookie to crack.
Mallon. Alternately pity and hate him. Interesting to see what he does next.
Sam and Lucy. ADORE THEM. I wish I had gotten to see more of them!
Obviously this is the first in a series. I had though initially that the first book would be about Arend and Jules, and the second would focus on Fin or Mallon, but that doesn't seem to be the case as there are far too many conflicts left open. I'm disappointed we didn't meet the princes in this book, though I hope they show up in the next one. And I do hope Fin and Mallon get their stories at some point.
Overall a good book. I really enjoyed it and couldn't put it down. I will definitely read the next in the series.
August 10, 2015
The style of the tale is long drawn out, wordy, conversation instead of action, description of a medieval world but no magic.
While we meet a king, his concerns are all for himself with no diplomacy, internal politics, supplicants or mendicants to distract him from favouring a newly-acquired concubine over the existing, loyal palace servants. Maybe he's a paper ruler and his vizier or someone runs the kingdom. Being a gay man is allowable in this land. I don't know about gay women, because we don't meet any women.
The king was obliged to marry to produce heirs and ten years later, with one child, a tidily dead wife and a hankering to express his gay side - oh really, like he never tried it on with a stable boy or manservant - he goes to a temple and asks for one gift-wrapped male concubine. His choice is not surprisingly flattered and pleased to be picked. Seems he doesn't have to worry that if he doesn't suit he'll be beheaded. However, every move from a hand on a cheek to a kiss has be to withdrawn from and dissected in lengthy philosophical discourse. I don't know any men like this. Men tend to think that if it feels good, let's do it, unless there is a strong reason why not.
I am sure this book will suit some people more than it suited me. How about sprinkling the odd female character in the story? Or drama?
While we meet a king, his concerns are all for himself with no diplomacy, internal politics, supplicants or mendicants to distract him from favouring a newly-acquired concubine over the existing, loyal palace servants. Maybe he's a paper ruler and his vizier or someone runs the kingdom. Being a gay man is allowable in this land. I don't know about gay women, because we don't meet any women.
The king was obliged to marry to produce heirs and ten years later, with one child, a tidily dead wife and a hankering to express his gay side - oh really, like he never tried it on with a stable boy or manservant - he goes to a temple and asks for one gift-wrapped male concubine. His choice is not surprisingly flattered and pleased to be picked. Seems he doesn't have to worry that if he doesn't suit he'll be beheaded. However, every move from a hand on a cheek to a kiss has be to withdrawn from and dissected in lengthy philosophical discourse. I don't know any men like this. Men tend to think that if it feels good, let's do it, unless there is a strong reason why not.
I am sure this book will suit some people more than it suited me. How about sprinkling the odd female character in the story? Or drama?
January 4, 2015
A King with a deep secret desire....
Copy provided by InkedRainbowReads.
This is my first book by Cooper Davis and I am torn.
I was excited to read this, as it was my first time reading for
InkedRainbowReads. I love M/M genre, especially historical pieces.
They are usually full of passion and intensity. The part I am torn about
is the writing. At some parts I felt like I needed to get out my thesaurus.
However, my curiosity was peaked and I finished it.
King Arend Tollemach is a passionate man and at 40 years old,
he wants to explore a side that he never had a chance to try,
taking a male lover. Enter Julian, a concubine. He has been waiting for
10 years to become someone's lover. He is beautiful, and intense.
When the King and Julian meet you can feel the sparks through the pages,
even with the fancy writing. I enjoyed the awkwardness the King was feeling.
I enjoyed Julian's joy and enthusiasm at finally being chosen as a concubine.
There were some comical, heart-warming moments. The feelings were quick but the
intimacy took some time. This is the first in a series about this couple.
I am not sure if I will continue reading the series..
Copy provided by InkedRainbowReads.
This is my first book by Cooper Davis and I am torn.
I was excited to read this, as it was my first time reading for
InkedRainbowReads. I love M/M genre, especially historical pieces.
They are usually full of passion and intensity. The part I am torn about
is the writing. At some parts I felt like I needed to get out my thesaurus.
However, my curiosity was peaked and I finished it.
King Arend Tollemach is a passionate man and at 40 years old,
he wants to explore a side that he never had a chance to try,
taking a male lover. Enter Julian, a concubine. He has been waiting for
10 years to become someone's lover. He is beautiful, and intense.
When the King and Julian meet you can feel the sparks through the pages,
even with the fancy writing. I enjoyed the awkwardness the King was feeling.
I enjoyed Julian's joy and enthusiasm at finally being chosen as a concubine.
There were some comical, heart-warming moments. The feelings were quick but the
intimacy took some time. This is the first in a series about this couple.
I am not sure if I will continue reading the series..
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