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Beyond the Four Kingdoms #1

A Dance of Silver and Shadow

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A Retelling of the Twelve Dancing Princesses

When Princess Liliana and her twin sister set sail for new lands, Lily hopes to find adventure and romance. But the people of Marin live under the shadow of a curse—one powerful enough to destroy entire kingdoms. To protect them all, Lily and eleven other princesses are forced to participate in a mysterious and secret tournament.

Lily spends her nights competing in a magical underground realm and her days unraveling the dangers of this new court. Although she needs the help of the Marinese prince, Lily knows she can't let herself grow too close to him. There's no time for romance when the duchy is about to fall to the encroaching darkness and the winner of the tournament faces a terrible fate.

But Lily and her twin have a secret advantage. And Lily grows increasingly determined to use their magical bond to defeat the tournament, save the princesses, and free Marin. Except she might have to sacrifice true love to do it.

In this reimagining of the classic fairy tale, The Twelve Dancing Princesses, there's a lot more at stake than worn out dancing slippers.

346 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 4, 2017

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Melanie Cellier

126 books2,745 followers
Melanie Cellier grew up on a staple diet of books, books and more books. And although she got older, she never stopped loving children’s and young adult novels.
 She always wanted to write one herself, but it took three careers and three different continents before she actually managed it. 


She now feels incredibly fortunate to spend her time writing from her home in Adelaide, Australia where she keeps an eye out for koalas in her backyard. Her staple diet hasn’t changed much, although she’s added choc mint Rooibos tea and Chicken Crimpies to the list.


She writes young adult fantasy including her Spoken Mage series, and her Four Kingdoms and Beyond the Four Kingdoms series which are made up of linked stand-alone stories that retell classic fairy tales.

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2,157 reviews5,102 followers
March 21, 2025
4 stars ✨

Lily and Sophie are thrown into a new kingdom just like we are as a reader, so we’re all learning as we go. I did make use of the search feature in my Kindle app to remind myself how everyone was related and connected to which kingdom, but I think I did well enough.

I thought the trials were interesting and a different take on this retelling of the 12 Dancing Princess. Unlike the Barbie movie, this one is more than just dancing and there’s high stakes involved. The trials reminded me of the second book in the first series at times.

I didn’t really like the Prince love interest. He was just there. 🤷🏻‍♀️ This one was the second most romancey book so far from the Four Kingdom’s world—The Princess Game was the other one. It’s definitely still considered clean and safe for teen readers, but it just felt a bit out of the place for what high stakes the main characters are having to go through. Not super descriptive or passionate or make-out heavy (which ever term you’d like to use) at all though, just more romance that the majority of the books in the series.

The author has really set up for the High King to be the one who blesses royalty with true love and when it’s followed, the country prospers. These new countries we're introduced to don’t follow Him anymore and thus their problems.

This is the most cliffhanger-like ending any of these fairytale books by this author has had and I’m soooo glad that I don’t have to wait for it to be released! Ta-ta for now, I’m off to go read it!


Main Content:
Sophie and Lily received a gift from their godmother at their Christening to have a great bond which included them being able to “project” to the other in their minds (they say it is not like reading the other’s mind); The 12 Dancing Princesses element takes the twelve princesses to another realm-like place where they have different challenges (some that cause injuries but they princesses do not think they can die in the another realm; If anyone interferes or does the challenges half-heartedly, a death will happen in their family); The other realms mentioned in this book are said to be ”a place apart from the normal world, a magical place.”; These new kingdoms do not follow the High King’s law; All about mentions of curses/being cursed (particularly a prince who everyone says is a monster/beast), godmothers and their items, & the High King who lives in the Palace of Light and keeps darkness away; Magic is mentioned in regards to a curse, lips being magically sealed to not talk about something, & the magic of the tourney; Mentions of Christenings; Mentions of darkness & evil taking over a kingdom and peoples’ hearts; A couple mentions of a little girl hero-worshiping an older boy.

Nearly being attacked by a bear and tiger, Rescuing someone from drowning, Being sick/ill, Pain, Injuries, (up to a few sentences); Seeing others held at knife-point and threatened, a baby nearly dying (but is saved), injured, disappear, unconscious, in pain, passing out, & bleeding (up to a few sentences); People wonder why a kingdom and prince where cursed (thinking the worse); A bear is killed by others on-page (a few sentences); Lily drugs two people for their own safety.

Mentions of fires, arson, & almost death of an infant; Mentions of possible deaths & drownings in the Tourney challenges; Mentions of a possible death happening soon of a girl’s father & her grief; Mentions of wars/treason; Mentions of when Sophie was deathly ill & Lily’s worry for her; Mentions of injuries, pain, blood/bleeding (up to a few sentences); Mentions of rumors; A few mentions of Lily & Sophie’s parents distancing themselves from the girls when they were little; A few mentions of the deaths of beloved ponies; A couple mentions of wine at a ball; A couple mentions of possible sacrifices to beasts; A couple mentions of jealousy; A mention of a man who was mauled by a bear.

No language stronger than ‘idiot’, ‘blasted’, ‘stupid’, and ‘how/what in the kingdoms’; A couple mentions of others cursing (but not written out); A couple mentions of curses (said but not written out); Eye rolling & Sarcasm.

Five almost kisses, three hand/fingers kisses, a hair kiss, three kisses lasting a couple sentences, and four kisses lasting a few sentences; Remembering kisses & warmth (up to a couple sentences); Touches, Embraces, Hand holding, Dancing, Nearness, & Noticing (including some muscles, up to a few sentences of details on everything else); Wanting to be embraced & touched; Blushes; Sophie comments on liking slightly older guys; Mentions of handsome princes; Mentions of jealousy & flirting; A couple mentions of making eyes at someone.



See my content reviews of the rest of the series & spin-off series here:
The Four Kingdoms series:
Book #1, Book #2, Book #2.2, Book #2.5, Book #3, Book #3.5, Book #4, and Book #5.

Beyond the Four Kingdoms series:
Book #1, Book #2, Book #3, Book #4, Book #5, and Book #6.

Return to the Four Kingdoms series:
Book #1, Book #2, Book #3, Book #4, Book #5, and Book #6.

The Four Kingdoms Duology:
Book #1 and Book #2.
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953 reviews69 followers
February 9, 2020
I have been spending too much money on audiobooks recently, so I decided to give the app, Libby a try. I love it. It connects to your library card and there are many electronic ebooks and audiobooks available. I found A Dance of Silver and Shadow by Melanie Cellier, narrated by Esther Wane on Libby and I was immediately drawn to the cover. It is gorgeous. AND it is a fairytale retelling. Not just any fairytale, it is a 12 Dancing Princesses retelling. That is one of my favorite fairytales and I rarely see it as a retelling. This story is the first book in the Beyond the Four Realms series. Apparently, there is also a Four Realms series, which I already purchased the first book. Anyway, this book begins with twin princesses, Liliana and Sophie arriving on a diplomatic trip to the country of Marin. Upon arriving, they are forced to participate in an ancient tourney called by the cursed prince of Palinar. No one knew this tourney would be called, but they have to abide by the ancient laws or lose their life. No one but the princesses know what the tourney involves and they are sworn to secrecy. However, no one knows that Liliana and Sophie have the gift of telepathic communication. The princess who wins the tourney will be engaged to the cursed Prince of Palinar. Each event will test their strength, wit, courage, and compassion. Liliana is determined to win to spare her sister and the other girls from an unwanted marriage, even though it will break her heart to also lose the man she soon falls in love with…

I LOVE fairytale retellings. Are they unique? Definitely. Are they predictable? Of course. But I still love them. This version is not that different but I love it. It really highlights how there are more to these girls than pretty dresses and ballroom knowledge. These girls are fierce, smart, clever, and they care deeply for one another. I also love how the men respect them and know they are more than just a pretty face.

My favorite part is the connection between Lily and Sophie. They are sisters, twins, and already have that connection but their gift takes it a step further. They have always been together and connected. This tourney will test them and show them that they are individuals as well. They have to learn independence if they are going to thrive. As I said, I already purchased the first book in the first series so I can go through and read them all. They are quick reads or in this case, listens. Oh! That brings me to the narrator, Esther Wane. She is a wonderful narrator. She expressed the perfect amount of emotion and grasped each individual character. Bravo!

Overall, this is an entertaining read! I rate this audiobook 4 out of 5 stars.
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701 reviews134 followers
March 5, 2021
Okay, where has this book been all my life?! Disclaimer, I love the 12 Dancing Princesses. It's one of my favorite fairy tales, and I am totally a fairy tale girl. This book, this lovely, beautiful, well-written, intriguing, and masterfully crafted book has completely stolen my heart. I mean, I'm head over heals right now. This may be my favorite book of the year.

I have read and watched several versions of the 12 Dancing Princesses, but never one quite like this. I loved how the classic fairy tale was approached and I am enthralled by the world building. I am sooo excited to see more of this world and it's politics and history and culture. The world was rich and drew me in almost instantly. The story was well written and I am TOTALLY GEEKING OUT over the foundation that was quite obviously and cleverly laid for future tales! The characters were unique and individual. Jon drew me in like few heroes and love interests have before him. I'd put him up there with Char. That's saying a lot coming from me, y'all. :D And Sophie and Lily were so sweet! Such brave and determined heroines! The other MCs each made me smile and played their parts very well. I'm excited to see more of the ice twins and Celine and of Miliie! Oh, and don't even get me started on Gabe and Teddy! I am dying to see more of the three princes! Gosh, I just can't stop gushing about this story! It was one of the most unique takes on the tale I've ever seen and I quite thoroughly enjoyed it. I am so thrilled with this book and am very thankful to have come across it. Excellent world-building, well-written, intriguing plot, and fantastic characters. (Plus, I mean, really, look at that cover, you guys!!!) Definitely one to put on my wish list to own. An all-around thumbs up from me!

Sweet, slow, and steady romance, clean. No direct violence and no graphic scenes at all. No swearing. Family friendly! Excellent read! Would certainly and loudly proclaim a recommendation for it and am currently downloading book 2...
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1,476 reviews86 followers
September 8, 2017
Gripping!

The Twelve Dancing Princesses is one of my favorite fairytales. I've read several adaptions of it, but I never expected such a fresh take on the story!

In this case, twelve princesses are forced into the princess tourney. By old law and magic, they must compete in tasks to determine who will be the Beast of Palinar's bride. None of them want to win, but they are in danger if they do not try.

I loved the eeriness of the competitions, the mysterious darkness overtaking the land, and the sweet romance of this story. I also loved the bond between Princesses Lily and Sophie. They were both determined to protect the other girls. I look forward to seeing more of these young royals.

If you are looking for a great fairytale that has a compelling plot and compelling characters, you need to read this book! I can't wait for the second book in the series.

If you are looking for similar well-written books in the meantime, I recommend the Timeless Fairytale Series by K.M. Shea.

Content: clean (no language, some kissing)
September 2, 2025
Ahhh how does this author always write a story that ends me in tears, happy sighs, and full of love. I just can’t. She’s so talented and I enjoyed every minute of it (well maybe except for some of the passionate kisses lol 😳) but it was still super clean and I just sighs loved it. Oh and Johnathan is my boy! Also I called the ending I feel so proud lol 😂. Anyways onto the next one we’ll see!
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373 reviews87 followers
October 1, 2019
This book is so beautiful, it is a wonder that I haven't thought to review it until now... oh wait, now I remember why. It's because words simply cannot express my profound astonishment at reading this... and yes, I am being melodramatic, because why ever not? It's worth it.

Melanie Cellier's books are so worth it.

Read this book, please, just for the sake of my heart. Actually no, go back and read all of Melanie Cellier's Four Kingdoms series before you start this one, as Beyond the Four Kingdoms is the sequel series to that. So you may or may not completely understand it if you don't read the first one. Which you should. You should just read all of them.

Because THIS BOOK IS ABOUT LILY AND SOPHIE.

Okay, to be clear, THIS BOOK IS ABOUT PRINCESS LILY AND THE TWELVE DANCING PRINCESSES. Lily and Sophie, our beloved twin telepathic princesses!! A DANCE OF SILVER AND SHADOW is a retelling of "The Twelve Dancing Princesses," yes, but it's so much more than that. It's a tale of adventure, and family, and danger, and love. It's the story about a princess who came from a land far, far away to unwittingly take part in a custom of this new kingdom, a story about sacrifice. Lily and Sophie sacrificed so much for others and for themselves.

Also, can I just say, A WHOLE NEW CONTINENT OF WHOLE NEW KINGDOMS OF WHOLE NEW PRINCESSES AND WHOLE NEW PRINCE CHARMINGS!! This book was filled to the brim with connotations to "The Snow Queen" (hint, hint: Prince Oliver and the Eldonian princesses), "Snow White" (Princess Blanche), "Swan Lake" (Prince Gabriel the Wonderful), and "The Little Mermaid" (Prince Theodore and his ridiculous/adorable reflections on the meaning
of life).

Some things that I held in dislike of this book: Please don't kill me, but I didn't actually like Prince Jonathan like I should have. I have cheered for every romantic couple in the series before, but with Jon, I was just like, Ignore him and let's get on to the more interesting part. I guess that's the problem with having so many characters to keep track of. This book was chock-full of action, so of course that got a little distracting from the romance.

And... that's basically all I had against it.

This book was amazing. Seriously. (And this review is not helpful at all.) Melanie Cellier's writing style is enviably smooth and her plot is so well executed! She's not well-known enough.
Okay, the ramble has ended.
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550 reviews19 followers
June 7, 2018
DNF 65%

Sorry, I tried, but I just couldn't force myself to continue to read this lame book with superficial characters and the same old clichés present in every fucking YA Readers can't take anymore, why writers continue to write the same thing over and over again??

Special Snowflakes Liliana and your twin sister, Sophie, arrive at Marin on the same day the lame Torney that will decide which of the twelve princesses will marry to a horrible prince.

The rest of the story you can guess if you read a YA in your life (a) she falls in love with the prince of Marin as soon as they meet. She shares with the reader how he makes her heart beats fast, how torments her, the sparkle in his eyes, theis connection and zZZZZZ. He can't stop flirting with her and ask for dance despite be the host of the competition and must dance and, well, knowledge the existence of others princesses. (b) she is the braver, the smarter, the funnier of them all and she tells herself and the reader that it is because she isn't as beautiful as her twin sister. Of course, prince Jon doesn't think Sophie is prettier than Lily. Of course he's the only one who can differ the two. Of course, he knows which one is who within seconds after meeting them.

Please, kill me.

The Tourney is just... not very well explained. Nobody likes this crazy competition, nobody wants to send your daughters to it, but no one tried to change the rules. And honestly, once it told that I lost my interest. Because some of those princesses needed

Also,

Also, what kind of kindgom send your princesses to another one that they don't even know?? And after they get there no correspondence exchange? Isn't that weird??

So, once Lily in deep in love with the boring prince - described as the cardboard every YA love interest of the main character usually is - she extols every little and pathetic thing he does. "Oh, he is trying to be in charge of his own duchy", "Oh, he is trying to learn how to settle deals" And he doesn't know how to do anything right. Probably if Lilly wasn't in love with him - like I am - she would see how loser he is. You can do better girl. Or not. Since you are equally as dull as him, you two probably should stay together.

Also, Marin is in deep financial problems. But do we see the duch doing something to help his people? Of course not. That's one of the reasons why, despite the explanation, I didn't get it how the Torney is set in Marin and a riot doesn't burst.

We have twelve princesses. But we only get to know Lily and Sophie. The rest is side characters that Melanie didn't bother to develop properly and I don't know why because they all seem more interesting than the main characters. (well, I know why: it's because their story will be told on the next books, but Melanie could at least introduce them more properly to the readers) And what is worse: they don't become friends. They barely talk to each other during the tasks and vanish after ended. That was frustrating. Twelve female characters and not a single friendship was born.

Anyway, I tried to finish because of the second book, but i realized I would harm myself if I continue to read about the adventures of Princess Lily and how she is amazing, smart, better than everyone. I couldn't bare any more interaction between her and Jon and that was the main part of the book. I just couldn't. Don't read this book, please

{I'm sorry if I mistype any word. English is not my first language but I needed to warn other readers.}
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7,347 reviews203 followers
November 1, 2019
I have never heard of the story about The Twelve Dancing Princesses. I swear on my life and my fur babies, Jackson and Bailey. Now after listening to this really adorable book, I'm down to dive into the twelve princesses. No idea where I will find it but I will eventually track it down and devour it.

A Dance of Silver and Shadow was a really nice retelling to dive into. Probably would've made a bit more sense to me if I listened or read this while doing on the Disney challenges in my group (these were for September and October). Yet, I decided a bingo challenge was more it's speed.

No hate on the book at all.. just pointing out my laziness.

Back to this wonderful thing, I loved every character in this book. Even the ones we were supposed to hate. Each one made the chapter and the whole book more interesting. Of course, along the way though I was thinking this reminded me of other books. Like a lot that I've read beforehand - for example: Hunger Games, To Best the Boys, or anything that had a little competition in it.

In it, you will meet Lily and Sophie. They were the cutest thing ever and I loved everything about it. With all the princesses, it reminded me of tons of Disney princesses. I was kind of geeking out throughout this audio. Then there's John, and ugh he made me heart pitter patter. Him and Lily were, ugh, HEART EYES! I loved them and was really happy (even though it was predictable) they got an HEA sort of.

Overall, super intrigued to find out about Sophie and the beast now.
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494 reviews2 followers
September 15, 2020
Although it was a little slow for me to get into the first part of the book, the ending more than made up for it. This book was beautiful and I enjoyed it a lot!! I love the two sister’s in this one, Lily and Sophie, and their devotion and unselfish love for each other. It was beautiful and that ending actually brought tears to my eyes. I think I would have understood the kingdoms a little better if I had’ve started with the Four Kingdoms series and that is probably the reason it was a little slower for me but even so, this book stood very well alone.
Melanie Cellier’s writing is absolutely wonderful! I can’t wait to read the rest of her books. ❤️
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953 reviews69 followers
March 29, 2020
I have been spending too much money on audiobooks recently, so I decided to give the app, Libby a try. I love it. It connects to your library card and there are many electronic ebooks and audiobooks available. I found A Dance of Silver and Shadow by Melanie Cellier, narrated by Esther Wane on Libby and I was immediately drawn to the cover. It is gorgeous. AND it is a fairytale retelling. Not just any fairytale, it is a 12 Dancing Princesses retelling. That is one of my favorite fairytales and I rarely see it as a retelling. This story is the first book in the Beyond the Four Realms series. Apparently, there is also a Four Realms series, which I already purchased the first book. Anyway, this book begins with twin princesses, Liliana and Sophie arriving on a diplomatic trip to the country of Marin. Upon arriving, they are forced to participate in an ancient tourney called by the cursed prince of Palinar. No one knew this tourney would be called, but they have to abide by the ancient laws or lose their life. No one but the princesses know what the tourney involves and they are sworn to secrecy. However, no one knows that Liliana and Sophie have the gift of telepathic communication. The princess who wins the tourney will be engaged to the cursed Prince of Palinar. Each event will test their strength, wit, courage, and compassion. Liliana is determined to win to spare her sister and the other girls from an unwanted marriage, even though it will break her heart to also lose the man she soon falls in love with…

I LOVE fairytale retellings. Are they unique? Definitely. Are they predictable? Of course. But I still love them. This version is not that different but I love it. It really highlights how there are more to these girls than pretty dresses and ballroom knowledge. These girls are fierce, smart, clever, and they care deeply for one another. I also love how the men respect them and know they are more than just a pretty face.

My favorite part is the connection between Lily and Sophie. They are sisters, twins, and already have that connection but their gift takes it a step further. They have always been together and connected. This tourney will test them and show them that they are individuals as well. They have to learn independence if they are going to thrive. As I said, I already purchased the first book in the first series so I can go through and read them all. They are quick reads or in this case, listens. Oh! That brings me to the narrator, Esther Wane. She is a wonderful narrator. She expressed the perfect amount of emotion and grasped each individual character. Bravo!

Overall, this is an entertaining read! I rate this audiobook 4 out of 5 stars.
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Author 34 books559 followers
May 9, 2019
It’s so fun to once again immerse myself in Melanie Cellier’s well-developed fairy tale world. In this series, we move beyond the four kingdoms to explore new realms through more creative interpretations of well-beloved tales. A Dance of Silver and Shadow was an incredibly fresh and unique take on “The Twelve Dancing Princesses” that I found thoroughly gripping.

Princess Liliana (Lily) and her twin sister Sophia (Sophie) of Arcadia— the two adorable princesses from The Princess Companion— have now grown up and are traveling to the Duchy of Marin. The day they arrive they are forced to enter and participate in the Princess Tourney, a competition where a series of tasks in an underground realm that they travel to at the end of a ball every three days will determine who will be the cursed Beast of Palinar's bride. No one wants to win but the magic of the Tourney forces all the contestants to do their best.

The competitions were all eerie and most were well thought out and clever, full of riddles, tests in character traits, and even scavenger hunts. Despite there being twelve princesses to keep track of, I thought they were all distinct and delightful characters, not to mention their teamwork in the many dangerous tasks was wonderful. I absolutely adored our heroine Lily; she’s compassionate, brave, and spirited, with a delightful narrative voice. Her deep bond and friendship with her twin sister was so sweet. I loved their unique telepathic communication through their godmother gift as well as their deep love and friendship for one another; their wiliness to sacrifice their happiness for one another was incredibly beautiful.

In addition to Lily and Sophie’s touching relationship, I also loved Lily’s romance with Jon, the Prince of Marin. Their relationship developed at a good pace and was adorable and heartfelt. My heart ached for their seemingly impossible situation and I was so pleased when everything worked out. Another thing I loved was that their romance was a stronger focus to the plot than previous books by this author; there was more interaction and affection between the couple while still remaining sweet and clean. I loved it.

Overall, A Dance of Silver and Shadow was a creative, fun, and adorable retelling of “The Twelve Dancing Princesses.” I’m eager to read the other books in this Beyond the Four Kingdoms series to see how else Melanie Cellier interprets other beloved fairy tales.
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Author 68 books277 followers
January 29, 2021
Creative and unique twist on 12DP - having it as a contest building towards B&B was a pretty neat premise.

Unfortunately, it did suffer for its attempt to establish plotlines for the rest of the series. I never felt like it was focused on itself, and knowing the next book's premise and description ruined the tension of who would win the contest + two of the other upcoming books were very clearly laid out, and I find myself rather missing the subtlety of the previous series.

Also, I'm beginning to think that the author depends a bit much on "political coup" as a secondary conflict? I'm hoping that the next book doesn't have it, but it's been pretty much every book so far, in some fashion or another.
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430 reviews49 followers
March 20, 2025
Y'all, the hype is real. These books are amazing. Normally, I think Lily would have been the kind of character I was frustrated with, but, instead, I really liked her! Even if she was too stubbornly self-sacrificial, I still loved her.

It didn't help that I read the summary of book two before I read this one, so I knew the ending. So maybe don't do that if you want to be surprised.
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617 reviews7 followers
September 2, 2019
Since this was tagged as Book One in a series, I didn't realize when I started to read it that it was a "spin-off" of an earlier series. As a result, I was a latecomer to the main characters (who seemed to have been minor characters in an earlier story) and the worldbuilding. Both felt rushed and underwritten to me, but some of that may have been mitigated if I had begun at the proper start of the series.

The set-up for the story - Twin princesses Lily and Sophie, along with their friend Princess Selene, arrive on the shores of a new land only to be thrust against their will into a "Princess Tourney" where every eligible princess is forced to compete for a betrothal to the king or heir who has called it - was genuinely intriguing. The author seemed to cover her bases fairly well with justifications for why the princesses were compelled not only to enter the tourney, but also to actually do their best. However, as the tourney went on, the author seemed to lose interest in her plot. The challenges of the tourney grew less and less imaginative, the dangers grew lackluster, and the tension evaporated as the story plodded to its inevitable conclusion. The attempted "coup" plotline seemed to be designed to give love interest Prince Jonathan something to do besides wring his hands, but it pretty much made him and his family seem ridiculously incompetent as royals.

The characters are all obviously being primed for their own role as future main characters and as such, are all generically nice, good people. There's little to no interpersonal conflict (despite all the characters being in a highly tense, dramatic situation) or questionable decisions that add any interest to their interactions.

It was patently obvious reading this that the author just wanted to be done with this book so she could get on with the story she actually wanted to write: Beauty and the Beast. Never was this was so apparent as when she started skipping over whole chunks of what should have been important story (nobody said how many challenges there had to be. If the author didn't want to come up with that many, then DON'T), and as a result completely lost track of her timeline. (Lily refers to bringing the sleeping draught to a ball that couldn't possibly have happened) I'm enough of a sucker for Beauty and the Beast that I followed her there, but basically this book is a long, boring, background set-up for the next one.

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133 reviews57 followers
February 17, 2018
What kingdom is naive enough to send three of their princesses to an unknown land to marry them off? They should have sent some representatives/spies/scouts to collect proper information about this mysterious land beforehand (It’s just common sense!!!). Or at least have guards accompanied the princesses for god’s sake!
Moreover, I cannot believe how poorly this mysterious land treats the princesses: bossing the princesses around without giving any explanation, forcing and pulling them out of their ship, gossiping freely in front of them. A Dance of Silver and Shadow is quite juvenile and unrealistic.
💔First person heroine POV
💔Genre: Retelling, Middle Grade, NOT Young Adult
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Author 12 books450 followers
December 2, 2022
I was craving a fairy tale retelling, and I'd heard about Melanie Cellier from several of my friends and authors I follow online, so when I saw she had two of her books on Audible, then I knew I had to give them a try.

I'm so glad I did! I flew threw this book and couldn't stop listening! I'm starting in the second series of her connected world, so there was a lot of the backstory of the Four Kingdoms I was missing, but this book does a good enough job standing on its own that I was able to follow along without trouble.

It is a fairly standard fairy tale world with godmothers and magic and castles, but it some ways it doesn't fell fully medieval. Maybe because the narrator gave it a somewhat Regency English flair because she had the sort of accent I normally hear when listening to Regency fiction. Or maybe because the politics and economics of the world function more as a trading society reminiscent more of the late Renaissance period more than a true medieval. Either way, I loved that the workings of the government, politics, and economics were developed and it made the storyworld feel very real.

The Twelve Dancing Princesses fairy tale has become one of my favorites in recent years. I'm not sure why. Perhaps it is because there have been so many great retellings from it lately! This one is no exception!

At first, with the way the Princess Tourney was described, I feared this book would start to drag in the middle. But I shouldn't have worried. This book flew along, adding more and more tension until I wasn't sure how everything would work out!

I can't wait for the second book, and I'm sure I'm going to be binging all the rest of this author's books as soon as I can get my hands on them.

My only disappointment? That this book and the second one are the only ones this author has on audiobook. The narrator does an excellent job and I would happily listen to all of them if I could.
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Author 2 books202 followers
November 22, 2019
I think I'm hooked on Melanie Cellier stories. After listening to A Tale of Beauty and Beast, book two of this series, I knew I wanted to read the other books. (I'm a little sad that Hoopla does not seem to have the series that appears to precede this one--I'd read/listen to them in order--but I'll worry about that later.

A Dance of Silver and Shadow is a retelling of The Twelve Dancing Princesses. But what if the twelve princesses were required to enter the enchanted kingdom instead of forbidden? And what if the ruined slippers came from something far more ominous than dancing?

It isn't love at first sight for Princess Lily and Prince Jonathan ... but it's pretty close! I have to admit that I prefer longer, almost unnoticed falling-in-love of Sophie and Dominick in the Beauty and the Beast retelling. There was also an awful lot of kissing. :P But Lily and Jonathan definitely had their own cuteness, attracted to each other's protective natures and feelings of responsibility for their countries.

I would definitely recommend reading the series in order. This book held my attention a little less than it might have because I knew some of the outcomes prematurely from having read book two first.

Overall, I'm still fully hooked on this series. You'll find me spending my evenings knitting Christmas presents and listening to book three.
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2,688 reviews376 followers
January 14, 2018
The first book in the Beyond the Four Kingdoms series by Melanie Cellier. Princess Liliana aka Lily and her sister, Sophia aka Sophie, of Arcadia, travel to the Duchy of Marin, along with Princess Celine of Lanover, only to discover the day they arrive they are forced to participate in the Princess Tourney. The Tourney's purpose is to find a bride for the cursed prince of Palinar. Lily and Sophie and Celine join 9 other princesses who are forced to do their best or bad things will happen. Meanwhile, Lily meets the prince of Marin, Prince Jonathan aka Jon.

I found this to be a clever interpretation of The Twelve Dancing Princesses fairy tale written by the Brothers Grimm. Before every "trial" there is a ball and then a bell rings for the start of the tourney. The princesses go to a room where a trap door opens and leads them underground.

I have read a couple of Melanie Cellier's book and found them delightful. They are considered Young Adult but I think older adults will get pleasure from them too. There is no sex and only a few kissing scenes. No obscene language either. The three princesses from "The Four Kingdoms" were introduced in that series but they were younger. Anyway, I am off to read the next in the series!
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267 reviews1 follower
June 13, 2020
This is the third retelling of the twelve dancing princesses I've read. I think this is my favorite:p
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48 reviews
March 23, 2022
If only you could see the tears.......somehow I knew it was going to end like that........

I did not expect to love this book sooooo much (I knw I said I've loved all the other books). This one just seemed so special. Unlike the other books in the Four Kingdoms series, this one just seemed to different. The bond and love of sisterhood was so strong in this book that I found myself comparing Lily and Sophie's sisterhood to my own with my three younger sisters. I loved how the story was a retelling of the Twelve Dancing Princesses, but also focused on the bond between the twins. I loved them in The Princess Companion and was so happy when I found out that they had their on book in Beyond the Four Kingdoms series. I was also amazed to learn of the gift their godmother gave them as infants. The whole gift just made their bond even greater. I was able to tell both Lily and Sophie part, even tho they're twins, they were completely different in personalities.

Lily was the bold, strong and headstrong one. She always put everyone else before her without a thought. Especially when it came protecting Sophie. I loved how Lily narrated the book but I also got a sense for the other characters (something I love about Melanie's writing). However I did get annoyed with her on more than one occasion when she decided it did not matter her heart wanted. Please! When has that ever worked! I was impressed how she suddenly felt responsible for the well-fare of the other princesses in the Tourney. For the first time since reading these books, I could actually relate to what Lily was doing. I would do anything to protect my sisters, just like Lily was doing everything in her willpower to protect hers. I just had a deep bond with this character that made me look at the whole story in a different light the other books. She even carried herself with the need to watch over everyone, not carrying what her own heart wanted her needed. That to me shows so much bravery.

Sophie, on the other hand, was so sweet and caring. She reminds of my youngest sister. Always there to talk or to let you know that she's there. That's what Sophie did for Lily. And with their gift, it only made it easier for her to be that caring sister headstrong Lily needed. And even tho Sophie wasn't the main lead in this book, (that would be Lily), I still felt like I got to know her enough where in the next book, I would completely understand Sophie. I wasn't at all surprised with how it didn't. And to keep away as many spoilers as possible, I don't think Lily would have been the one to do what needs to be done in book 2. Lily doesn't have that caring and sweet touch that Sophie does. That was clear from the last challenge in the Tourney. I looked forward to seeing what happens in book 2 with Sophie (ps: I already started reading it).

On to.....you guessed it! Prince Jon! And come on, how more iconic does his name have to get? "Jon" for a prince just sounds sooooo romantic. As the rest of Melanie's books I've read so far, I feel it is a theme that the prince/hero always seems to fall for the girl at first glance. Which, as I have stated in my other reviews, it sooooo romantic. Jon felt an instant need to protect Lily no put if it put his life in danger. I loved how he got to frustrated that he couldn't help her in the Tourney and that even hated himself for bringing Lily and her sister to these new lands. How could he hate himself so quickly for put a girl he hardly knew in danger? I asked himself a few chapters into the book. Then it slowly became clear that he was clearly madly in love with Lily. I loved he was so different from the pervious princes/heroes in the first series. He even carried himself different and so mature and responsible for nineteen. And I agree with Sophie, Jon and Lily were too perfect for each other for the own good! They were just like. Always though the had to carry all this responsibility for everyone else. Clearly meant to be!

The other princesses in the Tourney was just so perfect. I could withhold my joy when Celine returned again! But I was also sad that she didn't get as much "screen" time as she did in The Princess Game and The Princess Search. I can't wait to get to book 3 to see her in action. Then there's Blanche "Snow". I am so excited to read about her in her own book! Mainly because there might be a romance with a certain guard named Alexander (giggles excitedly). Then there was Emmeline and Giselle. I couldn't figure them out. So I assume what ever the deal is with them and their older brother Oliver (who wasn't in much of this book, and strangely enough never once meet Celine) will be explained in book 3. Opal and Pearl were sweet. But several times I found myself thinking that were seven years old instead of in their early teens from the way the others and Lily treated them. But I like how Melanie still makes even girls in their early teens made younger. Because personally girls in like thirteen or fourteen shouldn't seen as older than what they really are, if you know what I mean. Lilac, Hazel and Marigold were the perfect description of three sisters. I don't know how Jon can handle having three younger sisters who always seem to argue. Millie was.....just Millie. She was that kind of girl that could make everyone cower with just a glare, especially Jon, Gabe and Teddy. I look forward to seeing her in the future!

The villainy, I didn't see much (like The Princess Search). I felt like this book focused on Lily and Sophie as sisters. As well as the Tourney. I also feel like this book was more centered around Jon and Lily's romance (more on that later). I guessed who the villain was from the beginning and what he was planning one doing. Frankly, I was a little disappointed about the villainy. I wanted a little more of a bad guy context to balance out the romance a little. But that's just me cuz I love a good villain arch. I like how the good guys have to brave against all odds to stop the bad guy. This story however didn't really end too much of that villain arch cuz I felt like the true villain was Tourney.

The thoughts on the story as a whole, a pretty same as to what the others have been. The retelling was amazingly tied into the theme and structure that Melanie set up in the Four Kingdoms and now Beyond the Four Kingdoms. The elements of the fairy tales are so neatly blended with the sense that this story is its own, but also married with the morals and themes of the Twelve Dancing Princesses. I found that the beginning of this one wasn't at all slow. I liked how it begun when they reached Marin and that the beginning wasn't a tale of their long journey across the sea to reach this new land. That, I feel, would have given too much of the book away. So I was pleased the whole story started of with a bang. I was also pleased of the way the story ended, but also a little sad. I felt like the beginning and middle of the story was the current lives of these sisters coming to end, and new chapter starting for both of them at the end. Even tho they might be facing them together. I think that's what made this one book to me feel different than the others. I sorta ended bitter-sweetly, which actually books I tend to feel a more closeness to. Overall, Melanie really just impressed me with this one.

One last thing, yes (rolling my eyes)......the romance. I can't end this review without talking about the sweet and most loving romance I have read yet. I have a strange feeling that Lily and Jon's romance it going to be my favorite in these second series (but of course that could change). Of course, for Jon it was love at first sight. But for Lily, it took her longer to realize that she was in love with him more than everything. I was so annoyed with Lily until she just gave into her feelings. Jon was the perfect example of a prince charming I'd ever seen. He was sweet and loving to Lily it made me ache. And knew tho a few times Lily clearly was guarding herself from her feelings, he still loved her a gave her mother longing looks. That eventually made her give in. I felt like Jon was so desperately in love with Lily it made him careless in his duties. Which makes their love even more romantic. I still conclude that there is no man in this real world that can even hold a candle to the way Jon treated Lily in this book. And I am glad Lily final gave into her feelings for him, cuz I swear, I was about to reach inside this book and ring her neck!

Content was clean. No deaths or killings. A few scenes with injuries and blood. Romance was clean of course. With several kisses (which was clean but also sooooooo romantic). I actually liked that Lily and Jon had more than just one or two kisses (sorry if that's a spoiler).

Oh! I almost forgot! I loved that little tidbit about Teddy and can hardly wait for the last book! ;)

Anyway! Off to book 2 (which I already started reading)

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3,835 reviews177 followers
April 5, 2019
I really don't know what it is with me lately, but I'm totally in the mood for books like this. It always takes me a few chapters to get into the new story, to get used to the new point of view character and the new setting, but once I'm in it, I just can't stop reading anymore. It's a pity that in between reading, I also have work to do.

And this story was absolutely and truly wonderful! Lily is an amazing character. She's brave and strong. She is kind and gentle and compassionate. She is intelligent and inventive. She is both fierce and delicate. She's the kind of person I want to be and hope to be. It was therefore quite pleasant to be in her head, to follow her line of thinking and to be in her company. And it was even more pleasant, because I did like Jon an awful lot too. (Who am I kidding, I loved him!) He was responsible, intelligent, honest, galant, gentle, understanding and he had just the right amount of mischief, bravery and idiocy in him too. I just want a Jon, okay?

But, the love story, as always slowly and well crafted and built on far more than a pretty face and three smiles, was not all that was amazing. I really loved the plot of this story too. The challenges were great to get to know the characters, and especially Lily herself, but the author didn't loose herself in them and skipped those that were simply more of the same. And the political side plot was interestingly interwoven with the love story and the challenges, which made it all come together perfectly in the finale.

These books are really my books. I love the feel, the characters, the romances, the stories and plots. I can't wait to read about Sophie's adventure with prince Dominic!
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350 reviews68 followers
March 25, 2020
Previous review: “Hopefully in the future I will be able to get my hands on a ebook/paperback version and really experience this story like it deserves.”

Well, I did, because through tomorrow (3/25) this is free on Kindle!! I was so stoked to read this (actually read it, not just attempt to listen to an audiobook) and my excitement was justified.

This is a great retelling of The Twelve Dancing Princesses (one of my favorite fairytales, eep!)! It retains a lot of the elements of the original (especially towards the end) while filling it out with more details and adding unique twists. Also, keep your eyes peeled, because there are a LOT of other fairytales referenced- The Little Mermaid, Snow Queen, Snow White, and Beauty and the Beast, to name a few- that added a lot to the story.

This is the first book I’ve read by the author. From what I understand, it’s a spin-off series, but I had no trouble whatsoever understanding what was going on, so it works very well as a stand alone.

I really liked Lily, the MC. I didn’t always like Jon, to be completely honest, but I do understand why he acted the way he did. Melanie also did a great job with making all of the twelve princesses unique and not just stereotypes.

Content: Some passionate kissing, but nothing beyond that.
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Author 6 books325 followers
August 3, 2018
The twin princesses, Lilly and Sophie, from Book 1 of the precious series, are all grown up and off on their own adventure! And what an adventure indeed! Although the previous series had its share of peril, this book sets a darker edge as 12 princesses are forced into a “Hunger-Gamesesque” like tourney to become the bride of a mysterious prince known as the Beast. It was probably one of the cleverest setups to retell the “The Twelve Dancing Princesses” that I have seen.

I was not a fan of the romance in this one, and there was an awful lot of kissing near the end.

However, what truly makes this book shine is the teamwork of the princesses who work hard at their dangerous tasks and even harder to make sure everyone comes out alive. Our leading sisters have a special and deep friendship, and their care and self-sacrifice is truely beautiful.

Also, it’s so exciting to see the future characters and plots all laid out (Beauty and the Beast, Snow Queen, Little Mermaid, Snow White...)!
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299 reviews56 followers
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February 5, 2021
DNF. This is great clean YA for young fantasy /fairytale readers but it’s not for me.
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106 reviews
December 24, 2025
I forgot to mark this as currently reading 🤦‍♀️ anyways. I was soooo happy to get Lily’s story!! I absolutely loved them in The Princess Companion! Jon was an interesting character. I was happy that he confessed his love in like the middle-ish of the book.
The Tourney was soooo cool to read about! All the tests and stuff they did sorta scared me, like I was GRIPPING the book like it was gonna fly away 😭
I’m so excited for Sophie’s story! She’s my favorite character, and I LOVE Beauty and the Beast retellings!!
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574 reviews197 followers
September 2, 2019
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I find it amusing that I had never read a retelling of The Twelve Dancing Princesses prior to this year and now I have read two. Thankfully, both were very different and A Dance of Silver and Shadow was wholly unique and I enjoyed it so much!

Princess Lily and her twin have sailed to Marin in hopes of forging alliances with other kingdoms and just happen to arrive on the day that a magical tournament is set to begin - a tournament that will end with the winner being married to a prince of a cursed kingdom. There's no way around competing, but they do have an advantage over the other girls. While no talking is allowed during their tasks, Lily and her sister Sophie are able to communicate telepathically. They make it their mission to protect the other girls from the horrors of the tournament as well as the prize.

I loved the bond between Lily and Sophie and the way they were both so determined to protect the other. Aside from the sisters, there was also a lot of emphasis put on the relationships between all the other girls. Obviously they didn't all get along wonderfully, but I always enjoy women empowering and looking out for each other and this book definitely had that.

Of course, this wouldn't be a proper fairy tale without romance and the romance in this book is adorable. While the tournament is going on, Lily continually fights her growing feelings for the prince of Marin. I loved their relationship! It was so cute and, in a shocking twist, I even liked the drama brought on by their miscommunications.

But the real MVP of this story is the setting and the twist on the tournament. The challenges take place in a magical underground world that was absolutely breathtaking. I adore underground settings and this one was both beautiful and chilling. I enjoyed the entire book, but I was living for any scene in which the girls would go back to the magical world under the castle. The tasks the girls had to complete were also fascinating and definitely not what I expected.

A Dance of Silver and Shadow is a very unique take on this classic tale with a lot going for it! I loved the relationships between the girls as well as the romance, and the world the author created was incredible! Keep in mind, this is a new series but set in a universe established in a previous series. I didn't read that one and don't feel like I missed out on much, but you may want to start with The Four Kingdoms series. Either way, if you're a lover of retellings, you can't go wrong with this book!

Actual rating: 4.5 stars
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